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Real name: Andrea / Andi Status: Member Member Since: 28/11/07 Website: Beta-reader: No
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Reviews by lillelouis Summary:
Sam was also sounding a little congested--a squeaky sound coming from his little nostrils every time he breathed out. God, it was adorable. They were so screwed. Takes place in Season 3. Complete!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 43276 [Report This] Published: 06/04/08 Updated: 24/10/11
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 Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Innocence Lost I'm prrrrrrrretty sure this was where I stopped last time. Better read a little more just to be sure though :P
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 SQiiii! I've MISSED Missouri!
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Yep I definitely need a smoke before I continue. I swear I feel tense and jumpy just reading this. Awesome though! Back in a jif... oh noes! sorry. lol uh...might wanna keep them close if you're already tense.
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 AW well that last moment right there just made it all worth it :) It was very sweet.... And very vivid. Cudos!
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Oh no :(
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Road Trip OH COME ON!!!!! Seriously!!? *waits a second for response. Then...* You're mean! Author's Response: lol I had to end the chapter SOMEWHERE. No worries;) The next one won't be as long coming. Promise. And it doesn't have such a cliffy either. Thank you SO much for sticking with it and reviewing. *hugs*
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Date: 02/04/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Ooooh.... Now *peers sternly at you over glasses* since it's been so long, I feel I have to ask: John appeared to 'Sammy' at some point, yes? The same willing spirit now needed to complete the spell - the same spirit that is just sitting there, waiting to be used??? Yes?! I certainly hope you don't intend to keep us waiting this long for another chappy? I've monopolized on tardyness, ya know? I'm the only one who gets to cross their own deadlines.... Shame on you... Author's Response: *laughs* Yes. Sammy has seen/mentioned him a few times. I hope it doesn't take me so long to get this next chapter out either. Only one more and an epi! Thanks so much for commenting! Summary: Knowing his brother is suffering is a fate worse than death...
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 19388 [Report This] Published: 09/04/08 Updated: 07/06/08
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Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 “I find that delightful, like calling Hitler ‘little moustache’... Love it. Love your story and I think it's great that you have time to juggle a baby and this great story. Great job so far. Sorry I haven't reviewed at the end of each chapter, but Ohmygodareyoufreakingkiddingme! this story is encaptivating as hell... Author's Response: Oh thank you so much and welcome to the story - very happy to have you along for the ride, it's been a bumpy one so far. lol Liz x
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Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 HE KILLS HIMSELF!!!??? Holy crap! Well on the other hand the bastard deserved it for being a jerk! I'm getting too caught up? Sorry, but your writing is wildly mesmorizing. I can't stop reading... Definately not at all bothered by the mini-chappies. Not f it means getting the writing quicker :D Author's Response: : ) Good guess! I got a few PMs after this chapter with people asking if it was Ben or the Doc who ate the bullet. Loving your reviews, thank you for taking the time out to leave them. Liz x
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Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Got the "repeat" in the beginning. It's nice to use those little liguistical twists to frame the story and give it a more circular feel. And now you mention it, yeah, you must have an addiction or something. I don't think I have ever counted that many cliffies in one story, but it's alright 'cause the rest of the story is as mesmorizing as a lavalamp... (That's a compliment in case you are a ll-hater :?) Author's Response: : ) Awww lavalamps rule! Cheers hun, Liz x
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Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 HAHAAAAAAAAA! I KNEW IT! He killed himself! Eeeexellent... His character was never strong enough to last. Doc was the one I was referring too before by the way. Remember? Doc? With gun? Gunshot? Yes? Anyway... Stupid question, don't laugh: What's MILF? Author's Response: MILF is a touch naughty, it stands for Mom I'd Like to F***. See naughty and very Dean (at least I think so). Liz x
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Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Oh. My. God! Sorry for pulling a 'Janice', but I felt it was appropriate. I LOVED! the reversed psychology! Sam thinking that Dean had suddenly turned against him was amazing and so intense. And the hug... Aaaawwww... Sorry for the 'Aawww' too, but again; felt it was appropriate. Great work, but alas no more chapters to read... Please hurry... Author's Response: Very happy that you liked the reversed psychology. This chapter was a worry beacause of it and because of the lighter tone - as the earlier chapters had been nothing but angst. Liz x
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Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
Author's Response: That's great news. I'm glad to hear the scale of what's happening to the boys is reaching the readers of this story. Thanks once again for being such an awesome reviewer. You've made my day. Liz x PS: RL has got in the way and I'm going on holiday so there's going to be a slight delay with the next chapter. I really do want to take my laptop on holiday but the hubby would play hell with me. I'll get back to this asap, there's a lot to come for the boys and I don't want to leave you hanging any longer than necessary.
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Date: 07/06/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Damn you are evil woman! Evil I say!
But very good chapter... Guess you couldn't quit the cliffies huh? Well why bother...? It works wonders for the story.... makes us crave more and more :D Good writing. Great job. :D
Summary:
Following the trail south, Dean and Sam discover the demon they're tracking wants them as much as they want it. Other hunters might want the brothers even more.....
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This continues where Gale Warnings left off. Possible spoilers for Seasons 1 & 2, after WIAWSB it's AU Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Elements Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 46334 [Report This] Published: 20/04/08 Updated: 06/01/09
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Date: 14/12/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Oooooh nooooo.... You can't leave them like that! Hurry with another update! Author's Response: Thanks!
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Date: 12/01/09 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Very nice story. Sorry I haven't reviewed much, but there's an explanation for that. I have you on my favorite list so every time your story was updated I just clicked on the link without logging on :) I loved this story. It felt a little more final than the other ones in the series, but I hope I'm wrong. I'd love to see another one of these. After the first one I was hooked! Great job! Keep it up :) Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I'm happy that people read and I'm flattered to be on favorite lists. I don't have any plans either way, end the series or not, but I'm thinking it's going to be not ending...lol And there'll at least be a number 4. Thanks again and I'm sooooo glad you enjoy the stories. Laura Summary: Another of my Ben Braeden Winchester stories. The Winchesters are in the wilds trying to figure out what it is they are hunting.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 54291 [Report This] Published: 24/04/08 Updated: 13/06/08
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Date: 27/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great chapter... Love the moments of father-son-bonding. Love how youre are completely in tuned to how an eleven year old boy should think and act. It's amazing to actually see the developement of the characters in the story. How they evolve by themselves and with each other. Great job... Keep it up. Author's Response: Thank you so much. It's not hard to be in tuned with an eleven year old, I deal with a twelve year old daily. They can be a challenge as they try to discover the adult inside them and then the next minute they're curled up next to you with a blanket in their hand that they've owned since infancy. I find myself completely exhausted on occassions just trying to fiugre out which mood he's in at a particular moment. It's fun and I love it. I think Dean loves it too. I kind of see it like Dean almost has a grandparent's view because he's been there done that. He gets to step back a bit and not let the little moments get to him. He sees that the war is much more important than the skirmishes. Anyway, more informtion than you asked for. Thanks for the great comments and for reading. I really appreciate it.
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 One word describes it all: AWSOME!
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Date: 05/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Oh dear God that was a good chapter. I love the intense emotions between Dean and Sam. I love how many different emotional facetts you use to actually describe the situation instead of simply telling what is happening. The emotions almost do the story telling by them selves... Very well written... BRAVO!!! Author's Response: Thank you. What more can I say after reading your review? I'm so glad that the emotions work. After reading it as often as I do I loose the initial feel of the emotions and then begin to worry that I've done something wrong. Thanks again. I am honored by your review.
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Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Amazing chapter. I love that they are so long and delicious... And what a cliffie... can't wait for the next chap. Great job... aplause aplause... Author's Response: Thank you. Length was not intentional in this story but it does seem to be writing itself to death. I prefer longer chapters myself so I tend to write them. Next chapter will be up as soon as my Beta is done putting me in my place. Thank you very much.
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Date: 12/05/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Wow!!! Great story... I just LOVE your writing. It's amazingly riviting. To quote a grat song "I'm spellbound..." The only thing that even begins to come anywhere near a complaint is the wait for more exiting chapters... Hurry please... *bobbing up and down in my chair impatiently* The waiting for more delectable goodies to read is almost unbearable :D Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you like it. I'm working on the next chapter so, patience please, and don't fall out of your chair.
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Date: 14/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Thank you for writing your stories. I love them all... especially those featuring Ben... I love how calm and rounded this story ends. Birngs a sense of closure and at the same time i don't get that depressed feeling like with other stories. I heard somewhere once that there are no such things as happy endings, just stories that aren't finished yet. I think it applies very well to your Ben Braeden stories. Amazing story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us :D :D :D Author's Response: I like that saying. Even when things don't end up all lollipops and candycanes you should be able to leave a story with a sense of satisfaction. I'm honored that you feel I manage to do that with my stories. Thanks fo reading and for the review. You've made me feel great! Summary:
Story Number Two in the 'Xander Winchester Verse' Now that the big secret is out, how will the brothers handle it? Categories: Crossovers, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Alexander Winchester Verse Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 27848 [Report This] Published: 01/05/08 Updated: 18/11/09
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Date: 27/01/10 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 Guy Talk Great to see an update :) Nice chapt, but I missed having a little clarity as to why the vampires in Sunnydale all go 'poof'? That would'a been nice, but otherwise awesome return. Glad to see the hiatus has ended :D Summary: Continuation of ‘When All Other Lights Go Out’. Dean and Sam learn to let go.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Lights Out Series Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4153 [Report This] Published: 30/05/08 Updated: 31/05/08
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Date: 22/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I really love the mix of somber moments and happy moments :) It's amazing how well they fit together. I'm still listening to the Crash soundtrack after I read your notes in the first story. I gotta say, I'm not usually into Wingfics, but a few just get to me. This is one of them. Great work. Keep it up.
Andi. Summary:
Dean's been to Hell and back, now it's time to get Sam back too...
Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: A War with No Front Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3113 [Report This] Published: 01/06/08 Updated: 01/06/08
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Date: 31/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I liked it. It was short. Simple. Well written. And all those emotions - both expressed and suppressed - we love to read were there. It was a bit confusing, like a blurry dream, but you made it work. I like the way it was written because it created an image without being overly descriptive (like I tend to be :*) *blushes and hides*). Very nice. Hugs, Andi :D Author's Response: Awww...don't hide. Thanks so much for your comments, I appreciated them so much. Laura |
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