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Penname: mizpah [Contact]
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Real name: Julie Reid Status: Member Member Since: 17/01/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by mizpah Summary:
 Never leave a wounded predator alive! It might come back later when you least expect and rip out your heart!Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 20780 [Report This] Published: 25/12/06 Updated: 12/01/07
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Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Premeditation Oh my gosh! I hate Gordon Walker with a passion. I think I cheered when Sam cut his head off in Season 3. And I'm glad that Sam was the one to do it, considering what the psycho bas*ard had in store for our favourite psychic. This is not going to be pretty. Walker has no mercy - no soul. Hope he didn't get to Sam first....Jules
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Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Motivation Nothing to beat yourself up for with this chapter, in my humble opinion. It was setting the scene and placing the pieces on the chess board. Sam's in deep crap. Walker won't be easily fooled - but the boys are always at their best when they're fighting for each other. I'm hoping that the deranged sod just doesn't realise what he's unleashed until it's too late. And I hope he has a very bloody end....Jules
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Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Hide and Seek Oh crap! Tell me that was rock salt..... That bastard Walker has got to die! Sam's right - he's off his rocker. A few kangaroos loose in his top paddock. The sod had Dean right where he wanted him - in a panic about his brother's mangled state. And Sam so weak and in so much pain that he couldn't yell a warning in time. Things are looking grim for our boys. But you don't do death fics, right? Right, Tree?......*chews worriedly on nails*...Jules
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Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 -- Blood and Orchids I wondered whether Gordon had something like that in mnd when Sam first looked up at the panes of glass - it was typical of the psycho bas*ard. Not good - but then again, glass - weapons - both Winchesters together....I'm shaking my worry beads like crazy here, hoping for a good solution....Jules
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Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 --- Taunts and Tactics That was one hell of a fight. But I think that Gordon has underestimated the boys despite his gloating. They may be each other's weak spot, but they are also each other's greatest strength. I hope he gets his arse handed to him on a plate....Jules
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Date: 27/12/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 --- Rescues and Revenge Crap - I honestly thought that Sam had killed Gordon - and I wouldn't have blamed him either. After all, he and Dean had been tortured and put through sheer hell. And Gordon did have a knife at Dean's throat. Wow - what a ride. I can see how this won the award. It was edge-of-the-set intense, with Walker seeming to be one step ahead of Dean the whole time. But he did finally underestimate the Winchesters. Sort of glad Sam didn't kill him and have that on his conscience. But I completely believe that last line - he would kill for Dean - he would do anything for his brother. The same as Dean would do for him. Brilliant job, Tree - thank you for sharing this.....Jules Summary: Dean's day in Hell.
Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2569 [Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07
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Date: 24/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Dean's Day in Hell That was cute - sort of along the lines of "Heaven doesn't want him and Hell's afraid he'll take over".
I enjoyed reading this. Good work. Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed it. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That's sweet. They do communicate non-verbally all the time. Good job of capturing that, Ripa. Good insight. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I loved this story when I first read it on the Supernatural.tv forums, and have not changed my mind one bit on re-reading it here - twice. I love your descriptions and the pictures you paint with words. I really look forward to reading the next chapter. Summary:
Making a deal with a Demon can be an unseemly business. Especially when you discover that the deal you've made has endangered your sons in ways you hadn't foreseen. Now they've grown up apart and unaware and things need to be set right. General AU oddness.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 44413 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/03/07
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Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 What a cliffie and a half! This is just a wonderful story - so heartbreaking in places, to think of the boys growing up apart, a part of each longing to find the other. Thank you for sharing this. I can't wait for more postings. Will time reverse, and right the wrong? Author's Response: Hah hah - the crux of the story! Glad someone's paying attention! Much as I'd like to bring in Dr Who in his TARDIS, I think I may have to find a none-time travel related solution...!
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Date: 30/01/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Oh, YES!!! Missouri to the rescue! I love this fic! And I don't blame Dean one bit for that remark about Danny not being Sam's brother. I love how they are still linked even though they have been estranged most of their lives.
I do hope you update this soon - I'll keep a very close eye out for it. I can't wait to see how you put this all together. Author's Response: Yeah, I can't wait to see how I put it together too... *scratches head and wanders off to get the vodka* Glad you liked the Danny part - I wasn't sure whether to go down that route, and seeing as I might have to make this story a little bit shorter than originally anticipated, I'm not sure I'll get to explore it. But hey-ho!
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Date: 11/02/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Oh, yes - I agree - ridiculously evil cliffie - but hell's bells, so well written! Hope you don't leave us hanging quite so long without another update! Like the idea of the real world trying to re-assert itself - wonder if the boys will retain some memory of their wrong life? Author's Response: You know, I wish I had months and months and months to write this thing as I'd love to include all the ideas you guys are suggesting! Alas, 'tis not to be... But stick around, hopefully the next update won't take quite as long! *crosses fingers*
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Date: 28/02/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Raindrops on Jensen's eyelashes, eh? That's rather special. Dean girls unite! Definitely still awake after that chapter! This is getting so intense. I can't wait for the finale - the tension is really ramping up. Damn John and his deals! Those poor boys. Author's Response: Well, where would we be without John deciding he knows what's best for everyone, huh? I love him / I hate him / I love him / I hate him... It goes on...
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Date: 05/03/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Oh, no! Not boring! Definitely not boring! Heart in mouth, balancing on edge of seat, maybe, but not bored - oh, no, no, no! Great ending! And I firmly believe that Dean can save Sam, and that they both will live through whatever the demon has planned. What a story! Thank you so much for this. It was a wonderful, funny, touching, scary journey through what might have been. Author's Response: Glad I didn't offend anyone with the 'spoiler geek' reference!! I also think Dean's destiny is to save Sam from what he believes to be his destiny... Hopefully he'll be successful!! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Summary:
banner by Neolani618 Discovering the purpose of Sam's visions, the science of demons and hunting on horseback isn't so easy....
Winner of the Supernatural FanFiction Awards Whatever Man Category. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Elements Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 56937 [Report This] Published: 11/01/07 Updated: 08/02/07
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  Date: 09/03/07 Title: Chapter 11: Into the Storm.... I for one, would like to see a sequel to this. Whew! Read this in one sitting. Loved how you dealt with the meaning of Sam's visions, and that you didn't make him evil, like so many people are convinced he will become. I don't believe Sam is a soldier for the baddies - I believe he is a key player for the good guys (just hope Mr Kripke has the same thought). Terrific story - kept me enthralled all the way through. You capture the boys so well - I could actually hear their voices saying the dialogue. Author's Response: Thanks so much. I've got a few ideas for some follow up stories. Laura Summary:
He's silently and methodically cleaned those guns a million times over the years; but tonight, they speak to him. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5116 [Report This] Published: 21/01/07 Updated: 21/01/07
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Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow! That last part had my heart in my mouth! I really enjoyed reading this. Author's Response: Thanks Mizpah - I am sooo glad you liked it! Summary:
Dean Angst. That damn Demon, read his mind and made it happen just like he always feared it would. Even now he couldn't sort it all out. Is it the truth or just his childish fears rearing their ugly head? He was too tired to think about this. Spoilers through Devil's Trap. Set after Season One finale. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2465 [Report This] Published: 24/01/07 Updated: 24/01/07
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Date: 02/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh, my poor boy! This was brilliant! Thank you for sharing this. I'm off to read All The King's Men! Author's Response: Thanks, I am glad the readers wanted more after this story cause I really enjoyed writing AtKM and I do think the two pieces work well together. Summary:
Companion story to Shattered, Dean’s breakdown. John’s POV. What is he asking me? Dean never asks for anything, he’s the easy one. Never demanded any time, effort or worry. Always my strong, self reliant son. When did he become breakable? Spoilers for Devil's Trap. Set after the end of Season One. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., John W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3060 [Report This] Published: 24/01/07 Updated: 24/01/07
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Date: 02/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Thank you again! You're an awesomely talented writer yourself. That was beautifully put together. Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words on both stories. It is inspiring to have these wonderful characters and the great writing of the show's writers to play with. It just makes you want to explore and discover these Winchesters. Summary:
November 2, 1987 John was a broken man. He should have known better. He should have known not to hope, not to dream, not to believe. The liquor had control over him as he lashed out at the one obstacle to his chance at oblivion. Spoilers for Nightmare Categories: General, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., John W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3919 [Report This] Published: 25/01/07 Updated: 25/01/07
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Date: 25/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three - Memories That was so touching - I loved the scene where Dean told John he would never let him hurt Sammy that way. Well done, you. Author's Response: I love young Dean and we all know he was always Sammy's protector and in a strange and sad way, also Dad's protector. You just gotta love that boy! Thanks, B.J. Summary:
What if Sam never went with Dean when he came to get him at Stanford... Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 13810 [Report This] Published: 01/02/07 Updated: 21/04/07
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Date: 02/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is good. Hope you update soon. thx for the review:D i plan to update in the next day or so
cheers:D Summary:
2.13 Houses of the Holy tag "You pray?" The wheels in Dean’s mind were turning, trying to comprehend this incomprehensible information that had been so casually exposed. What do you pray for? I pray for peace in the world, for the strength to fight evil....and I pray for you.
My most beautiful banner by the talented dreamalittledreamofsam Dream, I am speechless, I absolutely freaking love this banner! *hugs*
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1433 [Report This] Published: 05/02/07 Updated: 05/02/07
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Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was very special. I'm with Dean - I refuse to believe that Sam will be evil. Beautifully written. Thank you very much. Author's Response: The Demon does not stand a chance of getting Sam as long as Dean is alive. He will not let his brother go down that long, evil road. Thanks, B.J. Summary: Dean and boredom are a dangerous combination, add in the interenet...
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1293 [Report This] Published: 05/02/07 Updated: 06/02/07
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Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was very funny! I burst out laughing at the final line! Thanks for sharing this - very good! Author's Response: Thank you! I had a time with the ending. I wanted it to be a funny oneshot and it kept wanting to be a dark, longer story. Mostly because Sam wanted to be involved! :P I've had a request to use DHM in other sotries, if not to write more about it... Summary: “Look, I know how you feel…” “Do you? How old were you when mom died? Four? Jess died six months ago. How the hell would you know how I feel?” Scarecrow Tag
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2884 [Report This] Published: 06/02/07 Updated: 07/02/07
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Date: 11/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 of 1 I agree - sometimes it's the little things that get to you the most - my man died 10 years ago, and sometimes I still feel the pain of that afternoon, like a fresh stab to the heart. Beautifully written - I really enjoyed this. I'm so glad you decided to go with your impulse and share this. Thank you. Summary:
Valkyrie, Dean and Sam (Banner by Tru_Faith_Lost)
Souls sometimes travel the same path together. Who protects the protector? Sam is snatched by a serial killer who finds out justice according to Dean Winchester doesn't involve a court room. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Two Souls Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 56075 [Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 29/03/07
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Date: 03/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue Tense start - looking forward to the rest.
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Date: 03/03/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Now I am intrigued - who or what is that entity floating on the ceiling watching Dean? And - oh, flip - Sam's in deep trouble. Reading on... |
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