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The Preacher by impalapal Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

A hunt in the woods goes wrong leaving Dean fighting for his life and Sam facing losing his brother forever.

Lots of hurt Dean, some hurt Sam and worried Sam and Bobby.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 46430
[Report This] Published: 02/04/10 Updated: 01/05/10


Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 02/05/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm really sorry to see this awesome fic coming to an end, I really enjoyed reading it! Great ending, lots of love for Bobby in this chapter!

Author's Response:

In a way i'm also sorry to see this story end as i really enjoyed writing it although the ending gave me a few problems so i'm glad you thought it was okay and yes, i love Bobby, i love the relationship between Sam and Dean and Bobby.

Thank you for your support during this story, it really does help knowing that people like what i'm writing.

I'm off now to see if i can think of any other ways in which i can make the Winchesters suffer.

 
Bleeding Me by Nachuma Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

Pre-series.  Sam’s gone to Stanford and Dean is trying to cope.

 

Rated T for bad language.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3525
[Report This] Published: 26/04/10 Updated: 26/04/10


Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 27/04/10 Title: Chapter 3: Part 2

Pfew, that was hard to read, so much sadness! But great story again, you've really got the SPN characters down to a T!

Author's Response:

Dean has had a lot to deal with in his life, but I think the important thing is how he always manages not only to survive but adapt and find joy...(eventually, and sometimes in strange places <g>). 

 Thanks so much for your comments!

 
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When legends of the Headless Horseman spring up on a dude ranch Sam and Dean check in to try and stop him before he can kill anyone else. But will they be able to stop him or will they be the next of the horseman's victims?

Story Banner by Saiyuki

SN Award Banner by Noelle


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 54815
[Report This] Published: 03/05/10 Updated: 13/09/10


Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 11/05/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Mmmm, things are starting to heat up, right? It looks like Sam is on to something with the DVD. Can't wait to find out what's gonna happen next!

Author's Response: Things are definitely starting to heat up, as you will see in chapter 3. Unfortunately my code wouldn't come through when I posted it so you won't be able to see my code I had to make something up at the last minute so it is different then what I wanted it to be - but I hope you enjoy it anyway. I hope you continue to enjoy it and as always thanks for the review.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 19/05/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Amazing chapter, loved the BBQ scene! It made me hungry!
LOL that you've written your own dogs in a story!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed the BBQ scene - I had a lot of fun with it and yeah two of my little squirts wormed their way into it. I just couldn't find what I needed to write that week and Jack and Priestly were being silly like they always are and that gave me what I needed to get back to work. They make me laugh. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 08/06/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hi, thanks a lot for updating, even though you have lots of other things on your mind. I hope Jack's surgery went well.

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the last chapter. I honestly wasn't sure if I'd get this next one done in time my week has been so busy so I put fire on the fuel and really got down to work on it today so I could get it posted. I hope that you enjoy the next chapter as well.

And Jack's surgery did go well, thank you. He's doing better now and his stitches come out next week. Thank you for the review.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 15/06/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hi, thanks a lot for the update, I'm amazed how you can find the time to post so faithfully with all that's been going on in RL. It's much appreciated! I'm looking forward to the action in the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed chapter five, I had a lot of fun with it. I hope that you enjoy what I have done with chapter 6 so far, chapter 7 will be an extended chapter since 6 is short. But I hope you enjoy it anyway. Thanks as always for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 23/06/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hi sweetie, you really are too good. There's absolutely no need to apologize for not being able to update any time soon. Good luck with all that's ahead of you!

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 26/06/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Hi, I'm so glad that things have seemed to work out fine for you and your husband! I wish you both best of luck! Thanks a lot for this update and I hope to catch the next chapter sometime in August.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed the last chapter, I was so excited about trying out some of these new limits I'm pushing. I hope you enjoy this next chapter as well. Thanks as always for the review.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 11/08/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Dear Candace, I'm sorry to hear about your problems, Murphy's law indeed. Nothing is more important than getting your life back on the rail, so I'm glad to hear that your husband found a proper job, good for him! Take your time and I look forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for understanding I really appreciate it. Things were still a little rocky then but they've evened out more now. So I hope this next chapter was worth the wait.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 14/09/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Awesome last chapter, though the demise of Callie and Jesse was really gruesome! I've got so much love for Ranger, what a trooper!
Thank you for sharing this story with your readers and the regular updates despite your troubles in RL. It's really greatly appreciated!

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you enjoyed the last chapter, even if Callie and Jesse's demise was gruesome, but I did warn you. They chose their death as soon as they decided to control the horseman - and I actually did have a lot of inspiration from Sleepy Hollow - it's an awesome movie, I'm sure if you saw it you'd see a lot of similar things but I tried to make it a little different too so I wasn't copying the movie exactly.

Ranger is a very awesome horse, loyal to a fault - he reminds me of the one I used to ride and lease from time to time, she wasn't exactly like Ranger, she didn't even look like him but she was my inspiration. So I'm glad you enjoyed him.

Thanks for sticking with me on this story, I'm glad that you enjoyed it despite my delays with updates you still stuck with me and I've really appreciated your support. So thank you and I hope to see you again with the next one...but that will probably be a little while. :) Thanks again for taking the time to review.

 
The End of Days by Nachuma Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Speculative fiction on the end of season 5...
Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4114
[Report This] Published: 07/05/10 Updated: 07/05/10


Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 08/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I so wish that season 5 of SPN will end on a more or less happy note, but I don't think that's gonna happen. So reading stories that do have a happy ending are a joy to read, thank you!

Author's Response:

I'm sticking to Kripke's promise (well, implied promise) from Carry On My Wayward Son:  "There'll be peace when you are done."  Not necessarily a happy ending, but at least peace. 

Thank you so much for your review!

 
Fade to Black by Nachuma Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Pre-series.  One of Dean's solo hunts goes bad...
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 26259
[Report This] Published: 22/05/10 Updated: 08/06/10


Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 22/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1: Nightmare

Wow, what an amazing chapter! I'm really glad there's more to come!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it!  I should be updating soon.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 25/05/10 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2: Awakening

Great, just great! I love the mystery, what is going on?

Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing this one...so I can't give anything away till the proper time <g> I'm glad you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 08/06/10 Title: Chapter 5: Mobilization pt 2

Hi, thanks for the updates! My, this story is getting intense! I really hope the doctor is safe, I really like her.

Author's Response:

The doctor's one of my favorite characters, too.  I hope she doesn't die! <g>

 Final chapter should be up shortly, and hopefully all will become clear. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 09/06/10 Title: Chapter 6: Part 5: Resolution

I'm sorry to see this story coming to an end, I wouldn't have mind some more chapters! Great ending though, I loved that John showed up!

Author's Response:

I think John really loved the boys, but was just so single-minded that he sometimes forgot that they needed a father.  Besides, I'm a sucker for happy (sort of) endings.

Thanks for writing, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

 
Addictions by MarquessaS Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 251]
Summary:

 Sometimes it was best to lay low.  But boredom is a hungry affliction,  and Dean Winchester had to feed his need for distraction.  He had no choice.

No spoilers.  Set in an earlier, simpler timeframe.


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes Word count: 118383
[Report This] Published: 12/07/10 Updated: 08/08/11


Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 15/10/10 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I'm really addicted to this story, LOL!
Every chapter that you post leaves me yearning for more. I'm so glad that you're such a regular poster, it's really much appreciated!
Dean really is a trooper in this chapter, but he'll need Sam's and David's help to get out of this mess. Let's just hope they'll figure out where Dean is in time!

Author's Response: Thanks!  If I don't post regularly,  then the damned story swirls around in my brain and interferes with what I should be thinking about,  lol

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 13/07/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, you're back! Awesome!
I'm loving this story already!

Author's Response: Hey,  Thanks!  Love hearing that.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 19/07/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Holy crap! You're not turning Dean into a vampire, are you? Sam needs to find Dean like right now!
Thanks a lot for the regular updates!

Author's Response: No fangs for Dean,  never worry.  Although he could wear them nicely.....

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 24/07/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Hi, thanks for the update! Awesome chapter this. Great insight into what drives Iris to do this, I really feel sorry for her. I hope she'll start to feel even more guiltier and that Sam and her can take on the vampires and rescue Dean!

Author's Response: Thanks Z.  Iris has some soul-searching ahead....

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 06/08/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hi, thanks a lot for the recent updates! This story just gets better and better! It looks like Sam will be right on time to rescue Dean, can't wait to find out what will happen next!

Author's Response: Thanks for saying so Z.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 09/08/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thanks a lot for the quick update! Man, this was such an unbelievably tense chapter, I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat while reading it! It doesn't get much better than this! I'm thrilled to see the return of David.

Author's Response: Thanks,  Z.  You're a sweetheart.

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 14/08/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Pfew, I'm glad that it seems Sam was just in time with the blood transfusion. I'm glad that there's professional help now, though!

Author's Response: You and me both!

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 11/09/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What a great start to my weekend, an update of this amazing story!
I didn't expect all the action, you really got me by surprise with Paul returning. That must be so hard on Dean, to send Sam and David on a mission while he's recovering.
Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Aw,  thanks!  And I went and made you wait again....

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 01/10/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I didn't expect an update so soon, so I was pleasantly surprised! I was already a fan of David, but in this story he's just amazing! What a great character!

Author's Response: Glad to oblige,  lol.  I like david too,  almost as much as Bobby....

 
Reviewer: zuimar Signed
Date: 10/10/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

What a talented writer you are!
This story just keeps getting better and better! It's so like Dean to go and investigate. I sure hope Sam and David are on their way back to the motel already, because it sure looks like Dean is going to need help.

Author's Response: You're a saint to say so.  This story is resisting me at every turn.