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Penname: lillelouis [Contact]
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Real name: Andrea / Andi Status: Member Member Since: 28/11/07 Website: Beta-reader: No
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Reviews by lillelouis Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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 Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37 SO RIGHT about this scene needing to be there.... That was amazing... and i get why the scene should have its own chapter. It deserves it.... Great job bambi :D :D :D
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 Oh. My. GOD!... I'm crying... That was beautiful Bambi...
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Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 Oh nooo... Update QUICK!!!! Awsome chapter :D:D:D:D
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Date: 05/12/08 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51 Oh. Dear. GOD! It should come with a warning. "IMPORTANT: REMEMBER PAPER BAG OR EMERGENCY BRAETHING DEVICE!!!!" I went completely breathless as I read the chapter.
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Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 Brilliant twist with Shannon's son!!! Horrifying, but brilliant! Brilliant brilliant brilliant!!!! Loved this chapter!!!
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Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 It was glorious and he deserved every ounce of pain. But I think I would have loved it even more had we actually experienced Dominics pain. Read his thoughts of (hopefully) fear as his dead daughter rematerialized in front of him and tortured him to death. His insight wouldt have been lovely, but that's just 'cause I really hate the guy. Is it bad when you start actually hating ficional characters? Great chapter! Five stars!!!
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50 Arh! Why'd have to go and do that!!! It's cruel!! You know that don't you! How can you just spring that on us and leave us??? Oh but just a tiny giggle: I love Mary's fierce protective feelings! Can't WAIT to see that fight :P I had to pause my progress with this story for SO long that I almost forgot what the first fifteen chapters were about and then I had to re-read them, but that didn't help, because then I finished reading those and I HAD to keep reading the new chapters because they were really good and now I'm done........ *pouting* So you see? You HAVE to keep adding new chapters otherwise I'll go even MORE insane than I already am with all the torturous waiting!!! PLEASE HURRY!!! My mental health depends on it! Great new arc so far:D Love it!
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Date: 21/07/09 Title: Chapter 60: Chapter 60 Nice! Hitting 60 chapters exactly :) But ohh nooo... whatever shall I do now?! It's like the end of an era!!! No more Darkness!!! All our freetime will be spent reminiscing the gloomy days we spent reading this story. It's definitely something that'll stick with me the rest of my life. Not just because of the length, but the magnatude and power that sprung from the pages as well. Wonderful story and so sad to see it end, but I wonder... Will there be a sequel? :P
Summary: After agreeing to split up for separate hunts, Dean finds himself all tied up and not sure how he got there. Post Season 2 so spoilers to that point.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 24184 [Report This] Published: 17/01/08 Updated: 24/01/08
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Date: 28/03/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I HATE Dr. Elliot. He is fun to hate, isn't he? I really enjoyed writing him Thanks for reading and reviewing. Kim Summary:
This story takes place immediately after my story "To The Rescue" and incorporates "Sword and Shield." Dean and Sam discover why Mary apologized to Sam during the Episode "Home." Katric, my Beta! You are the best and when everyone notices the definite improvement to my writing, it's all due to you. Banner by bulletbabe - more thanks than I can express!
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 107827 [Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 24/03/08
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Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Great story... I loved the calm and happy ending, it felt very open and heartwarming... Felt a little dissapointed that the "Clash of the Ttans" only lasted a small part of this chapter. I would have liked to experience the roar of the mighty Sam...! But as i said... You got the stuff:D Great story! Author's Response: Thank you so much. The clash is such a difficult thing to write especially when you are manipulating so many characters at one time. I tried, I really did. Personally I want Sam to not go darkside so in my opinion his confrontations have to be more intellectual and emotional. I'm glad the ending worked. I picutred that ending one day while I was making spaghetti. I could see clear as day Dean and Ben in the kitchen and Sam watching. I was listening to 'Fall Out Boy' and it all just fit. So everything was building toward that ending. Thank you so much for your compliments. They mean so much to me. I really appreciate the time it takes to read a story and write a review. Thank You! Summary:
A Winchester is laid to rest. Warning, character death is implied. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 790 [Report This] Published: 16/02/08 Updated: 17/02/08
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Date: 14/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 THIS is exactly what makes it all worth while!!! This story. One of many great, but unfortunately hidden ones. The ones that aren't "just" (and i use the term losely) another fan-fic. The ones that aren't just about it being how cool and georgious the guys are even though I'm a fan of those too. No, stories like this are about feelings. They feel real. Real heart ache. And no offence meant, but your own feelings shine through. They shine through in the words where you take the time to find and descirbe the beauty around us (in this case, the before mentioned georgious Winchester boys :) ) Wonderful in its sadness and beaty. Great job. Summary:
Amazing Banner by the amazing Rae666 Sam and Dean agree to help an old friend of their father's stop whatever is killing and mutilating hikers in a Northwest Wilderness Area. As evil makes itself known, the brothers go from hunters to prey. Lots of hurt and all the good stuff. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 49239 [Report This] Published: 03/03/08 Updated: 20/06/08
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Date: 12/06/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Oh that is just gross! Fungi???!!! Seriously???!! Oh god I hate parasits... I've got goosebumps... And the description of the wriggling... Gahh...! I love your story by the way :D Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sorry about the fungus, it kind of happened and I've been giving myself nightmares with it. :D Is it bad when you give yourself nightmares?
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Date: 12/06/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 “Sure. Do you want me to set up the tent?” Maybe that’s not a good idea. I’d rather keep him by the fire with me. “It’d rather stay out here by the fire.” “Stop that.” “Stop what?” “Nothing.” Dean smiled and pulled the coffee out of the fire.
My favorite part of your story. I love the little snibbets where the comical relief shines through... LOVE IT!!! Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I like a little humor to help get them through the rough patches! It keeps me smiling while I'm torturing the poor things.
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Date: 12/06/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I hate you a little bit... How can you leave them like that??! It's completely inhumane and it tortures the readers :D Am I gettig too caught up? Probably, but this is just a great story and I can't wait for the next chapters... And it seriously feels like that freakyfungus is on me. I feel like ants are marching over my skin- Oh my god the fungus scenes are killing me! I suspected that the fungi-thing was just turning Sam not actually killing him... Oh so gross... “Even if I have to fight every freaking orc on the planet. And you know that gets better every time I say it. Orcs. How the hell did orcs end up here?” - One of my many favorite lines... I just love this story so much... Such a great job :D Please hurry woth the next chapter :D :D :D Author's Response: Thank you so much! The fungus scenes give me the oogies too, belive it or not. I'm so happy with the way this tory is turning out. I hope to have an update soon, maybe even later today. I feel bad about the slow updates on the last two chapters--but I'm slamed against a deadline for a novel and madly editing and my editor growls when I say "Oh, I was working on Welcome..." But it's in the mail onTuesday! Woo Hoo
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Date: 12/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Great story... I backpedaled because I felt a little bad about not reviweing every chapter... And since I have now read chap. 10 I just have to post my speculations as to how Sam was able to beat the Orc-fungus the first time?? Oh goodnes this story gives me the heebiejeebies... Only the really good ones do that. :D Author's Response: Thank you so much! I understand about not reviewing every chapter, I take it as a compliment that you were just devouring the story! How did Sam beat the fungus? Hmmm. I'll update very soon! Promise
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Date: 21/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 “I’m Aragorn.” I just LOVE the way you think :D “We’re waiting. They removed the…the…” “Orc fungus?” Dean offered, dropping into the chair beside the bed. SERIOUSLY! This is just one great big collection of great lines. Aaaahhh just a great story... Great writing :) great snark. Wonderful job with the "male bonding moments"... In short: This was just a really wonderful read, a great thrill and a great story... Thank you very much for sharing :D Author's Response: Thank you so much! Dean and Sam were very helpful with the lines. I'm so happy with the way this story turned out. It just grew organically and I couldn't be happier with the result! Thank you again! Summary:
An easy hunt in Arkansas goes bad. With Sam injured and totally dependent on him, Dean fights not only to help his brother, but to overcome his own personal demons as well. Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 189161 [Report This] Published: 03/03/08 Updated: 11/08/08
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Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Jenni creeps me out...
........But great story :D Author's Response: Hmm...first time I've heard that one. LOL. Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for the review!
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Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 I think I figured out why Jenni buggs me... Because she is such a well rounded figure I get a much more detailed image of her as a person. But I think she gives me the heebiejeebies because she seemes way too relaxed with the entire previous situation. Haven't quite fihured her out yet. I like her cooking sequences though. You sound like you like to cook? So far great story. And so many wonderful chapters. Author's Response: Jenni does seem very well rounded doesn't she - I think, honestly she's just really good at suppressing how she really feels. There's a reason for that - I'm glad you've enjoyed the cooking sequences, I've enjoyed doing them - and yes I do enjoy cooking, which is what inspired those sequences. Thanks for the review!
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Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Nice! Very nice chapter :D Summary:
Xander finds out he's a Winchester--- will the brother accept him? Categories: Crossovers, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Alexander Winchester Verse Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26224 [Report This] Published: 04/03/08 Updated: 20/04/08
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Date: 18/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Cursed On The Hellmouth That was funny about Xander being cursed. It made me remember a Buffy epi where I think Willow curses herself or something and she says a line about Xander that he's like a demon magnet.... Just remembered that... Weird actually :D But good story so far... Not a whole lot of SN though :( Author's Response: It gets more supernaturally in the next chapter :) Summary:
It was as if that other life had never exsisted; Dean had woken up in the morning to find himself in a room he didn't recognize, and the sounds of children's footsteps in the hallway. Bewildered, Dean had gotten up and opened the door to see two little girls running from two boys. "Daddy!" one cried, the smaller of the girls. Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1138 [Report This] Published: 19/03/08 Updated: 19/03/08
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Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Silent Lucidity awsome story...! really, you should think about doing a longer version or an AU maybe?
Author's Response: Thanks. :] Maybe I'll give it a shot. Summary:
Sam was also sounding a little congested--a squeaky sound coming from his little nostrils every time he breathed out. God, it was adorable. They were so screwed. Takes place in Season 3. Complete!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 43276 [Report This] Published: 06/04/08 Updated: 24/10/11
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "Small, Dean. I feel very, very small." Ahh :) A scene from something I am almost 100 percent certain is a movie popped into my brain seemingly out of nowhere: "YOU MAKE ME FEEL THIS BIG!" *marks an inch between thumb and index* That was a lovely movie... Wonder what it was called?
As your story, which I started SO long ago and completely forgot - much like the movie. Then (imagine my surprise if you can) I got a notis on my e-mail account saying one of my favorite stories had been updated. I squeed, I really did! :D And now I'm re-reading the whole thing to give you a little more time to update before I run out of chapters. Did I mention my impatience and undying love for this story? God how can one little boy break so many hearts...*sighs* Oh yeah, and: HolySnugglesFuck is going in my secret vocabulary :P oh yes, and 'holy shii' :D Author's Response: Hee! Sorry it's taking SO long. I did post TWO more chapters here, though. I don't know what movie you're talking about, but if you remember let me know! I'm intrigued. Soo glad you're enjoying it and I really am sorry it's taking so long to finish. Thank you!
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Man in the Mirror Lovely... So little, yet so sarcastic. That's what I love about it I guess. It's practically dripping with sarcasm.
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: It ain't easy being a kid Ah an image of little Sammy feet launching at his brother's private parts under the table is still getting to me :) “What if I promise not to put a knife in the toaster?” That too :D Oh and what or possibly 'who' is Mr. Yuck? Do you think they make t-shirts with the words: 'Grandma's love bug' for adults? Now we get a little more serious - don't judge me by my poor memory. It's been awhile since I started this story and I can't possbily be expected to remember everything I've ever read :) But still. Now you get very serious. You have an uncanning ability to shift effrotlessly between humor, angst and down right horror (referring to Sammy's legs going swish, swish, swish under the kitchen table, cause dude, that freaked me out!) Author's Response: Aah, Mr. Yuck. lol Memooories. I suggest googling it for the best explanation. It's also spelled, Mr. YUK. Ooh, I bet you could find an adult t-shirt that says that...or have one made. LOL Thank you! And sorry for freaking you out!
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Date: 10/02/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four: The boy inside the child Ooooooooh I think I'm getting to the part where I stopped reading last time :O The tension is risiiiiing... Holy shii....! |
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