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Reviews by nightchills Summary: AHBL2 tag. Bobby’s POV. Bobby had been waiting seventeen years to finally see Dean sacrifice his life for his brother. Bobby always thought the end would come in battle. He never imagined this, never foresaw this. Fourth and final chapter.
CSPWDT Dean waited his entire life to ask for something and when he did, he initially received nothing for his efforts, nothing except the pain. Later he knew his dad had ultimately answered his pleas, but he never asked for this, never meant for this. Chapters One through Three. Spoilers for several Season One and Two episodes up to Children Shouldn't Play with Dead Things,
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 11808 [Report This] Published: 25/01/07 Updated: 30/05/07
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Bobby I sincerely loved your writing on the 4 men's thoughts and feelings. Got right in there and scooped it all out for us to read. Good job. Thanks so much! CSPWDT was one of those episodes that just hung with me, I could not get that last scene out of my head and I had to write something in response. Then Kripke brilliantly brought up all the same issues again with Dean's deal so the Bobby chapter completed the work. Bobby really did become a member of the family, as close as blood IMHO in AHBL2. Thanks for reviewing, B.J. Summary:
The brothers finally confront the demon. But will one of them fall? Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 7947 [Report This] Published: 28/01/07 Updated: 30/01/07
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Date: 08/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue More rough than your other excellent writings that followed that I have enjoyed, but still affected me. Summary:
1876 "God made all Men, Samuel Colt made them equal." The West was inundated with vampires. It was the perfect place to kill and slaughter, cowboys died every day and no one really seemed to care, most were too concerned with staying alive themselves. Dean and Sam visit a town that seems eerily familiar; or should I say, they seem strangely familiar to the townfolk. Some spoilers for Dead Man's Blood.
Categories: Romance, AU, Action Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: Once Upon a Time in the West Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 38968 [Report This] Published: 28/01/07 Updated: 17/02/07
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Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Dean and Sam 2006 I wondered where this tale was taking us. Cool! Nice addition of Luther into the mix. You must be catching up on several of my stories today! Thanks! Yeah, I really just wanted to do a Supernatural western and this was great fun for me. I couldn't really have Luther around tho cause he would have recognized the Winchesters and even tho this might seem AU to some, I try to stay within what I know to be true at the time I write it. Take care, B.J.
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Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Resolution 2006 Alternate universe leaking thru every 10 years? Cuz I really couldn't buy reincarnation. Confused about the 2 bullets given to them, however, wasn't sure about the part they played in the scheme and if they were in the TV show or if I am just dense and am not picking up on something. I really enjoyed the western, thanks! Glad you enjoyed my western, wonder if Kripke will ever get his own pre-story Western made? I'd love it if he did. No, the two bullets was just my way of trying to keep the colt viable. At the time I wrote this they still HAD the colt, but only the one bullet left. I had no idea Ruby would come along with the secret recipe to make more. LOL One of these days I'd like to revisit Deke, Scott and Jake. I miss them! Take care, B.J. Summary:
Valkyrie, Dean and Sam (Banner by Tru_Faith_Lost)
Souls sometimes travel the same path together. Who protects the protector? Sam is snatched by a serial killer who finds out justice according to Dean Winchester doesn't involve a court room. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Two Souls Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 56075 [Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 29/03/07
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Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14/Epilogue I really liked the story, didn't see a point to the female watcher comments, however. Didn't make sense, didn't fit into the story and there was no explanation to it by the end. ??? Summary: When Dean is injured on a hunt and loses all of his personal memories, it is up to Sam to help him through it.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34792 [Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 13/04/08
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Date: 28/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I believe werewolves are too vicious and territorial to run in packs; never portrayed as other than solitary killers, they'd kill each other. Now shapeshifters, yes.
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Date: 12/04/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 PLeeeeeese hurry up and finish this tale - we have been waiting forever to see what happens! Summary: We go together, or not at all.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7034 [Report This] Published: 22/02/07 Updated: 22/02/07
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Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Okay, maybe I'm just in a sensitive mood, but the ending made me tear up! Good job, good story. Summary: During a hunt Sam and Dean learn just how high a price some people are willing to pay for immortality.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Something Lost Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45016 [Report This] Published: 22/02/07 Updated: 16/07/07
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Date: 28/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Pleeese give this beautiful car its rightful name. Your stories consistantly never capitalize the poor Impala's first initial, leaving her to be merely a little antelope, whose name is not capitalized. You even capitalize M & M's - has not the Metallicar earned her name to be a real, capital letter name, too? For the love of all car gods.... Summary: The hunters realize they are becoming the hunted. Every moment counts as the first wave of evils crawl from the woodwork bent on using Sam for their own ends, while Sam tries to find a way to free Dean of the promise he forced upon him.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 50605 [Report This] Published: 24/02/07 Updated: 17/04/07
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Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I'm confused. I didn't see that this story had one before it, that this was a sequel. So who is Laura? Why is Dean calling her pet names that he wouldn't normally use? I'm confused with some references to things mentioned with no explanation or a hint that it relates to another earlier story. Summary: What is the measure of a man? Sometimes, it's found in the midst of epic struggle. Sometimes, it's in the spaces in between.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2851 [Report This] Published: 25/02/07 Updated: 25/02/07
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Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 It was nice to read something that didn't involve the boys getting horribly torn up and yet still save people. Good job! Summary: When an encounter in the woods goes south, the Winchester brothers lose something important.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 17018 [Report This] Published: 27/02/07 Updated: 27/02/07
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Date: 17/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Coda... kinda Just wanted you to know that I have really enjoyed reading all of your stories on this site and am looking forward to more. Very Winchesterly and brilliant, every one of 'em.
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Date: 18/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The exchange about using the force and Sam's Star Wars response cracked me up because it was so unexpected. Great story. Summary: It's about the only routine Sam Winchester would never ever skip doing...no matter what happens, he has got to do it. It has something to do with the 24th day of month of January.
Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2025 [Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07
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Date: 30/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Well, technically you can't have a prologue and epilogue without the creamy filling in between. Sometimes you just have to cut out a few words in a sentence to make it read smoothly. I kind of felt like it needed to be reread and corrected before it got posted. the story itself had potential, tho and I liked your attempt to be humorous. (Altho seriously , a guy would never ask another guy what he was doing in the bathroom!) Summary: It doesn't matter who it is. It just matters that it's not both of them. That he's going to save one and probably condemn the other. This destroys him either way.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 17382 [Report This] Published: 07/03/07 Updated: 20/03/07
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Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I actually don't believe John, with his fierce will to keep his family safe, would NOT jump in and dig Sam out vs giving up like written. Sorry, just not the John we know...
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Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue Good story, liked the ending. Summary:
After a fight with Dean, Sam is left to wonder if his brother would be better off without him.Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 38555 [Report This] Published: 08/03/07 Updated: 25/04/07
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Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Well now, the Dean we all love and admire would find a demon and let it kill him, not step off a ledge like a coward, you know. Summary: It's Christmas Eve and a guy in a brown leather jacket enters the small town bar, he's wearing a peculiar looking pendant around his neck and though he doesn't say much he changes her life forever. A Deancentric tragedy. Warning: Character death.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3311 [Report This] Published: 09/03/07 Updated: 09/03/07
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Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Didn't see that coming. Have to go go get a Kleenex. now.
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Date: 06/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I read this before and don't remember if I told you that it broke my heart. That means it was good writing. Summary: Deancentric. Set after In My Time of Dying.
Categories: Romance, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Coming War Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 23900 [Report This] Published: 18/03/07 Updated: 22/03/07
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Date: 06/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 You've got to watch the commas, etc. Placement is either in the wrong place, not where it needs to be or absent. Kinda distracts and can change the meaning of the sentence, too. I'm still reading the story to the end, though. Hopefully you'll still enjoy despite the mistakes, this is the first thing I'd ever written and it shows..lol. Thanks for taking the time to review - Kel Summary:
What happens when Dean can't handle all the fighting and leaves Sam and John to battle it out? The trio may become a duo if Sam and John can't find Dean before its too late. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 8279 [Report This] Published: 23/03/07 Updated: 24/04/07
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Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to the Jungle I don't know, I'm just not thinking Dean would be thinking the things you're having him say in his head. Not after 21/2 seasons of watching the boys over and over so many times. But, I won't give up on the story yet. Summary:
Dean and Sam arrive in a small college town where coeds are mysteriously disappearing, but the aftermath of the hunt leaves the boys struggling with something they never dreamed could happen. Will they be able to deal with the consequences or will the boys finally have to give up the hunt? Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 38260 [Report This] Published: 27/03/07 Updated: 15/04/07
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Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Working with people in wheelchairs and knowing how traumatic it is to get used to paralisis, it is very unlikely a newbie would even dare to risk humiliation trying sex with 2 girls - But...good for Sam! :)
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Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Anticipation building nicely...
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Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Well, I hope I do get more from Phantasm when I read it cuz this ending sucked! Good story, yes, but, you know, sucky for Dean. Summary: Dean and Sam find help from an unusual source and face a demon from Hell.
Categories: Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 5941 [Report This] Published: 30/03/07 Updated: 09/04/07
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Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Kind of skeptical with the angels-having-sex-fantasy happening here, but I'll keep reading. |
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