Supernaturalville
Penname: Mickie28 [Contact]
Real name: Michelle Line
Status: Member
Member Since: 20/02/08
Website:
Beta-reader:

I'm a daughter, sister, wife, and mother trying her hand as a writer.  I love my family, cold winter nights, loud music, fast cars (preferably born in the '60's and '70's) and reading.  This site will keep me out of the bookstore for a long time and I will read every single story presented.

I appreciate any feedback you are willing to give as it will help me to improve my skills and encourage me to keep trying.  Thanks for your time and keep up the good work.  I enjoy spending the wee hours of the night staring at my laptop, reading your tales of the Supernatural and the Winchesters.   


[Report This]
 
 
Reviews by Mickie28
 
Blank Slate by Tree66 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary: What happens when you can't remember who you are or what you've done? Just maybe, its better that way!
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25295
[Report This] Published: 24/12/06 Updated: 24/12/06


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 22/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Loved it!

 
The Ride by kittsbud Rated: K+ starstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Sam and Dean meet a young girl with a secret, but they could never imagine the ghostly journey she takes them on - and all because they picked up a hitchhiker one lonely night in the desert...

Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 17868
[Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your stories!  They are creative, well written and they keep me up all night.  Scared and intrigued.  I get my alone time after midnight and since I have found this site, its nothing for me to be up until 6AM reading the stories.  Some I can stop in the middle of but never yours. I have know what happens!  Thanks for entertaining me and inspiring some vivid dreams! 

 
Summary: Dean is haunted by the flashback from a hunt that took place while Sam was at Stanford. He can't remember the details but what he can't recall can hurt him.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504
[Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 11/02/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Hunt Part 2: Perception of Reality

Holy schnikes!  That was fun.  Pretty gory and prefer the blood not to be Deans....or Sam's but still well done.  Thanks for the awesome distraction from reality. 

 
Summary: Everything is not as it seems. with urban legends out of control and a powerful demon on the loose, the boys find themselves up against more then just the supernatural.

Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Shadow Stalker
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45624
[Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 23/01/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 18/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, I REALLY like the shadow series.  Seriously think you should get it published by HarperCollins.  They did the first two novels for the series and I think you could do much better than Mariotte and DeCandido.  I bet if you combined all three stories it would be the best novel of the series!  They have a website  www.harpercollins.com You can get contact info from there.  It could be alot of fun and what's the worst that could happen? 

Author's Response:

thank you so, so much. I've actually been to that website looking into their tie-in novel writers, wondering how to go about doing it. I'm humbled you think i could do it :). thank you. 

i'm so glad you've enjoyed all the stories, i'm currently working on the finale of the series. hope you enjoy :) 

 
The Coming Storm by bayre Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

  

banner by Neolani618 

Discovering the purpose of Sam's visions, the science of demons and hunting on horseback isn't so easy....

Winner of the Supernatural FanFiction Awards Whatever Man Category.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Elements
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 56937
[Report This] Published: 11/01/07 Updated: 08/02/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 23/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Into the Storm....

Very well done

Author's Response: Thank you.

 
Fear by montez Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Will John's one fear become a reality.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 20094
[Report This] Published: 23/01/07 Updated: 05/02/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 19/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yikes!

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 20/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I really enjoyed reading your story.  The flash backs were great and the emotions were strong.  It was hard to pick up who was talking, until the end of the sentence, because of the way they all ran together.  But it was an excellent read.  Thanks!

 
Summary:

A new hunt brings to light the brothers' buried fears and asks the question:  Can we really survive what we are raised to be?

 devonspirit.jpg picture by RaeUK666


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Shadow Stalker
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 45836
[Report This] Published: 24/01/07 Updated: 09/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 11/06/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Holy Friggin monkeys!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 11/06/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

That was awesome!

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved the story.  Grammar was a little rough, but understandable.  The story kept me going and demanding more.  Good job!



Author's Response: sorry about the grammar, i'm dyslexic and dont use a beta. i know, i should, but i have so little time. lol. thank you so much for the great reviews, i'm glad you enjoyed it!!

 
Summary: Dean drives Sam to the bus station.
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 748
[Report This] Published: 06/02/07 Updated: 06/02/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 21/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nicely done

 
Hitchhiker by auroradannon Rated: K+ starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Dean stops to get some food and picks up an unexpected passenger.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3031
[Report This] Published: 06/02/07 Updated: 06/02/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstar
Date: 21/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

cute!

 
Alone by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Dean at 16. Dean was alone. A black hole of loneliness beckoned him. An abyss so deep and dark that he could see no light, no hope. His deepest, darkest fear had been realized. The emptiness encompassed him until a lone voice called out...

Sequel to Orders, although it is not necessary to have read that story first.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: Dean W., John W., Pastor Jim, Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: The Winchester Teen Chronicles
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 26320
[Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 25/02/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 03/05/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Ten Years Later

Winchester pillow fights...*happy squeels*

Very well done.  Thanks for the good read.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, this was one of my first stories and I remember worrying if the pillow fight worked for the guys, but everyone seemed to like it.

Take care, B.J.

 
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
Options: [Edit] [Delete]
[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Beautiful!

 
Summary: John and Dean are faced with the unthinkable when one bad decision threatens Sam's life - and his soul.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 27278
[Report This] Published: 23/02/07 Updated: 09/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Holy friggin' monkeys

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstar
Date: 10/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue

Excellent!

 
Summary: What is the measure of a man?  Sometimes, it's found in the midst of epic struggle.  Sometimes, it's in the spaces in between.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2851
[Report This] Published: 25/02/07 Updated: 25/02/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 30/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very well done.

 
Sacrifice by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

This was tough, this dying. Dean always thought when he died it would be quick, in the heat of battle, in a blaze of glory. He never anticipated knowing and waiting, pondering his own imminent demise and what his passing would do to his family.

Best Story - SacrificeSacrifice - Childhood Trauma


Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 38963
[Report This] Published: 26/02/07 Updated: 15/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Betrayal

WoOow

Author's Response: Thank you, much appreciated.  Take care, B.J.

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Goodbye

Very well done. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.  Always appreciated, glad you enjoyed my story.  Later, B.J.

 
Summary: What happens when the boys are stranded and one of them becomes violently ill?

Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 53258
[Report This] Published: 02/03/07 Updated: 08/03/07


Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm intrigued.

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Owch!  Poor Dean.

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Must keep reading!

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Intense!

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

jaw dropped

 
Reviewer: Mickie28 Signed
Date: 07/06/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

"Brando.  Cuz it has electrolytes"

Tee-hee, couldn't resist throwing in a quote from "Idiocracy"