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Reviews by lillelouis Summary:
 The Winchesters moved through many towns with such stealth no one one would remember them except for a passing thought of the physical beauty or grace of 'that stranger'. But the unsung heroes passed through many lives as well, leaving indelible marks, uneraseable memories and unspoken prayers of thanks. Was the news of their deaths in that helicopter explosion just another bit of sensational news?Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 15922 [Report This] Published: 11/08/08 Updated: 21/08/08
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 Date: 14/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 - Season 1 I love this story so far. The characters are coming across so well and their emotions are real and fit with how i imagine the characters would react.
Gerat job :D Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to review, it's really makes me smile. I'm so glad you feel that my writing is accurately portraying the characters and that it's getting the feelings & emotions clearly across. Thanks again!
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Date: 18/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2 - Season 2 That was wonderfully sad. Love this story. Anf again; good job with the characters.
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Date: 21/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Part 3 - Season 3 A little short, but as you said the explosion happened mid season so not that many characters to review. Very nice job with this story. Very original. I liked it :D Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review after each chapter, it really made me smile. Thank you for all the kinds words, I'm really excited that you liked it. Summary:
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After Sam, then Dean, are injured on hunt, Sam goes missing. Taken by the object of their hunt. Dean realizes hunter has become hunted and it is all more sinister and far more personal than he could ever have dreamed. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 51905 [Report This] Published: 11/08/08 Updated: 01/09/08
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Date: 24/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oh goodness... Sorry I haven't revoewed until now, but I got a little caught up.
First of: I like the story, great writing as always. Great plot, not revealing the culprit :D BUT: dum dum dummmm... It kinda' reminds me of Welcome... which was also just a great story and the title for this story suggests a return of the mighty orc perheaps? Judt a wild shot in the dark. And again, I really like your story and I'm kicking myself for not holding of on reading it till it's done. Because I just know that I'm gonna go insane with the waiting :D :D :D Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! (Sorry my reply took so long :( )I will admit to some similarities in these stories. Is this the return of the orc? No, but I was thinking a little of Tolkien style beasties in this one--it's not orcs, it's bigger and badder and the kind of thing orcs run from... Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Oooooohhh goodness :D:D My nails are officially gone... Chowed down... I know i know. I'm a little alte with the reivew, but I had to pause your story for a long time and now I'm back! Tatar! Loving it and I am SO GLAD that it's already finished because I doubt I would have survived the unbearable waiting for a new chapter! Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so sorry I'm late with my replies! I was stuck back on bed rest and that means limited computer time. Grrr. I'm so glad you're liking this story! Sorry about your nails though! Hugs, Muffy
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Oooohhh noooo....!! Must. Hurry. Read. Quick! Hurry hurry! Thank you so much! HUgs, Muffy
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Arh bollocks! It's midnight and I've got to get up in the morning, but damned if I'm not gonna finish the last two chapters! VICTORY WILL BE OURS!! Or so we hope... Oh no! Midnight, well it's only a little longer.... Thank you so much! hugs, Muffy
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 HAHAAAAA I knew it!!! You couldn't kill that thing! It's too perfect a villain to just kill off in the end... That last line was beautiful in it's horror. It sent ripples up my spine and created a perfect picture in my mind... Ok so you know how I love your favorite lines, right? One last one and then I'm done... For now anyway: "The squirrel looked at him and ran off behind the tree. It was back a minute later carrying his gun. What the hell?" Simple. Beautiful. A perfect summary of a perfect story :D And oh my god what a finish line???! It's still out there.
Wonderful job. Brava bella... If I had a rose it would be ours. Author's Response: Oh thank you so, so much! Again, I am so sorry my replies took so long! I love te squirrels in this story, they were one of those things that kind of grew organically as I moved through it. Somehow Dean tormented by squirrels, even in this situation, seemed right. I do wish he'd managed to train them with tiny flamethrowers. I thought long and hard about killing the thing, but as you say, it was just too good to let it go like that, it didn't seem right for it to be gone in the end. I'm so glad you liked this one! Thank you, thank you! Hugest of hugs, Muffy Summary:
He knew John would come for them one day, but sometimes heroes need help and sometimes hope needs action. Characters: Sam, Dean, John Categories: Wee!chester, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 4548 [Report This] Published: 01/09/08 Updated: 15/12/08
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Date: 01/01/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Burning Bridges AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! HOW CAN YOU DO THAT????!!!! It's weally weally mean... *sticks out tongue* MEANIE!! Oh yeah, a little warning: I regress to the emotional stage of a five year old when things don't go my way ;) Hurry up with some more chapters 'cause they're only getting better as we go along and it'll only be seconds before I start screaming. *bottom lip trembling* Summary:
Sam unknowingly receives a gift that keeps on giving. Headaches and heartaches, trouble and terror. Rated M for mature subject matter and language. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 24114 [Report This] Published: 01/10/08 Updated: 28/05/10
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Date: 15/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The girl is still an enigma to me, but I like your writing and the plot seemes to be very well worked out. It's a little mysterious, but I like that :D :D Great job, I'll be waiting for the next update... Author's Response: Thanks so much for the nice words. I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it.
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Date: 03/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I like the story and I'll definitely be hanging around for more chapters. I was noticing that you either have a very vivid imagination or knowledge of withcraft? You ever offer your "wordy services" to others who need a good spell in their story? :D Author's Response: Thanks so much. I've been 'into' witches and witchcraft all my life. I even have a collection of witches, among other things. How strange is that for a good Catholic girl? If any authors are in need of a spell or any other help, please sign up for the Vaults and post a request. I'll do my best to help you out and keep you out of trouble. Summary:
It's Hallowe'en and The Boys would rather be anywhere else than a disused pumpkin farm, rounding up wayward spirits before The Witching Hour... Categories: UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3037 [Report This] Published: 13/10/08 Updated: 13/10/08
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Date: 13/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Enter Stage Right... Not at all what I was expecting from you. Very nice job! Great writing, very funny and original. Loved it :D Can I flatter myself with the belief that you took my advice about Poe to heart? Thought some of the old-english was a very nice touch :P Ta very much! I'm not good at angst, I tend to lean toward humour every chance I get... I went through Shakespeare titles for ages, and then my mate just went "Much Ado About Noth - Pumpins!" and it stuck. I did scour through some Poe, and H.P. Lovecraft... The Angel Of The Odd had me in stitches and I had to stop looking cos I was just spending all my time reading the actual stories, LOL Thanks for the stars! Better than pie! Summary: Another in my Ben Winchester stories. Please be aware that the title tells you what occurs within the story. Dean, Sam, and Ben are in trouble when they are taken by a man who has an agenda and he's using torture to get his answers.
Categories: AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 33776 [Report This] Published: 14/10/08 Updated: 07/01/09
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Date: 08/01/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Oh my... Wonderful. Your stories have a way about them. I've told you before, they leave you with conflicting feelings of closure and a slight unease. 'Cause I know, when reading your stories, that the end isn't the end. There are a thousand days still waiting to be played out. Great job. Author's Response: You've made me a very happy person. You've pointed out the one thing I really want to come across with this series...it'll never be over for these three until the ulitmate end. It's the journey that matters, afterall, and not the destination. Thank you so much! Kim
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Date: 14/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OH MY GOD! I have waited for another Ben-story for weeks and now it's here!!! *hopping up and down, squealing* And it definitely doesn't dissappoint!!! Great start to what is shaping up to be helluva story! Author's Response: Sorry that it took so long to get another Ben story out. I've moved recently and I'm just now getting settled. Thank you so much for the stars and the compliments. I really appreciate it. I makes me feel so good when a character I love so much is loved by others.
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Date: 22/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I LOVE IT! Love the interaction between Sam and Ben. Love seeing Sam's frustration so clearly I almost feel it myself. Exellent writing. Cannot WAIT for the next chapter, but I don't suppose begging will hurry process?? :D :D Wonderful... :D Author's Response: My hope is that the experiences of all three of these guys is palpable. Torture is such a horrible, inhumane thing and I want to convey the negativities of it. Sadly, begging won't make things move faster but I do appreciate the effort. Also, the review, the stars, and the compliments. I've a big smile and feeling great. Thank you.
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Date: 31/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Oooohhh. this is getting more and more intense! Love it! Wonderful writing a always. Your stories never disapoint :D
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Date: 12/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Oh. My. God!!! That was so intense!!! I cannot believe you did that!!! I thought you told me you didn't want Sam to turn evil?? Damn you!!! But I jus' love this story and I probably won't stop reading even if it kills me with suspense and/or heartbreak!!! Oh dear god, what will happen to us all... Author's Response: Patience, my dear, patience. It will all become clear in due time. Sorry about the anxiety in the meantime. I'm writing as fast as I can. I'm glad you're sticking with it even if it seems that I have lead you astray. Thanks for the review.
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Date: 25/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oooooohhhh... This is getting tense :o I can't WAIT to see how this story ends!!! I have a feeling this is going to be a longer one? Things seem to be coming to a point very quickly, but I'm probably just a little over exited :D Author's Response: Hopefully not a longer one. I'm thinking a chapter maybe two more. I haven't written the following chapter yet due to being sick. Ideas are forming, though, so depending on how it writes, one or two more. Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice review.
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Date: 11/12/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Oh my god what a chapter! Wonderful writing as always and the story just keeps getting better!!
Ahh !! Mean kliffhanger!! And now we'll have to wat for another chapther.... Dangit! Author's Response: I'm sorry about the cliffhanger. I will defend myself and tell you that it was going to end a lot worse - just after Sam used his powers. I was going to leave everyone wondering who was dead and who was alive but I decided to be nice. Thanks for all your kind words and for reading my stories! Kim Summary:
Sam been injured on a hunt and Dean has to patch him up. The problem - just where his brother's injury is!!
SPOILERS - NONE COMPLETELY AU. Don't own anything, Just wish I did. Categories: One Shots, AU, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1072 [Report This] Published: 16/10/08 Updated: 16/10/08
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Date: 16/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hehe... T's all I'm gonna say... Hi there That says it all :) Thanks! Mary x Summary: Sam and Dean spend the night at a mysterious motel in the Nevada desert, and a series of zany misadventures ensues when they become unwitting "fuel" for the powerful mystical force it hides.
Categories: One Shots, Crossovers Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3993 [Report This] Published: 28/10/08 Updated: 28/10/08
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Date: 18/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - And Only Woa!!! That sent my mind spinning with a thousand miles an hour. SOMEONE CALL SPOCK! WE HAVE A ROGUE KLINGON!!! Yes my mind is also a little whacked :D :D :D Loved it. Like having a concussion, having a lime wrapped around a barre of gold thrust into my brain, spending Christmas Eve with my family and getting high on Burn energy drinks all at once. Could probably come up with some more metaphores, but I figure, what's the point? I've just watched Life Of Brian and in the spirit of things I say to you (as you already seem to know) : Always look on the bright side of life... Oh by the way, ever think about doing another little trip through wonderland with a little inspiration from Hitchhiker's Guide To The Galaxy? I bet that would be a real crowdpleaser :) Keep up the high spirits and write some more of these :D I would give you ten stars if I could :D :D :D :D Author's Response: Hi and Happy Holidays! Thank you so much for reading and for sending this wonderful review! You really made my day. I loved The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy , too (Though it's been ages since I've reread it)! A trip through Wonderland? Hmm... The boys sure could use one right about now... Oh, man! Careful with that carrot you're dangling in front of the plot bunny! Heee! Thank you, again. Glad you liked it! ;D Summary: Someone else came to pay Sam a visit while the witnesses were afoot. Tag to 4.02, angsty/limp!Sam (Title means “Those Not Saved” in Latin)
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2138 [Report This] Published: 29/10/08 Updated: 30/10/08
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Date: 06/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Someone should send them an angry letter! That was a great version of the story. The whole time during that episode I was on the edge of my seat waiting for the lost love of Sam's life to reappear and torment him in guilt some more, but alas.... Nothing happened. Very nice of you to treat us with this :) I would've loved some more weight on Jessica standing in the corner the moment before she vanished along with the others. Would've made it more intense, I think. But that's just one girl's oppinion. Very nice. Summary: John spies on a moment between his two little boys, causing him to make a new resolve.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 601 [Report This] Published: 09/11/08 Updated: 10/11/08
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 Date: 10/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ooooh I liked this. Very short, but very nice. I love the unspoken promise. Both because it paints a different picture of John and also because it never came true. Because of the unresolved prophecy they boys never even knew of. Very nice :D Author's Response: So glad you liked the unspoken promise--I, myself, am a sucker for irony. Also, I do believe John fully intended on making everything up to his boys, just... things continued for longer than he'd expected. Summary:
Spoilers for s3 and s4! "Sometimes in June, when the sun smiled down and hardened the ground underfoot, Dean Winchester would lie in the spot where his brother had died."
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2427 [Report This] Published: 12/11/08 Updated: 12/11/08
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Date: 09/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sometimes In June I love it. It's very deep and hits the mark. I think this is exactly how Sam would have felt in Dean's absence. And it was a great version of Dean's own personal hell. You hit the nail on the head sorta' speaking ;) And if this is anything to fo by your teachers are all very very wrong. Great story from a great wirter. Brava Bella.... Summary:
Banner by the Amazing Rae666 Sam desperately fights to keep Dean alive after he’s attacked in a Washington forest by an unknown entity. It pays to advertise and the Winchesters find help from a gifted Healer in the Yellow Pages. Is it luck or destiny? Categories: General, Crossovers Characters: None Challenges: Series: Crossed Paths Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6390 [Report This] Published: 16/11/08 Updated: 05/12/08
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Date: 17/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh Muffy my dear... You do love those dark, mythical creatures of yours.. but they are very interesting. The story is setting off in ahelluva pace, but I'm sure the speed will be kept up through the story. :D Looking forward for more chapters. Love it :D Author's Response: Oh thank you so much! I'm so sorry my reply took so long :( Hugs, Muffy |
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