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Reviews by mymuseandi Summary:
The boys are back and ready to kick demon ass, but when Bobby is violently attacked the boys focus their attention on finding his attacker Banner rocks Lou!!! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 10709 [Report This] Published: 13/12/07 Updated: 20/02/08
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 Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Tear drops Schelz... You killed Jo!!!!!....not sure how i felt about that...not really a fan of Jo's, but i guess i really read very little deathfics, and that's why it kinda hits me more i think.... Very good story....and i love the ending...not a happily ever after ending, but a more bittersweet one, and i think it's a very very good ending......and leaving readers to wonder about Ellen and Ash...and did i mention i LOVE the ending?? LOL Author's Response: Aww hun thanks for the stars. Yeah I'm not into deathfics myself, but it's hard when your story telling starts to waver, as a writer you have to make a decision, trust yourself after making that decision and give it your all. Mixed emotions and opinions is a good thing in my book, thanks for your honesty. I'm starting to like the fact that not everyone is going to agree with me and like my style, pace, and outcomes. Ta for saying it was overall a good story I'm glad you liked the ending!!! I try my best to do happy endings (Yes, sap over here) glad its left you wondering. I wonder too because Ellen just disappeared from season2 and I always thought they showed Ash's watch for a reason, apparently not. Yep you mention you loved the ending... thanks Lyn;) Schelz Summary:
Banner by the wonderful Chasidern Dean is seriously injured on a hunt and Sam has to cope, the only problem is Sam is only 13 Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3439 [Report This] Published: 13/12/07 Updated: 13/12/07
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 Date: 13/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nicely done. The flashback is great, at least there is a thread from the past to the present. And totally believable that Sam would be sick after stitching Dean back. :) Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
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Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 LOL. This is great....And you are right to set it in the future...i dun think the story would have worked well in the present day.... Can't wait for the next chapter. :) Author's Response: Thank you for that, and no, you're right, the storyline wouldn't have worked in present day. Only trouble is, with Dean's year rapidly running out, in a few months of real time this story will be in the present - LOL. Glad you're enjoying this, and hope you can stick around for the twists coming up...Jules
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Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Right..... Dean has a split personality???? OMG. That's freakier than i thought it would be.... Author's Response: Right...lol. Oh, stick around - it gets freakier. More on its way...Jules
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Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Oh......ok, this twist is interesting.... So who does the body belong to???????? Dean or Sam??? I assume it can't be John cuz he's dead, but your story is twisted so i guess anything is possible..... :) Author's Response: LOL - thank you for that. I'm glad I am successfully playing with your mind. So, you haven't picked up on the clues, eh? Well, see how you go with chapter 4...and thanks so much for reading...Jules
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Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 So you meant to say that anyone who has DID will see themselves in the mirror? That's interesting...i always thought that you can see the other person in the mirror then you can know that you are nuts...LOL Your warning is duly noted. Waiting in trepidation...... Author's Response: Well, is it really DID... Actually, I'm not sure who the person with DID would see in the mirror, but for the purpose of my exercise, I took poetic licence and made the boys see themselves. The reason will be revealed in the epilogue - stick with me....Jules
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Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Just the epilogue?? You mean it's ending?? I hope it's a really long one cuz i really really enjoy this story, and i can't wait to know the ending!! Bobby to the rescue!! Yeah!!! Author's Response: Thank you - yes, just the epilogue. Bobby will be back, with reinforcements....Jules
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Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue OMG.....i have never, never, NEVER expected that!!! I always thought it was Dean, but then i was so confused, and thank god for all the clues that you put in the end, cuz if not i would have nevergotten them!! This is a great story. It's not often that we get to see the boys in a third person's point of view... and one that managed to confuse us readers til almost the very end, but it's so addictive that we can't help but keep on reading! Absolutely awesome! And i totally dig all the Aussie phrases...i'm from Singapore and all the familiar words and phrases and explanations make me smile..... I hope you are planning another sequel with the boys and Kayla?? As in maybe they need help from a doc or something? It's such a shame to let her go with just one story...and you can even throw in Myra and Jim...Hell, throw in another sequel with the whole hospital as the background! Anyway, great, great, GREAT story...and hoping much more from you... :) Author's Response: Thank you so much - glad I could play with your mind like that. Yes, it is a little different to my usual style, being in the first person, and seeing everything through the eyes of one person, finding out things as she finds out, with no peeks into the minds of other characters. Glad you liked the slang - it was nice to be able to write some of that in, although I did confuse my beta at the beginning and have to remind her that Kayla's an Aussie, and she would really talk like that - LOL. I'll definitely keep a sequel in mind, as a few people have expressed such interest in it - will have to wait and see how Kripke gets my boy out of his deal first, and then, well, who knows? Thank you so much for reading and reviewing...Jules Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 No pressies, but will a review do?? Very interesting about the cult. Hopefully you will explore it in the future chapters. And i like the way you make Dean feel so upset about his hair...i'd always thought he'll go ballistic if someone else does something to his hair without his permission. Haha Author's Response: lol ,yeah, sure a review works just as well as a present!! glad you are liking the cult storyline!! thanks for reading!! bambers;)
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Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Oooooooooooooo...........suspenseful!!!! Cn't wait for the next year!! Author's Response: lol...yeah, a little suspenseful!! hopefully you'll enjoy all that is to come!!! bambers;)
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Date: 19/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 So, this is getting better and better. now Sam is also in the hands of these sadistic people......i hope that Dean would not be too brainwashed to not remember Sam when the boys are reunited, IF the boys are reunited.....Muahahahahahaha.... Sorry....forgot my meds..... Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The luck is just so bad for the boys!!!!!!!!!! Are you going to let them up from their misery soon???? I can't stand much more of it! And hopefully Bobby would be able to help them out....
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Date: 24/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Poor poor Dean....What is happening with Sam? Hope you get your inspiration with Charlie....Merry Xmas!
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Date: 25/12/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Initially i thought that Dean was actually just faking the obedience, cuz of the part when you said that he was looking for a way to escape and then talking about how he had an ex-marine for a father and things like that...you almost had my hopes up.... Can't wait for the next chapter...
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Date: 26/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Ouch!!!! Feeling pain for Sam......are you serious about breaking all of Sam's fingers??? Then how are they going to escape????? Will they be able to escape??????????
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Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Well, yeah, i think you did justice to the secret....but i think shouldn't you let Dean out of his misery? And Sam as well? So that Dean can kill that SOB for killing Shannon. You know, the whole circle of life thing.... LOL
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Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Enjoying it immensely, but still a bit nervous on what is to come....i'm sensing a lot of angst and hurt....*biting nails AGAIN*
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Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Well..........i'm not sure how much more i can stand, reading about the different torture inflicted on both boys.....i flinched several times while reading this story.... Having said that, this story is compelling...so i'll be definitely staying til the end....hopefully there's a silver lining at the end of it....even a tiny one....
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Date: 16/01/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Thanks for making Sam at least have an ally in the whole thing....and Dean torturing Sam??? Never thought the day would come....and when Dean and Sam's rescued....OMG....there's going to be hell literally...Dean would never forgive himself...and Sam might not be able to forgive him either..... Poor Winchesters!!!
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Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I'm really glad that you said that this is the beginning of the end for the Father!! Can't help but cheer at that thought. Sadistic fella.....but i cringe at the thought of the aftermath....how can Dean and Sam get back as 'normal' as they possibly can with all those scars and injuries and mental brainwashing......
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Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Go John!!!! Can't wait for him to kick dominic's butt...... Wondering what happened to Dean....he may look better physically, but is he better mentally....especially if that Father have broken him!
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Date: 24/01/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Finally Dean reappears!!! But i'm slightly puzzled by his behaviour....one moment he was all meek and submissive towards the Father and the next minute he's looking for way to escape...not that i minded him thinking that way but it's quite puzzling...is he trying to play it down until there's a way for him to escape??? Hopefully he can find Sam!!!
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Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Can you devise a totally torturous way for the stupid Father to die?? Like maybe, i don't know, do to him the same way he did things to Sam and Dean??????? and then maybe break his fingers and make him beg for mercy????? Or wait, maybe death is too good for him...make his so called other children turn against him????? I fear for Sam, John and Bobby's life (not to mention Dawn's) when Dean start training those people...and is there a ghost somewhere in the compound??? Sooo many questions......
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Ok that one i didn't see coming.....this Father is confusing me...he feels so much and yet he's so evil...and he takes care of Dean and yet leaves Sam to die....i mean, he takes contradiction to the highest level!! And yes, can't wait for the rescue! Although i'm in two minds about it...i dread to think how the boys would react towards one another, and towards John...
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Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Would John actualyl recognise his own son????? Or would it be too late??? Argh.....could just imagine John shooting now and asking questions later.... and then regretting it for the rest of his life.... :( |
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