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Penname: Pandemonium [Contact]
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Real name: Kaide Status: Member Member Since: 13/01/08 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by Pandemonium Summary:
What started out as a slanging match, grew into something more for all of them. Dean is sure he hates her, but not so sure he doesn't love her too. Pre season 1
Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Bruised. Not Broken Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15695 [Report This] Published: 18/10/07 Updated: 11/11/07
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  Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Background Okay...okay, I am liking Camyll right now. Very young but also seems very tough. She can look after herself thats for sure. Loving younger Sam, very cute. He reminds me of my girls;) Kaide Author's Response:
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Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Remembering when... I am really and truly warming to Camyll Rayne. She is just soo real to me, she's like my reflection , tough exterior but soft middle. I love characters that I can connect with and Camyll is so great. I adore Camyll and Dean's love hate relationship, very realistic situations. Love how cheeky she is, kicks him where it hurts and then asks to share his bed cause she's scared. Adorable!!! Kaide xxx Author's Response:
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Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- In The Smokey Mountains older and more fiery, I love Camyll even more, I like how now they're older Dean is attracted to her. Shes a sexy tomboy and she's certaintly got Deans attention. hehehe Love the cheeky little scene with them making out in secret. She is very stubborn, wanting to go hunting against her dads wishes. I kinda get the feeling, John and Bobby are more maternal towards her than Isaac, not much contact going on between them. So admirable how Dean rushes out to protect Camyll when he realizes she's gone alone. Some nice action in this chapter too, I was worried for Camyll for a minute when her head hit a rock. I was still rooting for Dean though. Then a nice surprise, Camyll's first hunt and she rocks it and puts a end to Goblin. Kick ass scene!!! Very very well written. I'm looking foward to more Dean&Camyll moments, can't get enough of those right now. AWESOME CHAPTER... Kaide xxx Author's Response: Soo thrilled you like Camyll more with each chapter!!! Yup, she certaintly has got Dean's attention now. hehehe She is very stubborn, you got that right and Bobby in particular is more paternal towards Camyll than Isaac. Since Camyll's mother left, daddy dearest has struggled to handle her. Just like Dean though isnt it? Rushing out to get her back. Thanks for finding action in this chapter, Camyll's a tough cookie, she can take a blow to the head. Lol Glad Camyll ending Goblin was a nice surprise;) as long as you think its well written everything else you say is a bonus!!! Can't get enough of Camyll&Dean moments?? I'm glad! Schelz
Reviewer: Pandemonium Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne. I think the reason why Dean loves Camyll but finds it harder to express it than she does...she's a little more comfortable being who is she, a tom boy who is a little bit wilder than Dean...i.e She wants him and makes it clear, she hates him and she makes that clear, she loves him and it just comes out, she's a real bullet!! I love her...lol If their fathers found out they were sneaking around, Dean didn't know what he would do but Camyll already knew she would defy her dad to be with him. She's honest with him and herself but Dean isn't always honest with her or himself...I just LOVE this story and wish I could watch it happen on SPN. I can't wait to read the next chapter, Dean's leaving town, leaving our Camyll behind. *Sobs* Kaide xxxx Author's Response: You really pay attention to Camyll don't you? Yes, she is fine with being a boyish girl, and your right she will make it clear how she feels even if you don't like it. Thanks for calling her a bullet!!! Camyll actually has defiance in her blood. Hehehehe Soo Soo glad you LOVE this story and now I'm worried about the last chapter:( Schelz
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Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself You have just broken my heart!!! :(
Author's Response: So sorry Kai:( forgive me? Summary:
Awesome banner by my awesome m8 Lou. Thanks hun;) In a Bar, Dean spots a busty blond and decides to throw Sam in the fire, thinking he's doing his little brother a favor. But things don't go as planned.
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2189 [Report This] Published: 07/12/07 Updated: 07/12/07
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Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Zodiac sorry its me again fantasy, I just peeped your notes saying it was your first stab at humour: You definately nailed it, I think it takes a great amount of talent to be able to write humor and trust me I am speaking from experience (funny in real life but cant translate in my writing) humor has got to be one of the hardest genres to achieve and you did it effortlessly. When I catch my breath and my stomach ache from laughing to hard subsides, I might risk a heart attack and come read it again.
GOD BLESS
Kaide xxx Author's Response: Two reviews??! Ta hun;) No need for sorry, feel free to keep coming back;) thanks again. Whoa!! I agree that comedy is hard to write so it means loads that you think I did it effortlessly. hahahahahahahahaha nice to know its good enough to risk a heart attack. Schelz
Reviewer: Pandemonium Signed
Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Zodiac This is a DYNAMITE piece of work and I'm kinda glad it was only one chapter long because I damn nearly pee'd me pants with this one. You totally got the boys down pat. Totally Dean - 'ready to get that chasitity belt of yours off?' Sooo Dean. Dean nudged Sam playfully. "Sam, take a walk on the wild side eh? Live dangerously for once." "Gee, there I was thinking I already lived a dangerously life. How silly of me." Sam said sarcastically. Loved this part !!!! What really had my eyes watering, was when Dean decided to play hero and save Sam from chick Jaime!!! "Wow what big hands you have?" OMG! Could you be more funny???? YES.. The best part in this whole brilliant and extrodinary piece.. Sam taking the piss out of Dean non-stop the way you did it is something I would want to see in the show. The last part, the final straw that broke me and made me feel like I had done a hundred sit ups. --"From now on I'm doing Adam checks." I applaud you loudly for this and now I definately have to read all your other stories. GOD BLESS Kaide xxx Author's Response: WOW!!!!! So sorry for the late response. Where do I start? Thank you for calling my work Dynamite. You nearly peeing your pants is a compliment to me;) thanks for saying I got the boys down and for pointing out all the parts that worked for you. I can hear the applaus *takes a humble bow* thanks soo much for the stars on top of your ace review! Schelz Summary:
Collection of Wee!chester drabbles in Dean's POV.
http://sensue.net/snfa/ Categories: Drabbles, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 3435 [Report This] Published: 12/12/07 Updated: 31/12/07
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Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hell to pay more than an attempt at humour here Merrie, this is friggn brilliant stuff and so Dean. Kaide xx Author's Response: Aww thanks Kaide, glad you liked it. Thanks for takin' the time to review - it's much appreciated. :) Merrie x Summary:
A short one shot, centering around Dean having to give up the woman he loves in order to keep her safe from the evils of his job.
Categories: General, One Shots, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 721 [Report This] Published: 12/01/08 Updated: 13/01/08
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Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hi Impala I am Kaide and brand new to the site but your story instantly called me and I just had to read it. This is my very first review and I have to say, this was very beautiful because I felt like I was reading a poem. Every word dripped with emotion and melted my heart for I love Dean so much. Thanks for sharing your talents. xxxx Kaide Author's Response: Hey Kaide, well I've already welcomed you but once again WELCOME! *blushes* first review wow thanks for that, I'm so glad you enjoyed, I must say this was one of the first stories that I truly enjoyed writing all the way through! I hope you have a fantastic time on this site, and thank you dearly for the stars :) -Bex Summary:
 Wee!chester drabble in Dean's POVCategories: Drabbles, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 728 [Report This] Published: 27/01/08 Updated: 27/01/08
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Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Schelz is a lucky girl!! This story rocks!!! Loved it from start to finish. Kaide xxx Author's Response: Aww thanks Kaide, glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review and the stars! :) Merrie xx Summary: Yet another wee!chester "drabbly" one shot in Dean's POV
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 915 [Report This] Published: 02/02/08 Updated: 02/02/08
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Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Okay...Merrie, I am officially liking your way..I'm guessing your a Dean chick?? You nail POV and Dean to boot. I find him to be such a easy/hard character to read...what I mean is, many of us can tell what he's thinking and going through when we watch it but writing it and portraying it correctly is a totally different ball game. From what I've read from you so far you are nailing it. Well done, did I mention it had me fits of laughter!!!! God bless Kaide xxx Author's Response: Wow, crums, what to say... lol. I think Dean is a very interesting character to write about or from his POV, he seems to have so many layers I doubt anyone really knows what he's thinking. Course as you can tell I'm all for the sarcasm, lol. I'm glad you liked it and thank you so much for your kind words, the review and the stars. Merrie xxx Summary:
Missouri enlists the boys help for an unusal job. This story is for my newphews - Jahlil and Jaylarni, being in their terrible two's I was greatly inspired by my diamond boys: love you!
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5688 [Report This] Published: 02/02/08 Updated: 03/02/08
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Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Josh Vs Dean This has got to be the SWEETEST thing I have ever read honey. Josh Vs Dean....so good!!! Josh reminds me of my girls when they were toddlers. lol I love how the humour is meshed so well with the serious moments, sweet moments. You spread it all out evenly. I have to say Schelz, I am growing to admire you, your choice of topics to write about and the way you write it...speaking to you via e-mail, I find you truly unique and genuinely a star person. I can tell by the way everyone talks about you that its a natural quality you possess.
So sorry...back to the story. I just loved Dean advising Josh about women like Sam knew he would and then talking about his own mother. Very heart warming scene, something I would gladly watch on SN. Josh is adorable, Dean would make a great daddy and you totally nailed Missouri, shes made of such fire but loves the boys and you really showed us the Missouri we know and love. God bless Kaide xxx Author's Response:
Summary:
The Whinchester brothers are called to Blue Earth, Minnesota by an old family friend. Pastor Jim Murphy believes a bereaved man has created a killer zombie after the man confesses to him of his actions. The brothers take the hunt to save the little town and make a new friend. What lessons will they learn and how many lives will they change? Was Pastor Murphy right about the creature being a zombie? Takes place during season one. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13235 [Report This] Published: 21/02/08 Updated: 24/02/08
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Very interesting Mickey!! Keep writing hun;) Kaide xxx Author's Response: Thank you soo much for reading it! Iwas so nervous posting it I was shaking. Nobody ever took an interest in my writings and I stopped doing it along time ago. Boredom is why I thought I would give it a try now. Thankyou for your kind words and most importantly for taking you time to read it.
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Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Good! Glad to see you still writing this;) God bless x x Author's Response: You are to kind. The story is a mess but it does have some good parts. Thank you for your support. Kind words go along way to boosting the confidence and who couldn't use that? Summary: John goes to do his 'hunting' job on Easter, leaving his sons to make the best out of the holiday.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 953 [Report This] Published: 24/03/08 Updated: 24/03/08
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Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: It's the Easter Bunny Dean! A very sweet read Pooka Bunny! All in the spirit of Easter, makes me want to eat chocolate all over again...then again, do we ever need a good excuse to fill our faces with chocolate? Lol
God bless x x Author's Response: Wow thanx! Ya I know I still love al that candy after Easter and hide the good stuff from roaming mouths. lol Thanx again, Ashy xx/ Pooka B. Summary:
This is just something i've been working on for like 3 days it was in my head and i wanted it out so here it is
Categories: General, Wee!chester, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1693 [Report This] Published: 26/03/08 Updated: 26/03/08
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Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Thoughts inside a head Way to go on the thoughts of our boys!!! A good read;) God bless x x Summary:
What's been going on inside Dean's head since the deal! Awesome awesome banner by the sweet Rae666
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1510 [Report This] Published: 27/05/08 Updated: 27/05/08
Reviewer: Pandemonium Signed
Date: 21/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Not a day in my mind DRU-HEAVEN You have my heart beating out of my chest with this story! So dark, grippin' heart wrenchingly real!!! All the things that go thru Dean's head but wouldn't dare leave his lips. To have to ability to be so dark and go to a place that allows this to flow out of you is real Talent, because speaking to you, so light hearted, crazy but sweet and just genuinely happy, I am shocked in a nice way. This totally didn't suck, because it came from Dean. This short piece was majorly inspiring to me, there were just sooo many parts of it that made me stop for a minute before being able to continue. *I'm drunk, intoxicated by hate* *My heart beats against its will and warns me of its plans to give up* *I'm suffocating on life and exhaling death* *Why didn't anyone understand what Sam was to me? More than a brother, the blood in my veins, the proud smile on my face* WOW And finally *Gotta keep my game face on, can't scare Sammy, he's MY baby brother. I gotta protect him, even if it's from myself* Girl you are on fire, and I love how different this is, I love that it came from you and don't worry cause as long as you write, you're a writer! Do not be intimidated by other authors, your not in a race with anyone but yourself, kay? Mwahs God bless x
Author's Response: Kaide, thank you so much gurl! I was really worried to even show this to anyone but Schelz has helped me a lot! ;) I am glad you liked it enough to pick out your favorite parts! God Bless DRU BABY x |
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