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Real name: Renee Bliss Status: Member Member Since: 20/01/08 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by rbliss1969
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Reviews by rbliss1969 Summary: Dean is haunted by the flashback from a hunt that took place while Sam was at Stanford. He can't remember the details but what he can't recall can hurt him.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504 [Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 11/02/07
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Date: 19/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Hunt Part 2: Perception of Reality Terry, great story loved the ending. Caleb's bullet in John's gun. Hurt Dean is always good, just want to jump in and comfort him. keep the great stories coming. Renee Summary:
Following John's coordinates, the boys prepare to battle a witch. When they discover a greater evil is at work, can Sam save Dean's life or will his brother's pain become his own? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 53269 [Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: The Journey's The Thing excellent, excellent. i cried when Dean died and i cried when Brenna brought him back............omg. i love the bond between Sam and Dean; they show it in the show but you really brought it. i am going to read Within My Hands next since you put Brenna in that one as well. Renee Author's Response: Hi! I'm so sorry I never replied to this!! I don't know how I missed it. Thank you so much for reading and for letting me know how the story made you feel. I'm thrilled that it made you want to read Within My Hands. Brenna is also in Into the Fire, if you still find her intriguing. Best to you always, Gaelic Summary:
The New Orlean's job comes back to haunt Dean as he and Sam return to stop a series of murders, and end up discovering an evil they may not be able to defeat...with Dean's life in the balance. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 59227 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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  Date: 12/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 too excellent!! love the bond between Sam and Dean. so far i am liking all of your stories; i have read 4 now and i laugh, cry and laugh again. Linger-excellent Holding On To Let Go - excellent Within My Hands - excellent & Wolf & Man - excellent. i am going to read Into The Fire next and i know it will be as great as the last 4. keep up the great story telling Renee Author's Response: Renee -- thank you so much! I'm so honored to see you've read four of my stories. Thank you for spending so much time with me and for offering me this feedback. I hope you continue to enjoy the stories you read and I look forward to hearing from you again. Best always, Gaelic Summary:
banner created by Kira Reed When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 15/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue Excellent!!!!!!!!!!! i liked the epilogue it added to the story. John needed to hear Abe tell him what he needed to know. i really like your stories; keep up the great work. Renee Author's Response: Hi Renee!! I am just getting to all of your reviews in the same night! How funny. :) I'm so glad you got a chance to read this one and that you enjoyed it. Abe returns in my WIP "In the Light", which I'm hoping will be complete by mid-April if all goes well. Thank you for spending time with me, and again, for reading and leaving a review. Best to you, Gaelic Summary: A shortcut through the woods leaves the boys lost, seperated and hunted.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Shadow Stalker Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 46418 [Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07
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Date: 22/04/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Maggie, wow what a great story i loved all 16 chapters. i love how you had John in it. Dean and Sam are so strong together and it was cool how you had John seeing how his boys are together. i am going to read the next story in your shadow stalker series i am sure it will be as good as this one. Renee Summary:
A job involving a water wraith leaves Dean questioning reality as well as his sanity.
Categories: Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 4128 [Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 12/08/07
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Date: 06/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three OMG Taiven, i am still crying what a story. it is amazing how 3 short chapters can rip your heart out. great story rbliss Summary:
Take one peeved off gypsy, one arrogant big brother and one chance remark, mix them together and what have you got? Well, if your name's Sam Winchester, you've got a whole pile of trouble. Sam becomes big brother to his big brother as he desperately tries to break a gypsy curse before he's driven completely insane. Be careful what you wish for... Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 15086 [Report This] Published: 01/02/07 Updated: 02/02/07
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Date: 18/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue too funny............ i can picture Dean as a 4 year old and Sam's getting frustrated at having to deal with Dean. Dean what a hand full........ Excellent. Renee Author's Response: Thank you - he is rather a handful, isn't he? In an impish sort of way. Thanks for reading Summary:
Sam plays a deadly game of cat and mouse with a hunter who is determined to succeed where Gordon Walker failed - to kill Sam. With Dean held hostage, who can Sam trust as he desperately tries to stay one step ahead of the hunters and rescue his brother.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 14612 [Report This] Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 11/02/07
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Date: 19/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue great story. i had a feeling that Sam called Bobby for help; can't kill off Sam. keep up the great writing. Renee Summary:
The brother's strengths are tested when they are confronted by both a supernatural threat... and a human one. Dean must face his fear of losing his brother in order to save not only Sam, but himself as well. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 94133 [Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 28/03/07
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Date: 14/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 EXCELLENT i should have know i would like this one as well; just like the others. I love how you have made Dean and Brenna fall and hard. i was glad to see that this story involved Brenna again. when i finished "Within My Hands" i wanted more of her and Dean. Favorite line "Thanks Clarence" too funny. you used the saying Ta Mochroi istigh lonat before; in a different story, i love what it means "My Heart is Within You".....how romantic. again thanks for the great story; keep up the great writing. i am reading Ramble on next. if you write other stories have you ever thought about getting them published?? you are truly talented. Renee Author's Response: I used Ta Mochroi istigh lonat in "Within My Hands" as well -- Brenna thought it about Dean. I love that saying. That and "not all who wander are lost" (a Tolkienism). I'm so happy that you liked this story and that you enjoyed the character of Brenna. I ended this story so that I could bring her back and have been tossing around the next plot involving her character after I finish "In the Light" (which is a sequel of sorts to "Ramble On"). She was born of a need to "see" more of Dean. More than the brother, the son, the fighter, the friend. I wanted to "see" how he would be were he vulnerable. I hope you enjoy "Ramble On" and as far as getting published... it is a hope of mine, but it's a crazy competitive world out there. I only discovered fanfic back in October of 2006 and until then didn't even think I could finish a story, let alone create a character people might enjoy. I am working on it, though, and who knows. Someday... Until then, the Winchesters keep me happy, and I truly hope to see more of you! :) Slainte, Gaelic Summary:
Sam has a deadly vision of his brother. Meanwhile, Dean is keeping secrets again. Banner by Sweetie0704 Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 72116 [Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 15/12/07
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Date: 28/08/08 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky What an awesome ending!!!! i had to wipe the tears away more than once.....................loved the last lines. "As he drifted off, he thought he heard his name whisper on the wind, accompanied by faraway feminine laughter and smirked at his own foolishness...but for the first time in a long time, he felt at peace. That night, when Hannah came to haunt his dreams, he clung to the memories of a girl who'd touched his soul with kindness and acceptance...and found he no longer needed nor wanted to forget." Dean finally finding peace in what happened and Sam helping him was great. again great story Renee Author's Response: Ah, shoot, Renee! How did I miss your review? I'm SO sorry. I had no idea this was even here. Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the ending because I worried over it a lot. I was afraid it was too mushy or just too long period. It makes me feel a ton better to hear it worked for more than one person. Thanks again for reading and leaving feedback and I apologize for just now getting a reply to you! Summary: When Dean is injured on a hunt and loses all of his personal memories, it is up to Sam to help him through it.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34792 [Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 13/04/08
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Date: 18/04/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Great story i enjoyed all 9 chapters. i like how you have Dean really getting upset at what he can remember and what he can't and being frustrated at what he can't. love the protective Sam. it is always Dean that protects. i am liking Elizabeth and how strong she is. i like how you have her bonding and being romantic with Sam. i also like how you have bonded her with Dean. you have Dean telling her things he can't tell Sam. Dean is getting sicker so hope chapter 10 will be up soon so we can find out what else you have in store for him. Renee Summary:
A spate of disappearances leads the boys to a small community, where they find the locals less than helpful. What is out in the woods that the townspeople are hiding? And will it take one of the Winchester boys as its next victim? Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 23898 [Report This] Published: 24/02/07 Updated: 14/03/07
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Date: 17/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue Excellent story. love how the Leipreachan liked Dean. I love the song; I heard Bing Crosby sing it in Going My Way and fell in love with it. i use to sing it to my Nephews. again great story Author's Response: Thank you. My grandfather's grandfather was Irish, and my Pop loves all the old Irish tunes. I've heard him sing Tooralooraloora quite often through my childhood. Thanks for reading - glad you liked it. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 22/03/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 well you did it again another great stroy. i cried when i thought Dean died that chapter with Dean and Misery was great. Dean and Mara were great what a villain she was great demon. keep up the great work Renee Summary:
Dean and Sam learn to accept help and at the same time save the lives of a special family. Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 36478 [Report This] Published: 27/03/07 Updated: 03/04/07
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Date: 22/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Kel, man what a great story. i loved this one. i will be reading Good Night Milton next. i love how you had Jessie attach herself to Dean or should i say Dee. Sara what an amazing character! again great job Renee Author's Response: Thanks, Renee, I'm so glad that you're enjoying Enrapture enough that it's made you wanna read the rest of the Sara stories. Thank You was one of the first stories I've ever written and honestly one of my favorites. Thanks for reading and taking the time to review - Kel Summary: There is a new player in town, a bounty hunter named Brie. She's dangerous, smart, and she knows what she's doing. But there is something off about her. Who is she? What is she hiding? And most important, can the boys trust her?
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 87427 [Report This] Published: 19/04/07 Updated: 13/04/09
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Date: 27/04/08 Title: Chapter 13: The Bleeding Truth Wow i have to be honest i was getting bored reading this story at first but i am glad i continued. chapters 6 through 13 were excellent! I am liking how you are having Brie and Dean reliving her memories. Dean trying to figure her out and unknowinly putting himself in danger. Brie has a daughter didn't see that coming. can't wait to read what is next; glad i stuck it out. Renee Author's Response: I'm glad you stuck it out too! Building up Brie's character only to break her down in the series of chapters in which she relives her memories was an interesting experience, especially now that we are really starting to get into what makes her tick. Stay tuned because there are a few more suprises. Even one including Papa Winchester...
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Date: 17/01/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Welcome back!! i was wondering what happened and it you were going to finish this story. so Brie's a Mom and John knew. hope the next chapter won't be so long in the making. Renee Author's Response: I am so sorry that it took me so long. I had to take a long hiatus, unfortunately, from my fanfic to work on some other projects and deal with some personal issues and have only recently been able to come back to it. Thank you so much for remaining faithful and interested!
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Date: 15/02/09 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 these chapters just keep getting better and better. Dean and Brie in the restroom............yummy. Renee
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Date: 04/03/09 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Losing Innocence WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! what an excellent chapter. i am speechless, the tears are just falling. Dean the constant hero; "wrapping her in a secure hug as she sobbed into his chest." can't wait for the next chapter. EXCELLENT!!!!!!! Renee Summary:
During a hunt concerning missing people who actually reappear, Dean ends up being kidnapped and awakens tied to what looks like a medical table, when Sam tracks him down will that be the end of it, or is the dark force in play determined to finish what it started?
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 72396 [Report This] Published: 21/04/07 Updated: 25/09/07
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Date: 30/03/08 Title: Chapter 46: Showdown - Part 2 Rae wow what a great story and some great lines. Loved Bobby being involved as much as Sam and Dean. some great one liners as well my favorite is "was it a flying pig." too funny. so true how stated "Dean has to protect Sam, but who will protect Dean." that is what i feel when i watch the show. i couldn't help but cry when i thought Dean had really died i should have know you wouldn't have killed him off............. again really great story didn't seem like 46 chapters once you started to read it. Renee Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! It really means a lot. I'm really glad you enjoyed the story and that you liked the lines :) I really loved writing it 'cause it was my first real supernatural fanfiction. As for killing Dean, I've only done that once in a one shot and I can't do it again, lol - way too hard. So I'm really really glad you enjoyed it. Thank you again! Summary:
Who do you call when a simple salt and burn gets out of hand. The brothers get help from an unexpected source when they find they are dealing with multiple spirits in a haunted factory.
Tied with Supernaturaldh's Leaning On A Shovel, Hoping For A Hole Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 62717 [Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 08/06/07
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Date: 18/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue great story. the tracking device; too funny. liked Macy and the bond she had with the boys. so far i have read 2 of your stories and i liked them both. keep up the great work. Renee Author's Response: Why thank you. Glad you liked this one too. I must confess, I have rather a soft spot for this one - I had so much fun writing it, especially bringing the GPS tracker threat full circle. Thanks for reading. Summary:
Sam and Dean run into a wave of bad luck and receive help from a friend. This story re-introduces the Character Sara Powers from Thank You and Goodnight Milton.
Categories: Romance, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sara's Stories Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 25877 [Report This] Published: 08/06/07 Updated: 22/06/07
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Date: 23/04/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Kel, great story; Sara to the rescue. i love how you have Dean melting around Jessie too funny; Dee is pretty........LOL Awake in the Dark is next i am sure i will like this one as well. Renee Author's Response: Oh, don't we all melt around Dee...lol. Glad you enjoyed - Kel Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 06/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Too funny!!!!!!!!!! i loved it. Turned Dean into a monkey...too funny. loved the humor you brought into the story. Wizard of Oz is one of my favorite movies i love how you incorporated it with Supernatural. good job.
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 21/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 too funny; i am still laughing. great line "The freaking duck is attacking me." and "Dude, its a duck, let it go." i was picturing the 2 of them in my head the whole time; facial expressions and everything. i agree Dean needs more shower scenes.....a lot more. Renee Summary:
 It was just a little scar on Dean's shoulder. But it was about to turn Sam's whole world upside down.Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 15565 [Report This] Published: 16/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07
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Date: 18/05/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Empath Excellent!!!!!!!!!! what a great story of why Dean is so protective of Sam. i love how you added why Dean started to sleep with the knife. Uncle Davis needed his ass kicked more than once if you ask me..........to bad Bobby never found him. love how you added Paster Jim and the need for Bobby to tell someone. loved the connection between Dean, Sam and Bobby. Always believed Bobby was more than a friend. like Bobby said in the season finale for Season 3 "family just doesn't mean blood boy." so true. again great story Renee Author's Response: Thanks for leaving such a detailed review Renee. I appreciate it! Summary: An AU, The story takes place before Pilot, what if tables are turned, Sam and John reunite to find a missing Dean, going on a journey full of danger, murder and unsolved cases. That's not the difficult part, they'll have to be together without Dean and fight their own demons before fighting the supernatural.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29245 [Report This] Published: 23/07/07 Updated: 11/06/08
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Date: 02/06/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Jaylan, when is the next chapter going to be????? Renee Author's Response: Hey Renee Thanks for the sweet comment, i'll try updating the one or two chapters that're left next month asap, don't you worry they'll be both thick & full of interesting events, hope you'll like them sweetie Oh, wicked! I LUV being wicked ;) |
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