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Real name: Renee Bliss Status: Member Member Since: 20/01/08 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by rbliss1969
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Bambi, i can't remember if i have left any reviews on this story but man i have to say each chapter leaves me in awe and wanting more. this by far is left me wanting to jump in and help Dean beat the heck out of Dominic. the pain and suffering you have put Dean and Sam and bringing them down to the darkest places. the healing for the two them is going to be long and hard i hope the chapters as the story goes on will show that. again great job Renee
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Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49 Bambi, OMG what a great chapter. is it really Mary or is Dean just wishful thinking. hope the next chapter will be soon. Renee
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 Bambi, what a great end to a great story. this one had it all pain, sorrow, terror and most of all fear. what Dominic did to Sam and Dean. John, Bobby, Deacon to the rescue. for me when Dean found out about the baby was one of the best chapters. great job Renee Summary:
Sam goes missing, again, and Dean has to find him. Too bad for Dean something's after him too, and it's not necessarily supernatural either. Huge thanks to bulletbabe for another awesome banner, she is totally awesome!!
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 103980 [Report This] Published: 28/12/07 Updated: 14/09/08
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Date: 03/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Helen, excellent story. loved how you have Bobby in this story. great line from Bobby made me laugh out loud "BS. Train wreck is your middle name." so true Dean is always finding himself in some kind of trouble. and speaking of trouble what is with the huge black monstrosity staring at Dean doesn't he have enough to deal with? love the line "Whoa...easy there, Cujo." can actually picture Dean saying this. hope chapter 11 is soon; poor Dean he is in for a world of S@&*. Renee Author's Response: I can hear his voice in my head saying just that phrase (Hope that doesn't mean something. They have medication for that, don't they?) I firmly believe that Dean never has enough to deal with, so I say, PILE IT ON HIGH! (Besides, the dog, well...it had a purpose, honest.) I'm glad you like my version of Bobby, it's my first attempt at writing him in any detail. Glad he's ok. Oh, and thanks for leaving the comments, I alwasy appreciate them!
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Date: 06/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Helen, OMG; i am in shock what a great chapter these woman are truly evil and scary as hell! Poor Sam and Bobby and poor Dean he has no idea what is coming. again great chapter i am sure chapter 12 will be up soon. rbliss Author's Response: Bless you and thank you! Evil and scary, what a combination. You are so right about poor Dean having no clue what's coming too. Poor guy...I feel for him. Glad you liked it, and Chapter 12 is up as we speak!!
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Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Helen, your chapters need to be longer!!!!!! i am on the edge of my seat and the chapter ends; how cruel. loved the line "you better still be alive in there Sammy, or i swear I'm gonna kill you." i can picture Dean actually saying this in one of the episodes............too funny. I said it before these 3 are evil and scary man i would not want to run into them. hoping chapter 13 will be soon. Renee Author's Response: I'd love to make them longer, but sorry to say they would probably take two months to post instead of just two weeks. Sometimes I hear that little Dean voice in my head, and he tells me things (Weird, huh?) Anyway, glad you're still liking it and I'll try to get chapter up on less than two weeks again.
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Date: 14/04/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Helen, Wow harsh to say the least. i hate cliff hangers so chapter 14 please. I don't know who i feel sorry for me Dean for sacrificing himself or Sam and Bobby for having to watch. great chapter Renee Author's Response: Thanks so much Renee! Sorry for ending it that way, but there's only so much angst I myself can take, even when I'm the one doling it out. (Weird, huh?) I'll try to get more up soon, I promise as long as you promise to keep reading!!
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Date: 23/04/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Helen, are you trying to kill me?????????? Holy S&@#. Who is the woman??? i was thinking Ruby at first but the eyes are all wrong. wow a great chapter. Renee Author's Response: I would never, ever try to kill you, I swear!! That's why I tossed the warning in there. It applies to the next few chapters too, and believe me when I say the disclaimer will be necessary in the very near future. And to answer your question, no, it's not Ruby. She will rear her pretty little head later thought to explain herself because I just can't leave that stone unturned. Thanks as always Renee for the great comments and feel free to type the entire curse word when the mood strikes, they don't bother me one bit!
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Date: 27/04/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Helen, i know you said this was not a death fic but that was heart renching. i am still crying. OMG how awful......... i know you said Dean was in for more of an ordeal so i am sure the next chapters will show that. and what about the double mint twins i am sure they are still to be dealt with. can't wait to read more. You still ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!! Renee Author's Response: Thanks Renee! Happy to hear no fish are sailing my way from your direction! I am sorry if it made you cry though, but I am very glad you liked it. Dean's ordeal is not quite over yet, as you have already guessed and the fate of the double mint twins will be revealed as well. Thanks so much for your awesome words!! I can never get enough!!
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Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Helen, you did it again; i cried for the whole chapter. the pain Sam was in and Bobby trying to get Sam to release Dean. OMG. Great writing as always Renee Author's Response: Thanks, as always Renee. I am always so happy to hear that the stuff I think is cheezy cornball stuff was well received. I appreciate it every time you tell me that what I post isn't garbage because sometimes I'm must not so sure. thanks for always boosting my confidence and I hope you continue to enjoy!!
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Date: 18/05/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Helen, this chapter had me crying like a baby. Dean seeing and being with his Mother. remembering her smell her touch from so long ago. Dean dropping down to his knees and wrapping his arms around his Mom had me weeping so hard i could picture it in my mind and it made me ache for him to be able to actually do this. the choice of never being able to return how cruel. but we all know what Dean would do for Sam. you have brought these characters to life for us that we are able to feel their pain, sorrow, joy and love in so many ways. what a wonderful chapter. Renee Author's Response: Thank you so much Renee! Those are very kind and sincere words and I loved reading each one. I honestly think Dean probably can remember what his mother smelled like and what her touch felt like. We all know he has that sensitive side he considers a weakness and hides only to let it show on the rarest occasions and making us want it so much more. You are so right about his choice too. It's painfully obvious he would die for Sam...hell, he did die for Sam, didn't he? Thank you again for yourincredibly great words!!
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Date: 28/05/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Helen, cliff hanger........................i am going to have to drive or fly to where you live and have a long long talk with you about this. i liked how this chapter wrapped around Bobby and how he took control of Sam and the house situation. great chapter hope chapter 19 will be up soon. Renee Author's Response: I would welcome you with open arms, buy you a drink and let you chew me out, loving every minute! Glad you liked Bobby and his take charge attitude. Sometimes the boys need that. Chapter 19 in the works as we speak...all outlined and ready to write. As always, thanks a million Renee!
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Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Helen, great chapter!!! all i wanted to do was to jump in and hang on to Sam. i just wanted to comfort him. Poor Sam.......... Renee Author's Response: Hey Renee, Thanks so much!! Yeah, I'd love to jump in there and hang on to Sam too...or maybe Dean, or maybe both...*****sigh****
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Date: 28/06/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Helen, excellent chapter; had me crying at the end. Sam and Bobby shedding tears together and poor Dean............ keep up the great job Renee Author's Response: Thanks Renee! I think Sam and especially Bobby deserved that little bit of release and it actually warmed my heart to have the two of them leaning on one another. Weird, huh? Anyway, really glad you liked the latest update...and try not to worry about poor Dean too much, I'm sure he'll end up just fine in the end.
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Date: 15/09/08 Title: Chapter 27: The End Helen, excellent story!!!!!!!!! there is a reason you are on my favorite list. Hurt Dean and worried Sam are great. i normally like more Dean in my stories but i like how you did this one. hope your next story will be just as good. Renee Summary:
Dean agrees to look into a hunt he doesn't believe in to appease a sick Sam. Set in second season, between Playthings and Nightshifter Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 47323 [Report This] Published: 09/01/08 Updated: 03/06/08
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Date: 20/04/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Kelly, excellent story so far. i love Peg and Floss they are great characters. so willing to take care of Dean and Sam. Grandmothers they never had. Dean's in trouble had a feeling this was going to happen. hope chapter 10 will be up soon Renee Author's Response: Dean's in trouble, yeah, that happens every now and again huh, lol. Glad you enjoyed and I'm heading to get chapter 10 done now. So glad you're enjoying and thanks for dropping me a line, it's always great to know people are reading - Kel
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Date: 21/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Kel, great chapter i love Bobby wanting to pour holy water on the women; too funny! that had me laughing for a while. Dean is hurt, Sam is sick and poor Oscar. again love Peg and Floss. Renee Author's Response: LOL, yeah Bobby is an absolute favorite of mine and I love adding him in wherever possible - Glad you're still enjoying - KEl
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Date: 29/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Kel, could Floss and Peg be Dean and Sam. i love how they act. Floss liking Bobby too funny. we all knew they would not stay behind. Like how you described Sam having to deal with Oscar and that he thought Dean was better suited to handle children especially since he is a big child himself. but more importantly he all ready raised one.....Sam. great story Renee Author's Response: Thanks Renee, so glad you're enjoying. And yeah Floss and Peg's relationship is a reflection of the boy's.. just seemed to work out that way the more I wrote about them. Thanks for taking the time to review - Kel
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Date: 03/06/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Kelly, great story. i really liked the Mable Sisters. Floss and Peg are great characters; Sam and Dean need Grandmothers! Bobby hooking up with Floss too funny; head me laughing at that one. best line "These boys faint more than a nun at an orgy." laughed out load on this one. sorry to see this one end it was great. hope to see another one of your stories up. Renee
Author's Response: heheheh thanks Renee, I have to admit I was just waiting for a chance to use that line ;) As for Bobby, at least he'll be well-fed before he tears himself free of the sisters clutches ;) Thanks as always for the support - Kel Summary: After agreeing to split up for separate hunts, Dean finds himself all tied up and not sure how he got there. Post Season 2 so spoilers to that point.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 24184 [Report This] Published: 17/01/08 Updated: 24/01/08
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Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Dean an Arch-Angel; good one. i like the possibility of Dean being an Arch-Angel it goes with why he protects Sam so much. Dr. working at BK to funny. love this story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you like this story. Please go on to read 'To The Rescue' and 'Choices' if you haven't looked at them yet. 'To The Rescue' is another story that sets up everything for 'Choices' which is the story I'm working on now and follows the same ideas that 'Sword and Shield' introduces. A reviewer at ff.net gave me the idea for the Dr being at BK and I went with it from there. I really enjoyed writing that. Thanks for reading and for the review. I really appreciate it. Summary:
Dean's first time taking care of an injured father, his first time trying to escape the police, his first time meeting with a psychologist, his first time fighting against the law for his family. This is the beginning of Dean's quickly decreasing enjoyment of dealing with psychologists, police officers, and hospitals in general. Pre-series. Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 23197 [Report This] Published: 17/01/08 Updated: 13/04/08
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Date: 14/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Good Story liked how Dean protected Sam even at age 8. John wanting to leave the kids at Paster Jim's; i can also so that happening especially at what he does for a living. I liked how you had Paster Jim in this story they never really showed him on the show that much and i think you captured him good. Rbliss Summary:
The brothers find suffering and friendship through Gordon.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 63124 [Report This] Published: 18/01/08 Updated: 16/03/08
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Date: 15/04/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Mal, excellent story i should have read this first before i read "The Green and The Blue" then i would have know how Dean injured his leg and who David was. Ellen does need a love interest in her life i liked that you hooked her up with David. i also liked how you had Ellen still being a mother figure to Dean and Sam. when i watch the series that is what i always felt when Ellen was around. the hospital escape was a good job as well getting him the heck out of there had to be done. again great story Renee Summary:
Sam and Dean go to Michigan on a Hunt, and inadvertently find out more about each other than is comfortable. Mid-season 2. No spoilers. Just for fun! Apologies in advance for any mockery of any actors’ television careers. Tee-hee. Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 14651 [Report This] Published: 24/01/08 Updated: 25/01/08
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Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 TozaBoma, excellent story. I live 20 minutes from Grand Rapids and my cousin lives off of Division Ave so this story made me picture this area in GR. 28th street also has the Police Station on it and is a very busy street in GR so i was imagining where everything was as i was reading this story; know exactly where the Travelodge is.......too funny for me. nearest forest is over an hour away so i was picturing that in my head as well. i was laughing so hard at the bathroom seen. i didn't know what comment made me laugh the most. "You're my brother and we grew up together, but i ain't never touching another man's-", "Oh man!", "oh this is just wrong!" and the best "oh Jesus, that is something i never wanted to see in this lifetime!" Poor Dean, but i can picture Sam's facial expressions and him actually saying this; too funny. Bobby calling Dean a dumb ass also had me laughing out loud; somthing Bobby would actually say. again this story was great. Renee Author's Response: Thanks for the nice review, and for telling me which bits were worth reading! It's always good to get this kind of feedback. I've never actually been to Michigan (or the US at all until last week), I just picked it cos of Evil Dead 3, where they make double-barrelled Remingtons, ROFL I had to spend about 3 hours on Google Earth making sure I got all the place names right, cos I just knew that someone would spot the place and would tell me if it was all wrong, LOL I was so stoked to find out there was really a Winchester Place! I had so much fun writing the bathroom scene - for some reason I just got the feeling that Sam would be able to handle it (er, poor choice of words, maybe!) better than Dean. I just got this image in my head of him being morally outraged at the whole idea of going to the toilet, LOL Thanks again, for reading and reviewing! Summary:
An old prison...one very pissed off spirit...and a freak accident leaves Dean with the visions? The job suddenly changes when the visions start to take their toll, and both brothers are put at risk. Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 17664 [Report This] Published: 25/01/08 Updated: 08/06/09
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Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Going Nowhere Fast Kristen, so far i am liking this story. Dean having visions good idea. i am hoping John shows up as the story goes on. Renee Author's Response: Renee, I'm glad you like it so far! Haha hopefully that doesn't fall flat, even though I sort of forgot I was posting this baby up here. I have the weirdest ideas that strike me at the weirdest times, so I write a lot of interesting stories haha. And well...you know John...Love the guy but he's a hard guy to get a hold of. Hope you enjoy the next chapter. Kris
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Date: 28/12/08 Title: Chapter 5: Up The Creek Without A Boat Kristen, great chapter hope the next one will be up soon. Renee |
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