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Real name: Michelle Line Status: Member Member Since: 20/02/08 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Mickie28 Summary: What happens when the boys are stranded and one of them becomes violently ill?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 53258 [Report This] Published: 02/03/07 Updated: 08/03/07
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Date: 07/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Holy Schnikes that was amazing!! Very well done. I will seek out your stories and be sure to add you as a fav author. I'm not a fan of hurt Dean ( I prefer my Winchesters uninjured and not bleeding) but you wrote it very well and I was anxious to see the end. You are awesome! Summary: Mary had reasons that revolved around Sam. Now if John had known about it, would it have made her choice to save Sam's life & lose hers in the process acceptable? Or would it have been the reason for the rellentless hate?
Categories: General, AU, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Being Brothers Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 11403 [Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 07/03/07
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Date: 07/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: She has always known Well...I'm not sure this story is a Supernatural fiction. The only similarities to the show are the names and the Impala but the characters just don't follow the story lines. Its not easy posting a story for all to read and tear apart, so I give you kudos for making that giant leap. Keep practicing and improving. The story was a very hard read with all the missing words and choppy sentences. Makes me wonder if English is your first language. I hope I'm not offending you, but it helps to hear the critisizm if you want to learn from your mistakes. I prefer bad reviews over no reviews at all. As a fanfiction of Supernatural, I did not like this story. As a story in general it was very sad. I realize not every childhood is happy and that if we pretend bad things don't happen to children then child abuse will never end. But it was still sad; which was an emotion you evoked thru your story. So feel accomplished in the knowledge that you were able to influence my emotions thru your writing. Perfect your grammar and your stories will earn stars. Keep practicing! Summary: It's Christmas Eve and a guy in a brown leather jacket enters the small town bar, he's wearing a peculiar looking pendant around his neck and though he doesn't say much he changes her life forever. A Deancentric tragedy. Warning: Character death.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3311 [Report This] Published: 09/03/07 Updated: 09/03/07
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![]() ![]() Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Tears are rolling down my cheeks. Summary:
Mary only said one word. "Dean." Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 472 [Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07
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![]() Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: First Impression Newborns have blue gray eyes until they develope. They change color thru out the first year but by the end of the year their eyes have chosen the color they want to be and that's when you know what color eyes you have for sure. Other wise your story was very sweet. Summary:
Thinking back later, Dean wasn’t sure what response he had expected. Whatever response he might have imagined, nothing could have prepared him for what happened next. Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 [Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07
Summary: Even in death, he'd saved them all.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3785 [Report This] Published: 16/03/07 Updated: 16/03/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Kleenex, please! Very sweet story. Summary:
Winner of BEST STORY in the Round 7 Supernatural Fanfiction Awards! Dean is fighting off hypothermia, his worried brother, and chick-flick moments in the cold Wisconsin woods. Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5009 [Report This] Published: 21/03/07 Updated: 22/03/07
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The hunter has become the hunted. THis is the sequal to Healing, involving Catherine Chase. You don't need to read Healing to enjoy it. The story line continues from Healing and follows its own arc. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Coming War Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 10742 [Report This] Published: 22/03/07 Updated: 25/03/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Wow! Hopefully that's a WOW it was great and not a WOW, what a load...lol. This is an oldie that's for sure. Thanks for the review, ;) Kel Summary: Dean and Sam finally learn what Christmas truly means. This is a Christmas story involving the character Catherin Chase from Healing and The Hunted.
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 10222 [Report This] Published: 25/03/07 Updated: 27/03/07
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![]() ![]() Date: 11/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Very sweet story. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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A fresh start, a new life - or is it? Evil stalks them still, and all is not what it seems. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58838 [Report This] Published: 31/03/07 Updated: 23/04/07
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![]() Date: 10/12/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Very different perspective on the hunting community. Could have used more detail to help with the imagery. Like what the school looked like and how many students attended. Still, a nice tale, thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for that. Will take that under advisement....Jules Summary:
Who will you meet along the road? Dean tries to come to terms with his own fears after Madison's death.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3138 [Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Well done Summary: Bobby first met John Winchester in 1987
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2841 [Report This] Published: 10/04/07 Updated: 10/04/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 26/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Hardest Thing You'll Ever Learn well done Summary:
Somewhere in Colorado, children from 3 families have gone missing, can the boys find out what’s going on before forgotten memories come back to haunt them, more specifically – Dean. Mixture of both the past and present - So partly wee!chester. ![]() Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 29298 [Report This] Published: 12/04/07 Updated: 28/04/07
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![]() ![]() Date: 01/02/09 Title: Chapter 21: Aftermath Very cool story! Summary:
"We're going Dean, gather up I'm hitting the road in twenty minutes with or without you." With these words, Sam quickly began gathering his gear. The boys learn that evil comes in many forms. This is a Wee!Chester. Categories: Wee!chester, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 21655 [Report This] Published: 13/04/07 Updated: 16/04/07
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![]() ![]() Date: 27/11/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Such a sweet story. Grammer and punctuation needs work but even the greats have editors to help with that. Nice work. Summary: Rating: Gen / PG-13
Characters: Sam & Dean Winchester, OCs Notes/Disclaimers/Summary: A series of unexplained drownings draw the Winchester brothers to a sleepy Mississippi town. They must put an end to it before anyone else dies - but who or what is the culprit? Season Two references, including IMToD. Length: @ 25,000 words. COMPLETE! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 22550 [Report This] Published: 04/05/07 Updated: 07/05/07
Summary: In the space between the life they have and the life they wish for, exists the life they are meant to lead. Dean's sacrifice as told through Sam's eyes...
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9246 [Report This] Published: 07/05/07 Updated: 07/05/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 20/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: As brothers Sam's last thoughts were...awesome. Nicely done.
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![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 16/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: As brothers Loved it! Thanks, Mickie! I'm pleased you enjoyed -- I appreciate you taking time to review.
GS Summary: This is a look at Mary's past because of her reaction in "All Hell Breaks Loose, Part One". I think she knew what the yellow-eyed demon was, which raises the question...why would a suburban housewife know of such beings?
Categories: One Shots, General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1293 [Report This] Published: 17/05/07 Updated: 17/05/07
Summary: Dean's dying, somehow mortally wounded during a simple hunt. Even if they find the cause is a cure possible? Not death fic
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 19498 [Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 01/09/07
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Date: 12/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Wow! That was awesome. Thankyou for that amazing story. I look forward to reading more by you. Summary:
Banner by the incredible Chasidern Dean is dying after an attack by an unknown assailant. While Sam desperately searches for a cure for his dying brother, Dean makes plans of his own. Plans that might get him out of a one way tip to hell. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 34820 [Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 02/03/08
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Date: 14/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Where Night's Black Bird Her Sad Infamy Sings Awesome! Summary: Brotherhood AU. Little explanation on how Dean got
introduced to the movie, The Godfather by Caleb. The Grandfather is an introduction to Cullen, Caleb's adopted grandfather. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4598 [Report This] Published: 18/02/08 Updated: 26/02/08
Summary: A collection of crack drabbles based on the “What would Dean say if…” thread over at sn.tv These are my answers to some of the many hilarious questions asked.
Categories: Scripts, Drabbles, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 7524 [Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 12/10/08
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Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Alone with a dog LOL |
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