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Real name: Lisa Status: Member Member Since: 27/11/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by usaexpat Summary:
My take on what happens immediately after the light erupts from the floor. Spoilers for the season four finale, so beware! Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 786 [Report This] Published: 20/05/09 Updated: 20/05/09
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Date: 21/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 really liked this so filled with brotherly moments that we need to read/see good job! Summary:
Dean's sick and on the road alone. That's it, really... Set pre-series. For the commodore. Happy birthday hun! Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2894 [Report This] Published: 25/05/09 Updated: 25/05/09
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Date: 27/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Strung Out really great short story...back to the good old days of Dean and Sam together. (ish) cause they weren't together together here but you know what I mean.... Summary:
My idea of what happens in the dying seconds of the very end of 4x22 (season finale, so episode title withheld to prevent spoilers), and what I think should come next. Ergo: ULTIMATE SPOILERS for end of season 4. Oh my dog, is that angst? You think I'm doing angst now? Oh ye of little faith! SPN fans cannot live by angst alone... Categories: One Shots, AU, Action, Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1805 [Report This] Published: 01/06/09 Updated: 01/06/09
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Date: 02/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 this was pretty funny love the idea of the answerig machine message..good job Summary:
Sam Winchester likes to read but what effect will his latest reading material have on his big brother and will Dean survive it. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 30929 [Report This] Published: 07/08/09 Updated: 29/08/09
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Date: 11/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 cool idea for a story...wonder how long it will take for Sam to figure out the connection, may I ask one thing though...when you do the flashbacks and put them in italics and clump them all together it makes it almost impossible to read...the italics are fine but could you put some spaces in the flashbacks as well? thanks Hi, Thanks for letting us know you like the story so far. As for the italics, i know exactly what you mean and please believe me when i say we really, really tried to get this chapter right when we posted but for some reason the italics section jumbled itself back together again. I know it's something we're doing wrong but i just don't know what so if we have any more italics we're thinking of taking them out and just using plain bold print instead as we seem able to cope with that. I really must get myself a little more computer literate, lol. Thank you so much once again for reading, even with the difficult italics, and letting us know you like the story, it really does mean the world to us. Next chapter will be up either tomorrow or at the latest Thursday.
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Date: 13/08/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Yikes bobby and Sam better find him quick...I found this story on FF.net and I find it much easier to read and review on that site than this one...(i am ukfan101 there!) so I hope that is okay...just wanted you to know so that you didn't think I was not liking this story! Hi, Thanks for letting us know that you like the story. I don't know what we do wrong when we post on this site but we always seem to get some of the text clumped together no matter what we try. Thanks again for dropping us a line, it's very much appreciated. Summary:
John has made a discovery that has made him have to sit Dean down for that talk. John though might learn more than his son, more than he really wants to know! Rated M for subject matter and mild discussion of that boys' habit! Spoilers: Pre-series, so none. Disclaimer: The CW and Mr K owns it all and my soul. Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 5012 [Report This] Published: 14/08/09 Updated: 24/08/09
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Date: 14/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Adult Education that was great, very funny...I have to say I starting thinking about giving that talk to my kids, hopefully they will not be little dean clones! lol good job Hi there Thanks. My boy is only 7 so the talk is a while off yet - but that will be Daddy's job when the time comes! Cheers Mary x Summary: Mysterious disappearances at a construction site just outside a small town in Arizona lead the boys to a dusty remote canyon, far from help, and within striking distance of something far more dangerous than anything they've come up against before. When one of the brothers falls victim, it will be up to the other to save him.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 21238 [Report This] Published: 17/08/09 Updated: 06/09/09
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Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 hmm what did the old man see in Dean...good start to a story! Summary:
Set before season 1. Dean heads to Bobby's place, in order to care for his Impala and himself.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 9926 [Report This] Published: 19/08/09 Updated: 30/08/09
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Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 this is a great story...very sad for Dean, though I am glad he at least has Bobby...with these types of stories you always wish in the back of your head that there will be some sort of happy ending but of course there will never be one...good job
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Date: 29/08/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I think that Dean definitely needs to go on that hunt...Dean needs to see that he can be okay by himself...because unfortunately his family does leave him alot. great story
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Date: 30/08/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I think you gave this story the happiest ending you could and still be true to the characters...good job! Summary:
Dean has been on his own since John bailed on him nearly three months ago and Bobby is worried so he decided to enlist Dean's help with what should be a fairly routine job. Only trouble is that the word routine? - It isn't in the Winchester vocabulary and Bobby's intervention to save his friend, might just be the death of him! Set pre-series. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 65460 [Report This] Published: 20/08/09 Updated: 20/06/11
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Date: 08/02/10 Title: Chapter 11: Day Seven yeah you are back writing this story...oh dear...I hope Sam and John don't fall for Pauline's tricks...great update Hey there I haven't forgotten it, I just can't get it to flow at the moment. Thanks for sticking with, Mary xx
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Date: 27/08/09 Title: Chapter 2: Day Two I love Bobby...poor Dean he did give up everything for those two and they just left him...so glad he has bobby.. Hey Thanks. I love Bobby and he is always there when Dean needs him. Cheers Mary x
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Date: 05/09/09 Title: Chapter 4: Day Four Loved Dean's protectiveness of Bobby...poor Dean so needy for his family, if only they felt the same way...good update HI Thank you. I like Dean and Bobby together, they really are like father and son. Dean is missing his family and they will try to contact him. Thanks, Mary x
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Date: 14/09/09 Title: Chapter 5: Day Four, Part Two Once again I use my review to say that I love bobby and kuddios to him for telling off John...Loved how Dean managed to get a phone number off of a woman who had just been reunited with her lost child! great update Hey there I love Bobby too! He's the business! And yeah what is Dean like - ten minutes and he's got her number! Go Dean! Cheers Mary x
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Date: 17/09/09 Title: Chapter 6: Day Four/Five yikes... I didn't see the mall collapsing onto top of Dean...so glad that Sam is coming to help...great update Hey I thought someone actually might have guessed that that was what I was going to do, I left a few very subtle hints in some of the chapters but I didn't want anyone to guess, so I'm pleased that I caught you all by surprise! Sam and John are on their way. Cheers Mary x
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Date: 21/09/09 Title: Chapter 7: Day Five really you are going to be nice to Dean this time and only "hurt" him a little? :-) great update Author's Response: HI I said I could be nice to Dean this time...I didn't say that I would be! *smiles* Thanks Mary x
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Date: 28/09/09 Title: Chapter 8: Day Five, Part Two oh Sam and John are going to meet up...this out to be good! great update glad that Pauline helped Dean..He should ask her if she can try and get out of the building as sfar as she can and contact bobby...ifshe is still there when Dean wakes up Author's Response: Hey Yeah, time to get John and Sam together, that'll be fun! Dean has a little help, crazy ghost help but then beggers can't be choosers! Thanks Mary x
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Date: 27/11/09 Title: Chapter 10: Day 6 It is good that Sam didn't burn Pauline's bones...even though she is unstable I think she is helping Dean by being there with him...good update! Hey there I'd hold that opinion if I were you, Pauline is company for Dean but the unstable part might just raise its head...and he has nowhere to run! *evil laugh* For the moment though she is helping! Mary xx
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Date: 01/03/10 Title: Chapter 12: Day Eight Hey another favorite story that you have updated...way cool that Bobby wasn't fooled by the ghost and even more that Bobby was able to talk to Dean...and not cool about the collapse around Dean...great update.... Hey there Yup I am on a roll! I little bit of hope and a little bit of worry, don't say that I ain't good to you all, lol Mary xx
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Date: 16/03/10 Title: Chapter 13: Day Nine oh boy Sam and John better to hurry, Dean isn't going to last much longer. I have to say I was surprised at John's restraint in dealing with that horrible man..I am surprised he just didn't bit his head off to at the begining! lol Hey The guys are on their way and they are almost there. I think Sam was the restraint on John just blowing it! Mary xx
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Date: 29/03/10 Title: Chapter 14: Day Ten Yeah they found him!!! So pleased that Pauline decided to help Dean out...after all what woman could resist Dean! lol....great update Yeah indeed! lol Pauline isn't finished yet! :) Mary xx
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Date: 07/05/10 Title: Chapter 15: Day Eleven way to go Dean...so glad that he told off his brother and his Dad...course I hope he sticks to his guns and doesn't cave but he probably will! great update He told them off but this is Dean and when he remembers....he'll not be happy with himself...and yeah, he might cave! Good call. Mary xx
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Date: 02/06/10 Title: Chapter 17: Day 13 Yikes...I was getting worried about a possible prison stuff for Dean but now I gotta worry about him dying...lovely twist and turns...great update Thanks for the review and sorry for the delay in replying. Glad you liked this one. Mary x Always one for a twist that's me!
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Date: 15/08/10 Title: Chapter 18: Day 14 woo hooo pauline to the rescue well she did get him into even more trouble but she did save him. so glad to see an update to the story! good job
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Date: 03/03/11 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Yeah an updated! I had forgotten about this story..glad to see you hadn't! LOL. Like how Dean was picking Bobby over Sam and John...and I think it was a nice touch what he did with Pauline...good update Author's Response: Hey Don't worry I won't forget it. It will get finished as will the others I have floundering on the site. It's my mission for this year! lol Thanks, Mary xx |
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