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Penname: vonnie836 [Contact]
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Real name: Yvonne Warner Status: Member Member Since: 03/12/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
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Reviews by vonnie836 Summary:
Sam is injured in a hunt. Will time heal this wound? Categories: Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 19090 [Report This] Published: 19/01/07 Updated: 26/01/07
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Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue This is really a great story. I enjoyed it from the beginning but I really have to say, the best part came, when they were at Pastor Jim's. Very dramatic. The way Dean desperately tried to make Sam remember and how Sam didn't want to remember, unknowingly taking his brother's life away. His illness was very dramatic also, great use of language and it made me feel like I was right there. Dean's feelings and later Sam's feelings were well expressed. Sam's visions and his need to be with Dean gave him his memory back and with this also gave Dean his live back. Loved your Pastor Jim and also the old doc, he was wonderful. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
The brothers finally confront the demon. But will one of them fall? Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 7947 [Report This] Published: 28/01/07 Updated: 30/01/07
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  Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Short, but still a beautiful story. I loved the angel watching over them, helping them defeat the demon and save Sam's life. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
Take one peeved off gypsy, one arrogant big brother and one chance remark, mix them together and what have you got? Well, if your name's Sam Winchester, you've got a whole pile of trouble. Sam becomes big brother to his big brother as he desperately tries to break a gypsy curse before he's driven completely insane. Be careful what you wish for... Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 15086 [Report This] Published: 01/02/07 Updated: 02/02/07
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Date: 21/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great story, really laughed at the image of a 4 year old Dean in a 27 year old body. Oh and the things poor Sam had to do for his brother, especially that bathroom thing, boy what a picture that left in my mind. Dean has no idea. Really a wonderful, funny story. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
Sam plays a deadly game of cat and mouse with a hunter who is determined to succeed where Gordon Walker failed - to kill Sam. With Dean held hostage, who can Sam trust as he desperately tries to stay one step ahead of the hunters and rescue his brother.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 14612 [Report This] Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 11/02/07
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Date: 21/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Awesome job with this one, really had me thinking about what was going on. I loved to read murder mysteries when I was younger. I'm glad this one turned into a not so murder mystery. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
A spate of disappearances leads the boys to a small community, where they find the locals less than helpful. What is out in the woods that the townspeople are hiding? And will it take one of the Winchester boys as its next victim? Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 23898 [Report This] Published: 24/02/07 Updated: 14/03/07
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Date: 19/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue What a neat story. It was so much like Dean to always come through for Sammy. His wishes were selfless, even though they weren't conscious ones. Poor Sam getting sick because he just couldn't give up on Dean was another typical feature. I loved your OC Aileen, she was just precious and also the Leipreachan, just had to love him. Really great writing. Author's Response: Thanks so much for that. I had a lot of fun doing this one. I'm so glad you enjoyed it so much....Jules Summary:
A fresh start, a new life - or is it? Evil stalks them still, and all is not what it seems. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58838 [Report This] Published: 31/03/07 Updated: 23/04/07
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Date: 24/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was a great story, I loved the characters, they were all very well written and had depth. Loved the intensity of the visions and the flow of the story. You really make it very interesting and I just want to continue reading, neglecting other things I need to do (well, that's not so good). Anyway, I liked the ending. I first seemed like a little bit of a let down, but I think it was very fitting and it allowed for an end to the dream, when everyone died, without actually killing them. And made me think, that maybe this could have been the future after all, not just a random dream. So I really got to appreciate and even love the ending. Hugs, Vonnie Thank you, Vonnie. I was so worried as the story progressed, that the dream idea wouldn't work any more. But I had to keep going and just trust that I wouldn't lose too many readers over it. As for it possibly being a future event...well, have you checked out the sequel? It's called In Dreams I Walk With You - think you might be pleasantly surprised...(well, I hope so). Thank you so much....Jules Summary:
Who do you call when a simple salt and burn gets out of hand. The brothers get help from an unexpected source when they find they are dealing with multiple spirits in a haunted factory.
Tied with Supernaturaldh's Leaning On A Shovel, Hoping For A Hole Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 62717 [Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 08/06/07
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great story, I loved the suspense and the fight scenes. Great interaction between the characters and Macy was very real. I loved the guessing game about who Macy liked better, it was really tough to tell. The end was a total surprise and I loved because of it. Hugs, Vonnie Thanks Vonnie - chuffed that you loved it so much. I have to say, I really had a great time writing this one. I love a good old-fashioned ghost story - reading and writing them. Oh, you liked the fight scenes? Thank you - that was my first fight scene, I think. I went back and watched the Sam/Shapeshifter!Dean fight in Skin so many times just to get their moves right, I think I wore a hole in the DVD - LOL...Jules Summary:
It helped. It made the days easier to get through. But when Dean get’s hurt because of Sam’s secret, Sam finally has to face the repercussions. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 18619 [Report This] Published: 06/05/07 Updated: 14/05/07
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Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 I love your story. Drugs are so distructive, they don't just change the life of the addict but also of his friends and family. You did an awesome job describing the impact on Sam and Dean. I love how they always put the other one first, which is what in the end saves Sam! Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
The boys win a holiday at a luxury resort - but is it really the holiday of a lifetime, or the stuff of nightmares? Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 55218 [Report This] Published: 09/07/07 Updated: 25/08/07
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Date: 25/06/08 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue Another one of your really great stories. I loved drunk/high Sam acting out of character, lots of fun there. Would have never thought the trickster was behind it. The fight scenes were awesome and nicely detailed. Brotherly banter/interaction very enjoyable, over all, a very well written story, but by now I don't expect anything else from you. Hugs, Vonnie Awww, now you're making me blush! Seriously, thank you so much. It gives me a thrill to know how much you are enjoying my work. I had a lot of fun with the Drunk!Sam scene, seeing just how loopy I could make him without going right over the top. The fabric softener teddy bears (purple ones) just came to me at the last minute, so I wove it in to give Dean one more opportunity to give himself a facepalm - lol.....Jules Summary: A different take on the same old hunt.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4340 [Report This] Published: 01/08/07 Updated: 01/08/07
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Date: 17/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Different but in a good way, liked this one a lot. Anything that scares Dean into running away got to be really scary. Hats off to green lights and midgets. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
Dean always thought of himself as ‘slightly stupid’; just smart enough to get the job done, just dumb enough to have to work at it. Sam, on the other hand, well he was the smart brother, no if, and, or but, about it.
A hunt for a Chupacabra goes bad.
Last chapter posted.
supernaturaldh Categories: General, AU, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 40739 [Report This] Published: 01/10/07 Updated: 29/10/07
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Date: 19/03/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Awesome story! Love Tom and his resemblance to John Winchester. He sure got the two brothers figured out fast. I liked how Dean took to him pretty much right away and how Sam in the end did also. You always keep me going with your fics. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
Never dare your younger brother to wear a costume. Maybe someone should have told that to Dean... UnGen Halloween challenge! Categories: UnGen Challenges, General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1777 [Report This] Published: 30/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07
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Date: 01/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Dare Nice one, funny and exiting at the the same time. Loved the 'Deanie', I can see Dean being irritated with that. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
This is a sequel story to "Slightly Stupid". Winner Sensue Award - Round 11. The hunters life is a hard one. The urge to save innocents outweighing their own needs. Sam gets sick, Dean gets hurt, and someone needs to come to their rescue.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 27012 [Report This] Published: 07/11/07 Updated: 17/12/07
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Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Awesome story, surprise ending with the old bag being the one summoning the black dog. Loved the interaction. I am a fan of concerned, fatherly Bobby and your Tom is an awesome character. Really got to love him. Hugs, Vonnie Summary: Horror in a child's wonderland. Kicking off the holiday season right with John, Dean, and Little Sam.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2960 [Report This] Published: 26/11/07 Updated: 27/02/08
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Date: 16/12/10 Title: Chapter 1: Cold As Ice Loved the view of the demon snowman. Very chilling take on Frosty the children eating Snowman. And it also was a great hurt/comfort story. Really loved it. Hugs, Vonnie
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 16/12/10 Title: Chapter 2: Back In Black Now I don't know which chapter I enjoyed more? Certainly the second one didn't stand behind the first one. Loved how the demon snowman thought he was so smart, but the Winchesters still found him. And having Sam turn on him and getting stuck with his backside, that was too funny. I can just hear Dean teasing him on that for weeks on end. Loved the ending. Maybe you should give them a job in Florida that makes Sam wish for the snow again? No matter what, it was definitely awesome. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
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Date: 19/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue This story was absolutely awesome. You captured the essence of the Winchesters here. Your details of the mannerisms, facial expressions and body language made me feel like I could see them in front of me. The whole story was so detailed, without once getting boring. I loved Kayla, she is a wonderful character. I missed some of the clues but did pick up on the curly hair, the hazel eyes and the size thing. Just really drew me in and didn't let go until the very end. Awesome story. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
A horrifying murder throws the Winchesters into the middle of a hunt where the spirits are restless, the victims are dying, and the vengeance is brewing. Now they just have to make it out alive.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 20075 [Report This] Published: 09/03/08 Updated: 13/07/08
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Date: 14/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Finales Infelices Really great story. It has a nice flow to it, very interesting premises and the ending isn't really happy. I like it. Wonderful description of the action scenes. It sounded so clear, I knew exactly what was going on. The mystery was great too and kept me guessing for the longest time, trying to put things together. Hugs, Vonnie Thank you! That is the biggest challenge I hold for myself, gettin gthe boy's exactly right. I'm also glad you were scratching your head. Haha I even confused myself this time. Thanks again! Summary: A drunken Sam gets himself into a little trouble in a bar. Good thing big brother's never very far away. Winchesters and vampires don't mix well.
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3164 [Report This] Published: 17/03/08 Updated: 17/03/08
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Date: 17/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 Really good story, loved the fun of drunk Sam and not very happy Dean. The two vampires were also nicely written and I could picture them. Nice horror comedy. Made me laugh. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
Someone from the past comes back for the Winchester brothers, and this time he has a little help. Sequel to Unhinged.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 38546 [Report This] Published: 19/03/08 Updated: 28/07/08
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Date: 25/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Awesome chapter, really kept me going. So Dean finally got Sam back and both Gordon and Robby are dead. this is really great. Now Sam just has to heal. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hugs, Vonnie
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Date: 19/07/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Great job with this one, really like this chapter. The way the boys try to protect one another is so much them. Can't wait for the next chapter to find out how Sam's attempt to get away turns out. Hugs, Vonnie Thanks Vonnie836! I'm really glad you liked this chapter and all I'll say about the next chapter is that it's not gonna be good for our Sammy... Update coming on Monday night!
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 22/07/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Let it be Friday, let it be Friday, let it be Friday, let it be Friday - darn, it's not helping. Okay, so I really liked this chapter and I know you won't kill Sam, at least I think you won't, or will you? Let it be Friday. Man, please make Friday come fast. Hugs, Vonnie
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Date: 28/07/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 I loved this ending. Dean going to speak with Adam and giving him the news after the way Sam has been talking too him. This was just great. Wonderful story, very well written. It has a nice flow to it. And got hurt Sam in it, couldn't get better than that. Hugs, Vonnie Summary:
A broken car, and a broken Sam....Can Dean get to Sam in time? Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3136 [Report This] Published: 26/03/08 Updated: 26/03/08
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Date: 15/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great little story, I really liked the concern Dean had for Sam, immediately telling him, he there are more important things than his baby. Loved the trust he had in Rachel. I'm glad you weren't on the bridge that day. It had to be a major shock for you. You used it in a constructive way by writing this. Hugs, Vonnie Thanks for the awesome review. When the bridge collapsed, it was a total shock. I was glued to the television for the next two days straight, waiting for more news over it. Anyway. Thanks for dropping a few kind words! ~Kayla Summary:
There are places in the world where people don't go. Places too far away to care about. Forests too deep and dark to venture into. Evils that the avrage human does not know or see. Secrets too scary to be told. If you venture into these deep forests you might just be unlucky enough to find the thing that scares you the most. Take a walk with the Wincesters into this particular forest and see what you find. The story takes place sometime during season three. No spoilers for specific episodes, but a little for the myth arc of season 3. Categories: Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: O' Horrible Past Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 96274 [Report This] Published: 09/04/08 Updated: 07/09/08
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 22/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Wow, this is such an intense story, very well written. It has a great flow to it and the descriptions are awesome. I absolutely adore limp Sam, but like him strong at the same time and you pull this of so great. Protective/worried Dean comes across just as well. I also really like Arianna. Couldn't hardly stop reading and I sure hope you will update this soon. Hugs, Vonnie Thank you for the huge compliment Vonnie :D Update shoud be soon. I'm hoping to get it in sometime next week and I made the chap extra long:) Just have to finish the re-re-re-editing lol :D Thanks for the review... really appreciate it.
Reviewer: vonnie836 Signed
Date: 25/07/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Wow, great chapter, so Cornelius has Arianna now. And he can't read Sam's mind anymore. Wonder what his plans are now. I have the feeling he is going to get Dean soon. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hugs, Vonnie The plot is thickening :D Next chapter should be up soon. I'm at 4000 words now sooo not long before I post. Gald to hear you're enjoying :D |
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