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Penname: vonnie836 [Contact]
Real name: Yvonne Warner
Status: Member
Member Since: 03/12/07
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I discovered Supernatural last November and by now got my 15 year old son and my 12 year old daughter addicted to it. Even my husband thinks the show is superior to others. I'm very much a Sam girl but like Dean almost as much. The brothers can't be separated. By now I'm writing and posting my third story here .

I am a proud member of CWESS (Coalitionfor the Written Enhancement of Sam"s Story

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Vacation by lillelouis Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

There are places in the world where people don't go. Places too far away to care about. Forests too deep and dark to venture into. Evils that the avrage human does not know or see. Secrets too scary to be told. If you venture into these deep forests you might just be unlucky enough to find the thing that scares you the most.

Take a walk with the Wincesters into this particular forest and see what you find.

The story takes place sometime during season three.

No spoilers for specific episodes, but a little for the myth arc of season 3.


Categories: Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: O' Horrible Past
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 96274
[Report This] Published: 09/04/08 Updated: 07/09/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Great chapter,this is really getting more and more tense, can't wait to see what happens next. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying :D I'll hurry and write it then...

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying :D I'll hurry and write it then...

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/08/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Wow, this is so exciting. I can't wait to see how you are going to resolve this. So like Sam, that he wouldn't go without the others. Dean to the rescue, hope he gets to Sammy in time. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review and for showing an interest... and for the stars:D

Hope the interest lasts...

 
A Mans Drink by Cookie6 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

My Prank War Challenge

 

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Thanks Lou, love my cute banner.

 


Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4041
[Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 13/04/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What can I say, Dean is a genius, he sure got Sam with this one. Poor kid, couldn't rest all week and was a wreck by the end, just to get it when he thought it was all over. Loved it. Hugs, Vonnie



Author's Response:

Thanks for dropping by, I'm really pleased you loved my little prank war ficlet. Yep, Dean is the master!

Your shiny stars made my day, thanks heaps!

 
Summary:

 A month after Madison and San Francisco, Sam and Dean are checking out an animal attack in the capitol of Texas. References to Heart.

Many, many thanks to bulletbabe for the awesome banner!!

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 8669
[Report This] Published: 29/05/08 Updated: 11/06/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Hunting by Moonlight

I like this, very nicely written for a first hunting story. Wonderful details about the towers. I liked that you used real places. Sam saving Dean was great, just what he needed after he couldn't save Madison. Also loved how Dean told him that Constance's live wasn't really living and that he saved Madison by releasing her. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response:

Hi Vonnie,

Glad you liked this and thanks for the review. I used a blended history approach to the story's location, starting with researching the real moonlight towers (and a field trip to Austin), and then embellishing as needed to add the Supernatural element. As they say, the devil's in the details.

Sue

 
Summary:

Dean's been to Hell and back, now it's time to get Sam back too...


Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: A War with No Front
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3113
[Report This] Published: 01/06/08 Updated: 01/06/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice one,maybe Kripke read it and will use it for Season 4? Would definitely get my approval. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks very much, that's quite the compliment.

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice one,maybe Kripke read it and will use it for Season 4? Would definitely get my approval. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Summary:

Set after BUABS. Steve Wandell's friends want revenge. And they won't stop until Sam Winchester is dead.

 

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 Thanks to Bulletbabe for the amazing banner. Louy, you are the best!


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 12161
[Report This] Published: 18/06/08 Updated: 09/12/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 28/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Bruised, Bloody, Broken

Wow, I can't wait for the next chapter. This is causing a lot of anxiety. Poor Sammy, now he probably thinks, he deserves the torture, because Gordon told him that it's his fault. And Dean trying to find him, boy he sounds, like he is out of his mind with worry. Hope you will update soon. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review Vonnie! I'll try to write something by Monday or Tuesday. Lots of craziness around here...anyway, thanks again!

~Kayla

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye

Wow, you sure wrote another very intense chapter. this is awesome. I just feel horrible for poor Sam and now you leave it with another cliffie. Hope you will update soon, because you really torture me here. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

aww, sorry Vonnie. I never really mant to torture you...well, maybe just a little. I'm sure that Sam will be okay. He's just got to go through more, that's all ;0) Thanks for another great review!

~Kayla

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Say Goodbye

Wow, you sure wrote another very intense chapter. this is awesome. I just feel horrible for poor Sam and now you leave it with another cliffie. Hope you will update soon, because you really torture me here. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Strength, Regret, Guilt

Not to much of a cliff hanger? Well, I think this is quite a cliffie. Sam's life is still hanging in the balance and Dean is weaponless. You better update this one soon. Hope you don't have another writers block. I sure love this story. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

lol, sorry vonnie. I just had to do the cliffhanger....I just had too! lol. I'll try to update asap. I'm actually working on it now. Hopefully the next one doesn't disappoint! Thank you for keeping with this story and for all the wonderful reviews. They make my heart smile.

~Kayla

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/11/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Shoulda, Woulda, Coulda

I'm not mad, I'm way too happy you updated. And now I almost missed it. Glad I went back and found the update. No matter what, it was well worth waiting for. Awesome Bobby to the rescue and poor Sammy hanging on by a thread. Poor Dean, he just can't loose his baby brother. Hope your writers block is gone and you will update again soon. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Awww, thanks Vonnie! My writers block has slowly melted, I plan on writing another chapter either tonight or tomorrow sometime. Thank you so much for the review!

~Kayla

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/12/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 He's a Winchester

Thanks for finishing this, I loved the way Dean got Sam to open up and talk. Also how he helped him. Too bad it's over, but I sure liked your story. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with this story...even if the updates were few and far between! Thank you for the review Vonnie! :D

~Kayla

 
Snow by Winchester494 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary: A normal car trip turns deadly when a terrible snow storm strikes.
Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1678
[Report This] Published: 24/06/08 Updated: 30/06/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, this sounds like they are in a real mess. Dean in the car, not being able to get out to help Sam and Sam out of the car, not being able to get in to help Dean. Both of them hurt badly and in danger of freezing to death. Hope you will update soon, this sure is great. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Happy Birthday by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 126]
Summary:

Tension mounts between the brothers - is it just Dean's deal or is something more sinister at work...

Happy Birthday

SN.tv 2009 Best Ghost


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 54038
[Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, this is a pretty awesome chapter. all the bickering and arguing. Every attempt of apology ends up with more arguing. Sam doesn't seem to trust Dean any more and there is sure something wrong. Getting himself hurt and not telling Dean what he was up to, wow. Can't wait for the next update. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks Vonnie - and hugs right back to you! I love hugs! Even cyber ones. And yep, there is something wrong - they just haven't found out what. But they will....Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Already like this one and can't wait for the next chapter. I don't think it is slow, just has the proper set up. I like that in a story. Hope it will have a lot of limp Sam in it, but no matter what, I'm sure, it will be just as good as your others, maybe even better. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks Vonnie - great to have you along. Um - as for Limp Sam - well, poor Sam does get a little the worse for wear by the end - lol. Hope you enjoy the next chapter....Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Wow, great chapter, I liked old Jed talking about the Larsen's story. Also, Dean's story about his adventure made me giggle. I was almost shocked about Dean's reaction though, when he found out Sam was still researching the deal. I wonder, if he will ever learn, that he can't give his life for Sam and expect his brother to do any less in return. He has to accept that Sam loves him just as much as he loves him and give him the right to do the same things as he does, no matter how difficult it is. Really excellent story. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thanks for that, Vonnie.

Dean's reaction was rage driven by fear - after all, Sam drops dead if he screws in any way with the deal, and he can't let that happen. And I know exactly what you mean by Dean not seeing how much he means to Sam. I feel they both have this blind spot not only for each other, but for themselves. They both love each other, and would willingly give their lives for each other, but their own self-worth is lower than a snake's belly. Makes you just want to give them both either a kick up the bum or a big warm hug....or perhaps both...Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 11/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wow, what a ride. Sam getting himself in that fight and Dean having to knock him out, that was so not Sam. And Dean knows it too. Now he has to find out what's going on. I'm glad he called Bobby for help. Sam is going to be so pissed, when he wakes up after Dean drugged him. Hope you will update soon, this is really awesome. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Hi, Vonnie - no, that's definitely not Sam - he's having his strings pulled, that's for sure. Thanks so much for reading - I'm chuffed that you're enjoying it. And the ride's not over yet...Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/07/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Excellent chapter. At least Dean figured out, that he needs to stay away from Sam, which is tragic, but hopefully they will find the way out soon. Bobby is on the case too, which is great. Only now Sam is in trouble again, I guess, it has to be the guy from the bar. If Sam's rage comes back, he might just kill him, unless the guy gets the better of him before that. Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm hoping for an early update, but I don't want to rush you either. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Thanks Vonnie. Yes, Dean's got it sussed that it's his presence that is triggering the rage. He just needs to track down the source. And yep, it's the bruiser from the pub. Dean better hurry back....Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm so sorry about your friend's father. It is always difficult to loose a parent Hope you are okay now. Don't worry about the late update, I understand. It was worth waiting for. Really nicely written. I'm glad Dean got to save Sam. But Sam sure is in bad shape mentally. And now he is in the hands of 'ghost' Jedediah. So now I wonder what's going to happen next and if Dave is going to do anything about the 'high-profile' fugitives, now that he knows. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thanks Vonnie. I think it was doubly hard, not just because I knew Sharyn's dad, but because my grandfather's death was not all that long ago, and it brought back a bit of my grief, too.

As for the story - yes, Sam is in bad shape, and it's about to get worse - cue scary music any time now...*hugs back* - I love hugs!...Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Cliffette? Next Friday? Girl, you really think this will do? You are so evil, letting me hang here. Well, you got all the cards, so I guess I should be nice and beg. So here I go. Would you please consider updating early? I will be really nice and make you cookies and anything else you want. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Vonnie, just for you (and for my good friend Charmed1of2 over on SN.tv wanting to smack me upside the head...) here is another update. Now, you don't really think I'd let Sam stab his big brother, do you? Well, perhaps just a little bit....Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm not going to complain, I actually want to hug you and kiss you (in a sisterly way) because you have been so nice and put this chapter up early. So now I have to wait only a few days for the conclusion. Wait, did I just say conclusion? No way, you mean it is going to be over? Well, I guess, I can live with it, if you give me another story fast. More hurt, emo Sam, that sounds so awesome, with a big dose of protective Dean on top. I know you do them so well. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response: Ooh - I love hugs! *hugs back*... And yes, I did say conclusion - another one is just about done and dusted. But don't worry, there will be a new one next week. A bit of a switch - this time I have hurt Dean and angsty Sam. Thanks Vonnie - glad you're enjoying this one so much...Jules

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Great ending, I loved the talk between the boys. Loved the birthday party too. You did such a great job in describing the changes in Sam and the whole story was very descriptive. Can't wait to see what's up next. Hugs, Vonnie

Author's Response:

Thank you, Vonnie. So you liked their little so-not-a-chick-flick-moment? Got to love Dean - he vehemently declares no chick flick moments, but he has them all over the place when it concerns Sam. And he's the most tactile of the two of them - lol.

As for what's up next - hurt Dean and angsty Sam, actually. I'll have to start working on a humour one shortly to make up for all these angst stories - lol. Thanks so much for reading - I'm really glad you loved it.....Jules

 
Nocturne by calUK Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary:

Alone and broken, when a hunt goes wrong, what will he risk to save his brother again?

 

Story's better than the summary, I promise!

 


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 7685
[Report This] Published: 01/07/08 Updated: 29/07/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice writing, like your use of language. Very exciting first chapter, makes me want to read more. Hugs, Vonnie


Author's Response: good, great to know i actually make some sort of sense now and then! more coming next week, promise!

 
Summary:

"What would I do without you?"

"hmm. Crash and Burn"

Sam didn't think he would lose Jess. Nor did he think he was going to react this bad when he did,

She went too far soon, as far as Sam was concerned


Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 2935
[Report This] Published: 04/07/08 Updated: 11/07/08


Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 2: You're crashing but you're no wave

Great start and very well conveyed emotions. Really liked this chapter. I hope you will update soon. Hugs, Vonnie

 
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 4: Wrote me a letter

Wow, that's heartbreaking and shocking. You really got me with this one. Now I have to go on to the next chapter. Hugs, Vonnie