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Real name: Kristal Status: Member Member Since: 16/02/08 Website: Beta-reader: No I am a middle school language arts teacher who enjoys reading, writing, and editing. Reviews by crackers Summary:
Story Number Two in the 'Xander Winchester Verse' Now that the big secret is out, how will the brothers handle it? Categories: Crossovers, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Alexander Winchester Verse Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 27848 [Report This] Published: 01/05/08 Updated: 18/11/09
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Date: 03/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prolauge I have been waiting for this story ever since you said you'd be writing it after your first crossover. I have enjoyed reading what you write and found this prologue to be very intriguing. I thought you built suspense well and will be waiting for the first chapter. It took a while for them to validate, I guess. I have the next chapter up now (as soon as it gets validated). It's where the last story 'Alexander Harris Winchester' left off. :) I'm happy that you like them!!! And I hope you continue to!
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 Date: 28/05/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Family Dysfunction I have so been enjoying these crossovers. I really like how you've added Xander - he kind of reminds me of a puppy eager for love and attention. The las line: "Maybe they really were cursed, like Sam had always thought." leaves me wanting more. I look forward to the next chapter! Chapter 5 is up! I hope you enjoy :) I hope the next one won't take so long to get out! :)
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Date: 30/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 The Colorado Paintball Massacre I loved this chapter, especially the nuances of how Xander has changed through Dean's influences. Very nicely written, and quite beliveable. I am looking forward to the next chapter. :) Author's Response: Thank you soo much :) I'm glad it's believable, because even a good story can be ruined if things don't seem like they would really happen. :)
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Date: 06/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prolauge Excellent chapter! I am happy for Xander to be the 'cool kid' for once. Nice lead in to the story behind the story - how the spirit came to be a vengeful spirit.
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Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Getting Down To Business Wonderful update! I am excited to see what happens when Xander encounters Tina's spirit. :)
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Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Stupid Kids!School Spirits Are For Student Corpses! Wow! I was happy to see that you had updated so soon. Wonderful cliff hanger - don't keep us hanging for too long though.
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Date: 02/10/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Two Four Six Eight..Who Do We Incenerate!?! I loved this chapter! You wrote the emotion well and I am so glad that Xander was rejuvenated. Well done! Author's Response: Thank you soo much!!! :) I couldn't leave poor Xander dead!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 24/10/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 Fire Crackles,Fire Crackles..Burn, Burn, Burn! Another wonderful chapter. I like how you wrote Dean - very protective and angry about what happened. The fire burning as though it were coming from his eyes was a particularly good image. Thank you!!! You ALMOST feel sorry for those evil SOBs when they try to mess with Dean's family!!! :) Sorry it took so long to respond...I thought I had!!!! Summary: Sam and Dean help a teenager who is being hunted by a demon.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 3050 [Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 06/07/08
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Date: 06/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Little Runaway I like how you started off the story right in the action. Riley seems like a well-rounded character with the descriptions that you have given of her. Great background story as well. :) Summary:
After their Dad's death, the brothers investigate bizarre killings in the Minnesota woodlands. Bad weather, a sick Sam, and an unfocused Dean, make the hunt a struggle to survive. WINNER OF THE 2009 SNTV AWARDS- BEST MONSTER AND CREATURE
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 18625 [Report This] Published: 30/10/08 Updated: 02/10/09
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Date: 09/11/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Wonderful story. I like your writing style and how you bring out the emotions. You capture the physical aspects of what is going on in a way that helps the reader to feel it. I am looking forward to your update. |
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