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Penname: Dewyeyed [Contact]
Real name: Dru
Status: Member
Member Since: 14/12/07
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About Dru…

I'm a lazy reviewer so I favourite them to remind myself to do it.

A twenty something, male….or female? You decide! Think it’ll be a lot more fun leaving you  people guessing *wink*

Hobbies: Kickboxing is right at the top of the list, being doing since I was 8. I could literally kick ass if I wanted to and always imagined myself being in a big Bruce Lee film… Yeah right!

Favorite food: Pizza, pizza and pizza. I’d  probably be on the pudgy side if it wasn’t for the hobbies above…food will be the death of me if the show doesn’t beat it to it.

What makes Dru tick : Humor, honesty, just being genuine and self- belief. Stimulating conversations, as well as conversations  full of BS

What pisses Dru off : Arrogance!!! Selfishness, boredom, my dad. Unnecessary rudeness and stalkers…lol

Supernatural rocks big time, Jared and Jensen rock and so does the music for the show. Long live supernatural!!!! Eric Kripke is a genius. I don’t write but I love the comedic side of supernatural so I love to read the funny ones, I also love thrillers so I read that too. Romance? I have to be dragged kicking and screaming to watch those cheesy flicks. Though I have to say, I have read a romance or two and enjoyed them, it’s nice to see Dean and Sam connect with a female character! I love a good mystery, I want to be investigating alongside our boys. I’m originally from LA but was sent to London to live with my workaholic father…got it into their heads that I’m a ‘Problem child’ I don’t know where they got that idea, I mean I only set the house on fire one time…and that was a total accident! LOL

I have read some stories that have had me in stitches laughing and others that have had me on the edge of my seat pulling my hair out. I’ve met some amazing people on the site, Fantasy aka Schelz is just so cool and I’m privileged to call her a close friend. Birdie aka Sexy-wild is a crazy woman who I adore! Lovely woman, I’m glad I know her. Then there is Mama aka Crys (clclemons) she’s an awesome lady, luvs ya! Staffy aka Merrie, she’s so funny, in her stories and in the box! Great girl!

If you haven’t already caught these awesome ladies yet, most of the time their in the box and are always welcoming. That’s how I met them…I hope to meet more of you soon x

ROCK ON WRITERS!!!

 

UPDATE OCT: I'm so sorry to all those who have read and reviewed my story, I have just moved abroad and now I'm getting an apartment with my brother, not to mention looking for a job. I promise you the story will be completed. I've done the 2nd chapter, and I'm planning the 3rd, but time is stingy.

Update: Okay so I really suck and don't know how to make it up to everyone who read the story that me and Schel wrote. I'm too busy to get it done and she's in the middle of a series so for right now, I'll just leave it as completed. Sorry xxx 

Dru Baby

 


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Summary: A one shot from the episode "Heart"
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1229
[Report This] Published: 29/03/07 Updated: 29/03/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Keeping the Strength

That was mind blowing Ace, I loved that scene but now you've added this awesome piece I love it even more.

ROCK ON!!!

Dru



Author's Response:

Wow, mind blowing is the ultimate compliment! You are such a sweetheart! Thanks so much!

~Kayla

 
Summary: An AU, The story takes place before Pilot, what if tables are turned, Sam and John reunite to find a missing Dean, going on a journey full of danger, murder and  unsolved cases.  That's not the difficult part, they'll have to be together without Dean and fight their own demons before fighting the supernatural.
Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29245
[Report This] Published: 23/07/07 Updated: 11/06/08


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed
Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

This whole story is seriously awesome...I can't wait for the next chapter.

ROCK ON

Dru



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Dru

Hope you like next chappy, too

Stay hooked honey cuz it's comin' in the way so soon

 
Spirit's Lament by bjxmas Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: A poem from the eyes of the hunted.  I don’t normally write poems.  I tried for a challenge, but never sent it in. 
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 54
[Report This] Published: 11/09/07 Updated: 11/09/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Title and poem rocks big time, nice to see something so different on the site.

Dru



Author's Response: Thanks, Dru!  I just found it interesting to try something different.  I know poems aren't very popular, but it was a nice change for me.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Take care, B.J.

 
Summary:

What started out as a slanging match, grew into something more for all of them. Dean is sure he hates her, but not so sure he doesn't love her too.

Pre season 1

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Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Bruised. Not Broken
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15695
[Report This] Published: 18/10/07 Updated: 11/11/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Background

Schelz...this is freaking great stuff man, I gotta tell you, when it comes to reading or watching romances, I have to be dragged kicking and screaming. But I have a feeling this is going to turn into something really sweet. Loved this chapter, Dean and Sam as kiddies hanging out with tom boy Camyll, I like her so far, seems tough.

DRU



Author's Response:

ahh, thanks Dru. I'm glad this has caught your attention, kicking and screaming huh? Lol

I hope when you read the rest that you do find it sweet, that is my intention. Liking Camyll so far? Hope you continue to like her as you read on!

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Remembering when...

Sam and Camyll are like two peas in a pod right now aren't they, leaving Bobby out in the cold. lol

Camyll is a fighter, she kinda reminds me of me when I was that age, fighting with guys to test your own strengths and weaknesses, I really like this chick Camyll. Love how quick Dean and Camyll can make up after they've just kicked the crap out of each other...hehehehe

Oooh what Dean did was a sweet pay back!!!

So hilarious after all the fighting Camyll wants to stay with Dean...and he lets her, I think Dean likes her more than he cares to admit. Thats him all over though!

Loved this rocking chapter off the ground.

DRU



Author's Response:

Glad you like Camyll, she is a fighter and she did start off trying to test her own strengths, but lets face it...after a while it gets hard to ignore how HOT Dean is, even at 14.  heheehe

You know Dean, no one ever gets away with anything, she knew he'd get her back. lol, Yep, she wanted to share the bed and he let her. Dean admits nothing, always keeping it to himself.

Glad you liked it!

Schelz

 

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- In The Smokey Mountains

Absolute rocking chapter, action blew me apart...loved the passionate scene between Camyll and Dean, ahh all grown up.

I have to say, Camyll is kick ass, its no wonder Dean didn't hesitaite to go after her. She's great for Dean, she seems to balance him.

The goblin slitting her stomach and licking her cheek, the creepiest thing. uhg!!!

Another chapter, you rock big time!!!

DRU



Author's Response:

Your making me blush now, glad you liked the pasionate scene and the action.

I just love when readers react to Camyll like this, so thrilled you think she's kick ass. Chuffed you think she balances Dean.

Thanks for this review, Dru, see I can rhyme too. lol

Schelz

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne.

She said the three words to Dean, yes! I love her, he will be loved no matter how much he tries to stay emotionless, she still fell in love with him. He fell in love with her too, what a match Schelz, its perfect... Ahh, young love, the best kind!

Why must the parents ruin everything? Cant they see Dean and Camyll are made for each other? She loves Sam too, how sweet, she wanted to run and take Sam. I hope everything works out...cant split them up from Camyll, shes been there almost their whole life.

Camyll, I just love this girl, in the space of a few chapters she's grown on me big time. I like how well her character fits in, not just with the boys but with John and Bobby too.

 

ROCKIN STORY!!!

DRU



Author's Response:

AHHHHH, Thank you for this, doesn't matter what Dean does, girls fall at his feet. We all love Dean *Sighs* I love Sam too...

Parents, mmm, Isaac is selfish and in some ways John is too, though he cares more about his boys than Isaac does about Camyll. Smarter to split the young lovers up before she ended up following Dean across the country, thats the type of girl she is;)

Love that you love Camyll, glad she grew on you, last thing I wanna do is create a character that annoys people (Bella and Jo) I kinda liked Jo and B...sometimes...lets forget I said that shall we? Lol

 

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself

Ok, so I stayed up until four in the morning reading this ace story. And now I'm blubbering...sorry give me a minute;(

Author's Response: Ahhh, Dru I am so sorry hun, glad you think that this is ace but sad that your sad:(

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself

I know I kinda put myself in it when I said I thrive on tragedies...but why her, why Camyll? How could YOU do this? I love that girl nearly as much as Dean does;(

"Promise me that the sharp pain in my chest will stop hurting, promise me that I will stop feeling sick every time I think of her. - When Dean said that, my eyes watered. then.....How could he ever move on? Kiss another girl and mean it like he did when he kissed her. - you're killing me.

And then the accident, nooooo! I can't believe it, and when Sam's watching from the car it was totally heart breaking.

-The tears spilt as he heard the muffled cries from his older brother.. oh I wanna die right now.

 The note and chain she wanted to give him, OMG!!! Thats' why Dean never ever takes the amulet off, makes sense to me. I loved this whole story Schelz, but I don't know how long its going to take to get over this emotional trauma;( I don't know how long it'll take to forgive you for taking Camyll away from me and Dean!

Rocking chapter title though;(

DRU

 



Author's Response:

Again, really sorry...What you're feeling now, I was feeling after I wrote it:( I'm kinda proud that this story has you feeling so strongly about it, because it shows I've done something right...I hope you can forgive me for the ending hun:)

Hugs4u

Love Schelz

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed
Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself

Ok Schelz, so maybe I've forgiven you for this beautfiul heart wrenching, sad chapter;)

You Rock Baby!!!!

But I'm gonna be depressed for a while okay



Author's Response:

Phew *wipes sweaty forehead* I'm forgiven, Yay!!!

Thanks for saying this was beautiful and heart wrenching.

You rock babe! Pleaase don't be depressed.

Love Schelz

 
Summary:

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ONESHOT. Sam drags Dean out to have a little fun. To Dean's dismay, it doesn't involve pool, poker, or women.


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1202
[Report This] Published: 07/11/07 Updated: 07/11/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Sam's Swiveling Hips, Cold Beer, and a Giant Bubba

Sam and Dean dancing, what more could I ask for? What a sight, I couldn't stop laughing. This rocks big time Vanessa. Nice talking to you in the shout box.

Dru

 
Santa's Helpers by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

While investigating Santa-nappings at the mall the Winchesters make the ultimate sacrifice. Dean is an elf, John is Santa and that’s not even the weird part. Come along on a strange joyride because Xmas was never this whacked out before.  And Sam thought he was going to have an average, normal Christmas his first year at Stanford!  Preseries.

Available in the zine Salt 'N' Burn Volume 2

This story is dedicated to my two favorite elves, Zachary and Logan.  Zach, you were robbed; you absolutely had the best calves in your senior class, but like Dean, with all your other fine attributes, it is so hard to focus on just one.  Lo, you still have the chance to take that honor and your calves are every bit as awesome as your brother’s.  Go for it, dude! 

Santa's Helpers - Dude, Where's My Car?

 


Categories: Crossovers, Wee!chester, AU, Humor Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 50326
[Report This] Published: 15/11/07 Updated: 01/12/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Deck the Halls

ROCKS!!!!!!

This one the best stories I've read on this site, funny, no hilarious the whole freakin' way through, what a genius. Wow, loved the whole thing, love stories that don't stick to the m.o...yes supernatural is about beasts etc, but we can also have fun with the boys.

You created the perfect christmas story, B.J...Schelz reccomended this story coz I'm new on the site and she has got major taste! I can't stress how much I like this story, freakin love Shrek!!! And don't even get me started on Jessica and Roger rabbit, childhood heroes!

And the end, with Mary....absolutely blew me away. This fic goes in my favorites list. You rock!

DRU



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Dru!

What a wonderful review, really made my day!  Yeah, it is real easy to write the angst with all the Winchesters have been thru and Dean's snarky comments are always  fun to write, but this story was a total blast to write from start to finish. And it was a great pleasure to have them enjoying themselves and having fun (once Dean got past the humiliation of his elf suit! LOL)

All it took was imagining Jensen as Dean in that little elf suit and it seems like the whole story wrote itself.  Put these Winchesters in an insanely ridiculous situation and watch them go!

Thanks again, so glad you enjoyed it.  Have a very Merry Christmas!  Take care, B.J.

 
Summary:

A little christmas ramble in poem form - hope you all enjoy.

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 698
[Report This] Published: 20/11/07 Updated: 20/11/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: A little Christmas chill thrill

Your name rocks Bullet! This poem is so damn creepy and skin crawling, mind blowing. Loved the end part...

So listen to this record, and on its lessons dwell…cos we don’t have the Winchesters, to keep us safe from hell.

And at this time of year remember, keep kids safe indoors…for no one sane or sensible, would want to meet those claws.

ROCK ON BULLETBABE!!!

Dru



Author's Response: Thanks for the R&R Dru, glad you enjoyed and rocking on as we speak...lol

 
A New Leaf by XinaMarieUhl Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Dean decides to, well, turn over a new leaf and live the time he has left to him differently.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6072
[Report This] Published: 24/11/07 Updated: 25/11/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This comment rocked out loud, funny, so funny, definitely keep me laughing through out the day. I kinda know how you feel with the name thing...no one ever knows if I'm a chick or a guy. (though thats not ur situation, its the confusion thing.

DRU!

Thought it'd be fun to leave you wondering. Lol :D

 
Summary: Tag to season 2 episode "Heart". I needed some closure after the way it ended, so I added a car-ride.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3836
[Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You rocked this addition, very heart felt and inense.

ROCK ON!!!

Dru



Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much Dru. Glad you liked my addition:) Thanks for taking time to review!

 
Summary:

The days have closed in on Sam and Dean and they only have one more day together. What big brother Dean doesn't realize is when the deal is over so is his kid brothers life.  Thanks for AWESOME banner Floetry (bullet) Nominated for people's choice!!!

 

If I lost you --lou


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4098
[Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- If I lost you

WOW!!! How do you do it? So much emotion, believable emotion.

I'm so mad that I didn't read this earlier, I swear all your stories are going in my favorites.

 Seriously please do a story with me. *pleads* the stuff you come out with is just amazing and breath taking.

And what I was trying to avoid throughout reviewing was admitting that this made me cry like a baby!!!

 The words burnt right through me --- when Dean said the reason why he never cried is because he was scared that once he started he would NEVER stop! AMAZING....

Thanks so much for sharing such great stories about our boys;)

DRU-BABY



Author's Response:

I'm an emotional creature I guess, glad you found the emotion believeable that means a lot.

 Wow! All my stories? You've got me blushing Dru;)

Sorry I made you cry like a baby, I feel proud that my story was able to burn through you. Thanks for reading my stories and thinking they're great;)

On the story front, thanks for finding my work amazing and breath taking. Are you serious?? You really want to do a story with me?? I'm not that good hun!!!

Schelz

 

 
Summary:

This is a reflection of Sam and Dean's feelings for each other and also my homage to a lovely old movie, 'It's A Wonderful Life'

I don't own the boys or anything to do with them, Kripke does. Lucky guy!

Thanks to Lout, Crystal, Merrie and all you others guys for inspiration and motivation and especially to Kirsty-Birdy my shotgun!


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3345
[Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 01/12/07


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awesome christmas story!!!!

ROCK ON!!!!

Dru



Author's Response:

Hey Dru.

 Thanks Hunny for reviewing.  Just missed you in the Shout box yesterday and wanted to say Hi on your first day in UnGen.

Glad you enjoyed it and Merry Christmas!

Bev xxxx

 
The Fallen by birdie Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 201]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Sam Dean and Jo (Harvelle) are relaxing after a successful but tough poltergeist hunt, when Dean is abducted by a brutal daemon intent on bringing destruction down on mankind.

 

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Sam and Jo must find a way to save Dean, and the whole of mankind. Will Dean be strong enough to withstand the daemon whilst they search and who are the strangers who might offer a solution? 

 Thanks so much to Lout for my lovely banner and to Kirsty my GeekGirl shotgun and all you other daemon hunter girls for your encouragement.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 29542
[Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 16/01/08


Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries

What a opening chapter, this rocked volumes Birdie.

ROCK ON!!!

Dru



Author's Response:

Hey Dru. (Cool name!)

Thanks sweetums, It's my first multi-chapter and I am loving writing it.  I'm a Dean whumper in case you hadn't guessed but I always kiss him better at the end!

More to come soon I hope, stick with me!

Love Bevxx

 

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2. Raguel

Uh huh, me wan more...this story is rocking my boat.

Drop Dean off at mine, he'll feel better by the time I'm done.

Dru

 



Author's Response:

Dru.

Awh Hun sorry he's way too poorly to move in fact I've had to tuck him in and cuddle up to him just to keep him warm!

And Sammy jealous so he's trying to sneak in the other side!!  Gosh what a girl has to do for these boys!

Hahahahahaha!

See ya in the box!

Bev xx

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Michael

Oh boy, I'm loving this story, poor gorgeous, sexy, mouth watering Dean. Birdie you killing me with this cliff hanger "let me give you a taster."

Whats wrong with you women? Don't you know I need more. lol

Oh hun, I got ur email, hard to respond, my dads being stingy with the computer, hardly get to come on. Tells me I have to get my own, greedy so and so. Keep ur fingers crossed that he buys me one.

DRU

ROCK ON!!!!



Author's Response:

Dru sweety!

Heehee, he is the most lovely gorgeous eye candy isn't he? Even when a bit bashed about!

OK so I'm sensing you're happy if I carry on so better finish chapter four!

Dad!  Buy the grily a laptop!!!!!

Bev xxxxx

 

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Back Up Arrives

Soooo, I missed out big time on this AWESOME chapter, lucky for you, me and brutal go hand in hand and I'm loving the Dean torture!!! Don't tell Schelz and Merrie I said that though...its our little secret. Shhh

DRU



Author's Response:

Dru, Hunny.

Look hate to tell ya this but I suspect both Merrie and Schelz (my Bebg) have twigged that you hover towards the 'pain is our friend' pursuasion!  (Don't we all giggle giggle!)

Don't be fooled by them Hun they come across as sweet and innocent but have you checked their eyes?  Christo, christo!

I on the other hand am a pussycat purrpurr growl!

You're out of sink now as 5's up and I'm just writing 6 as we speak!  Thanks for reviewing Hun.

bev xx

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. The Power of One

Sweet ass chapter Bev, loving this trio thing you got going on, three brothers. That is hella cool!!!

Reading this totally beats having to watch MATILDA with the family for the umteenth time. Grrrr!!!!



Author's Response:

Ah there you are again Dru you sweety.

Yeah, gotta say I'm enjoying the three guys. They have become larger characters than I first imagined them but what can I say! I just went with the muse!

You worked out who they are yet?  Chapter 6 will help!

It's coming soon as having a whole week of work to write is just rad!

Taking my sweet ass (heehee, I wish!) back to chapter 6.

Love ya Hun

bev xx

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 "My Tartarus"

THEY'RE WHAT??? FREAKING ANGELS? BEV U ROCK!!! THIS ROCKS, KEEP EM COMING AND THANKS FOR THE HEADS UP ABOUT SCHELZ AND MERRIE.

I PLAN TO CHRISTO THEM, NEXT TIME WE SPEAK. LOL

KEEP THE AWESOME CHAPTERS COMING, LET THOSE ANGELS KICK ASS!

DRU



Author's Response:

Hey Dru Sweety

Yup Hunny, ArchAngels at that, not just bloomin  seraphs but the Angelic big boys! 

Well, if our boys rate the baddest daemons they deserve badass Angels too!

And Bebg and Merrie - all I can say is take your Remington and holy H2O! They're only appeared when The Gate opened if you follow my drift!

Chapter seven beckons, don't worry kid, I got your back!!

Bev xxx

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Angels and Daemons.

You sure know how to torture your readers dont you? They need to get to Dean or I'll have to kick Mickey's ass. Great chapter, never fail to please me!

DRU



Author's Response:

Dru Hunny

Now come on admit it?  A bit of torture is exquisite and I'm sure Mikey would adore it if you focussed your attentions to his ass!

Doing Chapte 9 now and it's killing me!  It's a beast but I'm hanging in there because you deserve the best!

Stay with me Hun

Love Bev x

 
Reviewer: Dewyeyed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!

OUCH! GIRLFRIEND THIS CHAPTER IS ON FIRE AND DONT THINK IT CAN BE PUT OUT! I AGREE WITH EVERYONE, THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER YET.

Oh by the way...I have a new e-mail address that you can reach me on now... justdru22@hotmail.com

Cya evil queen!

DRU



Author's Response:

Dru.

Ahhhhhhh!  Bird luxuriates in the warm sweet afterglow of intense pleasure

Hey hope chapter 9 doesn't dissappoint!  Squeek!

You are a top reviwer thanks Hun

bev xx