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Penname: Seraph [Contact]
Real name: Shell (or Cat)
Status: Member
Member Since: 05/12/07
Website: www.myspace.com/ravenwolfs_den
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(*NOTE TO SELF: Wear glasses when typing to avoid appearing illiterate.) 

 Okay, just the basics until I get myself set up here.

I am a writer, and a coward.

ONE day I will get myself published, but I've been keeping myself too much to myself. Time to stretch and share ... and try to learn how not to flinch when someone critiques my 'babies.'

I LOVE Supernatural, it is well crafted, and lets the imagination run amok. That, and of course, ANY excuse to watch Jensen Ackles.

I'd dearly love to put the look into Dean's eyes that Cassy did. O', My! Is it warm in here...?

I hope that I can live up to some of the amazing work published here.

Time to add some Australian style lol

Thanx for having me.


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Reviews by Seraph
 
Summary:

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Sam has a deadly vision of his brother. Meanwhile, Dean is keeping secrets again.

Banner by Sweetie0704


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 72116
[Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 15/12/07


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Glimpse of the Future

I am FURIOUS!

I am SEETHING!!

I just wrote an eloquent and lengthy review, and cyberspace ate the damn thing!!!!

Okay, will resort to short version, until I get a chance to do-over.

You are a cruel cruel woman! Not for what you did to Dean, but for the fact that I had to give up at Chapter 13, at 4.30am (my time), after squinting at my mbl for several hours!!!

Finished it this afternoon.

Brilliant!!!!

(As I said, I WILL write a review worthy of your work as soon as I stop banging my head against the keyboard *grrrrrrrrrr*)

Seraph



Author's Response:

Oh man! I HATE when that happens! HATE it. I so understand your frustration, but I look forward to your next review immensely. Thanks for sending in this anyway, I'm sure that took great patience after having lost the first one. Man, I'm so sorry that happened to you. 

Thanks.

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

O GOD, I laughed out loud!!!

I'm a Dean-gyrl myself, and so is my MUM LOL

PLEASE write more, even if I do choke while staring at the tiny writing on the screen :o) Besides, sometimes the very best fun is to be had (back to writing here) with the self-aware, self-consciousness of shows as shows - eg. 'Boston Legal'

 And if you are lacking further ... imaginative uses for the boys, please feel free to add/contact me at 1800-hope-there-are-showers-in-hell! ;o)

France is good, but Aussie is exotic.

I love it!

S.

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

If possible? Even funnier than the 1st Chapter!

S.

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Perfect!

S.

 
Summary: Past Featured StorySeven days until the deadline for Dean’s one-way trip to hell, Sam finally figures out how to save his brother’s life. On that day, Dean nearly dies.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 4261
[Report This] Published: 26/11/07 Updated: 27/11/07


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

The concept is brilliant.

An old, and in some circles, well known myth that is also a little 'forgotten' nowdays.

I'll be 100% honest in that the 'tense' is not my favourite style; I find that it distances me from the story somehow, but that is purely a matter of taste. A matter of taste that is quite easy to ignore the minute Dean collapses.

Given how much the demons hate and fear Dean, the idea that that they would make him suffer a hideous, humiliating and painful death, rather than making it quick and 'painless' is completely in keeping with the show/world.

The great warrior reduced to a feeble and weak man, whose body is destroying itself.

The scenes in the hospital, the weakness of Dean, the pure psychological shock that engulfs Sam; broke my heart.

But the master stroke was the use of the myth. I might have used Michael rather than 'Medatron' (and 'yes' it does sound like the name of a 'Transformer' - "more than meets the eye," indeed,) but then I'd never have come up with this story.

Kripke may have stated that the side of "Good" works through human agents like the Hunters, while Evil works more directly in the world, and your story doesn't break with that idea. Sam FORCES Good to act, through a pre-existing "loop-hole" in Angelic lore; a precedent that even the evasive side of Good can't wriggle out of.

Best of all? I can usually tell where a story/movie/book/etc is going within the 1st 5 minutes, or chapter or 2. You had me in suspence from the beginning t the reveal.

Thank-you for sharing your wonderful tale.

Seraph

 
Summary:

The war has started as if that wasn't bad enough. But now the war has a front with the uprising of a new leader of the demon legions: and she really hates Winchesters. Now Sam and Dean are on the front lines of battle and the only thing that may give them the leverage they may need to win is a mysterious, mentally unstable girl with a strange power and a ghostly passenger. Can Sam and Dean save the world from the things made of nightmares? Or will the gnashing jaws of hell swallow them all?

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Banner by Bulletbabe! looks pretty awesome huh?

Rated for some strong language. Not a Winchester death fic.

No spoilers. Constructive criticism welcomed!


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 72058
[Report This] Published: 11/12/07 Updated: 19/06/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: We Are Broken

Trust me, IT DOES NOT SUCK!
The main pleasure of this 1, is that I've got NO idea where it's going or what will happen next!
It's hard to comment when you're in suspense!
S.

Author's Response: thank you, i'v e been rying for a really out of control feel to my story, thank you for telling me you like it :)

 
Broken Images by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 205]
Summary:

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Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?

People's Choice Winner

Awards 2008 Best Future fic

2008 UnGen Awards Best Sam


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830
[Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Hate seeing Dean so hopeless and helpless, brilliant way of bringing out the inner, spun-glass fragility that we all know is there. Plus, Bobby in a suit!
S.

Author's Response: Thanks for that - and yes, Bobby in a suit, but he's just the advance scout...Jules

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

What a stunner!
I REALLY enjoy the story, but LOVE this chapter!
S.
P.S. AussieAussieAussie...
;oD

Author's Response:

oi, oi, oi !!!!!

Thank you - glad you enjoyed. Have you figured it out yet? ...Jules

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I am HOOKED (yes, yes, very punny) you wicked woman!

I love your villain.

The very best lies are/should always be laced with a liberal amount of Truth; and Father has Sam well and truly pegged - 'tho naturally in the most extreme and darkest interpretation of the relationship between the boys.

Excellent!

More, give me MORE!!!

;o)

S.

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

How the hell are they going to get out of this one? Especially with Dean in one piece (mentally?)

The wondering is killing me...

... but not as much as what you are doin' to my poor Dean.

Keep up the good work ;o)

 S.

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Cool twist!

"I see dead people!" lol Funny how only he 'saw' her ... hmmm?

Poor baby is havin' a hell of a week.

S.

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstar
Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OUCH!

S.

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

After a hunt goes terribly wrong Sam seeks the services of a necromancer.  And finds out more about his brother than he ever knew before.  This is her story...


Categories: AU, General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 17211
[Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 22/02/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 21/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue-Or Is It An Introduction?

hmmm...someond a Laurell K Hamilton reader/fan?
:o)
There are some echoes ...
S.

Author's Response: Umm no actually I'm not.  I've heard of her books but I always just assumed they were a rip-off of Buffy.

 
If Life Were Fair by Birdy Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Deans POV after being injured.  Dealing with an angry Sam, hyper-active wildebeest and a marshmallow obsessed sub-conscious.

 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6407
[Report This] Published: 29/12/07 Updated: 01/01/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Is it sad that I can tell off the top of my head that wildebeest (also called 'gnu') yearly partake in 1 of the largest migration of any land animal?
LOVE the story; SO Dean!
S.

Author's Response:

That's not sad - it is usefull information!

Thank gnu for the review ;)

Kirsty xx

 
Summary:

 

"It voids the contract, see? Looks like you'll have to give him back. Sorry. Except, I'm not."


Categories: Drabbles, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Snapshots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 385
[Report This] Published: 04/01/08 Updated: 04/01/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Perfect.
S.

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Perfect.
S.

 
Seriously? by bethx028 Rated: K starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Sam endures his brothers antics, but isn't above teasing Dean a little in return. Another response to the Weekly Drabble Challenge. The prompt word is still clown.


Categories: General, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101
[Report This] Published: 04/01/08 Updated: 04/01/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL
Touché Sammy.
'Though I DO think fear of flying trumps fear o' clowns any day of the week!
:oD
S.

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LOL
Touché Sammy.
'Though I DO think fear of flying trumps fear o' clowns any day of the week!
:oD
S.

Author's Response: lol I don't know about that, I have a friend that may tend to disagree :P But thanx for the review, glad you liked it!  beth :)

 
Summary:

 

It started with a nightmare, and quickly became the surest way to annoy Dean Sam could think of.


Categories: Drabbles, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Snapshots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 275
[Report This] Published: 06/01/08 Updated: 06/01/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love your 'snapshots!'
The writing is so neat and spare, yet evocative and full of the energy and emotion of 'the moment.'
Dean LIVES! (Or what's the point?!)
S.

Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I'm so glad you like them. And yeah, in all my 'verses', Dean lives. Not even during "All Hell" did it occur to me that Sam wouldn't save him.

 
Summary: A ridiculous little Drabble on the ongoing theme of Clowns!  Hope it makes you smile! (Boy it's hard to stick to 100 words only!)
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 103
[Report This] Published: 06/01/08 Updated: 06/01/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

LMAO
Don't know whether to lol (which I did,) or get a little hot under the collar (ditto!)
100 wrds might be tough, but that was masterful use of them; wicked womyn!
S.

Author's Response:

Hey Seraph

Aw Hun do both! laugh and lust!  Works for me!

Thanks for reviewing, loves me a review!

Bev x

 
Retribution by neonchica Rated: M starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 57]
Summary: Dean and Sam return to the town of a hunt they finished months ago, and Dean goes missing. As Sam frantically turns the town upside down in search of his brother, Dean must endure torture at the hand of his captor. Surprises and whumpage abound!

Categories: Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 53580
[Report This] Published: 08/01/08 Updated: 09/02/08


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*Really* intriguing start!
S.

 
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/10/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Brilliant, outrageous, hysterical and truly laugh out loud funny!
I had tears in my eyes *grin*

 
Summary:

Sam and Dean are called to help the son of a hunter after his parents were attaked and killed by a demon. (Set during Season two, after 'Hunted'.)

PLEASE READ AND REVIEW!


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Demon Bounty
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 9360
[Report This] Published: 03/05/09 Updated: 04/02/10


Reviewer: Seraph Signed
Date: 21/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

great start!

 
Reviewer: Seraph Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

great start!