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Penname: lillelouis [Contact]
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Real name: Andrea / Andi Status: Member Member Since: 28/11/07 Website: Beta-reader: No
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Reviews by lillelouis Summary:
Rating: PG / Gen Spoilers: None Characters: Dean, Sam, OMC Categories: One Shots, General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2854 [Report This] Published: 10/03/07 Updated: 10/03/07
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 Date: 25/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Fool in the Rain Love the Exlax allusion! You've got the banter down to a T. Great work! Oh and the 'trust me, I care' face! Had me laughing out loud. Freaking awesome! That was a really nice piece of fiction. Very well written for someone who's not posted here before. Really well! I'm not sure how interested you are in hearing this, but the feeling it leaves you with is slight melancholy, but also a little hope. In my mind I was imagining Sam and Dean meeting the young marine years later and making new army friends who have no idea what the boys really hunt :) Oooh! You should totally make a sequel!! :D Anyways, great job! Cheers. Andi. Summary:
Thinking back later, Dean wasn’t sure what response he had expected. Whatever response he might have imagined, nothing could have prepared him for what happened next. Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 [Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07
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Date: 05/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like Dean's POV more than i like Sam's in Blue Crayon's... But that's just because, when I think of Dean's emotions, I think; hearwrentching, mindblowing, nuclear reaction, a-bomb, fantasticmegamonsterfragilistic...something something etc. etc. and I think you are very good at capturing his feelings. You respect the chracter, but at the same time you make them your own and that is unique and amazing to read... I think I have used the word: amazing A LOT when reviewing your stories, but every one is true... keep up the great work... Summary:
The nightmare had ended, but Sam remembered. He didn’t know why, but he knew it was true. It was real. Dean was going to shoot him. Dean was going to kill him. All logic left Sammy’s mind as sheer panic took over. Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1829 [Report This] Published: 18/03/07 Updated: 18/03/07
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Date: 05/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 First of: I love your way of writing. You have a very capturing way of 'word-putting-together'(hihi, couldn't resist)... There is a sadness in your words, but at the same time the relaxed and flowing devealopement of the story makes it lighter and easy to read. It's very easy to get sucked in by your writing and i don't think i have ever seen anything quite like it... Truely amazing... I'm just sorry that you have so much on your plate (the updates on some of the other stories are pretty far apart)... Just one leader's oppinon. You writing is empathetic and really, really mind blowing... I love it... Also, if you should ever offer something other than fan fic, I would love to read something else you might have written. No matter what :D Great job, keep it up and to quote a great man: "I reject your reality and substitute it with my own..." Summary:
Somewhere in Colorado, children from 3 families have gone missing, can the boys find out what’s going on before forgotten memories come back to haunt them, more specifically – Dean. Mixture of both the past and present - So partly wee!chester.  Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 29298 [Report This] Published: 12/04/07 Updated: 28/04/07
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Date: 29/03/08 Title: Chapter 21: Aftermath I love the comparison to Atlas. I LOVE the reference to the line from the pilot. I LOVE the plot. I love how you describe Dean when he's angry, i like your "Dean-anger" hehe:D... I love the way you managed to bring both closure and a feeling of unease into the end of the last chapter, by playing on Sam's line with the monster in his closet, and the actual killing of said monster, thus destroying the threat... And it's just a great story... Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and for the great review! :) It really means a lot. The line from the pilot was one of my main inspirations for doing this story and my imagination just ran wild 'cause I loved writing it. And an angry Dean is a sexy Dean :D I love writing this story so much 'cause it was such a thrill and loads of fun so I'm really glad you enjoyed reading it! :) Thank you again! Summary: Sam has a dream about a cousin he and Dean haven't seen or spoken to in eight years. They reluctantly agree they need to warn her. But is it too late to make amends? Can they put their differences aside when the dream comes true?
Categories: General, AU, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 40037 [Report This] Published: 03/05/07 Updated: 17/10/07
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Date: 15/04/08 Title: Chapter 24: Here's Where The Story Ends Great story... you should post the other two on this site too...:D Summary:
Rating: PG / Gen Spoilers: IMToD and Folsom Prison Blues Characters: Dean, Sam, Deacon
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1761 [Report This] Published: 17/05/07 Updated: 17/05/07
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Date: 10/10/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very wonderful. I've always wanted the show to focus more on John's old army buddies. I think it'd be beyond interesting to see the boys interact with old marines :) Great writing. Nailed their voices and the somber tone of that season. Wonderful. Summary:
The boys are in for more than they bargained for when the hunt for a spirit brings them face to face with the elusive FTRA, and something else they weren't expecting.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 33093 [Report This] Published: 03/06/07 Updated: 05/11/07
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh my god that was good... Humor and angst bundled together in a great big ball of Winchester. Moving on to chap. 2. I'll try to review every chapter, but I might get too caught up and forget. If that should happen i would like to apologizes in advance :D On we go...
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Great. Love the switches from banter to concern... Great job..
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Awsome... Not much else to say... the last chap.-15-review will be a real ddozie... promise...
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oh my GOD!!! Awsome chapter! Moving on...
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Raven? Mysterious woman perhaps?
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 How heartbreaking... you can actually feel the pain and sadness radiating from the words.
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Wonderful writing... More to come later after I read the reast...
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Oooohhh the 'Mountain girl-person' cursed Benjamin because he betrayed her, and then he became some insane monster thingy who likes to kill for kicks?????
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 I love your description of Kathy. I don't think any woman has been described as beatifully as her by you... Great work...
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 First of: great writing. your descriptions are animated and vivid. you really understand how to bring life to the pages. Second: Your understanding of the brothers is amazing. It's very insightfull and riveting. The way you switch from banter to deep, concerned thoughts is amazing. Your story has an air of sorrow about it. It's very somber, but light at the same time which is exactly how the brothers actually feel on the show. It's like the lightness in your story is very superficial and underneath is a very thick layer of guilt and fear and sadness... Read it. Reviewd it. LOVED IT!!!! SO adding this one to my favorites... Author's Response: thank you so much for all the great reviews, i'm really happy you enjoyed the story, it was a blast to write :D. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 14/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Yay! Denmark! Which is not the capital of Sweeden people... :D Great story Bambi...:D Summary:
 It was just a little scar on Dean's shoulder. But it was about to turn Sam's whole world upside down.Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 15565 [Report This] Published: 16/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07
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Date: 14/06/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Empath This is love. Pure and simple. Every word in your story is brimming with it. Many people have sympathy, but few can proudly say they have empathy. That is often up to those around you. And you my dear have empathy... You are a very wise person in my book. If your personality is anything like your words in this story you must be a remarkable person and any one who knows you should praise the stars for their fortune. You can tell them I said that :) This is the first story of yours I have read, but I will definately be adding to that list. Great story :D :D :D Author's Response: What a lovely review! Thank you for all the kind words ... and for taking the trouble to leave them here for me. Summary:
Within its walls lives a family that has never been touched by hate, fire or the Supernatural… but for one. Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 73470 [Report This] Published: 30/07/07 Updated: 31/12/07
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Date: 15/02/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 amazing story.. i know i'm a little late with the review, but thought you should hear a little praise for your writing. i would love to see another story in this version of the lives of the winchesters. i think it would be a real bestseller... Summary: College life was proving far different than what Jessica had expected. Then she meets a mysterious reclusive scholar and soon nothing would be the same.
Categories: Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 33858 [Report This] Published: 06/08/07 Updated: 06/08/07
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Date: 27/10/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 I LOVE this story! I love how well you captured Sam's transformation from before he met Jessica. I love the death-scene :P Weird I know, but I just lovw how I could almost fee l her heartbreak and then determination setting in. I SO think you should do a sequel to this :D Or we should make one together because this story set off a tornado of ideas! I love this one. One of the best pre-series I've read on this site!!! Amazing doesn't do this story justice. This is alost the reason I haven't reviewed each chapter (sorry about that) It just pulled me in and I got completely caught up! Love it!!! Summary: After Sam has a vision involving the death of a young witch, the brother's head to San Francisco to prevent her death. Charmed xover.
Categories: Crossovers Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3168 [Report This] Published: 20/08/07 Updated: 21/08/07
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 Date: 22/01/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 I see it's been a long time since you've posted a new chapter in this story, but I definitely think you should. It's a little mean to leave us hanging like that and I for one would love to see the developement of this one. Please continue??^^ Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 14/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hehe... Shoevinistic...:D Shoeacide...:D awsome...! I like lefty better... I think. But righty is definately funnier:D :D :D Not insane...! I know they are just shoes... But shoes have feelings too... :D |
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