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Penname: JJ_Heaven [Contact]
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Real name: KD Status: Member Member Since: 08/02/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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Reviews by JJ_Heaven Summary:
The boys are back and ready to kick demon ass, but when Bobby is violently attacked the boys focus their attention on finding his attacker Banner rocks Lou!!! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 10709 [Report This] Published: 13/12/07 Updated: 20/02/08
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 Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- He moved! That was a great chapter. a know that i have sed it b4 but i really love the genuine concern the boys have 4 Bobby and vise versa. and also i lve the bit wen Dean sed to Sam that he will swing at him if he dont go to sleep voluntarily.And poor Dean having to clean all that blood making him sick, i think its the fact that it was Bobbys blood.And i think that doctor was really genuine.jj_heaven
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo Oh schelz i love the, that shit stings bit. Bobby seems like a natural joker.yay Ash, Ash, Ash. im so glad that ash is still alive. its Ellen thats not cool atall. i must admit that i was abit suspicious the way Ellen was the only one that wasnt in the road house wen it burnt down. for me you hit the nail on the head cos i did think there was sumfin wrong with Ellen. good job.JJ_HEAVEN
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this SCHELZ THAT CHAPTER WAS FRIGGIN BRILLIANT. ALL THEM TWIST AND TURNS GREAT STUFF.I REALLY LOVE THE FACT THAT THERE IS ELLEN AND JO BLAMING JOHN FOR BILLYS DEATH AND IT WASNT EVEN HIM. OH AN DEAN BEING YHE JOKER THAT HE IS WITH THE Thanks hun, really glad you liked the twists. Well I love John, so any excuse to get him out of something...hehehehe blame it on a demon off course! ;) Thanx for review!
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Tear drops Before i say anything else i 1st wana say i love all your chapter titles they really catch you they are so intence. tear drops(friggin awesome lovin it).jesus that whole story was just fantasic as i got further down the last chapter it was so cold it sent a chill down my spine. and these demons are so vicious tey no exactly hoe to get you and make you weeker. they got the boys by killing john and they Ellen by making her kill her only child. luckily the boys sill have Bobby.absolutely loved the part where Dean reminds Sam about willingly going to sleep and Sam responce was kinda like yes or there will be punches thrown and the laughed. theres nothing else i can say it was just superb and im so proud of you schelz. and i cat wait for the series.jj_heaven Thank you for liking all the titles of my chapters. I always listen to the song 'tear drops' by Massive attack and was listening to it when I wrote the last chapter. good song!!! I know, don't you just hate Demons?!? Apart from Ruby! I liked that part too (Dean threatening Sam to go sleep) thank you so much for using words like superb!!! Thanks for being proud of me too;) thanks for all the stars in every chappy. I look forward to getting out the series to read what you think of it!! I'm hoping its gonna be my best work yet! Schelz
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Boys Are Back! Oh im a sucker wen it comes to that brotherly love its so heart warming. me and my sisters are the same you have your good times and you have you bad times but at the end of the day family is more important than any argument and Sam and Dean show me that in your stories every time.I really like Bobby I was gonna say that I hope he is alright but I know Bobby is going to be just fine... and if he's not im coming after you schelz. LOL. but good chapter .jj_heaven KD, Argh!!! What happened to the order of your reviews hun. Hehehe Sucker for brotherly love, you'll find on this site that your not alone...not one bit. Lol family is defo more important than any arguments. I'm glad you felt I showed that between the boys. hahahah I was gonna say...oooh I'm soo scared, then I realized you can come after me. lol;)
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Brain Damage!?! I really want to know who did that to Bobby. brain damge. nooooooooo. like i sed i will come 4u. lol.Poor Sam and Dean I dont know what they would do if anything were to happen to Bobby he is all they have left. they would be crushed. but i must admit i love the way you portray emotion dead on the mark.But bad news for whoever did it Sam and Dean will tear that person to shredds. (it will be well deserved too).jj_heaven
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Tear drops In my last review I forgot to mention I love how your so discriptive and how you describe each emotion, mood and the silences. my favorite is wen you sed "silence owned the Winchester boys". I really felt how quiet it was and how they actually COULDNT say a word. brilliant im goin off to review sumfin else of yours. I get great plessuere and such a good read. so thank you.jj_heaven Summary:
Sam is plagued by multiple visions of Dean burning alive, leading the brothers into a dangerous hunt that could have dire repercussions for the young psychic. Set just before the Season 2 episode Roadkill
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 53967 [Report This] Published: 18/01/08 Updated: 24/02/08
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Date: 08/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 How awesome is this?!? Love it! Summary:
Missouri enlists the boys help for an unusal job. This story is for my newphews - Jahlil and Jaylarni, being in their terrible two's I was greatly inspired by my diamond boys: love you!
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5688 [Report This] Published: 02/02/08 Updated: 03/02/08
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean It really is funny how Missouri always know's what they are thinking they can't really get away with anything. I wish that there was a picture of dean in that towel. oh well I guess my imagination will have to do.yuck missouri how is she lettin the boys see her in such a mess.and Dean is a big kid sum tym so Josh is Dean match, cant wait to finnish the rest.even tho josh is being a little naughty dean is handling it better than he thinks.I knew it that was just such a sweet story he did so well and little josh loved him really. I love the bit were dean say come on have a heart. and you can just see the connection wen sam sed he could imagine dean givin him advise about women and that was exactlu what he did. dean had that advise spot on too. really good job with that one. it would be really cool to see josh again too he was still a cutie.jj_heavenps. I can see why you got a badge for that story I would have given you one too. LOL can't get nothing past good ol' Missouri, imagination is the best tool we all have, defo use it!!! Hehehe...Its amazing the mess kids will get you into without you realizing you didn't clean it up you just told yourself you would. LOL Thank you for finding the story sweet, not even Dean could resist Josh, kiddies have charm too you know? ;p I'm glad you said that it would be cool to see Josh again. Aww thanks for thinking I deserved the badge!!! Schelz
Summary: A short poem about dreams of hell and hell fire...
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 61 [Report This] Published: 06/02/08 Updated: 06/02/08
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Date: 08/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled This was freakin' awesome!! Summary:
With no food or money, Dean does something he never thought he would do. Risks losing his baby! Will he have to hand over the keys??? Thanks to my aweomse m8 Rae666 for the AWESOME banner!!!
Categories: One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2057 [Report This] Published: 29/02/08 Updated: 01/03/08
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Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Bonnie&Clyde schelz Reading this makes me feel like im watching fast an furious only with better eye candy.(oh an vin diesel too). I really love your description its wicked I can really visualise what you are talking about. It look like old Chubby should have listened and saved the nos for the way back. see no one can up come aginst bonnie&clyde. That was brilliant I definatly enjoyed It. i loved the bit when I wonder where chubby cheeks is at, and when dean said you think you can beat me and my baby. they are real patners in crime all three of them. LOVED IT. UVERGUY JUVAGUST FOVERGORT TOVAGOO RAVAGITE SUVAGUM THIVAGIN IVVAGIN BAVAGAK SLAVVAGANG. SODOGO YOUDAGOO HADDAGAV EDEGNUDAGAR LADAGAND WIDDAGIG. HOVAGOPE YOUVAGOO LUVAGIKET IVVAGIT. JJ_HEAVEN Author's Response: Why thank you hun, yep defo better eye candy with the exception of Vin Diesel;) Thanks for saying you could visualize. Hehehe Yup, Chubby should've listened. Certaintly partners in crime, all three, thanks JJ. Uver-goo nevaga novago ivagif suvagumwovagun novagoes divagis lavagandivagij...Hehehe Summary:
Prank war challenge, Hope you enjoy!
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2832 [Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 12/04/08
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Date: 22/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Family Matters HAY LOU. HOW YOU BEEN LOVELY. THIS STORY WAS DEFO COMEDY WELL YOU HAD ME IN FITS. I LOVE HOW JOHN IS NORMALLY QUITE SERIOUS BUT YOU CAN TOTALLY BELIEVE THAT HE HAS THAT OTHA SIDE OF HIM SO I THINK YOU PORTRAYED IT REALLY WELL. NEWAY WELL DONE LOU. PS I THINK YOU SHOULD DO MORE COMEDY. HOPE TO SPEAK SOON. KD.X Summary:
Prank war challenge. Hope you get a giggle! Sam and Dean are back to school soon and Sam has a new game he wants Dean to play. (13&16)
Categories: Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3920 [Report This] Published: 13/04/08 Updated: 14/04/08
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Date: 21/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - I double dare you Oh s.jay the first prank was classic trust u to come up wit dat, poor Sammy. The garbage one was great coz the dude reminds me of ted 4m scrubs.Oh my days "I really really wanna have your babys". i think if i was Dean i wud've punkd out. Chicken I know.Thanx 4 da powder one coz now (you know who) will be gettin powderd. Thanx 2u.lol . You describe the dares so well readin dis made me wanna be there wit dem i wud be cryin wit laughter. His chest is sore and his feet are swollen, great stuff.S.jay ur fab coz im gona bump ppl wit these dare's but I think I might use black or brown dye.lol.pls do a sequel. jj_heaven.XxXxluv*luv*. Ahh Kay-d, you know me so well! Course you can trust me to come up with that, I like to be as outrageous as poss. I'm glad you liked the garbage prank, and yes, the dude in my head was kinda like ted. lol I'm so glad you liked this one hun, but you dare use any of those pranks on me and I'll have to set Papa Winchester on ya. S.jay |
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