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Real name: Renee Bliss Status: Member Member Since: 20/01/08 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by rbliss1969
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Dean has a near death experience, but he doesn't come back from it entirely alone. Once again, many thanks to Vanessa for the great banner...you took the pics from my fave epi! Awesome job, I love it!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 113257 [Report This] Published: 17/11/07 Updated: 04/10/08
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Date: 10/04/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Helen, what a great story 20 chapters wow i could have kept on reading. i really got into this story. holy crap that Trent is crazy..........what a psycho. Dean is screwed for now and lets not forget about poor Julia. i am liking how you have connected Trish to Dean and how you had her stop Dean from offing him self. also like Bobby in this story. i love how you have him putting Dean in his place so like what a Dad would do. my favorite part of this story is when you had Dean crying and whining like a girl; watching The Notebook........too funny such a chick flick is right. again great story hope chapter 21 will be up soon. Renee Author's Response: Did you sit and read all 20 at one time? Yikes, that's a lot to take in at once! I must say that when this story started, Trish wasn't going to be a good guy, but the farther it went, it just kinda turned out that way. I am a total Bobby fan, I absolutely love the guy to bits and if I write anything set after season 1, I try like heck to put him in somehow. Funny thing about the Notebook...I NEVER...repeat...NEVER watch that don't involve high speed car chases or death and destruction and I had to ask my son...the Sam clone...what a good tear-jerker was. That was his response. Still haven't seen the movie and have no intentions to either. Thanks for the great review and I'll try to get 21 up soon...only problem is it's April 14th, and I still haven't done my taxes yet... I'm so screwed...just like Dean.
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Date: 19/04/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Helen, another great chapter; Bobby i always needed in a story. Like how you have Dean describing the Physical Therapist "brutal contortionist with the pretty face." keep up the great work Renee Author's Response: Thanks Renee!! I love adding Bobby to a story whenever possible. Glad you liked Dean's opinion of Juila too, I thought it sounded stupid but it was the best I could come up with at the time. Thanks for all the kind words and the inspiration to continue!!
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Date: 30/04/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Helen, great chapter of Deans morning. he could have called me i would have brought him a towel and some clean clothes.............yummy. also glad that he didn't have any complications so far the chapter was a nice relaxing one and Dean was not injured for a change; well for the moment any way. keep up the great job Renee Author's Response: Hey Renee, I would have most definitely brought him a towel too... but no clothes. Nope, definitely no clothes. I would have readily helped him back into bed and even tucked him in too, it would be the least I could do! You are so right about the relaxing tone that one took too, but let's just say it's the calm before the inevitable storm, right? Thanks as always Renee!! Glad you're still liking what you're reading.
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Date: 18/06/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Helen, once again great chapter. i am really enjoying this story has me on the edge of my seat. i am actually upset when the chapter ends and there is no more to read..........sorry i am not a patient person. i was wondering when Trish was going to make an entrance it has been awhile. hope the next chapter will be soon. Renee Author's Response: As always Renee, really glad you liked the update and that you are enjoying the entire story. I'm sorry the updates are slower than they usually are and I sure hope the correct that soon. And hey, you knew Trish would be back... and unfortunately for Dean in a bad way too.
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Date: 28/09/08 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Helen, yeah you are back; missed ya this story just keeps getting better as it goes. hope the next chapter will be up soon Renee Summary: BrotherhoodAU. After Dean's comment about wanting to eat a real meal in 'Simon Said' Sam convinces his brother to go out for dinner at an Italian restaurant but will there be deadly consequences?
Categories: Misc, General, Action, Humor, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 38198 [Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 01/12/07
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Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: The Same Goes For You Tara, great story; loved the "Robin to Caleb's Batman" line too funny. liked the way you had Dean connect with Matthew and Caleb. especially liked the whole super hero idea and the nicknames between Dean (Deuce) and Caleb (Damien). keep up the good writing Renee
Author's Response: Hey :) Glad to see you here too! Thanks for reading this and Im so glad you liked it. I had fun playing with that whole Batman and Robin thing :) Just thanks so much. You definately gave me a nice suprise :) Tara x0x Summary:
Banner by Vanessa A series of bizarre and brutal murders lure the Winchester brothers into their next hunt. Only this time, in the thick of the hunt, they find themselves stalked and terrorized by something out of one of Sam’s worst nightmares. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 32499 [Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 04/05/08
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Date: 12/04/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Bozo and Hot Barbie Bikes Vanessa, what a great story so far; Chaos evil little S@*&! Sam being afraid of clowns how funny is that. i like the episode "Everybody Loves a Clown." where we first learn of Sam's dislike of clowns. Dean being his typical self; like the bantering and the practical jokes so far. i love the old ladies how funny......that is so going to be me in my old age. Dean's reaction to them especially when they touched his bicep and pecs i laughed out loud. loved how you first introduced them seeing Dean and Sam in their boxes; yummy. i am hoping you had them back into the story since they are going to NM as well. again great story hoping chapter 8 will be soon. Renee
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Date: 05/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Severance Pay Vanessa, yeah chapter 8 and it was a good one. Barty got what he deserved now to end Chaos. Dean of course is in trouble and lets not forget about Sam will he be able to overcome his fears of clowns??? great chapter Renee Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 28/04/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Bambi, OMG i cried so hard when Joshua died. Dean's reaction and i was so afraid he was going to go to the crossroads. i am so glad when he ended up in the church. man you know how to tear out someones heart don't you. this story touched me deeply, the whole you have to have faith. How true!!!!!! on to Crucible Creed. Renee Summary: After having gotten lost during a blizzard, the boys find themselves sharing a house with a nice old lady and some time traveling ghosts. Will Dean be able to solve the mystery before the house is the death of both him and Sam?
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 12311 [Report This] Published: 05/12/07 Updated: 06/12/07
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Date: 29/02/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 excellent only disappointment was that i figured out who Melina was before chapter 3. I love the sarcasm between the 2 just like in the show. evil little girl; man what a B*#@&. I loved the comment "why am i always the one being thrown out the windows" something Dean would diffidently say to Sam. hope to read other stories by you soon. Summary:
 Sam Dean and Jo (Harvelle) are relaxing after a successful but tough poltergeist hunt, when Dean is abducted by a brutal daemon intent on bringing destruction down on mankind.
Sam and Jo must find a way to save Dean, and the whole of mankind. Will Dean be strong enough to withstand the daemon whilst they search and who are the strangers who might offer a solution? Thanks so much to Lout for my lovely banner and to Kirsty my GeekGirl shotgun and all you other daemon hunter girls for your encouragement. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 29542 [Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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Date: 21/01/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy! i am still crying! that was excellent. Eric Kripke needs to use some of the stories on this site; especially yours.
Author's Response: Awh Hunny here's a tissue for those tears! Thank you for your very kind words and I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. And yeah I agree there are so many fantastic stories on the site that I struggle to read them all. Re: Kripke - Wow if only huh! Hey if ya see him mention me I wouldn't mind!!! hahahahhahah! Bev xx Summary: An unexpected voicemail message sends the boys on wild goose chase to reclaim what is rightfully theres, unknowingly playing into the hands of a forgotten enemy. Set in Season 3.
Categories: Misc, Action, General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 90267 [Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 27/08/08
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Date: 05/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Call For Help i am from Michigan so i was glad to see the cities you used. Beaver Island, Charlevoix and Boyne City; too cool. i had a feeling reading the other chapters that it would be Kate; i am glad i loved her character and am hoping they will bring her back for the boys to deal with again. can't wait to read the other chapters. R in Michigan. Author's Response: Hey R First of all thank you for reading and reviewing:D I'm so happy to have you on board and I love that you liked the use of those cities ... thats so cool so thanks for sharing that with me :). I wanted to see her character come back also which is why I ended up deciding to write it because I dont think she would forget about them that easy. Hope to see you soon and thanks again for the review!! Very appreciated! Tara x0x
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Date: 19/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Bigger Fish great line " a small explosion to a Winchester could mean a nuke." so far i am liking this story; curious to find out how much Kate is going to torture Dean. hope the next chapter is soon. Renee Author's Response: I so love that you picked out that line about the "Nuke" lmao thats awesome! Hope you like whats to come :) Tara x0x
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Date: 28/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Bleeding Out Tara, another great chapter. poor Dean; Kate is wicked. Sam is freaking our and now Bobby might be missing too...........where is Bobby???????????? hope the next chapter will be soon. Renee Author's Response: Hey :) I know im shocking with the updates at the moment but I promise its coming :) Kate definately isnt a happy camper whichs means nothing good for our boys hehe. Bobby will get there but the question is will he get there in time hehe Tara x0x
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Date: 16/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Dad's Not Here Tara, another great chapter. i am wondering if Carl is a Vamp as well?? Poor Dean talk about torture. although i wouldn't ming bitting him................yummy. Shame on me! Sam is going to get himself into trouble i am sure. chapter 11 please. Renee Author's Response: Hey :) Yeah Dean has definately been through the ringer in this and I am TOTALLY with you on the whole biting him thing ... very very yummy hehe I wont lie ... Sammy is going to get himself into trouble ;) and I'll br trying my hardest to find time to get the next chapter up asap. I'm excited about the next chapter :) Thanks for your review Tara x0x
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Date: 24/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Reckless Tara, yeah chapter 11 and it was a good one. Knew Sam was not going to wait for Bobby and knew he was going to get caught. Bobby to the rescue.................. Renee Author's Response: Thanks! I'm very happy that you enjoyed chapter 11. When Sam is worried about his brother he can get protective hehe Bobby will probably need to smack him in the back of the head when he finally gets them back hehe Tara x0x
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Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 12: When It Rains It Pours Tara, Well Bobby is in trouble! hope that Bobby will save them just went down the drain. i was kind of thinking Tabitha is a vamp and is just pretending. but so far you have her just being scared. curious to see how this plays out. Great chapter hope 13 will be soon Renee Author's Response: 13 will be up soon :) and Things might not be all what they seem ;) You're definately right with that feeling. You'll see in the coming chapters :) Glad you're enjoying this and thanks for reading and reviewing :) Tara x0x
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Date: 28/08/08 Title: Chapter 15: Epilogue Excellent story sorry for it to end. you did a great job. Renee Author's Response: Hey Thanks for sticking by and getting to the end with me. I'm stoked that you liked it and I hope I see you around again at some point :) Tara x0x Summary:
Originally written for Brotherhood 2 zine. Dean and Sam are pitted against a powerful evil as they fight a battle in a timeless town. Dean's inner demons threaten to defeat him as the brothers struggle to survive. banner by November's Guest Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 35704 [Report This] Published: 07/12/07 Updated: 10/12/07
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Date: 16/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 another great story. good one liners; so Dean. love the lines "He fought the urge to hide behind Dean" and "Don't anger the bear Sammy" to funny. keep up the great writing. Renee Author's Response: Hey Renee -- thanks so much for reading and taking time to review. :) I loved the image of Sam stepping behind Dean for protection. Partly because it would be instinctive as the little brother, but also because were he to do it, it would look so funny being a head taller than his protector. :) Hee. Thanks again and I'm so happy you enjoyed this story. :) Best, Gaelic Summary:
Dean and Sam get a desperate phone call from Ben Braeden in the middle of a hunt.Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 65236 [Report This] Published: 09/12/07 Updated: 13/12/07
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 Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Wow!!!! i love that you made Ben be Dean son; i was disappointed that he wasn't because of the show. I love how he is so much like Dean; you caught his mannerisms perfectly. one of my favorite lines is in chapter 6 when Bobby is sleeping in his bed. "punch the stranger & tell him to get the hell out of his bed" so what Dean would do or think. can't wait to read Choice Great story love the interaction with Dean, Sam, Bobby and Ben. Renee Author's Response: I was so disappointed in the show myself. Thank goodness for fanfiction and living the Winchesters lives the way that we want to. I'm still firmly in the camp that Lisa may have been lying (I know delusional). I'm so happy that you're reading this. Choices is very different be patient it works it's way through to having the same feeling as To The Rescue. Thanks for reading and for the reviews! I really appreciate it. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Wow excellent story.......... i thought Dean was going to kill John for a minute. Can't wait for chapter 27 they all have been great so far. Torture of Dean man you are harsh; remind me not to get you pissed. Renee
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Date: 10/05/08 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Bambi, Wow that was painful. poor Sam losing Dawn and Dean being so hateful. poor Bobby trying to be strong. the healing process is going to be long and hard for them all. great chapter. Renee
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Date: 10/06/08 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 bambi, this story is great every chapter leaves me wanting more. poor Dean and Sam........makes my heart break. Renee
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Date: 14/06/08 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 Bambi, great story; i have been reading this as you have been writing and i was going to comment on the end but this chapter was great. i wish Dean could have told John how he really felt before he sold his soul on the show. the last line was the best "Must've," Dean turned on his heel and stalked down the long hallway, calling back over his shoulder, "cause the only thing i ever learned from you was how to walk away, leavin' everyone behind." so powerful and true! John was alway gone trying to find the demon then take care of his sons. Dean was more of a dad to Sam than John. i am really enjoying this story and am curious to find out how it progresses. Renee
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Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 Bambi, i am still crying that was excellent. Poor Sam wants to trust Dean but can't; how painful for both. so true what Dean said to John. Great story Renee |
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