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Reviews by lillelouis Summary: Part 3 in the Lights Out Series. Dean and Sam are headed north with no clear destination in mind.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Lights Out Series Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1907 [Report This] Published: 07/06/08 Updated: 07/06/08
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Date: 22/08/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ahh... That was nice :) So safe. I'm all teeth right now. Thought you should know. Summary:
Dean just wanted Sam to unwind. A night out ends in a disaster of a decidedly non-supernatural nature. A Teenchesters short story. Rated for strong language and gritty issues. Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 12075 [Report This] Published: 18/06/08 Updated: 23/06/08
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 Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Demons I get but people are crazy. "the one Sam isn’t normally allowed to wear, touch or breathe on." Harsh, but i can totally see Dean listing the threats as he hold up his brand new leather jacke for his little brother to drool over :D Great chapter.... Author's Response: Thank you. I kinda like that about Dean...that he'll say things to Sam which to everyone else sounds harsh but Sam knows what really lies beneath the harsh words. Like in 'Nightmare' where Dean is worried about Sam puking on his car upholstery but really he's concerned about his brother...Dean's awesome like that. Liz x
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: As long as I'm around, nothing bad is gonna happen to you. Amazing writing and I gotta praise you a little for good you are at describing and creating characters. You are very good at makeing them believeble, you're also good at making them heroes or bad guys. Great gift and you use it well you Skywalker ... :D Author's Response: Awww thanks, I'm always nervous about introducing new characters and to be honest, I usually prefer to stick to the ones created by Kripke. But I have a soft spot for Joe and it was fun to write a SOB character like Carl. Liz x
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Our dark spots are pretty dark I just love the way the characters are described, but sad that Dean's anger is a little palyed down (because of how short the Carl Booker sequence was) - Don't know if you agree about his anger, or if it's me with a hidden "hulk-complex", but Dean angry is never bad :D Great job... If i could give you 10 stars i would... :D :D Author's Response: Thanks so much and thank you especially for being honest. The Carl Booker scene was a hard one to write because folks reading really seemed to want to see Carl get his just desserts...and sometimes, I like to leave things up to the reader's imagination...it's not always the right decision. I did a story not so long ago, where Bobby talks to Sam in a motel room and I don't explain what Bobby says - I just imply that Bobby makes Sam feel better - and now I kinda wish I'd given the Bobby/Sam moment more work... With this story, it's was hard to decide how to play it but I think I'm happy with the way it turned out -because in my head Dean totally went all green eyed hulk on Carl. Anyway, thank you again so much for reading, your feedback is awesome and much appreciated. Liz x
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What with years spent apart, a missing father and a dead girlfriend the brothers are struggling to connect. Set Season One, after Wendigo. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 5363 [Report This] Published: 02/07/08 Updated: 03/07/08
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Date: 14/11/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reading this was like watching Reqium for a Dream all over again. 30 second frames, shot from odd angles, but it works. God that was a cool movie. I should watch that again some time...
I'd give 10 * if I could :) Summary:
Shamefully salacious soap and slapping shower sheet shenanigans, written for the "Angela, we love you! Get better soon!" UnGen Challenge. Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2428 [Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 06/07/08
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Date: 10/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Slappity Slap Slap Favorite line: "The tiny beads of liquid quivered and squeeeed as they slid down him, recognising that this was in fact the Nirvana for which they had waited so long." Love it... Love the reference to the previous Wet-Towel fight lol :D Very amusing :D :D :D Author's Response: Thanks - and ta very much for the stars, LOL Glad it tickled er - a funny bone? Summary:
A witch's curse leaves Sam trapped somewhere Dean can't follow and Dean finds himself losing faith in the hero he thought he could always count on. Limp/angst Teenchester two-part short story. Rated for some bad language. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 7273 [Report This] Published: 21/07/08 Updated: 25/07/08
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Date: 23/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Love the metaphors, love your limpSam... Great cliffie as always :D Don't be too long with your update... :D :D :D :D Author's Response: Awww thanks - I'm getting scarily addict to limp Sam stories, reading & writing them. Hope I've not kept you in suspense too long. Liz x
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Date: 02/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Great chapter, great story. I'm sad it was so "short". When i say short I of course mean: A little shorter than your other stories. :D I don't know... there is something great about the long stories, but the shorter ones have something about them too. They're more intense witht their emotions. Love that :D :D Author's Response: Awww glad you still enjoyed it though..sorry to say my next story is a one-shot but I will try and get some longer stories posted soon. Thanks heaps for the feedback, Liz x Summary:
 Have you ever been bored? Cornered by a dull co-worker and their latest sick poodle story? Or stuck waiting for The Bus That Never Came? Are you in desperate need of a daydream but your brain is refusing to co-operate? Do you need to imagine Dean doing something inexplicably sexy but don’t have time to work out the details yourself? Well then, step this way and read these little one shots. Simply pick your favourite scenario and slot yourself into it. It’s like a Virtual Reality game, but without the cumbersome helmet. Categories: One Shots, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 13399 [Report This] Published: 26/07/08 Updated: 05/10/08
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Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Pickled Pig's Feet OH dear GOD! Does someone have some ice? Can i have some ice? ICE ANYONE?! Great story :D
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Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: Pipe Dreams Maybe Dean's the one in need of some ice this time?
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Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Grease Monkey AGAIN; ICE ANYONE?! Seriously beginning to need it. Preferably crunched :D And preferably in a cup handed to me by Dean.
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Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Kitchen God Awww... Know that's probably not appropriate, but that was actually the first thought i had. But VERY nicely written. You should be proud :D Great job and your service (The Dean-o-matic2000 Mindgame) is greatly appreciated :D :D
Author's Response: Ice, eh? Well, howzabout Dean bringing you a giant blue slushy? But then, oops, he's tripped and it's gone all down his shirt. Oh no, that stuff stains! Better whip that shirt off quick, Dean and we'll get it in the wash for you. Need us to do your jeans at the same time? No, really, it's no problem... Aherm... Hope that's cooled you down! Thanks very much for reading and all the reviews. We're really glad you enjoyed our new service. The Objectifying Dean Team x
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Date: 18/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Ectoplasm Grrrrrr.... Poor girl, must have had a heart attack.
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Date: 18/08/08 Title: Chapter 6: Morning Sunshine That was almost a little sad, but very beautiful. Beautiful descriptions.
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Date: 18/08/08 Title: Chapter 7: Corn Silk Hmmm... Heat, sweat, clothes ripping and sticking to slick, sweat soaked bodies. Where have I read that before?
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Date: 18/08/08 Title: Chapter 8: Unconscious Well that was borderlining on being abuse. He WAS UNCONSCIOUSS! But hey what we do to them in our minds, right... Very nice touch with the Zeppin... And, of couse they do.... Author's Response: Ha, well the day we get bored with thinking about a sweat soaked Dean ripping off his t-shirt, I don't know what we'll do. Move on to Sam, maybe. I'll bet he could work his way through a fair few tops, too. And please let us assure you that no Dean's were unnecessarily groped during the administration of that vital first aid. However tempting it might have been... Thanks for reading and reviewing! The Objectifying Dean Team x
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Date: 06/11/08 Title: Chapter 9: Emergency Room Chaos Wonderful. Wouldn't have minded a little more interaction though :P
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Date: 06/11/08 Title: Chapter 10: Kitty Cat Wonderful ... Again lol:P An I AM jealous of the damn cat. Who wouldn't wanna be cuddled by Dean? So in the honour of the collective thought I say to you: "Lucky cat!"
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Date: 06/11/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Glory Years I loved this one! Almost melancholic... And I couldn't help but notice the "taught muscles and sweaty tee shirt" either :P
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Date: 06/11/08 Title: Chapter 12: Storm's Coming, Pt 1/2 - Promise of a Storm LOVE the mention of the "tie" :D Very nice touch. AND the bowlegged'ness :P He does have a certain John Wayne swagger doesn't he? Hello, and thanks for reading and reviewing as always. Glad you could enjoy the view with us, in all it's taut and sweaty, bow-legged goodness! The Objectifying Dean Team x
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Date: 07/11/08 Title: Chapter 13: Black-Eyed Skank Eonderful! Loved this one! Really loved it! :D Oh and by "Tie" I meant Dean's tiny wisps of hair starting at his bellybutton amd disappearing under his pants :D It has a naughty word which I won't imbarres you with :D
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Date: 07/11/08 Title: Chapter 14: Winter Wonderland "The heat of his chest pressed to my willing chest"???? Dirt dirty girl, but we like it :D I love your desciption of hie eyes. Makes them seem alive and almost like a force of nature in their own glory. Love it!
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Date: 07/11/08 Title: Chapter 15: Hot Fun LOVE IT! I actually think this, demonic possession and the kitty cat is my favorites so far! Wonderful stories all of them and I love that you've thought of making this, grrrrrrr... :D :D Well, once again, thank you very much. We are happy to keep you growling! The Objectifying Dean Team x Summary: A collection of crack drabbles based on the “What would Dean say if…” thread over at sn.tv These are my answers to some of the many hilarious questions asked.
Categories: Scripts, Drabbles, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 7524 [Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 12/10/08
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Date: 06/10/08 Title: Chapter 30: Goat eating bear Aaaaahhh that was lovely... Oh and i think you should do a sequel to Needles. The moment Dean get's the needle. The doctor casually preps the needle and starts chatting to Dean about his hobbies. But Dean is on to him and says very seriously: I know what you're doing, *pinches his eyes suspiciously* you're trying to distract me before you stick me with that *he points accusingly*. The doctor leads the conversation away and successfully distracts Dean before he visciously jabs the needle in Dean's arm. Dean cries out and kicks out in reflex (unfortunately hitting the doc in the nads). He gets his lollipop and leaves, very upset. :D :D Sounds weird, but i'm just imagining it right now and I'm laughing to death... Oh and loved hell hound pupppy :D Author's Response: Okay, seriously.. you should write that! That'd be an awesome little one shot to read ^_^ You could call it Aichmophobia, the fear of needles. :D Aww pwease... now you've mentioned it you have to write it, lol, it's the law around these parts :D He he, thanks for reading.
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Date: 12/10/08 Title: Chapter 31: Metallica! It's infectious that's what this is...! Really think I should do the teensy-weensy-script for needles? Wanna post it for me or should I just put it all alone on my own space? :P We could collaborate. I write, you laugh. Then you edit while I laugh? Lovely answer to that question by the way... Hehe fanboying, never heard that before.... SO adding that to my "Favorite mental words and phrazes"... The one from Kiss Kiss Bang Bang is in there too somewhere... :D I know, I'm slightly insane...! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you posted your little drabble - twas a great read ^_^ Fanboying, he he - it seemed like the appropraite word to use :D Thanks again! |
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