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Real name: Status: Member Member Since: 05/02/08 Website: http://adrenalineshots.livejournal.com/ Beta-reader: Reviews by ophium Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
Reviewer: ophium Signed
 Date: 17/04/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue This is so much more than awsome... this is... fantastic! Once I started reading it, I just couldn't stop. Love it, of course :) And you had me so fooled. Some times you had me thinking it was Sam, others I figured it was Dean... you even had me wondering if perhaps it wasn't either of then, so brillant writting there. The way you handled all the interactions with Sam's multiple personalites was really well done, never falling in to the 'too much' zone, if you know what I mean. Thank ou so much for sharing this. Lokking foward to read more stuff from you! Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad I had you fooled - that was the evil plan all along. Wow - I'm sort of speechless - you know, I really didn't know that this story would be the hit that it has become. Think I'm still in shock that it won first place. I'm glad that you were riveted and entertained, and I'm breathing a huge sigh of relief that I managed to pull it off. Summary: Dean gets whammied. Sam gets freaked.
Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1368 [Report This] Published: 10/02/08 Updated: 10/02/08
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was really funny! Just the mental picture of a Dean-cat wasworthy of a big rofl, but hen you had to had priceless little lines like this: “Then why are you licking your hand?” “Because it’s dirty.” LOL! Loved it!Author's Response: Thanks, hon! :-) Summary: Why does Dean hide his intelligence
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 37829 [Report This] Published: 11/06/08 Updated: 03/02/09
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow! Yo. Have. Got. To. Update this awsome story! Fast, pleeeease! Wonderfull idea!
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reading about these tid bits about the Weechesters life is really fun! I can't wait for the next part! Summary:
Suffering from a bullet wound, carrying the guilt and grief of a failed job, while worrying about his brother’s sanity and safety and with only two months to live, Dean’s situation is rather hopeless and he's almost ready to throw in the towel. Just when he thought it couldn't get any worse, an old enemy bent on revenge returns to make life miserable for the already battle weary Winchesters. Set immediately after "Jus in Bello".
Banner by the amazingly awesome Rae666! Thanks so much Rae!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 6766 [Report This] Published: 08/08/08 Updated: 16/08/08
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh! This looks really, really promessing! Please update soon! Summary: Pastor Jim and Dean have a discussion about faith, love, duty and those spiritual beings with wings.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1971 [Report This] Published: 28/11/08 Updated: 28/11/08
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 28/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "He stood in front of Jim, offering the preacher his Swiss army knife like a knight relinquishing his sword. "It's a deal."" That's so sweet... I loved this little piece! It fits wonderfully well with the rest of The Brotherhood stories and the show. Summary:
"I thought I had seen everything there was to see in my job. And then I met those two men, and learned that there was a whole world of things I had never seen or known." Set early to mid-season 2. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 25025 [Report This] Published: 19/02/09 Updated: 22/04/09
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 18/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Nothing I hadn't seen before As someone who works in a ER, I have to clap my hands and applaud you. That was one amazing rendition of the feelings, thoughts and actions of good professional. As for the plot itself, dude! You have me totally grabbed! I just had to force myself to slow down a little bit, type the words that these first chapter deserves and race to the next one :D Great job! Wow, thanks so much! Doing medical research is one thing, and even with that I always hope I have the basic and most important things right and that the internet didn't let me down. For the rest I really went with my intuition and how I wanted Ben to act and react. So I'm absolutely thrilled that you thought it realistic. And of course I'm just as thrilled that you like the plot as such, too. :D Thanks a lot for the great review.
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 18/06/09 Title: Chapter 2: I could only begin to understand "if there is one thing that's always going around plenty in a hospital aside from sickness and death, then it's gossip."
Lol! So true. Loved the way you slowly enveiled the story that landed Dean in such a messy state at the hospital and the OPV is refreshing and spot on. I too believe that Dean would come out as a it little abrasive and bigger than life to a stranger, but, 5 minutes of conversation with the guy and you're right, the inner goodness and simple awereness of life and pain just shines right through and is bound to impress just about everone :D
Off to read the last part! Author's Response: Lol, that really sums up Dean how I see him from an outsider's point of view in a nutshell. If he doesn't do his damned best to keep it hidden, these things are always so visible in him if a stranger dares to look a little closer.
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 18/06/09 Title: Chapter 3: Epilogue - Lies Oh, that was such a sweet ending, the guy knowing that the brothers are ok just from the purr of the car :D
Man... you did an amazing job with this story and loved every single piece of it! Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review for every single chapter of the story. I really appreciate it. And I'm thrilled you liked the story, I had a lot of fun writing it. Thanks! Summary:
Sam has a backstage pass to the Dean Winchester Show as Dean accepts the possibility he could be Ben's father. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3662 [Report This] Published: 30/04/09 Updated: 02/05/09
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 15/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Heart of a Winchester That was beautiful. Well done! Summary:
When a nasty poltergeist traps Dean in an underground icehouse, it’s up to Sam to save his brother before it’s too late. Then he just has to get him warm again. It'll take all of his little brother skills to do it. hypothermic!Dean, protective!caring!Sam
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1048 [Report This] Published: 27/10/09 Updated: 27/10/09
Reviewer: ophium Signed
Date: 01/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Remembrance Very cool! *g* Cool.. get it? I truly loved it! |
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