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Penname: usaexpat [Contact]
Real name: Lisa
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Spoiler for Season Five.  My Idea of what would happen if one said "YES"  What happens when one brother says yes and becomes lost to the other.  Special Thanks to impalamedean1 for the banner


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 22913
[Report This] Published: 08/10/09 Updated: 28/06/10


Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 14/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like this story...can't wait to see what has happened to Dean...

Author's Response: And in the next chapter you will.  Thanks for reading.  D

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 19/10/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I do like the samuel guy...no wonder Dean responds to him and then you have him reading Chuck's book to him....good update

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like him.  I like him too.  Couldn't decide what book to have him read so I left it out.  Still got the reaction I wanted.  Thanks for reading  D

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 03/11/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yeah they have a lead on Dean...Don't understand why Anna can't help Dean...Hopefully that will be explained???  Sam and bobby desperation to find Dean is so sad...good update

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 07/11/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

hmmm does Anna want Castiel to give up his body so that Dean can go into Cas????hmmm interesting...

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 17/11/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Yikes...okay Sam and the impala get into some trouble...and I wonder where Cas has gone....good update

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 02/03/10 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved how Sam was thinking about the future and what he wanted was to hunt with his brother...really liked that...really liked how Sam finally let Dean win in RPS...that was really sweet.  Loved the line " I thought he deserved to win at least once."  good update

 
Double Vision by Nachuma Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

It’s A Wonderful Life, Winchester style. Dean contemplates destiny.  Major angst and some Dean language.

 

Takes place in early season 5, though no real spoilers for it.  Does assume knowledge of Devil’s Trap, IMTOD, AHBL, and the whole season 4 storyline.

 


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5929
[Report This] Published: 09/12/09 Updated: 10/12/09


Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 06/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thought I read some more of your stuff and glad I did...I liked this story.  Glad to see some of that weight lifted off Dean's shoulders for a change...great job

 
Summary: A chance meeting and a jacked hunt leaves one brother doubting and another with a choice to make

Set in Season 2, immediately after the episode What Is And What Should Never Be

Happy Belated Birthday, BHoney!

If You Love Something


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 25095
[Report This] Published: 11/12/09 Updated: 01/01/10


Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 13/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yeah you have started another story...so pleased...a great place to have a story set...looking forward to more


Author's Response:

Thank you for that. There was just so much lovely angst floating around at the end of that episode, so it made a nice bouncing off point for the story. Hope you enjoy the next chapter. And thanks for coming along for the ride.

Jules

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 19/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

great update, I loved the idea of bringing up stanford and all that..thought the boys never really did get all that in the open...hey what am I saying the boys never get everything in the open!

Author's Response:

LOL, you're right, the boys aren't good at saying what they mean, are they? They'd rather face an amputation than talk about their feelings.

So chuffed that you're enjoying this. Hope you like the gory confrontation with the revenant in the next chapter, and the revelation about Matt. Thanks so much for coming along for the ride.

Jules

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 27/12/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh dear..I assume  you are going to go back and hear Sam POV with this conversation in the next installment of this great story...great treat for me before we set off yet again for the 3rd day in a row to my in-laws...(oh the joy!)keep up thegreat work!


Author's Response:

You are correct in your assumption - lol. I am going to go back and finish that conversation that Dean only heard part of before he took the bolt.

Oh, urk - three days with outlaws??? I'd have killed mine - when I had them, that is. Very difficult people, they were. I had the sort of mother-in-law that people make all the jokes about.

So glad that I could give you a treat before you face the music again - lol.

Take care,

Jules 

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 01/01/10 Title: Chapter 4: Epilogue

great story....my favorite line of the last chapter was this "For Dean to have that basic need denied to him must have been torture of the cruellest kind."  loved the description of how tactile Dean is...great job as always....

Lisa



Author's Response:

Thank you, Lisa.

One would think that Sam's the toucher, since he's the more outwardly emotional of the two, but it's actually Dean. Watch all the touches, swats, bumps of the shoulder - Dean instigates it, and Sam leans into it....well, he used to...*unhappy sigh*....damned demons and angels. 

Thanks for coming along for the ride, and I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was a bit of a fun story to write, actually. Nice to revisit a simpler time in the boys' lives.

Jules

 
Summary: The brothers,  separated for the holidays,  experience christmas in different ways.  As always...Dean-centric.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45842
[Report This] Published: 23/12/09 Updated: 21/03/10


Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 10/01/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

glad that Dean got to call Sam and leave the message at least before he got beat up.  So glad that Ryan found him quickly...wonder what else you got up your sleeve with this one...good update

Author's Response: thanks,  darlin'.  and thanks for reviewing on the other site, I don't get alot of traffic there...mal

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 06/01/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

oops we have found the bad guy who is probably going to try and ruin things for Dean...hmm not nice, lets hope Dean has some fun with Stacy beforehand...

Author's Response:

Yeah,  that Stacy---she likes our Dean.....

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 04/01/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice to see that Dean met up with some nice people...let's hope that they offer him a place to stay for the night....good update

Author's Response: Thanks for saying so.  No one should be alone at Christmas.

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 12/01/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

So glad that Dean has Ryan taking care of him...especially with Sam off.  Glad that Sam and Dean vacation from each other has got Sam thinking about what Dean means to him and who Dean is...great update as always

Author's Response: Thanks.  Man,  so much for my attempt at writing a short one for Christmas.

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 30/12/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Loved Sam's talk about Dean...too bad he doesn't say those things to Dean.  And I have a feeling Sam's leaving his phone is not going to have a happy ending!  great job as always

Author's Response: Thanks!  Yep,  a separation from a phone can never end well......

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 24/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey a new story from you...brotherly angst and everything...when is this story set? great start, looking forward to more...

Author's Response: Hey!  Thanks for reading.  Set somewhere in the year following John's death. 

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 28/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ah Sammy how can you hang out with people who treat your brother like dirt...not good.  My favorite line was "It left him with a vicious week-long case of I-shoulda-said." lol and very true...great update...looking forward to more


Author's Response: I hate that I-shoulda-said feeling,  lol

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 18/01/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

The scene with Dean and the bear was so sweet...love the thought of him with a bear.  Glad to see that finally Sam is standing up to his friends and defending Dean...good update

Author's Response: Thanks,  always.

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 26/01/10 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hopefully now Markus will shut up about what a loser Dean is and how Sam should stop being with him.  I have a feeling that Dean's fever is going to get a bit worse and the fact that he can't find his phone is not going to be good.  good update


Author's Response: Thanks as always.  I may just stop posting at the other site after this one.  It's kind of a downer to have so few replies.  People here are more vocal,  bless'em----mal

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 03/02/10 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well, this should be interesting...will Sam find Dean before his internal injuries get worse...cause I think that they are...great update


Author's Response: Damned if I know!  lol

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 05/02/10 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

everything is coming to a head...the baddies are looking for Dean, Sam is looking for Dean and Dean is slowly getting worse...but the story that Dean told about christmas...so sad and sweet at the same time...good update

Author's Response: Ah,  my other two-site champion,  lol.  Thanks

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 08/02/10 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Ah so glad that Sam and Dean are together, well at least Sam finally finds out what happens to Dean...this is so good..and ugh I head out on vacation in a few days (no internet access!!!) ugh.....so not fair! :(

Author's Response: I'm trying to feel for you,  but it just ain't happening,  lol.

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 11/02/10 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Ah I get no sympathy...LOL...Even hurt Dean can still save the day and kick the bad guys butts! And still I don't think that Dean realizes that Sam is there!  great udpate


Author's Response: Thanks!  Hope you have a fab holiday.  My son's in Cuba right now,  I have to live vicariously through his pictures.

 
Reviewer: usaexpat Signed
Date: 20/02/10 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

nicely written update, glad to see that Marcus finally gets Dean.  Love the bit where Dean explained about wanting to see Christmas, very touching.  

Author's Response: Wish I could build a house with a picket fence for him.