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Real name: Carolyn Status: Member Member Since: 23/01/08 Website: Beta-reader:
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Reviews by nightchills Summary:
Who do you call when a simple salt and burn gets out of hand. The brothers get help from an unexpected source when they find they are dealing with multiple spirits in a haunted factory.
Tied with Supernaturaldh's Leaning On A Shovel, Hoping For A Hole Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 62717 [Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 08/06/07
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Ah, the trials you writer's put my boys thru. I hear Dean and Sam in every word, tho, good job so far.
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I appreciate the detailed fighting moves, so many generalize too much and you cna't get a good picture of the fight. And the scene where you had Dean toweling down his baby brother sounded very typical of something Dean would really do.
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue Loved your story!! Really enjoyed the little love scene with Sam - was hoping it was him she liked best, cuz, you know, I do. Great ending, too. So Winchester boys-like! And you really know how to write a good fight scene. Thanks so much. I must admit, if I was lined up against a wall and threatened with a firing squad, I would have to admit that this is my favourite story. I love a good old-fashioned ghost story, and I enjoy throwing a bit of humour in for good measure. I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it so much. So - Sammy girl, eh? I'm a Dean girl, but I have a soft spot for little brother too - you can't have one without the other...Jules Summary: It's Dean's birthday, and Sam's sick, and doesn't that just suck?
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1439 [Report This] Published: 06/05/07 Updated: 06/05/07
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Date: 14/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Fifth of Comfort I liked it. Very Dean-like thinking, undoubtedly. Summary: Tag to 2x20 "What is and What Should Never Be". Summary inside due to spoilers.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1556 [Report This] Published: 08/05/07 Updated: 08/05/07
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Date: 15/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Door Number Two Liked it, but not sure about the ending. Is it just me or are we supposed to know why he sees Sam severl times in his alternate life and why he wakes up in the hospital without Sam? I'm confused. Did he go in a coma and meanwhile Sam got killed hunting and he woke up after that fact?
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Date: 15/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Door Number Two Deans alternate life with a girl and kids was nice. A little confusing with Sam, but I guess he was popping into Dean's coma sleep? And he woke up and found out Sam was dead? Little confusing, could have used a bit more direction on that track. But I liked the story.
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Date: 15/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Door Number Two Deans alternate life with a girl and kids was nice. A little confusing with Sam, but I guess he was popping into Dean's coma sleep? And he woke up and found out Sam was dead? Little confusing, could have used a bit more direction on that track. But I liked the story. Summary: Dean and Sam go on a hunt to stop a rash of robberies.
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 26708 [Report This] Published: 14/05/07 Updated: 22/05/07
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Date: 17/02/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I love a story with plenty of action and humor, where I can "hear" the boys' voices and "see" their actions playing out - all the requirements needed for a good Winchester story. Excellent!
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Date: 17/02/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I love a story with plenty of action and humor, where I can "hear" the boys' voices and "see" their actions playing out - all the requirements needed for a good Winchester story. Excellent! Summary:
Three weeks after the fire. Where were the angels? Spoilers for What Is and What Should Never Be. Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3314 [Report This] Published: 22/05/07 Updated: 23/05/07
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like your idea of how Dean go the silver ring he always wears. Very believable. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading! Summary: Dean and Sam learn that sometimes it pays to be the good guys with the help of a little guy in green. Set during Season 1.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3912 [Report This] Published: 22/05/07 Updated: 23/05/07
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I felt the story needed a bit more leprechaun interaction, too brief after the build up. Nice ending for the bros, tho. Hey Thanks for your comments :) They are greatly appreciated :) Tara x0x Summary:
Ficlet, 1800 words. Coda to “All Hell Breaks Loose, part 2.” Sam found out about his brother’s deal 3 hours ago, and now he can’t sleep as numbers take on a whole new meaning for him. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1788 [Report This] Published: 23/05/07 Updated: 24/05/07
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Numbers I liked it, had the sound of hope. For Dean and for poor Sam.
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Numbers I liked it, had the sound of hope. For Dean and for poor Sam. Summary: What did Sam talk about when Dr. Ellicott (episode: 'Asylum') asked him how he felt about Dean?
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1094 [Report This] Published: 25/05/07 Updated: 25/05/07
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: On the Couch There were too many issues brought up (ie: what job had them on the road all the time, more feelings he had being on the road with Dean, etc) that the good doctor, being it's his job to delve, would definitely have delved into rather than let Sam give such generic responses. The way Sam acted when he came back out to Dean in the show, I think his talk with the doc had gotten him fired up over what they had discussed. Sorry, I just was not satisfied with the ending. But I appreciated your work on the story just the same. Summary: Sam and Dean find themselves in small town America on a hunt to stop people from dissapearing.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 31863 [Report This] Published: 28/05/07 Updated: 07/06/07
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Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I am so glad that G'ma Carol didn't resemble the waitresses!
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Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 It's cool that I'm reading this story during the eclipse of the moon. Adds some great ambience to the creep factor!
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Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 I enjoyed it, thanks. On to the next adventure... Summary: First Sam gets hurt by something neither Sam nor Dean can see. then Sam and Dean both get attacked, by something they can. the only problem is, they arent sure what it is. LIMPSAM! PROTECTIVE, LIMPDEAN!
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2335 [Report This] Published: 28/05/07 Updated: 19/06/07
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Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: actual friends Please, please, please do not write stories if they are not important enough to you to use periods and capitals and everything a writer knows to use in writing!!! Oh. My . God! Summary:
This one-shot is based on the line in IMTOD (spoilers!) when John asks if the yellow-eyed demon can save Dean. The YED says that he can't, but he knows someone, and "it won't be a problem." Who did te demon turn to, and did he have a hard time convincing that 'someone' to bring Dean back? Categories: One Shots, General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 691 [Report This] Published: 29/05/07 Updated: 29/05/07
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Demon vs. Demon Didn't care for this take. The YED was powerful, he didn't need to go thru a crossroads demon to get the job done, since they had 2 different responibilities, I believe. He could have, however, asked her to make the bargaining very strict if one of the Winchesters ever came to her for help. That would be more likely and more believeable. Summary:
If your brother had a vision about a werewolf attacking him, would you go chasing after it? Even though you knew he was still hiding something? Possible spoilers and brotherly angst. Plus Dean… well, just read and find out.  Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 19280 [Report This] Published: 31/05/07 Updated: 03/06/07
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: The hunt Begins I don't know, Attackee sounds like a nice Dean word. So far, so Winchester-like. brothers: you cant live with 'em and you cant live without 'em! by iheartjensen Rated: T
 [Reviews - 5] Summary: the boys have a sister who they havent seen in 4 years. when they finially reunite she ends up going with them. but a hunt that they go on together brings back bad memories of a deamon in their family.
Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 2291 [Report This] Published: 18/06/07 Updated: 19/06/07
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Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: demon of the week You've got to learn to capitalize and all that English writing stuff - way too distracting!!!
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Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: moving The English that's lacking, are you ten years old and haven't learned how to use it? Please, do not write without learning these important tools. Ruins the story even if it's got a chance at being a good one. Summary:
Missing scene from AHBL2. Bobby's a little mad with Dean for what he'd done... Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 627 [Report This] Published: 26/06/07 Updated: 26/06/07
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Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow! I guess Bobby really was pissed off! Good insight into his thoughts. Now I really need to see the new S3 shows when they come back! Summary: John is faced with his worst nightmare. And now he has to fix everything. One thing's for sure, Dean is NEVER hunting solo again...
Categories: Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 65995 [Report This] Published: 26/06/07 Updated: 26/06/07
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Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Surviving Watch out , sometimes you use present tense anmongst the past tense. Well, I'm intriqued, to say the least. Have to go read more now. Yeah, I know. My grammar sucks... =( Glad you can still enjoy it though.
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Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Secondary Tremor Excellent piece of horror writing when the symbol started moving!! |
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