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Penname: vonnie836 [Contact]
Real name: Yvonne Warner
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Member Since: 03/12/07
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I discovered Supernatural last November and by now got my 15 year old son and my 12 year old daughter addicted to it. Even my husband thinks the show is superior to others. I'm very much a Sam girl but like Dean almost as much. The brothers can't be separated. By now I'm writing and posting my third story here .

I am a proud member of CWESS (Coalitionfor the Written Enhancement of Sam"s Story

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Summary:

"What would I do without you?"

"hmm. Crash and Burn"

Sam didn't think he would lose Jess. Nor did he think he was going to react this bad when he did,

She went too far soon, as far as Sam was concerned


Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 2935
[Report This] Published: 04/07/08 Updated: 11/07/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: Bed of Roses

Really great story, very sad but also very fitting. I really like it a lot. Great flow and wonderful writing. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Summary:

Towels At Dawn - banner

Shamefully salacious soap and slapping shower sheet shenanigans, written for the "Angela, we love you! Get better soon!" UnGen Challenge.



Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2428
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 06/07/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Slappity Slap Slap

This is funny, the towels getting excited over being able to cling to the boys bodies and the water running down Dean's body frolicking and getting hysterical at the feel of his skin. But it is so much more, very, well, what's the word, erotic. Anyway, it was great and the towel fight in the end - great comic relief. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

How can it be possible to write erotic stuff when you're only on about towels? ROFL, thanks! I feel much easier about posting this one, now I know it wasn't a step too far, LOL

Ta!

 

 
November Second by bayre Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

The things brothers do for one another.


Categories: General, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1428
[Report This] Published: 15/07/08 Updated: 15/07/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Dean talks...and talks...and talks...

Great story, funny, yet sad too. Really got everything in there in a small package. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thanks Vonnie.

Laura 

 

 
Summary:

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The Winchester brothers end up in the small Montana town Kalispell trying to help the town solve the disappearance of a caretaker for the Conrad Mansion. Is it just a a simple case of a girl running away or is there some deeper, sinister meaning behind her disappearance?


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 16039
[Report This] Published: 16/07/08 Updated: 15/10/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great start to this story, can't wait for the further developments. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Many thanks for reading!

 

 
Summary:
A witch's curse leaves Sam trapped somewhere Dean can't follow and Dean finds himself losing faith in the hero he thought he could always count on. Limp/angst Teenchester two-part short story. Rated for some bad language.

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 7273
[Report This] Published: 21/07/08 Updated: 25/07/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really great, I love this story. I felt so sorry for poor Bobby. It was good, that Dean told him it wasn't his fault. Loved Dean and John's concern. Writing was once again really great. Can't wait for the next story. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks!  My new story is complete so I'm going to try and get it posted tonight.  Thanks so much for the R&R.  Liz x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Pretty awesome. The argument between Sam and John was great, sounded real and I loved the way Sam ran away. You are very descriptive and make me feel like I'm watching TV. The emotions are very clear too and that's almost better than TV. I'm glad, you let Dean redeem John a little, but explaining, dad doesn't hate Sam and only wants what he thinks is best. And your witch was absolutely awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Awww thanks, I've read a lot of stories with witches and I wanted a fairytale old crone witch.

I'm very fond of John, I think he did the best he could with the knowledge he had and the way Mary's death left him broken.  I can imagine him being harsh on his boys and sometimes drinking too much but I don't doubt he loves them.

Thanks so much for the lovely feedback.  Liz x 

 

 
Remember me? by IHeartSam Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
Summary:

A vampire hunt set after Heart could have dire repercussions for one of the Winchester brothers...

I, alas own nothing! Rated T to be safe.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 25339
[Report This] Published: 25/07/08 Updated: 07/07/09


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 30/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Really like this so far. Especially the end of this chapter. Sam realizing what he did to Dean by asking him to kill him, because Madison ask it of him, was so sad and I'm glad he decided to make it right. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

hi vonnie-thanks so much for taking the time to leave a review-it really means a lot :) glad you're enjoying things so far-more on the way!

-Aliyssa

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 28/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Pretty awesome chapter, lots of tension. Can't wait for more.Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response: hi vonnie-thankyou for your review! it really means everything :) glad you liked it -Aliyssa  x

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/10/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Wow very exiting andv tense chapter. Hope you find time to update soon. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Hey Vonnie-thanks for the review and I'm very sorry that it's taken so long for me to reply to it!!! Hope you enjoy the rest of the story-thanks again! -Aliyssa x

 
Summary: Rape. Emotional torture. Lets just say things went a little different in MY version of Folsom Prison Blues. Enjoy the angst.
Categories: AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 7257
[Report This] Published: 26/07/08 Updated: 30/07/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great Story, this is really different but it is so emotional and painful and it makes me want to cry. Really, this is very well written. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! *Glomps* You just made a fangirl very happy. ;). Next chapter coming soon. :D. 

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, this was pretty powerful. Poor Sam and poor Dean.Having  to go through something like this is awful. I understand that Dean feels very much out of control and Sam has guilt feelings. Can't wait for the epilogue. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Aw! Thank you! :).

Yeah, I tried to stay true to character AND true to the situation at hand. I am not confident that I entirely succeeded, but I am happy with the result. ;). epilogue coming soon.

 

:).  

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Now I'm kinda sad it's over. This was a great story. I loved the way you ended it. Sometimes it is better not to have Dean get to the guy. And better for Sam. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Definitely better for Sammy. ;). I really enjoyed writing this one and I'm glad you liked reading it. :). Thank you for the review. :). 

 
Summary:

It always starts with a little thing and then escalates, doesn't it?

Sam's fighting for the shower and Dean for his dignity.

This is now a little collections of silly one shots for amusment only!

Not set in any season in particular and no spoilers for any shows.

I own nothing. All things Supernatural are the property of CW and Mr Kripke.

 


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 5010
[Report This] Published: 26/07/08 Updated: 16/09/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Showers and Sheets

You sure got a touch for comedy, this made me giggle. I felt like watching part of the show, only Kripke would never give us both boys half naked in one night and then Dean in all his glory. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thanks, I always think trying to do funny with the boys is either a hit or a miss, glad you think this is a hit! Mr Kripke really needs to spice up the boys lives or get them to take more showers, doesn't he?! lol

Mary x

 
Hope by penmin Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:  

Sam stood and watched the water in the raging river.  He could throw himself in, end it all now. Would he be with Dean then? Would the pain end? Then he heard a child's voice screaming.

 

Set very early season 4.  I don't read or do spoilers.


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 996
[Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 06/08/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hope, yes sometimes it's the only thing that keeps us going. You put this very beautiful into this little story. It was amazing. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you and for the stars.  When a story has been out of view for ages, its really nice to see someone has read it after all this time.

Jacq x

 
Summary:

A simple night of training ends up being so much more, John makes a decision and Sam pays the price.

Weechesters one-shot.  Some limp/angst.


Categories: Wee!chester, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4545
[Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 06/08/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

This was awesome, like everything else you write. You were kinda tough on John, but sometimes he has been too harsh with Sam. I'm glad Sammy is okay and he has big brother Dean. I loved how you sneaked in the poison ivy thing in the end. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Summary: Just a little Supernatural poetry, enjoy!!!!
Categories: AU, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 115
[Report This] Published: 10/08/08 Updated: 11/08/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Today my brother died

How sad and yet in a way beautiful. The thoughts of one brother holding the body of the other. Mourning the loss, giving voice to this grief and in the end confessing, that he died with him. Very touching and beautifully written. Hugs, Vonnie 

Author's Response: Thanks, it is sad, but I'm a sucker for the brotherly love!

 
Burning Anger by punkin Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: This is just something that came to me on a boring car ride to California. I really hope you like it!
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 85
[Report This] Published: 11/08/08 Updated: 11/08/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I realized very soon this was about Sam shooting Jake. I think this was the very first time I saw Sam act so out of character and yet I understand. Jake killed him, but the worst thing was that he made Dean make the deal. Although Dean hadn't told him at that time yet, Sam knew. This was excellent, you are very good. Hugs, Vonnie

 
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After Sam, then Dean, are injured on hunt, Sam goes missing. Taken by the object of their hunt. Dean realizes hunter has become hunted and it is all more sinister and far more personal than he could ever have dreamed.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 51905
[Report This] Published: 11/08/08 Updated: 01/09/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh boy, so not good. They are in real trouble now, aren't they? Can't wait for what's next. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Those poor boys are in real trouble now. I'm so sorry my reply took so long, I'm on ordered rest and have limited access to the computer. More soon!

Hugs, Muffy

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Whoa, so this is not a death fic? So what's going on? Are they caught in some drug induced nightmare? Something is going on. Really love this chapter. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! No, not a nightmare and NEVER death fic from me. It makes me cry and weep and wail. I read one once (unlabeled) and cried abou tit for days. Still tear up when I think about it.

More soon! Hugs, Muffy

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 21/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Another whoa, so no nightmare, also it is a nightmare nevertheless. I can't wait for the next chapter. You sure have a way with words. You keep me on the edge and keep it really creepy. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so happy this story is giving you the creeps. Wow, that doesn't sound right, but you know what I mean! LOL

Huge hug, Muffy

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Great chapter. Felt Sam's fear for Dean. The sadness in Dean. The terror in the air. It was really gripping. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad this story is still going strong! I'll have more very soon!

Hugs, Muffy

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/08/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Intense. Loved Sam, his love for his brother gives him the strength to do even the impossible. Every chapter just a little more intense than the last. Can't wait how you are going to top this one. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Vonnie! I loved Sam in this chapter too, when I was writing it the scene was playing before my eyes. Anything for the other, that's the Winchester motto, isn't it? Even the impossible.

More very soon! Hugs, Muffy

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/08/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Powerful! The war ends now. I don't know what to say, other than, update soon. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The war ends now, but maybe it goes on a little too. :D I'll have the final chapter up Sunday or Monday!

Hugs, Muffy 

 
Summary:

Dean didn't have time to brace himself for the feel of a bullet slicing through his chest. He barely managed to suck in a breath. When he was hit, his air whooshed out of him and he felt himself lifted off the ground and then slammed back down onto it.

He laid there, eyes shut, and wondered why he wasn't dead yet.


Categories: General, One Shots, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4207
[Report This] Published: 11/08/08 Updated: 11/08/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Take The Bullet

Love it, almost didn't read it because it looked like a Dean story but then decided to give it a try. I'm really glad I did. You really did an awesome job with this. Hug, Vonnie

 
Summary: Post Bloody Mary. Dean sees a new side of Sam and it arises new sympathies. I really wanted to capture the raw emotion of early first season Sam,I'm sure everyone remembers the hard times after Jess! Not to mention the nightmares!
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1590
[Report This] Published: 13/08/08 Updated: 13/08/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was sweet. Loved the way Sam was with Angela. I felt so sorry for him after that dream. I liked the brotherly moment in the end. Hope you will write more stories. Hugs, Vonnie