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Penname: nightchills [Contact]
Real name: Carolyn
Status: Member
Member Since: 23/01/08
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My favorite genre in books and movies is supernatural/mild horror and I have been writing novels along those lines for my friends to enjoy, although haven't quite got around to trying to publish yet.

Have been an Occupational Therapy Assistant in Care Centers and hospitals for 20 years (where does the time go?) and love it most of the time. Case you don't know, that means I teach people how to dress, cook, get out of bed, etc. - the activities that occupy their daily life - after injuries or illness. 

I loved the show from the second I saw the first pilot ad on TV and have only fallen further in love with them, especially Sam/Jared, who is beginning to grow out of his long-legged colt stage and into quite the deep-voiced hunk with a better hair style. I think Dean/Jensen needs to grow his hair a bit longer like in the first season, but I do love the man's character. Dean holding a pistol- hot! And I still miss Jeffrey Dean Morgan as John. They could have done so much with his character, like some of you guys have in your stories.

Have so enjoyed reading everybody's SU stories, makes the writer's strike and the waiting for new shows much more bearable. There's so many, I feel happy knowing it will take me years to read them all! Keep up the good work y'all! Maybe my weak attempts will be half as worthy.

-nightchills, 4/08 

 

 


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Reviews by nightchills
 
Summary: John is faced with his worst nightmare. And now he has to fix everything. One thing's for sure, Dean is NEVER hunting solo again...
Categories: Wee!chester, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 65995
[Report This] Published: 26/06/07 Updated: 26/06/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue

Enjoyed the entirely different tactic you took in your story. Good work. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thanks! *hugs*

 
Summary:

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The boys win a holiday at a luxury resort - but is it really the holiday of a lifetime, or the stuff of nightmares?


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 55218
[Report This] Published: 09/07/07 Updated: 25/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 27/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

Delightfully cute! I guessed it was a Trickster early on (after all, we've seen 2 shows with him now since it is S3, so had more awareness). Really loved the humor and the tie-ins to the receipt Sam handed Andy (really wished he could have lived to be in other shows, so adorable) and then into the start of AHBL1. Way cool! 

Author's Response:

Kripke made my story AU! LOL. Oh, well.... Thanks for that - I had fun with this one. I love doing the humour ones. Well done for spotting my Monster of the Week so early - and did you guess who the Trickster was?

Glad you enjoyed it.

 
What You Feel by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 279]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Sam picks up on the feelings of everyone around him and Dean has...other issues. 


Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 49812
[Report This] Published: 10/07/07 Updated: 14/10/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 16/03/08 Title: Chapter 13: Not a hunt…More like a chance encounter…

Don't know what I enjoyed more, the story or the faciful titles!

Author's Response:

Awww...thanks.  Most of the chapter titles are quotes I looked up.  I think the first, second to last and last chapter titles are the only ones not quotes.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Laura

 
Summary: My version of the end of Season Three, when the demon comes to collect. Spoilers for the end of season 2, and kind of a death fic, so beware!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3739
[Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 29/07/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Limbo

Separating Sam's experiences from Dean's would be helpful vs having them run together . Poor Dean.

 
Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Lazarus

I felt Dean's return was too quick and over with without much storyline behind it. Think it could have made a much better story with more angst from Sam at the death bed over the loss of his brother, regardless if he felt he'd come back some day and more true feelings of what Dean what experiencing in hell.

 
Phoenix by sojourner84 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

The fire took his life, but gave him purpose. It devoured his childhood, but allowed him to shield the innocence of another. It brought back his brother to him, but not without scars.



Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 999
[Report This] Published: 02/08/07 Updated: 02/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 18/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Phoenix

Truly cool.

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Summary: This was my first Supernatural fanfic!  The boys wanted one day, one day, of relaxation. Something out there has other, more sinister, plans.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 10391
[Report This] Published: 07/08/07 Updated: 11/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 11: Hang On, Dean

Good torture scene - uh, if there is such a thing.

Author's Response: hehe  Thank you.

 
Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 13: Stitches in Time

Okay, but what happened to the twins? They needed to be slayed, too, ya know. My poor Dean.

Author's Response: Others have said that too.  Maybe I should do a little sequel.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
Summary: I don't even know how to summarize this one. It's a weird, oddball double drabble about Dean's knife, from the knife's perspective. PLEASE give it a try.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 192
[Report This] Published: 08/08/07 Updated: 08/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cool perspective I would never have considered.

Author's Response: Thank you.  I know it's a little off-the-wall but it's good to know you liked it!

 
Double Whammy by Vanessa Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary: Two men, two cases of food poisoning, and one toilet. Uh oh. Sick!Dean Sick!Sam Sicker!Dean and Angst.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 8655
[Report This] Published: 12/08/07 Updated: 14/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 27/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Clean Dean?

I liked it! Altho I kept waiting for nurse D. Monnick to turn evil or turn out to be an angel or something!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Sorry for the bit of disappointment there.  But, I guess, in her own way D. Monnick was a bit of an angel.

I was actually thinking of bringing her back in another story one day.

 
Take My Place by Taiven Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A childhood memory. It's all they have. All Dean wants. All Sam can give.

Take My Place


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 679
[Report This] Published: 12/08/07 Updated: 12/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 30/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Take My Place

So sad....

 
Summary:

Dean and Sam.

Banner by Aliura. Thanks so much Aliura!!!


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1981
[Report This] Published: 15/08/07 Updated: 15/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 27/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: None

I found this to be confusing, not aided by the style of writing, the mismatched wording... Maybe you meant it to sound this way, but I just found it confusing, sorry.

Author's Response:

Excuse me, I can not understand that exactly you not liked in my story.

 
Summary:

AHBL2  Sam didn’t know the particulars on his brother’s exploits, just that Dean liked sex and women liked Dean.  It was just a little sex, no big deal.  What more could there possibly be to know?

I shouldn’t begrudge him a good time, it’s just, he’s having fun and I’m the only one worrying about this?  In one year his bill comes due, how can he just roll over and die?


Categories: One Shots, Romance, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 11103
[Report This] Published: 15/08/07 Updated: 15/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 19/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, nicely played love scene. We can only hope for half that sensuality from our own guys. Made my heart break for Dean.

Author's Response:

Wow, mission accomplished!  Thanks again.

Yeah, this was my first and only love scene... that I've written.  LOL  My heart breaks for Dean all the time, but it was nice to let him have a moment with a girl that truly saw him, and then for Sam to witness it was great.  Take care, B.J.

 
DON'T LOOK! by Vanessa Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The Winchester Brothers get the surprise of their lives when they investigate a water demon in Black Earth, Wisconsin.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1908
[Report This] Published: 19/08/07 Updated: 19/08/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise, Surprise

Cute story, I like it when Sam blushes.

Author's Response: Me too!  Glad you enjoyed the story!

 
Summary: Sam, John and Dean visit Mary's Grave and run into and unexpected visitor, and will Dean find out the secret that John and Sam are hiding from him. 
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 99328
[Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 03/10/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I reckon you exchanged the unknown uncle that put up the head stone (per the TV story) for Mary's father in this AU version.

 
Summary:

A poem of sorts about the Winchester Brothers.


Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 126
[Report This] Published: 05/09/07 Updated: 05/09/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled

I'm not a poem person unless it comes with a great tune, but I liked your work. Looking forward to a story soon.

Author's Response: Well I might just have to put the poem to music then don't I? :) And yes hopefully the story will be up soon. I want to get at least one more chappy done before I send it in. Thanks very much!

 
Summary:

AHBL2 Missing Scene - from hug to hug

What Am I Supposed To Do (Ungen)

Awards 2008 Best Missing Scene


Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 9385
[Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 11/02/11


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 08/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Made my eyes water, good job writing this.

Author's Response: Thank you. There was just so much raw emotion attached to that episode. I was inspired by that promo shot of Dean looking at Sam's body as he stood in the doorway, and I wondered just what would be going through his mind during that 24 hours that Sam was dead...Jules

 
Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 08/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Excellent!

Author's Response: Thanks - and thanks again for hunting down all my previous works...Jules

 
Apartment 63B by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Sam finds a bomb...Dean has to take it away.

 

banner by Maygin


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4613
[Report This] Published: 10/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 16/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Per my job, you take a breath thru the nose and let it out thru the mouth to calm down, but minor detail for future reference. Good writing and characterization, kept my interest. Poor Sammy. That was a lot of grenades!

Author's Response: I'll remember that!  Thanks for reading and commenting!

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

What kind of game does Dean have to play to save Sam this time? And can he save himself as well?


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504
[Report This] Published: 24/09/07 Updated: 28/10/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, was that an intriguing beginning! Hope the story lives up to your fabulous intro or I'm going to have to sic Dean on you. When he comes back...

Author's Response:

I hope you enjoy the entire story, and thanks for taking the time to review!

 
Summary: Sam has a vision about a dog. Has his freaky brain finally blown a fuse?

Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3563
[Report This] Published: 06/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

FYI - calves bawl, hounds bay.

Author's Response: No....a hound bawls. The way a hound barks is called either a chop or a bawl. Sorry. I train, hunt and show Plott hounds. 

 
Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I get all teared up when animals die. Good writing.

Author's Response: Thanks.

 
Summary: How far will Dean go to save the ones he loves? He'd always sworn he'd never kill a human.... what would make him do it?
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Nikki's Stories
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 32436
[Report This] Published: 16/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 15/04/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I liked the nice hospital family moment of closeness, makes John seem like the father he should have been with the boys on the show. I feel more welcoming towards Nikki during this chapter than I have so far - my Winchester world just doesn't have a place for a sister and she seems more like a girlfriend figure to Dean to me. Not your fault, I know...

 
Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 18/04/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Nice referance to why Dean had mentioned that the last time they had been there, Bobby had threatened to shoot John with a shotgun (Altho I can't picture John getting violent and ugly like that). I eventually got used to Nikki and the twin thing and enjoyed your story. But, still love my boys on their own sans girls in the mix. Unless they're demons and thieves (Su3). Keep up the good work.

 
Cave In by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Cave In

Trapped in total darkness, both hurt, one seriously - but which one....


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3874
[Report This] Published: 27/10/07 Updated: 27/10/07


Reviewer: nightchills Signed
Date: 08/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, knew who was speaking from the second line, but then got confused who was who with the sudden can't breathe problem! Tricky! Really enjoyed it, thanks.

Author's Response: Ahh - sorry about that...well, not really, as I kept it deliberately vague - that's me being all mysterious and Agatha Christie-like...Thanks for the review...Jules