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Penname: vonnie836 [Contact]
Real name: Yvonne Warner
Status: Member
Member Since: 03/12/07
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Beta-reader: Yes

I discovered Supernatural last November and by now got my 15 year old son and my 12 year old daughter addicted to it. Even my husband thinks the show is superior to others. I'm very much a Sam girl but like Dean almost as much. The brothers can't be separated. By now I'm writing and posting my third story here .

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Fallout by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 65]
Summary:  

A hunt gone wrong brings back a painful memory

Set in Season 2, after the episode What Is And What Should Never Be

Fallout

SN.tv 2009 Best Miscellaneous


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 20678
[Report This] Published: 15/08/08 Updated: 05/09/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Explosion

Yes, you are very good, first for no cliffie, second for posting a new story. But I do have to say, even without a cliffie, I have a hard time waiting for the next chapter. You set something up in this chapter, and I'm not quite sure where you are going with it. So now I feel the need to know more. And it really starts growing fast. So maybe you could post early again or wave your magic wand and make it next Friday. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: I am...*pats self on head*... Lol - so even without a cliffie, you're still bouncing up and down waiting for the next chapter, eh? Well, that's good. Good for me! As for posting early - wellllll.... now, my wonderful beta and friend has threatened to kill me in a hideously bloody fashion if I break the posting cycle, but I am going to post a day early because I'm going away for the weekend and leaving Friday morning. Perhaps you could kidnap Sam and send him nicely gift-wrapped to Ziggy and she might let me slip an extra chapter in, if it's ready - you never know your luck - lol. Thanks Vonnie - glad you're loving this one...Jules

Author's Response: Oh - forgot to add - yes, I have set something up, but there is a clue in the story banner. Have a look at the pic of Sam, and remember what he was doing in that particular shot....I'll give you a little hint - the pic is from Playthings...*grins*....Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Shockwave

Wow, Dean is getting better and Sam is exhausted and feeling guilty. And obviously not dealing well with it. Can't wait for the next chapter. Have fun. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks Vonnie - yes, Sam is pretty guilty - and he could have done without that little guilt trip his father put him through after the run-in with the semi - it's going to get messy....Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Fallout

Another absolutely wonderful chapter. Very nicely written. Loved the way Dean tried to get Sam to talk. His worry for his little brother and his anger at his father. Poor Sam, so much torture, so much guilt and really for nothing, because it wasn't his fault. Hope the talk with Dean helped and he still can remember in the morning. He was really wasted after all. Can't wait for next week. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks Vonnie. Yep, Dean's all for Sam talking but when it comes to his own issues, he could teach an oyster a thing or two - lol. Thanks for reading - hungover Sammy in the final chapter...Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue - Recovery

Awesome story, really loved the ending, the chick flick and the banter. Just how I like it. Well done. Can't wait for that look into Sam's head. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks so much for that, Vonnie. You know, when I first started writing SN fanfiction, I avoided getting too deeply into Sam - I wasn't sure how to write him. Couldn't quite get inside his head, and really didn't want to get him wrong. I feel I've grown to understand him over the last year and a half. Well, I hope so. He's cute, but he's got as many layers to him as his adorable big brother. Glad you liked this one.....Jules

 
Summary:

A mishap leaves sixteen year old Sam as the man of the house. How will he cope when history begins to repeat itself?

 

Don't Shoot Shotgun!!!!!!
Categories: AU, General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Darkness Awaits
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 10358
[Report This] Published: 18/08/08 Updated: 10/11/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Can't Fight This Feeling

I was really surprised by this story, because I didn't even think about Sam becoming a fafther. I usually don't read these stories, but because I already started, I thought I give it a shot. It is really good. You approached this in a great way and I really want to see how you are going to continue on with this. Great Job! Hugs, Vonnie

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Crazy Love

I liked it a lot. It does sound crazy to get married at 16 and I know what head over heels love feels like. I also know that at 16 things might look great and then you wake up and things are different. But sometimes you just have to have the guts to take responsibility for what you did and if you love the person, then getting married is the right thing. I like your perspective here and can't wait for the next chapter. Hope your schoolwork goes well. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: I hope it goes well too. I'm glad you like it. I will try and get the next chappy written as soon as possible. Just keep an eye out.

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 17/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: I Believe My Heart

Great ending, there is nothing better than a happy ending, especially for Sammy. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Oh it hasn't ended yet! Lots more things to come!

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/10/08 Title: Chapter 5: Breathe Me

Oh man this was devastating. Poor Sam and Jamie, having to go through this, just when things look up  little bit. And now the baby is crashing, this is really awful. Please update soon. Hope your friends are getting through their loss. What a sad thing to happen. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Gettin' Through the Tough Times

Great chapter, but I hope you are not going to leave it with this. I really would like to know what they name their little girl and also if she is going to survive. You really got me on the hook here. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Don't worry it ain't over yet, lot's more to come for the Winchesters!

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/11/08 Title: Chapter 7: What's in a name?

Great chapter, I really loved how Sam Helped Kelsey and than thought of naming his little girl after her sister who died. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/11/08 Title: Chapter 8: The Last Kiss of Sacrafice

Loved this story, guess it had to end sad. Sam couldn't be happy forever, could he? After all, he is a Winchester. A sequel would be awesome. So if you find it in your heart, it would be great. Hugs, Vonnie

 
MOCK ME, BABY! by Vanessa Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Oneshot. This is a pure, unadulterated piece of . . . crack. Dean gets into an argument...and, well, it's not pretty. Sam gets a little worried.



Categories: Humor, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 803
[Report This] Published: 24/08/08 Updated: 24/08/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Beer is Swill

This is hilarious. I love Dean being offended by the parrot and arguing with him. No wonder Sam thought he needed to get his head checked out.

Author's Response: Thanks, Vonnie.  I'm so happy to hear that you enjoyed it and thought it was funny!

 
Old Ghosts by Swellison Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Sam and Dean take on the ghost at historic Windsor Ruins. Set S2 directly after No Exit. Originally published in Rooftop Confessions #2 by GriffinSong Press.

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Categories: One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 8519
[Report This] Published: 25/08/08 Updated: 05/09/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Road to Ruins

Great start. I really like all the knowledge Sam throws out. This sounds interesting. Can't wait to see, where you are going with this, Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Hi Vonnie,

Thanks for the review and the stars, Sam is just full of knowledge, isn't he?  Sue

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Ending with a Difference

Love this story and I certainly love the thoughts of the boys coming from Southern stock. So are you finished with this or can I hope for more? Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Hi Vonnie,

Glad you liked this story. It's complete, but there's a couple of other places along the Natchez Trace that have the right atmosphere for a Supernatural story, so there might be more, eventually. Thanks for the review and the stars!    Sue

 
Summary:

 Killer At Midnight

 

 The brothers are drawn to Clarksdale, Mississippi on the trail of what appears to be a shape shifter. However, upon closer investigation the brothers come to realize that things aren’t always as they appear. When Sam suddenly disappears and the killings become more frequent Dean has to make a decision – will he be able to go through with it?


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 41508
[Report This] Published: 31/08/08 Updated: 13/03/09


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 29/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow, I totally love your story. Nice built up and enough tension to keep me reading. Now I'm anxious to read more. Dean can't be dead. And what about poor Sam? What did you do to him? Hug, Vonnie

Author's Response: I'm glad that you've enjoyed the story so far - I've had a lot of fun with it. No, Dean isn't dead - I don't do death fics. As for Sam...well, you'll find out where he is at the beginning of this next chapter. I promise. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Great chapter again, wonder how they are going to find the shifter. Hope your friend will get better soon. Take care of the both of you. I will wait for the next chapter as patiently as possible. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Sorry that I've been gone for so long - things were much crazier than I'd thought they'd be. The next chapter is being worked on and I'll try to get it up as quickly as possible - thanks for your patience and understanding about the whole thing. I'm glad you enjoyed the last chapter - the brothers have some problems they need to sort out before they go after the shifter...too much on their shoulders isn't gonna help them stop it. Thanks for the review!

 
The Guardians by penmin Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Sam nodded, not able to speak.  A small seed of hope had been planted in his heart.  And he smiled.'

This story follows on from my one shot "Hope."  If you haven't already read it this may not make sense.  Set just before Lazarus Rising. No spoilers.

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note 21/12/08 This was started before Lazarus Rising. I do not claim the pictures as my own, all are borrowed off the net.

Having been into discussions on The Vaults regarding what makes a good title and can it be changed, I have added to this story the title I would like it to be but will leave the former title in place as well. 

The Guardians (Black Dog - White Dog) are based on the South American folklore tale of the Cadejo, a mystical dog-like beast sometimes with glowing red eyes and it could change from black to white and vice versa.

Note: 17/10/09 I wasnt happy with the ending so its been ammended/added to.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 28597
[Report This] Published: 04/09/08 Updated: 22/10/09


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Sam, this has to be confusion. Why is the hell hound stalking him and what's up with the white one. Got to go on now and find out. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response:

Many thank for leaving a review and the stars (Stars I do so love lol)

Its great that you have started to read the whole story, many start but not all finish, very much appreciated

Jacq x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

So black dog is trying to trick Sam, the white hair in his room were from the patch in his fur. And white dog is trying to protect him. Gotta read on and find out if black dog gets Sam. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Hello and thank you again

This is my very first chapter story, so I was/am just learing how to put the threads of a story together with this one.

Jacq x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Sam heard Dean and he found hope again and Dean could hear him into hell and it gave him hope also. How awesome. I love that Jonathan is there for Sam and it helped Sam to talk to him. I felt so bad when white dog fell for black dogs trick and now black dog got his bait. I can't believe this is the end of white dog, it can't be. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Nice to see you back again

Thank you once more, I think I am getting better at the evil cliffie...lol

Jacq x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

This is so sad. Sam figures out the truth and now Jonathan comes in and in his desperation feels betrayed. I can even understand why he felt this way, with white dog being there. Too bad the gun went off. Now I'm just glad to hear you are not doing death fics. It's after my bed time. Can't wait to read more tomorrow. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Glad you're enjoying this.

No not a death-fic, after this chapter I had a very very long gap before I wrote the next.

So late night reading hey, sometimes you just have to sleep...lol

Thank you for the review and the stars.

Jacq x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Noooooo, you can't let Jonathan die.Poor little Dean can't loose his daddy. He just lost his mom. This is heartbreaking. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

No I'm not into death-fic, I just cannot do that to anyone, even with my own characters!

Glad you're liking it still.

Jacq x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Thanks for saving Jonathan. So they are back on the right track, but now they are under attack again. This is really good. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Hello and thank you again, yes its a bit dire and I promise not to hurt them too much...lol

Jacq x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So all the traps didn't work and now they are so close and the rock slide happens. What's up with White Dog? Is he evil after all? Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you for keeping up with it, and all in one go too! Thank you for the stars again as well.

Jacq x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Amazing, Sam starts the ritual and the guardians eyes turn black. Intriguing. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response:

Sam's just wants to bring Dean back, he'll try every way he can.

Thank you for your comment and stars.

Jacq x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Please tell me you will show me the creature the two guardians have become. And please let Sam be okay. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Yes the creature will be revealed in the last chapter, which I am sure you will/have see/seen very soon lol.

Thank you for leaving your thoughts and the stars.

Jacq x