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Penname: lillelouis [Contact]
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Real name: Andrea / Andi Status: Member Member Since: 28/11/07 Website: Beta-reader: No
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Reviews by lillelouis Summary:
This is a story told from the pov of my oc. The story of her life and how she was affected by the Winchesters from the moment she was born. She never found out until she was an adult, but once she found out it was a rough road to hell.
banner by myrtle - she rocks! Categories: General, Romance, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 53090 [Report This] Published: 30/12/08 Updated: 29/03/09
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 Date: 31/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ok I'm hooked. Keep tha chappies coming because I can already feel myself jonsing after another :D :D :D Great job, hun. Cheers, Andi Author's Response: YAY! I'm so glad you like it so far. Thanks for the encouraging words!
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Date: 31/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love this story. No one can argue that you're not a good writer. Lovely work. I love your very clean way of "breaking the lid of a story" - sorta' speaking- I like how you've already created the base for a character to explore and develope. Very nice job. If you hadn't told in the notes that this was your first story I wouldn't have guessed. Nice, very nice ;) Gonna keep reading now...
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Date: 14/01/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Hey I just read your three last chapters in one take so I didn't review, sorry. I just got caught up. Great story so far. I'm starting to get a really scary and heartbroken feeling about Sage. It almost feels like she's deluding herself in thinking that she's fine and everything. I almost feel a little sad when reading her thoughts. Oh, and I got completely breathless when she started crying at the bar. I love that she's more like a sister to the brothers, but again- the vibe I get from reading your story is that she really doesn't think of them as brothers... It's a little weird and I'm probably WAY off, but it's just this little thorn gnawing in my side. GREAT job! Completely wonderful! I'm gonna leave you some well deserved stars for the chapters I didn't review :) Author's Response: thank you for the reivew and the stars! i'm so glad you like it. sage is damaged and probably a little too comfortable with everything. however, she is in for a rude awakening, and it's just around the corner. and yes, it appears that so far she's like a sister. but i wouldn't say WAY off. lol.
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 Date: 25/02/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I have a knot in my stomach the size of Road Island... Seriously.... Emotional torture takes on a whole new meaning with this story.
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Date: 25/02/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 It's so sad that she can be so convinced of how insignificant she is, when the exact opposite is true. Ok so at first I of course thought that Sam was in fact possessed, but the way you've explained it with Azazel's power "infecting" him, it would seem logical if he stopped being evil now that the demon is dead. This story is wreaking havoc with my nerves, I tell you... Author's Response: yay me for actually being logical. that's something i struggle with on a daily basis. lol.
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Date: 25/02/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Ok so either Sage is really really REALLY complicated which testifies to amazing writer capabilites on your part, or she is as plain as the character would like to think she is. And it frustrates the hell outta me because I don't have any previous writing of yours to compare with.... ahr shuks...
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Date: 25/02/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Oh Dean.... yes, oh dean... i'm glad you are still reading and seemingly enjoying the story.
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Date: 25/02/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Oh dear. I think now is a good time for a little break. And I see now that the complexity WAS in fact the inten. Very nice job. Good writing. *blushes* thank you very much! Summary:
Georgetown was the next step in the plan but her daddy was always telling her that life could turn on a dime. If the trick was learning how to dance, she had really screwed it up by tripping over that boy who bussed tables in the New South Dorm cafeteria. Categories: One Shots, Romance, AU, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: When You're Falling Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 45589 [Report This] Published: 16/01/09 Updated: 23/01/09
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Date: 18/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: The time I like is the rush hour Unparalelled! If you tell me that you "just thought up this character" my selfconfidence will move faster than my mom during a housecoat sale! I mean how can you create such a perfect humanbeing in all their screwed up glroy and imperfect-ness in ONE chapter????!!! It shouldn't be physically possible!! How can you describe someone so perfectly in such few words. You've created an entire human devealopement over the span of a few thousand words- and done so BEAUTIFULLY! Aaaaannndd.... breathe... Ok-rambling done --- for now!!! Moving on... Author's Response: * is blushing * - If you tell me that you "just thought up this character" - I've been writing Charlotte for two years now - she's the main OFC in my Strange Angels 'verse. And I did struggle with her character for the first several chapters of the initial story in that 'verse. ;-P It is really important to me, though, that she does come across as flawed. I like to write her when she's particularly messy. It's actually more fun to write her in this AU because she's not dealing with the bigger mess over in SA.
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Date: 18/01/09 Title: Chapter 2: I move with the movement It's like flashes of old memories. It's like all this person's knowledge compiled and spread out on the ground. Then you close your eyes and point. You pick out one picture and you twist it into words that sends little ripples up your back. Like little moments in time that can only be connected as long as that person you're describing is there to mimic the emotions, echoed through the flashes. Like flies in a bottle. Doesn't mean anything unless you can attach some kind of emotion and a reason for it. Then you have a perfect character. Doesn't matter if the character you're describing isn't perfect, but the perfection lies in the imperfection. You probably don't get what I'm (so poorely) trying to convey, but.... Wonderful job. Looking forward to another chapter and I hope you send me back the Sally-chapter soon so I can start learning from you... :D Author's Response: Okay, now I a really am blushing. ;-P And to be fair, this is a remix of a story I've already written from Dean's POV. Admittedly, this story is longer than "Always Falling" but some of the scenes are already in place. I just fleshed it out a little bit because I love exploring Sam and Dean from an outsider POV - even in something as AU as this story. - I hope you send me back the Sally-chapter soon so I can start learning from you... :D - See, blushing again. I am working on notes for you, though. It's been a little slow-going with work and all.
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Date: 08/03/09 Title: Chapter 3: I'm waiting for ignition Wonderful chapter. I don't even feel like going to sleep right now just to finish it. Very nice touch with Sally...hint... hint... *poke* Sorry for taking such a long break from your story, but I didn't want to read it without it having my full attention :) It definitely did now. Wonderful writing and I am LOVING this version of the Winchester lives. So sweet and innocent and yet complicated enough to be interesting...:D Wonderful work. Cheers, hun :D Author's Response: *is blushing* I so owe you feedback on Sally... Let's just say that it's been a wild couple of months, but I think my work is slowing down and my health is getting better and I should be able to finish stuff. And I must confess that I love the Dean!College AU more than I should. I think he's my favorite Dean. He's certainly my favorite Dean to write. ;) Summary:
It's 24th January and Sam has a masterplan. Just for once, could things go The Boys' way? Categories: Scripts, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 12289 [Report This] Published: 23/01/09 Updated: 04/02/09
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Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 3: ACT II Oh so it's one of THOSE parties. The 'murder-she-wrote' inspired ones. Mystery! Murder! And an unlikely killer in the midst of their party! Dum dum duuuummmm......!
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Date: 10/03/09 Title: Chapter 4: ACT III Aww poor stripper... "Poor stripper"? She got to bang Dean, didn't she? Not feeling a lot of pity for her there, ROFL. Thanks for reading and reviewing - and for the stars! Better than pie! Summary:
Awesome banner by the awesome RoweenaC Sam and Dean, along with Galen and Rob Emrys, head into the forest to hunt the creature that poisoned both Dean and Galen. As the creature hunts the brothers, things go from bad to worse. Sequel to The Apothecary. Categories: General, Crossovers Characters: None Challenges: Series: Crossed Paths Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 18101 [Report This] Published: 28/01/09 Updated: 18/03/10
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There's only one thing worse than realizing that those idiots who accosted you are something more important than FBI agents — and that's knowing that you knocked one out with your umbrella while he was trying to save you from stumbling into the dark. This is the third story in my Gobsmacked 'verse. They are all listed in chronological order by clicking on the series link. ;-P Categories: Romance, AU, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Gobsmacked Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6639 [Report This] Published: 05/02/09 Updated: 05/02/09
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Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Cloudbusting I should really be writing right now, but I couldn't leave it alone. I love the series and I'm particularly fond of the shots written from Penny's point of view. I'll be keeping up with these. Thank you! I worked hard to make Penny unique and well-rounded, so I'm glad that her sections don't detract from the story. ;) Summary:
spoilers for 4.14. After harsh words have been said, the once strong bond between Sam and Dean is close to the breaking point. When things take a turn for the worse will the boys be able to repair what's broken before it's too late. Sick!Sam Worried!Dean Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 22808 [Report This] Published: 07/02/09 Updated: 27/02/10
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Date: 22/02/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oh dear GOD!!! Hurry with the updates and preforably a whole bunch at once like you did this time!!! This was very exiting and I can't wait for the next chapters :D Cheers, Andi. Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing!!!
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Date: 23/02/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Aww... They're healing right before our very eyes... Almost... It's a nice change of pace with all the emotional pain and heartbrek the series has been dishing out lately. This story is like a little light in the dark. Thanks for sharing that with us.
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Date: 23/02/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Ok so a couple of things: One: I LOVE that you have Sam and Dean playing chess. Makes sense that two of the greatest hunters are familiar with a game of strategy. Two: "Pie, Sammy, they have pie." SO 'Dean' to say that. Fits him perfectly! Three: I'm definitely starting to hate Ruby a little bit for all the stuff you have her doing to Sam. You weren'y kidding when you said we shouldn't read if we liked her. Awesome job! Oh and the last bit there was hearbreaking. So sad and I could almost imagine all the guilt pouring over Sam... Great job, hun. Looking forward for the updates. Cheers, Andi :D Author's Response: Thank you so much for your lovely review!!!
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Date: 01/03/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Ooh-hoo-hoo-hooo... It's gettin' interesting :P
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Date: 01/03/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 I liked it, but I felt that Ruby's death was a little rushed? But other than that, very nide :) Glad you decided to share it with us.
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Date: 01/03/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Holy hey! Noticed the story isn't checked off as complete? This means there's more... :P ? Summary:
Hunting monsters hadn't prepared Dean Winchester for the one thing scarier than a girl and her umbrella — a six-pack of older brothers. Especially after the football... This is the fourth story in my Gobsmacked 'verse. They are all listed in chronological order by clicking on the series link. ;-P Categories: Romance, AU, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Gobsmacked Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7393 [Report This] Published: 07/02/09 Updated: 07/02/09
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Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dizzy I LOVE the relationship between Penny and her brothers. I LOVE the brothers' reaction to the Winchesters invading their family. Uhh! I LOVE that Penny has a twin brother! I can't wait to see how Dean's big-brother-protectiveness is rivaled by that of (how many was it?) 6? strapping Hillsworth brothers :D Loving the series and waiting VERY impatiently for more !!! Cheers, Andi :D Author's Response: Thank you! ;-P Penny's brothers are integral to her as a character, so I'm thrilled that you like them - though, I confess, she surprised me when Tommy turned out to be her twin. And, yes, there are six of them for a reason. Since I've got a backlog of stories in this series to post, I doubt you will have long to wait. ;) Although I haven't been forthcoming in the note for your story. I will need to rectify that, but work has been crazy. :( Summary:
Slight spoilers up to 4x13. Written for The Vaults ‘Ruby is a bitch’ drabble challenge. Couldn’t get it down to a drabble (yeah right, me do just 100 words? Are you off your nut?). Rated M for people (almost) doing the McNasty. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1617 [Report This] Published: 10/02/09 Updated: 10/02/09
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Date: 11/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Epitaph
Author's Response: I had to check with my mate, but I think the term came from 'Grey's Anatomy' (I only watch the episodes with JDM in, LOL). Lovely phrase though, right? LOL. Decided to err on the side of caution with the rating. I know we're all over 16 here, but still. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing - and the stars! Yeee-haaa! Summary:
Things were going pretty well until Dean Winchester called her Baby Doll. This is the fifth story in my Gobsmacked 'verse. They are all listed in chronological order by clicking on the series link. ;-PCategories: Romance, AU, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: Gobsmacked Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9140 [Report This] Published: 11/02/09 Updated: 11/02/09
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Date: 13/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Bad Connection Brilliant read. Looking forward for more. Oh and... "The little bastard had rubbed off on him instead." Loved that line in particular :P Cheers, Andi. Author's Response: Thank you, as always. ;) This was a hard story to write, trying to balance the schmoop of the situation...
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