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Penname: Mickie28 [Contact]
Real name: Michelle Line
Status: Member
Member Since: 20/02/08
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I'm a daughter, sister, wife, and mother trying her hand as a writer.  I love my family, cold winter nights, loud music, fast cars (preferably born in the '60's and '70's) and reading.  This site will keep me out of the bookstore for a long time and I will read every single story presented.

I appreciate any feedback you are willing to give as it will help me to improve my skills and encourage me to keep trying.  Thanks for your time and keep up the good work.  I enjoy spending the wee hours of the night staring at my laptop, reading your tales of the Supernatural and the Winchesters.   


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Summary: What happens when the boys are stranded and one of them becomes violently ill?

Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 53258
[Report This] Published: 02/03/07 Updated: 08/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 07/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Holy Schnikes that was amazing!!  Very well done.  I will seek out your stories and be sure to add you as a fav author.  I'm not a fan of hurt Dean ( I prefer my Winchesters uninjured and not bleeding) but you wrote it very well and I was anxious to see the end. 

You are awesome! 

 
Summary: Mary had reasons that revolved around Sam. Now if John had known about it, would it have made her choice to save Sam's life & lose hers in the process acceptable? Or would it have been the reason for the rellentless hate?
Categories: General, AU, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Being Brothers
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 11403
[Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 07/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 07/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: She has always known

Well...I'm not sure this story is a Supernatural fiction.  The only similarities to the show are the names and the Impala but the characters just don't follow the story lines. 

Its not easy posting a story for all to read and tear apart, so I give you kudos for making that giant leap.  Keep practicing and improving.  The story was a very hard read with all the missing words and choppy sentences.  Makes me wonder if English is your first language.  I hope I'm not offending you, but it helps to hear the critisizm if you want to learn from your mistakes.  I prefer bad reviews over no reviews at all. 

 As a fanfiction of Supernatural, I did not like this story.  As a story in general it was very sad.  I realize not every childhood is happy and that if we pretend bad things don't happen to children then child abuse will never end.  But it was still sad; which was an emotion you evoked thru your story.  So feel accomplished in the knowledge that you were able to influence my emotions thru your writing.  Perfect your grammar and your stories will earn stars. 

Keep practicing!

 
Summary: It's Christmas Eve and a guy in a brown leather jacket enters the small town bar, he's wearing a peculiar looking pendant around his neck and though he doesn't say much he changes her life forever. A Deancentric tragedy. Warning: Character death.

Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3311
[Report This] Published: 09/03/07 Updated: 09/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Tears are rolling down my cheeks. 

 
Summary:

Mary only said one word.

"Dean."


Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 472
[Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstar
Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: First Impression

Newborns have blue gray eyes until they develope.  They change color thru out the first year but by the end of the year their eyes have chosen the color they want to be and that's when you know what color eyes you have for sure.  Other wise your story was very sweet.

 
Summary:

Thinking back later, Dean wasn’t sure what response he had expected.

Whatever response he might have imagined, nothing could have prepared him for what happened next.


Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1288
[Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstar
Date: 18/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

clever

 
Summary: Even in death, he'd saved them all.

Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3785
[Report This] Published: 16/03/07 Updated: 16/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Kleenex, please!  Very sweet story.

 
Refuge by XinaMarieUhl Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Winner of BEST STORY in the Round 7 Supernatural Fanfiction Awards! Dean is fighting off hypothermia, his worried brother, and chick-flick moments in the cold Wisconsin woods.


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5009
[Report This] Published: 21/03/07 Updated: 22/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the ending

 
The Hunted by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

The hunter has become the hunted. THis is the sequal to Healing, involving Catherine Chase.  You don't need to read Healing to enjoy it. The story line continues from Healing and follows its own arc.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Coming War
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 10742
[Report This] Published: 22/03/07 Updated: 25/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow!

Author's Response:

Hopefully that's a WOW it was great and not a WOW, what a load...lol.  This is an oldie that's for sure.  Thanks for the review, ;)  Kel

 
Promises by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 15]
Summary: Dean and Sam finally learn what Christmas truly means.  This is a Christmas story involving the character Catherin Chase from Healing and The Hunted.
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 10222
[Report This] Published: 25/03/07 Updated: 27/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstar
Date: 11/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Very sweet story.

Author's Response: Glad you liked, ;)  Kel

 
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well done

 
Summary:

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A fresh start, a new life - or is it? Evil stalks them still, and all is not what it seems.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58838
[Report This] Published: 31/03/07 Updated: 23/04/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starhalf-star
Date: 10/12/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Very different perspective on the hunting community.  Could have used more detail to help with the imagery.  Like what the school looked like and how many students attended.  Still, a nice tale, thanks!

 



Author's Response: Thanks for that. Will take that under advisement....Jules

 
Summary: The Road To Damascus

Who will you meet along the road? Dean tries to come to terms with his own fears after Madison's death.

 


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3138
[Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well done

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.....Jules

 
Summary: Bobby first met John Winchester in 1987

Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2841
[Report This] Published: 10/04/07 Updated: 10/04/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 26/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Hardest Thing You'll Ever Learn

well done

 
Summary:

Somewhere in Colorado, children from 3 families have gone missing, can the boys find out what’s going on before forgotten memories come back to haunt them, more specifically – Dean. Mixture of both the past and present - So partly wee!chester.

Monster in the Closet

Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 29298
[Report This] Published: 12/04/07 Updated: 28/04/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 01/02/09 Title: Chapter 21: Aftermath

Very cool story!

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Saving Grace by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

"We're going Dean, gather up I'm hitting the road in twenty minutes with or without you."  With these words, Sam quickly began gathering his gear. 

The boys learn that evil comes in many forms.  This is a Wee!Chester.


Categories: Wee!chester, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 21655
[Report This] Published: 13/04/07 Updated: 16/04/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 27/11/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Such a sweet story.  Grammer and punctuation needs work but even the greats have editors to help with that.  Nice work.

Author's Response: Thanks, Mickie, I have to say I agree with you completely this one was a bit of a mess, thankfully I've managed to pick the brains of several great betas since then and have improved a bit.  I would love to someday go back over it and get it up to par.  Glad you still enjoyed the story - Kel ;)

 
Summary: Rating: Gen / PG-13
Characters: Sam & Dean Winchester, OCs
Notes/Disclaimers/Summary: A series of unexplained drownings draw the Winchester brothers to a sleepy Mississippi town. They must put an end to it before anyone else dies - but who or what is the culprit? Season Two references, including IMToD.
Length: @ 25,000 words.  COMPLETE!


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 22550
[Report This] Published: 04/05/07 Updated: 07/05/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 15/04/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow

 
Fate by gaelicspirit Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 26]
Summary: In the space between the life they have and the life they wish for, exists the life they are meant to lead. Dean's sacrifice as told through Sam's eyes...
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9246
[Report This] Published: 07/05/07 Updated: 07/05/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: As brothers

Sam's last thoughts were...awesome.

Nicely done.

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 16/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: As brothers

Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Mickie! I'm pleased you enjoyed -- I appreciate you taking time to review.

 

GS

 
Summary: This is a look at Mary's past because of her reaction in "All Hell Breaks Loose, Part One". I think she knew what the yellow-eyed demon was, which raises the question...why would a suburban housewife know of such beings?
Categories: One Shots, General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1293
[Report This] Published: 17/05/07 Updated: 17/05/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 23/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: Vendetta from the Past

creative

 
Summary: Dean's dying, somehow mortally wounded during a simple hunt. Even if they find the cause is a cure possible? Not death fic
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 19498
[Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 01/09/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 12/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow!  That was awesome.  Thankyou for that amazing story.  I look forward to reading more by you.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

 
Summary:

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Banner by the incredible Chasidern

Dean is dying after an attack by an unknown assailant. While Sam desperately searches for a cure for his dying brother, Dean makes plans of his own. Plans that might get him out of a one way tip to hell.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 34820
[Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 02/03/08


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 14/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Where Night's Black Bird Her Sad Infamy Sings

Awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you so much *blushing* I hope to have a sequel with the wight hunt up soon!

 
Summary: Brotherhood AU. Little explanation on how Dean got
introduced to the movie, The Godfather by Caleb. The Grandfather is an introduction to Cullen, Caleb's adopted grandfather.

Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4598
[Report This] Published: 18/02/08 Updated: 26/02/08


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 27/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Godfather

Cute!

 
Summary: A collection of crack drabbles based on the “What would Dean say if…” thread over at sn.tv These are my answers to some of the many hilarious questions asked.


Categories: Scripts, Drabbles, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 7524
[Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 12/10/08


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Alone with a dog

LOL

Author's Response: Thanks!