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Summary:

sins of the father banner

Two brothers and their father become a case for Sam and Dean. But hunting these things and saving these people may bring more emotional baggage than even these two Unshed Man-Tear Wranglers can handle. Can Dean control his roving eye or button-fly? Can Sam stick to his Huff Quota? Can they remember what they came for and do their job?
Rated T for language and some situations.


Categories: Action, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 32168
[Report This] Published: 24/08/08 Updated: 16/09/08


Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 03/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

that was so cool.Can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

Thanks! It's all coming as soon as I can polish it till I'm happy with it...

:)

 

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 04/09/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Not Kevin, Wow! Didn't see that comming!

thanks for another great chapter



Author's Response:

A-haaaaa!! Gotcha!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

This is a great story, I love how you've got Dean fighting to protect the boys even though they are ghosts.

can't wait for more



Author's Response: Thanks very much! Next one will be up tonight, I hope...

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

WHAT? Where did Dean go? AHHH! You can't leave me like that!

great update, if slightly cruel!



Author's Response:

Today, I am ee-vil Tozaboma, LOL

Next one coming soon! Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave such a nice comment.

:) 

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

great update, good luck with the move and can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Thanks and thanks! Hope I'm not offline for too long...

 

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OK, Now I'm going to be biting my nails till Tuesday! If the Net Provider doesn't arrive I'll help dispose of the body!

Author's Response:

Oh yeah....

Glad you're enjoying the story!

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

That was sneaky! I blink and you add two chapters!

can't say much I'm in too much of a hurry to go on to chapter 13

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

what a fantastic story, it had everything! Action, humour, ghosts, flashbacks and sex! What more could a girl ask for!

thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

We aim to please, LOL

I honestly tried to get Dean shirtless for as long as possible, so I hope that helped, ROFL

Thanks for reading and reviewing! 

 
Old Ghosts by Swellison Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Sam and Dean take on the ghost at historic Windsor Ruins. Set S2 directly after No Exit. Originally published in Rooftop Confessions #2 by GriffinSong Press.

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Thanks, Louy, for another amazing banner!!!


Categories: One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 8519
[Report This] Published: 25/08/08 Updated: 05/09/08


Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 26/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Road to Ruins

great start. I really like your descriptions, I can just picture the ruins in my head.

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

Hi Amethyst,

Thanks for the review, and really pleased that my descriptions paint the scene so clearly for you.   Windsor Ruins is an interesting burt out-of-the-way place; I'd never heard of it before my friend told me about it.    Sue

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 30/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Hunting we Will Go

great update, very mysterious grey ghost with the wrong buttons, can't wait to find out more.

Author's Response:

Hi Amethyst,

More is on the way, last chapter should be up by Saturday. Glad your enjoying the story and the mystery so far.    Sue

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Ending with a Difference

I've always wondered what happened to John and Mary's family and why they wern't around after the fire.Great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks amethyst, glad you liked this. I took what we know from the series and extrapolated backwards. Dean only mentions Mary's uncle - "a man we never met" - in  CSPWDT. If John's an only child, that drastically reduces the number of Winchester relatives available. Given John's track record with people, having a break with his parents seemed reasonable. Coming right after the fire, and him starting to learn about the supernatural, his mother's well-meant suggestions of help and therapy led to John packing up the boys and driving off into the sunrise. Or at least that's one interpretation of the lack of Winchester relatives. Guess we're due to find out more in season four.  Thanks for the review!  Sue

 
Summary:

One father, two sons, and a choice. John has to find his boys before he is left with a choice that he knows he won't be able to make, after all how do you choose which of your sons lives and which one dies?

Set late Season 1, no spoilers at the moment, will let you know if any crop up.

I as usual own nothing. I just get to play in the sandbox.


Categories: General, AU, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 33224
[Report This] Published: 04/09/08 Updated: 23/09/08


Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 04/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW! great start, looking forward to your next update.

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you liked the start, hope you like the next chapter.

Thanks again, Mary xx

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

this story is definately not for the faint hearted but it is riviting all the same. can't wait for more.

Author's Response:

HI there

Thanks, this is definately darker than what I usually write but this story has been eating me for a while now.

Glad it is holding your attention, will update asap.

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is just awesome can't wait for more

Author's Response:

Cheers

Thank you very much, more will be on its way shortly.

Thanks for reading and the review.

Mary xx

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is getting really interesting.What happened to Dean that he can't remember with the bracelets? Can't wait to find out.

Author's Response:

Hi there

I'll let you know soon, I promise.

Thanks for all the reviews!

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 11/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

interesting update can't wait for more

Author's Response:

HI

Thanks, I always think back stories are funny things, so glad you enjoyed this one.

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 11/09/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I am loving this story more with each chapter.

Poor Dean being made to pay for his fathers sins again.

waiting eagerly for your next update



Author's Response:

Hi Amethyst!

Thank you so much! What a nice review! I'm glad that you are enjoying this, bits of it are fun to write!

Hope you keep enjoying the rest.

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Those bracelets are just evil, what does Abbey want them for?Poor John has already had to save Dean from them once and now he's got to save Sam as well.

 



Author's Response:

Hi

The bracelets are nasty aren't they?

Abby has a few secrets yet to be revealed.

John is gonna have a decision to make, just need to read on to find out what!!

Thanks for the review. Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 13/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

you've got nothing to be worried about, that chapter was excellent.

Goodness John is hardcore though isn't he?If Dean knew what he had done to save him, he would be eaten up with guilt.

have a great weekend, looking forward to your next update.



Author's Response:

Thank you Amethyst,

I did like what John did, I knew me had to but I didn't like it, but John is hardcore really, as an ex-marine he'd really have to be I think. Dean wouldn't have be crushed if he's known what had happened so I thought better not to tell and Dean unlike Sam wouldn't have been so likely to ask.

Glad your still enjoying this, cheers Mary x



Author's Response: Sorry not sure if this is even in english!! Blame tiredness, I did off course mean that I didn't like what John had to do, and Dean would have been crushed.!! Lack of sleep, never good!! Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 15/09/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

NOOOOOOOO! CRUEL, EVIL CLIFFE!

Well Done, PLEASE, PLEASE don't take too long to update.



Author's Response:

Hi there

I don't think sorry is quite good enough is it and CH10 is worse, believe me!!

I'll update asap in the morning. (UK)  Until then sleep tight!

Thanks for the review, cheers Mary  x

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 16/09/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You did that so well, I love that you didn't make John choose, and Sam and Dean walking off together, thats just so sad.

Thank goodness you don't do death fics!



Author's Response:

HI

I just couldn't make John choose 'cos deep down I knew that he wouldn't. But I was tempted, just for a little while!

The ending was a little sad wasn't it. But at least if they had have been dying they were doing it together.

Thanks for the review, Mary x

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 17/09/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I just love the way you write, thanks for an awesome chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi!

Thank you so much!

I always worry as a story goes on that it may get too hard to follow or I'll loose the plot somewhere so I'm glad you are still enjoying this.

Thanks for the kind words they're appreciated, cheers Mary xx

 
Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

another awesome chapter.....Daniel being able to finally take his boys home is a nice touch.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks, a little gentle chapter in a sea of angst! I really wanted Daniel to get his boys back after all he did kinda ok John saving Dean.

cheers Mary xx

 
Summary:

Sometimes, a simple phone call has the power to change everything.

WARNING: Major spoilers for episode 1 of season 4. Do not read if you want to stay spoiler free. The spoilers only concern episode 1, so once that has aired, it'll be save to read this story.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5211
[Report This] Published: 04/09/08 Updated: 04/09/08


Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AHHHH! Now I really can't wait for season 4 to start and in Australia we've got no word on when!

Author's Response:

Ouch, that sucks. I know how you feel, I'm in Germany and here they still haven't aired season 2 yet! We'll just have to rely on the internet then...

Thanks a lot for the review.

 
Summary:

Set after Season 3...Sam has no idea what's going on.  All of a sudden, he was with Dean, holding his lifeless body in his arms, and then next he was in another room being told his brother was alive.  Which one is reality and which one is nothing but a lie?


Categories: General, AU, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 14459
[Report This] Published: 07/09/08 Updated: 14/10/08


Reviewer: amethyst Signed
Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Harsh Reality

WOW! what an intriguing start

Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the start of the story.  Hopefully the chapters will continue to keep you on the edge of your seat.  Please continue to check back for updates.  Thanks so much for the review.