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Real name: Lisa Status: Member Member Since: 27/11/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by usaexpat Summary:
Sam gets pulled into a game. The prize? Dean. To save Dean from a fate worse than Death or Hell. Ruby comes to help but can they win before the prize is no longer worth claiming? Spoilers - For S4. Disclaimers - Sorry the boys are not mine but if Mr Kripke and the CW are looking for a new home for them..... Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 36901 [Report This] Published: 07/01/09 Updated: 07/03/09
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Date: 07/03/09 Title: Chapter 15: Game Over So glad that Sam and Dean got back together in this story...The last two chapters had it all...brotherly angst and chick flick moments all good! great story Hi there Thanks for that, I hate the boys being at each other's throat...needed then back together at the end. Glad you enjoyed, Mary xx Summary:
It's Dean's 30th birthday and his brother wants to do something special for him. Spoilers for S4 up to 4.10 Disclaimer: Not mine, but I can dream. The boys belong to the Kripke and the CW. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 8396 [Report This] Published: 23/01/09 Updated: 05/02/09
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Date: 28/01/09 Title: Chapter 4: Letters that was amazing... i wish that they would do something like that on the show...really great idea.. Hi there Thank you for that, I sometimes wish that they would have more brotherly bits as well, I like them best. Cheers Mary x Summary:
Spoilers up to and including 4/14 After the emotional upheaval of the siren incident, the brothers visit an old friend recently relocated to Georgia, in the hopes of gaining some perspective. They gain far more than they bargained for....
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes Word count: 97798 [Report This] Published: 01/03/09 Updated: 03/10/09
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Date: 02/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Aha I will find your stories anywhere! (UKsnfan101 here) Nice to bring the story with David and all into the present with the deal/the siren and all. The hurt that each other boys does to one another is just dreadful...can't wait to see what you do with this story Lisa Author's Response: Thanks for hunting me down, Lisa lol i like the format here, especially being able to do a story banner. Summary:
The Winchester trap and kill a witch but she has some disturbing news for Sam before she dies. Has she hex'd his brother and if she has how does he help him? Can Sam and his father stop arguing long enough to help Dean or will their constant quarrelling be the end of him? And what will be the aftermath of it all.
Spoilers: Set in Pre-S1 Disclaimer:It all belongs to Mr Kripke and the CW. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 57 Completed: Yes Word count: 183215 [Report This] Published: 09/03/09 Updated: 19/02/10
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Date: 16/12/09 Title: Chapter 51: Fraying At The Edges oh dear Dean does something silly cause his family is hurting him...hmmm so cool that Dean got only 4 points lower score on the test than sam did...what could he have done if he had studied..good update Hey there Yup the boy never learns, glad you liked Dean being smart, just needed to link that back in before I close this story off. Mary xx
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Date: 14/01/10 Title: Chapter 53: Feels Like A Birthday Dean is such the great brother, too bad Sammy doesn't remember that when he heads off to college. What a great time they had...and I like how at the end the "worse" birthday felt more natural to them than the vegas day. great job Hey there Dean has his moments and Sam would do well to remember them. I couldn't resist ending with a bit of 'normal' for the boys, glad you liked. Mary xx
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Date: 30/04/09 Title: Chapter 13: Getting there Way to go Agnes, Dean so needs more people like that in his life! Looking forward to the talk between Dean and Sam although unfortunately we all know where Sam is heading...great update Hi there Thanks, yup Agnes is definitely on Dean's side. Sam and Dean up, time for Dean to find out what the fight was about. CHeers Mary x
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Date: 16/03/09 Title: Chapter 2: One minute you're down and then next you're up cool start to a story, I have always liked stories with the 3 winchesters together. So...poor Dean gets sick when someone is fighting eh? that can't be good! Hi there Thank you, I like the guys together and I think that I'll write a few more, life was so much simpler then. Dean gets sick but it isn't necessarily the fighting that is doing it.... Cheers Mary x
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Date: 05/04/09 Title: Chapter 7: So close and yet Hopefully this means that Dean has woken up and that between the two of them they can figure out the problem...good update Has Dean woken up...the next chapter is up to answer that! Not quite there yet though and there might be a tiny problem! CHeers Mary x
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Date: 17/04/09 Title: Chapter 10: Arresting Behaviour wow glad that Sam finally figured out what was the trigger but his method not so good! that was an intense chapter...the fight between Sam and John was huge...great update Hi there Thanks, yep Sam finally knows, does that mean I can write guiltridden!Sam *claps hands* Glad you liked this, the fight was fun. Cheers Mary x
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Date: 22/04/09 Title: Chapter 12: The Calm Before The Storm Poor Dean always caught in the middle and it is not surprising that he feels the way he does...I am glad that you are showing Dean having emotional effects from the spell...good update HI there Thanks. I know Dean is always stuck between a rock and a hard place with his family. Cheers Mary x
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Date: 04/05/09 Title: Chapter 14: Stepping Back, Letting Go Jeepers Sam almost killed Dean physically and now he is killing him mentally by telling about leaving for school....good update Hi there Yep, he has really put his brother through the wringer in this, in more ways than one. Thanks, Mary x
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Date: 12/05/09 Title: Chapter 16: That's Just What Family Does wow this is quite a chapter...god you just want to kill John...he is such a selfish jerk but then again Sam isn't exactly helping the situation...good update and great story Hi there It was. John was out of line here but I plan to redeem him...I hope! Glad you like, cheers Mary x
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Date: 14/05/09 Title: Chapter 17: A Word To The Not So Wise oh that was such a great speech that JIm told to John, every word the truth..but unfortunately nothing will change. The best lines were this "e loves you and that brother of his more than either of you have any right to expect. He gives you everything he has and he takes nothing back in return. Not that anything would be forth coming any way. You and Sam your selfish to the core and do you know what?” " perfect!!!! Hi there Yeah, I kinda liked that and only Jim or Bobby would get away with saying it to John. Cheers Mary x
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Date: 05/06/09 Title: Chapter 23: Wants and Desires really funny the way you got John and Agnes together! Hi there Glad you liked. It does have a purpose! Promise. Cheers Mary x
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Date: 11/06/09 Title: Chapter 25: Watching You I know I know that it won't happen but I so wish that Dean would stay there. He deserve to have people care about him and appreciate him...oh well wishful thinking... Hi there I know it would be nice but Dean wouldn't do that...would he? I does deserve to be shown that he's love more than he is. Cheers Maryx
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 33: Truths and Lies I really like Julie-Anne and Dean together it is so sad that he wouldn't stay with her and her mom and give "real life" a shot...great update Hi there I do too, she is good for him. He won't stay but it would be nice if he could. Thanks, Mary x
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Date: 10/08/09 Title: Chapter 34: Anything for my brother it is so sad that Dean won't stay at the clinic...but I can understand why he won't Hi I know, it is but his reasons are good ones - his family will always come first. Cheers Mary x
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Date: 01/10/09 Title: Chapter 42: Ties That Bind nice to see that Dean is keeping in contact with Julie and Agnes....good update Hi there Yeah, he's not reached the cut everybody that you care for out of your life stage yet! CHeers Mary x
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Date: 03/11/09 Title: Chapter 48: Burn Witch Burn Hey I got the dancing on the ceiling reference...guess that make me over 35! what a battle...loved Julie-Anne you shouldn't have hurt my boyfriend comment! great update Hey there Guess it does lol! Glad you liked Julie-Anne going all Laura Croft on Abigail! Thanks, Mary x
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Date: 03/02/10 Title: Chapter 54: If You Love Somebody, Set Them Free Oh Sam want to wring your neck...why couldn't you have called your brother when you were at Stanford...great update Hey there Yeah, a phone call would have meant a lot. Thanks Mary xx
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Date: 05/02/10 Title: Chapter 55: Lonely Is The Man Yikes, poor Dean almost ready to kill himself...I hope that Sam treats him right at the school, but i have a horrible feeling he won't...great update Hey there Yup he's a little low but he'll get there. Sam will be as nice to Dean as he can be. Thanks, mary xx
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Date: 20/02/10 Title: Chapter 57: On This Road Forever More Really enjoyed the story, loved how you wrapped it all up. good job Hey Thank you, glad you enjoy the ride! Mary xx Summary:
“If you could fix me on the outside, why didn’t you fix me on the inside?” Dean fought back the tears again. “Why didn’t you just let me forget. Why did you let me remember?”
Everyone has their breaking point - has Dean finally reached his?
Spoilers: Character from S4, up to 4.16 at the moment. Will let you know if that changes but it shouldn't.
Disclaimer: It all belongs to Mr Krikpe and the CW. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 31522 [Report This] Published: 12/03/09 Updated: 31/03/10
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Date: 13/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Heading for a breakdown cool start.looking forward to more HI there Thanks! Hope you like. Cheers Mary x
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Date: 26/08/09 Title: Chapter 12: One step forward.... Just finished reading all the chapters...amazing job with this...I had always thought that Dean would good "insane" after what hell put him through but at least we get to read about it...great job Hey there I wanted them to let Dean have a completely breakdown, even just for an episode! And they never, it's what got me writing this in the first place....a little more hell angst would have been nice. CHeers Mary x Summary:
Dean takes ill after the boys last job in Stratton, Nebraska. Ruby arrives and Sam finds that she has a way for him to save his brother but can Sam do to Dean what she is telling him he must and will Dean forgive him if he does? Spoilers: Set between Family Remains and CAIADB (Mentions where they are headed in CAIADB) Disclaimer: I wish it but they aren't. Mr Kripe lets me play too though. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 23997 [Report This] Published: 31/03/09 Updated: 12/10/09
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Date: 09/04/09 Title: Chapter 2: Something in the blood well that is just nasty....Dean is so not going to be a happy camper about this...great idea for a story... Hi there It is isn't it? Dean won't be pleased to put it mildly! Glad you like, cheers Mary x |
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