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Penname: lillelouis [Contact]
Real name: Andrea / Andi
Status: Member
Member Since: 28/11/07
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I OWN NOTHING. That honor belongs to Kripke... Bugger!!

Aince I'm hardly ever writing anymore (the once, so plentiful well has dried out it seems) I've decided to post something fun in my bio instead. Not that anyone ever reads this sh***t.

 

  

You know you live in 2008 when...

1.) You accidentally enter your password on a microwave.

2.) You haven't played solitaire with real cards for years

3.) The reason for not staying in touch with your friends is they don't have a screenname or my space

4.) You'd rather look all over the house for the remote instead of just pushing the buttons on the TV

6.) Your boss doesn't even have the ability to do your job.

7.) As you read this list you keep nodding and smiling.

8.) As you read this list you think about sending it to all your friends.

9.) And you were too busy to notice number 5.

10.) You scrolled back up to see if there was a number 5.

11.) Now you are laughing at yourself stupidly.

12.) Put this in your profile if you fell for that, and you know you did.

 

PS: I'm not creative enough to come up with this shit on my own. I stole it from another profile and you're welcome to do the same ;)

 

92 percent of American teens would die if Abecrombe and Fitch told them it wasn't cool to breathe. If your one of the 8 percent that would be laughing your asses off as you watch the others copy this to your profile. I'm not a teenager any longer, but I still endorse this.

Recent studies show that 92 percent of teenagers have moved on to rap. If you're part of the 8 percent that hasn't, put this in your profile. I'm not a teenager any longer, but I still endorse this.

98 percent of teenagers do or have tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2 percent who haven't, copy & paste this into your profile. I'm not a teenager any longer, but I still endorse this. (sorta')

65 percent of Teenagers spend more time watching TV- rather than reading. If you are part of the 35 percent who read more than watch TV, then cut and paste this to your profile. I'm not a teenager any longer, but I still endorse this.

93 percent of American teens would have a severe emotional breakdown if someone called them a freak. If you're a part of the 7 percent who would ask the person, "What was your first clue?", copy this into your profile and add your name to the list: Sunlit Goddess of the C.O.C.A., Moonlit Goddess of the C.O.C.A., Evil Genius of the COCA, Invader Miley Phantom, dAnnYsGiRl777, BloodySalvation, Lady Lost-A-Lot, bellabookworm9, Bella Masen Cullen, Vampire Scooby, blissfulmememories, Vampire Apple, Vampireyaoi, Queen-Skizophrenya, Metropolis Kid, lillelouis (I'm not a teenager any longer, but I still endorse this.)

 

....Again, totally random and also: Not mine :) One last one:

If you think Goldilocks should be arrested for breaking and entering and the bears should have reported her, copy this into your profile.

 

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Oh and I saw something funny on facebook the other day that I feel a need to share with you. Someone posted this: "I'd rather die peacefully in my sleep, like my grandfather. Not screaming, like his fellow passengers." And I'm ashamed to say I giggled. I really did.

:D Ok, now I'm done.


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Gym Class Hell by Irishgirl Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 47]
Summary: What happens when gym class turns into Sam's worst nightmare? Will he tell his family or continue to suffer?

Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 15890
[Report This] Published: 02/09/07 Updated: 15/10/07


Reviewer: lillelouis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/01/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

 - Some of the most hated people in prisons are cops and child molesters, but at the prison where Cornelius Becker ended up there was a man who hated gym teachers more than anything. That man wound up being Coach Becker’s cellmate. -

THAT was brilliant!

That little end right there. So precise and to the point. So wonderful in it's stinging irony and one in a million chance. That, right there made the story soooooo funny ( and I needed it after the turmoil you subjected Sammy to )

Now a confession. I have read this story before. Twice actually , and I had yet to review. I'm a shameful lurker *blushes and hides* But I thought that you should hear some praise after I read the story for the THIRD time. If something is so good that you keep re-reading it, it deserves praise :D

Wonderful job with this!!!!!

Cheers, Andi :D



Author's Response: Wow, you've read it three times already?  I'm so honored.  Thank you so much for your wonderful review.  I'm so glad you enjoyed the story!

 
An Eye for an Eye by bulletbabe Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Finding themselves caught up in the middle of a long standing feud, Sam and Dean find it hard to tell just who the bad guys are.

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 28146
[Report This] Published: 07/09/07 Updated: 07/05/08


Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Of pickles and pies

awsome chap.... LOVE miss jessup and the Bonnie Fracis scene...brutal!

Author's Response: Thanks Andrea, hope you enjoy the rest as much! X Louy

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.

Great chap... Exiting end and exlellent writing...

Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying Andrea, thanks for the review. X Louy

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire

Loved the part about pianist hands...it gives the entire scene something more, something deeper and more eerie...

I love the teenage spirit and the way you describe him, makes him seem very innocent and so not like the things the boys usually kill. moving on to the next chap.



Author's Response: Aha, there will be a lot more of that spirit to come...and Sam does have lovely fingers, don't you think? lol

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Always gotta be freaky weirdness

Great chapter... as always:) I don't know if this is too presumptuous of me, but your writing sometimes reminds me of my own writing. It seems like you see things in images before you work your way onto print.

Great characters...



Author's Response:

Hehe, not presumptuous at all, I think there are a lot of us who love writing the 'visual' style of story and I agree, I think there are definate similarities there.

I'm so glad you liked the first part of this and although I know I haven't updated in a while, its on my list as soon as 'Fall of the House of Dream' is finished...which will be very soon I hope.

Thanks for the reviews Andrea and I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story as much.X Louy

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 28/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Birds eggs and bullets

I like the bantering from Dean and the way it switches to something more protective. I think you've nailed their personalities completely and can hardly stand the waiting for more goodies to read!...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for such a great compliment. Getting the boys to sound right is one of the hardest parts of writing for me so I'm very pleased to know it works for you...X Louy

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 29/04/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Is it lemon juice for blood on shag pile?

Good chapter. Sad to hear that your muse was lost, but glad you seem to have found it again. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks Andrea, muse back with a vengeance now and well into the next story...will be posting the very last chapter of this one later today...lol XX Louy

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 03/05/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Of dogs and cats and little white bones.

Great chapter. If i've gotta be honest, I think there's a clear difference between this chapter and the last one. This one was much more engaging and exiting. I found it very easy to get caught up. Very good job...

Author's Response: Thanks for that huge compliment, it's always great to hear when something works and you find yourself caught up in it...hope it carries through to the last chapter that will be posted tonight...Thanks for the review...XX Louy

 
The Game by bayre Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 444]
Summary:

The meek shall inherit nothing....

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023
[Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08


Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh nooo... great story.... i love Carter's description of Dean and they way Sam is finally learning to "listen to Dean differently". But it's ending so soon... Will there be an epilogue? Or more chapters...

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading.  Yes there will be at least one more chapter to tie it up.

 
The Cascade by ThePasserby Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 63]
Summary:

He looked at the passenger seat, and for a moment he didn’t understand why it was empty. Then his gaze found the huge hole in the windshield, explaining the shattered glass everywhere. He saw the ridiculously large log that his precious Impala’s front was crunched up against, crumpled and broken. He saw the empty highway the stretched for miles ahead of them.

And he saw the still form of Sam’s unmoving body lying facedown twenty feet away in an obvious puddle of blood on the paved road.


Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12225
[Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 04/08/10


Reviewer: lillelouis Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/01/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Very nice. Don't worry about the typos. :) I like what you're working on here with the two parallel stories. It'll be interesting to read your take on Sam losing his brother - both opposed to Dean's grief in this story and Sam's grief on the show. I'm very exited :) Hope to read a new chapter on Quake soon?

Author's Response: as soon as possible! i plan to finish this fic before getting to QUAKE, but then ill devote my full attention to finishing that one before going on to DAMNATIONS, SHRAPNEL, or THE DROWNING. I have several fics lined up for after that, so i'm trying to get my WIPs out of the way first :).

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 05/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OH. MY. GOD!!! I've already read it like three times and ijust. keeps. getting. better!!! moving on to number two now... OH MY GOD...!!! totally breathless...! Great wrting as always, it pulles you in and beats the crap out of you right along with the the brothers...

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 05/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

You are evil... i'm sure of it... You better get in another capter SOON or i am pretty sure i will go insane with the waiting... The story is AMAZING. It grabs you and pulles you in, it breaks you and leaves you hollow and empty and i can not WAIT for it to continue...

Great writing.

Great job. You should be very proud.

Guess i opted for the ranting huh...? :D

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/01/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hey :) Great upD. Looking forward to more... :D

 
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Date: 28/01/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Hey :) Great upD. Looking forward to more... :D

 
Quake by ThePasserby Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 54]
Summary:

Trapped in a the rundown remains of a school after a sudden earthquake, Dean races desperately to find Sam before his little brother's time runs out, but Sam may not have enough time, or blood, to spare.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
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Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 9398
[Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 12/03/09


Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i've read most of your stuff... think ths is my first review though... sorry...

Your writing is great. I love the whole 'hurt-sammy-is-better-than-happy-sam'...

Kinda feel the sam way myself... there s just something about emotionally unavailable, tall, dark gorgeous men...

but anyway, love you writng- PLEASE WRITE MORE :D

 
Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love your writing!!

Great story, great writing, great hurt Sammy and great panicked Dean... Love it...

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Awsome!! Can't wait for the next ones... Quick update:D

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Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Great chap. Took a little long in the making, but I knwo you are working on several stories... Can't wait to see how they get out of this one though... It all seems so very hopeless...

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Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 17/03/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

More, more, more!! this is totally awsome... i'm hooked..

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Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

It was, as always, great writing. But it could have been a little more detailed as to how dean was feeling. I like the "light" twist john has in the end about his son hating him.

The previous chapters have all left me feeling moved and slightly depressed but this one was not as engaging i felt... just one girl's opinion, and i gotta say, i love this story... great plot, really awsome...!

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Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 10/04/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Amazing chap... uhh.. i've seriously got goose bumps... and it's been so long since we've heard about Sam so the chock is almost as real to us as it feels to John...

great work... MORE PLEASE...:)

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Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 21/05/08 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Ohmygodareyoufreakingkiddingme! I just finished reading it and I'm already jonesing for the next chap. And for the record I think Deacon is SO right about Sam and Dean. Seeing Sam is what is gonna help Dean and vice versa.

GREAT chapter! And just a quick observation/question. Because I'm writing a story where Sam also suffers from several diffrent injuries and I'm finding it damn hard to keep check of the diffrent wounds he has. I had to write and "Injury-list" LOL :D

Wonderful chapter!

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Reviewer: lillelouis Signed
Date: 24/05/08 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

John flipped pretty fast from not wanting his boys to meet at all to thinking they were the only ones who could fix each other (Nice :D). Good fight between Bobby and John. Very Winchester-esque...

Great chapter. Big cliffie, but we pray that it is not a death fic. hurry hurry hurry with the next chap cause the wait is almost unbearble.

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Reviewer: lillelouis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/06/08 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

I don't even know where to start. First of: Great chapter as always. And reading this there were just so many thoughts that popped into my head.

How Dean's fear was transforming into anger. How I could totally see his anger growing as a result of what Dominic did to Sam. How Sam would fall into to the natural role of little brother once he learns to trust Dean again (going by the asumption that he will infact learn to trust Dean again). How Sam would be full of fear whereas Dean is full of hate.

Also the memory of the little boy in Dominic's classroom could be Shannon's son. Thereby also Dean's son ??

Let me know if I'm way off base here?

How, in the end, Dean and Sam and the rest of the hunters find Dominic and all wants to kill him. How Sam rather wants him to break like he broke Sam and Dean. How Sam's own anger suddenly take on whole new and much more terrifying face. He wants to make Dominic feel the pain he put Dean through. Because I could totally imagine how, once Sam trusts his brother again, he wants to make Dominic pay for what he did to Dean rather than what he did to Sam himself.

I just had this weird movie playing in my head how Sam and Dean get first dibs on Dom and spend a very short amount of time. In that time, Shannon appears and Dominic totally falls apart. As they're about to leave Dominic yells out in anger that he will kill everyone Dean ever loved if they let him go now. But to everyones surprise, it is Sam who turns around and kills the cult leader.

The chapter just set of all these possible outcomes to how the story could end. And may I say: Wow, what an amazing ride this has been so far and I think I speak for everyone when I say that I can't wait for the conclusion to this wonderful story. This is a masterpiece and I will definately be following this to the very end :D :D

Okay... Thanks for reading my babble and hopefully not being offended by any of it :D :D :D

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Reviewer: lillelouis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That is so funny. I feel the exact same way about Sam in a way, being Dean's home... :D

And a great little tension build... Love it :D :D

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