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Reviews by teneniel2 Summary:
Following John's coordinates, the boys prepare to battle a witch. When they discover a greater evil is at work, can Sam save Dean's life or will his brother's pain become his own? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 53269 [Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Banshee It was nice to see Dean finally release some tension. What a way to let go! Whew! Author's Response: Heh. This made me grin. :) So happy to see you reading this one!!
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 Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Holding On The sarcasm of this line made me laugh out loud: “We’re saved. Brenna has a bag of dust.” It's writing like this that keeps me coming back for more. You've gotten the characters down just as perfectly as if you were a writer on the show. I will be sad the day I've read all you've written. I must pace myself....yeah, right! Author's Response: You compliments make me float. Thanks so much for saying that -- and I am seriously loving watching you work your way through the stories I've written. I hope none of them disappoint you. I liked creating Brenna to help "see" into Dean, yet give Sam someone to counteract and poke at. Thanks for reading!! Gaelic
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Truth? What an image. Dean coming to the rescue on a tractor! Brought a smile to my face. Hee -- I learned how to drive on a tractor. Kinda what happens in the country, I suppose. Glad it made you smile. GS
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: The Fight I can see this story, especially this particular chapter in a big screen flick. It's so jammed packed with emotion and action it's threatening to burst off the page! (or out of the monitor...) Love it!! Author's Response: *claps* Thanks so much! Hee -- that really made me smile. Especially because this was the first fic I'd not only written for SPN -- but... ever. First story I ever finished. So I'm thrilled that you have enjoyed it. GS
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: The Journey's The Thing Nice ending to a great story! Thank you!! Gaelic Summary:
banner created by Kira Reed When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 If the first chapter is any indication how the rest of the story will go I'm probably not gonna be able to get any housework done today because I won't be able to stop reading!! Good for me, bad for the house. Great chapter! So much good stuff packed in one long, glorious chapter! Author's Response: Hi! I'm giddy to see you reading -- the housework will always be there. :) At least, that's what I tell myself when I write midst a pile of laundry that needs folded. Ahem. I'm thrilled that you're enjoying this! Gaelic
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Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 It was nice to see Dean and Sam sharing stuff that they'd kept hidden for a long time. Good stuff as usual. Author's Response: Yeah, I figured that despite the long hours in the car together, sometimes you have to get "out of the house" to find yourself in a situation where you can open up. Being trapped and wounded helps, too. :) Hope you continue to enjoy. Gaelic
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Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Loved it!!!
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Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Your ability to draw the reader in and totally wring out their emotions never ceases to amaze me. It's almost like we're not aware of what's going on around us when we're reading these stories. Well, it affects me that way, at least. While I can't speak for anyone else, I'm fairly certain they feel the same. This just gets better and better. BTW, I love the flashbacks to their previous hunts. Nice insight. Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked the flashbacks. That was the biggest risk I took with this story. But they felt right. And I thank you sincerely for telling me that you escape into my writing. That's the reason I write -- to give people a moment outside of themselves. Thanks again! GS
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Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I like Abe. Great chapter! *grin* Thanks. Glad you like him -- that's why I brought him back in In the Light.
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Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue This was a nice ending to the story. A great story, might I add. Now that I know the character Abe, I'm gonna have to go back and re-read Into the Light (I think that's the name). Thanks for posting this!! Author's Response: Thank YOU for reading! I really appreciate the multiple reviews and hope you enjoy other stories you choose to read. I've seen a lot of you lately and it's really warmed my heart. :) Thanks again! GS Summary:
A bad moon rises over the Winchesters when a stop for coffee and a meal turns into a hunt that threatens the brother's existence. Will Sam save his wounded brother, or will Dean's belief that what's dead should stay dead drive him to risk it all? Co-written by Freyja529 and Gaelicspirit. Banner by Sojourner84 Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 32930 [Report This] Published: 23/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07
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Date: 26/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: It's later than you realized Loved the opening of this story. I got a clear picture of the girl singing. I was even humming along to the song. Great description and what a suspenseful first chapter!!! The singing was Freyja's idea. She creeped me out with that opening scene. So glad to see you again! I just got a flood of review notices in my inbox and most are from you! How fantastic. :) GS and Freyja
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Date: 27/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Move Swift Wow!! (Brain can't come up with anything more than that at the moment..) Hee. :) Thanks, man. GS and Freyja
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Date: 28/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Earth's Gift Great ending! What a wild ride! Many thanks for writing this gem and sharing with us all. So glad you enjoyed this! We ended it so that some things could be carried on should one of us want to revisit the town full of lycans... :) So glad you enjoyed this. Best, GS and Freyja Summary:
Some beings just love to play tricks on humans. Dean and Sam find out the hard way when they stop for a night of rest in a creepy motel room. Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 18660 [Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 15/04/08
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Date: 25/02/08 Title: Chapter 10: Newly Found Friends and Irksome Enemies Love the description of what might go on in a dog's mind. I have two of them and the stuff they find interesting amazes me. The more gross something is the better they like it. I can't remember if I've reviewed any of these chapters (totally lazy butt) or not but this has been a very enjoyable story. I look forward to more! ;) Author's Response: Hi, Teneniel2. I don't believe we've met before. Thank you so very much for taking the time to read and review this story! It really, really means a lot to me to know that you're enjoying it! Summary:
Originally written for Brotherhood 2 zine. Dean and Sam are pitted against a powerful evil as they fight a battle in a timeless town. Dean's inner demons threaten to defeat him as the brothers struggle to survive. banner by November's Guest Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 35704 [Report This] Published: 07/12/07 Updated: 10/12/07
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Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow!! What a totally creepy chapter! Almost raised the hairs on the back of my neck. BTW, I LOVE long chapters! Author's Response: *grin* I'm glad you like long chapters because I seem to have a hard time writing anything else. This was actually my first zine story, and I had to break it up to post it here. I probably could have shortened the chapter, but... well, it worked for you, so that's what matters. :) Thanks for reading! Gaelic
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Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 OMG! This chapter was freakin' awesome! Talk about suspense and drama and angst! Wow! I want you to know I gauge the intensity of a story by how much of my thumbnail I've got left. Raising thumb up to eyes... Yep, it was great. Nothing left of the nail! Author's Response: Poor nails!! But yay! That you liked it so much! There was a lot in this chapter -- it was one of my favorite parts to write. :) Thanks for reviewing! GS
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Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Numb hiney, dry eyes, headache......all the symptoms of a great story that wouldn't let me leave my seat until I was finished! Whew! Excellent from start to finish! Author's Response: LOL! That made me laugh. :) I'm thrilled that this story captured you -- thanks so much for taking time to review and letting me know you enjoyed. Sorry about the numb hiney. Sorta. ;) Gaelic Summary:
Set after BUABS. There is no rest for the weary. An old friend and a new hunt pits Dean against the elements and Sam against himself as the brothers fight for each other and for survival. T for language and themes. Banner by bulletbabe. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 99433 [Report This] Published: 29/01/08 Updated: 04/05/08
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Date: 24/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Watch Freakin' Awesome doesn't even begin to express how great this story is turning out to be! I really liked the clipped remarks coming from Sam as he was led into the house and during several sick moments. Seemed totally natural and right on character. Thanks a million for feeding my Supernatural addiction especially during their hiatus! Author's Response: *Grin* Thanks so much for this -- I'm happy to have a part in feeding your addiction during the hiatus. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. Best, Gaelic
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Date: 24/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: See The more interesting the story is the closer my head seems to get to the monitor as I read. Well, my nose was inches away and I was chewing on the inside of my mouth as I read this rollercoaster-of-a-chapter. This was great as usual! These characters must come alive in your mind for you to be able to so clearly translate that in your story. I'm in awe. Author's Response: That's exactly what I hope you see when you read -- characters coming to life. I often tell my beta that I write the movie in my mind. And when I can't see the movie, it's hard to write. That's why I always write with music -- helps the movie along. :) Thanks for continuing to review! I hope you continue to enjoy. Gaelic
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Date: 24/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Look Man, this was good!!! Unfortunately I've stayed up way past my bedtime but it was totally worth it. You should write Supernatural novels and share this with everyone else that hasn't discovered Supernatural.tv.
Author's Response: Hee -- sorry to have kept you up, but SO HAPPY you're reading. I hope you like the next chapter, too, but it's not one you might want to read late at night. *grin* I would love to one day write Supernatural novels, but I'm really a nobody. And there are so many fantastic writers out there. :) But I thank you very sincerely for that compliment. Slainte,
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Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Appear Your descriptions of little miss creepy creepin' up the walls totally made the hairs on my neck stand up! Hee... I love that I creeped you out. Thanks so much for telling me! I really appreciate your reviews -- I look forward to seeing what you think of the rest. Best, Gaelic
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Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Stare I love Lobo. I was so pleased to see another chapter to this nail-biter-of-a-story. Whatever you did to get the world to back off must have worked because this chapter was awesome! Thanks again for sharing this wonderful piece of fanfic! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'll tell you, the right music and those little earbuds work wonders when the world closes in. :) I'm so glad you liked this chapter -- hope you enjoy what's to come! Gaelic Summary:
Tag to Mystery Spot. A look at what happened right after Dean's final 'death'... Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 660 [Report This] Published: 17/05/08 Updated: 19/05/08
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Date: 25/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very nice! We're always denied the really "good" parts in these episodes so I'm glad you brought them to life with the written word. Thanks! |
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