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Penname: Taliena [Contact]
Real name: Natalie Brown
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Member Since: 21/12/07
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Hi there!  I am a 34yo female from Melbourne, Australia.  I am a huge Supernatural fan - one could say obsessed, but I figure I am in good company!  I happened across this site a few months ago and have been "lurking" ever since.  While I won't be submitting stories myself, I wanted to be able to offer reviews on some of the awesome stories I have read.  Keep them coming!!     
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Broken Images by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

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Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?

People's Choice Winner

Awards 2008 Best Future fic

2008 UnGen Awards Best Sam


Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830
[Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great story! I'm loving the twists - keeping me on the edge of my seat.  As a fellow Aussie, I am also enjoying the translations, my favourite so far being the elevator/lift paragraph. Looking forward to your next chapter!!



Author's Response: Thanks for that - it's nice to write in my own language, as it were, for a change. To say lift instead of elevator, biscuit instead of cookie, and a hundred other things that translate a little differently across the oceans. Speaking of oceans - I just have to indulge in a tiny shout of Queenslander! as Wild Oats XI just won the Sydney to Hobart (not gloating, honest). Hope you like the next chappy - and thanks for reading...Jules

 
Summary:

Dean sat on his own bed and stared at the wall for hours, then put his face in his hands and sat like that for the rest of the night. Sam thought he heard him crying for a long time.

Sam hated that he couldn't get over his fear. He hated that he had nightmares. He hated that he was scaring Dean.

Sam hated himself for his weakness.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
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Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 14340
[Report This] Published: 03/01/08 Updated: 06/10/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great Job!  I like how you've written Sam's panic reactions to the water, and the 'unspoken' communication between the boys.  Keep the chapters coming!!

 
Summary:

 

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Sam is plagued by multiple visions of Dean burning alive, leading the brothers into a dangerous hunt that could have dire repercussions for the young psychic.

Set just before the Season 2 episode Roadkill

Awards 2008 Best Horror/Demon


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 53967
[Report This] Published: 18/01/08 Updated: 24/02/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooooh!  Great start!  Very intriguing... I look forward to your next installment!

Author's Response: Thank you for that. Hope you like the next one - the visions get a wee bit more intense....Jules

 
Summary:

Whilst visiting Pastor Jim in Boxborough Massachusetts, Dean is hit by an uncomfortable sense of Deja-vu, whilst Sam has the uncomfortable feeling that the Pastor may be hiding something. What is it about this picturesque New England town, that could be so terrible that Dean has blocked it out and Jim is happy to keep it that way?  

Many Thanks to the Brilliant BulletBabe and her awesome Banner making skills -  I LOVE it Louey! 

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Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 40565
[Report This] Published: 04/04/08 Updated: 16/04/09


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 06/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start!  I am intrigued as to where this journey will take us... Looking forward to your next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review and the thumbs up on the first chapter, I am glad you are enjoying it so far!:-) Although I have the outline for this story, it is still "freely-forming" - still I hope not to keep you waiting too long between postings. Glad to have you along for the ride and would love to hear your opinions on the route I'm taking. (Don't worry I am done with that metaphor now!!! LOL)

Abi.

 
Summary:

Sam Winchester discovers the most important strength is wielded from the heart.

**This is a tag-on to Season One's season finale. Say that three times fast. There are spoilers for Season One only.


Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3326
[Report This] Published: 14/04/08 Updated: 14/04/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 14/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic!  I loved your take on the aftermath of this episode.  I think you have captured Dean's strength beautifully - ten men and then some!

 
Summary:

Sometimes, a little brother just knows best...

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Categories: Humor Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4385
[Report This] Published: 17/04/08 Updated: 17/04/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 17/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 'Beelzebug' and the Bible

Great story - very funny!



Author's Response: Hey Natalie, thanks for that and I'm glad you enjoyed...XX Louy

 
Summary:

A seeming random meeting in a bar spells trouble for Dean and Sam. Set sometime after BUABS so anything before that is fair game.

As usual I own nothing. The wonderful Winchesters and Supernatural belongs to Mr 'Evil Cliff Hanger' Kripke and the CW.

Put as an M for now as I fully intend this to get bloody at some point!

Please note that however this may look at some points this is not a deathfic.

Thanks for reading and as usual reviews are blood, need them to write.


Categories: General, Misc Characters: None
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Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 10458
[Report This] Published: 18/06/08 Updated: 25/06/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 26/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue

Great story, Mary.  Loved the tie in's with previous episodes, particularly Bloody Mary.  Thanks for posting!

Author's Response:

Thanks

I really wanted to do the tie-ins especially the Bloody Mary one (something to do with the name perhaps?)but was afraid they wouldn't work properly, so I am grateful for your review.

Thanks again

The other Mary x

 
Summary:

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Concussion can be fun....

Awards 2008 Best Humour

2008 UnGen Awards Best Humour


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4755
[Report This] Published: 20/06/08 Updated: 20/06/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fantastic story, Mizpah!  I was killing myself laughing - tears and all - especially during the first half.  Loved it all.  You capture the boys and their relationship so well.  Awesome! 

Author's Response:

Thank you - and please feel free to call me Jules.

Well, that pleases me that I could make you laugh out loud. Means I did my job properly. And of course, the boys do give me such good stuff to work with...Jules

 
Happy Birthday by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

Tension mounts between the brothers - is it just Dean's deal or is something more sinister at work...

Happy Birthday

SN.tv 2009 Best Ghost


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 54038
[Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great first chappie, Jules!  You capture Sam's mind in "overdrive" very well - loved Sam's reflection on:

"Greater love has no one than this, that he lay down his life for his friends," Sam quoted softly. "Substitute ‘friend' for ‘brother'."

I look forward to where you take us next!



Author's Response: Thank you for that - glad to have you along. I'm a Dean girl, and I make no secret of that fact, but I do love Sam, and I think (hope) I understand how he ticks. He's just as complicated as his big brother, and he's fiercely passionate, which makes him quite emotional - but not in a weak or soppy way. It's quite a challenge to get inside his head sometimes.....Jules

 
True North by Ridley James Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

A Father's Day Story: Sam and Dean find something much more important than the perfect gift when they search for a present for John on Father's Day.

 


Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 8690
[Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 27/06/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great story!  I have seen reference to the cmpass in many of your other stories and always liked the meaning behind it.  Thanks for the great read!

 
Summary: With Dean's life hanging in the balance, Sam and Caleb must find a way to build a bridge between past and present, finding forgiveness and a common ground that will allow them to accomplish the only thing they seem to agree on...saving Dean.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 95685
[Report This] Published: 28/06/08 Updated: 13/09/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 15/09/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I loved this story! Well done!

 
Summary: Parting is all we know of Heaven, and all we need to know of Hell. -Emily Dickenson
Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 34195
[Report This] Published: 12/11/08 Updated: 10/12/08


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 11/12/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh the tears!!  Great job with this story - I love it.  I can't wait to see how you bring him back!  Thanks for sharing!

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

Here At The End Of All Things

Who will be left standing at the end of it all...

Set at the end of the final season and beyond - AU

Spoilers for Season 4 up to 4:14, and speculation for the finale.

UnGenAUaward

SN.tv 2009 Best Future Fic


Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 189848
[Report This] Published: 13/03/09 Updated: 29/08/09


Reviewer: Taliena Signed
Date: 10/07/09 Title: Here At The End Of All Things

Oh dear!  I hope you are feeling better soon, Jules!  Thanks to Chris and Petra for letting us know.  I had been hanging out for the next chapter and thought it was odd when it hadn't appeared & hoped all was ok.

Take care of yourself, Jules.  I am thinking "get well" thoughts for you! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm taking better care of myself now - I even scared my boss, so he's backed off a bit with my workload and the pressure. I'm on the mend now, thank you.

Jules