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TM7 tag. Envy was taunting Sam. I know things. Sam looked up and saw fear in Dean’s eyes. Not from the danger of facing the seven deadly sins personified. No.., Dean feared something else, something more. Sam shook at the realization. Dean feared the truth.
He felt like he was betraying Dean by allowing this monster to defile his good name and all the great accomplishments of his life, and a part of him wanted to bust the demon’s jaw himself for daring to speak Dean’s name. But a part of him needed to know and Dean wasn’t talking. It was sordid and unsavory and so very wrong on so many levels… but God help him, he needed to know.
Categories: Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 49079 [Report This] Published: 20/10/07 Updated: 12/06/08
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 Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Envy Wow...i managed to read all 5 chapters in one go, and it was INTENSE!!!!...and eagerly waiting for the next few chapters.....have no idea why i didn't start reading this story from the beginning, but i'm glad i did now....it's one of the most emotional stories i've ever read and it's great of you to research before posting, cuz it makes it very believable.... And i agree with you that it's doing them a disservice if we sugarcoat their lives, and with the messed up lives that the Winchesters had, who's to say that the very very bad things had never happened to them?? That's why i love ff so much....the possibilities are endless!!!! (and to paraphrase irnan (i think), the possibilities of wee!chesters are endless!!) Will be waiting for the remaining chapters..... Author's Response: Wow! You must be on emotional overload reading all the chapters at once. I know this is an intense read, but the reality is the Winchesters' lives have always been intense. FF is amazing because even with as much as they cram into every single episode, there is no way they can cover everything. The tags to episodes and exploring the Wee!chesters are great ways for fanfics to dig deeper into the psyches of our Winchesters and attempt to understand them better. This is a tough story to write and read, but hopefully it will bring more compassion and understanding between the brothers. I do believe Dean and all the Wincesters are immensely strong to have survived everything that has happened to them. Glad you found my story and are enjoying it. Thanks for letting me know. Take care, B.J.
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 Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - What Goes Around Comes Around I was waiting for the continuation of this, and although it was long, i think it was worth it. still as intense as the previous chapters, and makes me cringe in some places, and tear in others. especially the part where Dean refused to forgive Sam. i mean, he forgives Sam for EVERYTHING!! And the demon should really be gagged. all the lies and sowing seeds of doubt to both brothers.. I also can't believe that Dean went back to the demon, although i can understand the sheer curiosity of doing so. but won't he be leaving himself open to a world of hurt? Author's Response: Both boys are in a world of hurt. They are both struggling to come to terms with the secret and time will heal them eventually. And with time Dean will forgive Sam, after all that is his job... take care of his little brother. Yeah, the demon was supposed to be exorcised this chapter but he got a slight reprieve. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Take care, B.J.
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Date: 13/06/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - You Can Run But You Can't Hide Fnally the demon is sent back!! Man...i've been waiting for that, and he damn well deserved it! All of the flashbacks that Sam had, it was brought upon by the demon's words?i know it's slightly bad that Sam keep on pushing the issue, but i also feel that he needs to know?? if only to make himself feel better and ease Dean of his burden a little... Hindsight is 20/20, especially when grown-up eyes replace the innocent eyes of a hero-worshipping child. I agree, hindsight is always 20/20. but i can't blame Sam since he's only a child.. Author's Response: I think in this instance no one is to blame. Sam was a kid and he just never knew what was happening. Now he is starting to remember and he only wants to help Dean. Problem is Dean would rather forget and he has always maintained that strength where he never asked or expected help. Oh, these Winchesters, their lives are so very complicated especially when they try to hide from the truth. Once they get rid of the rest of these demons Dean will again be confronted by Sam and the truth is destined to come out. Thanks for reading and reviewing, much appreciated. Take care, B.J. Summary:
Trapped in total darkness, both hurt, one seriously - but which one.... Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3874 [Report This] Published: 27/10/07 Updated: 27/10/07
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I did get confused in the middle of the story. I did guess that Dean injured his leg, but i thought that he got worse as well. Anyway, it was a good style of writing. :) Author's Response: Thank you for that. It was something I wanted to try - not my usual style - just a bit of a holiday. Thanks for the review....Jules Summary:
In the early dawn, Sam and Dean find themselves out of luck and out of time. Their final goodbye is painful and grief-stricken, but strangely peaceful. Caution; Character death is IMPLIED. Categories: One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1168 [Report This] Published: 28/10/07 Updated: 29/10/07
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Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I only wish that Dean and Sam will not be separated during the last hours of Dean's life, yet i totally understand why he doesn't want Sam to be there when they come for him. *sniffs* Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658 [Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08
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Date: 29/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Coming Down I've just started readin this story and i can't wait to read more....i'm pretty sure there are more bad news waiting to be uncovered in the next chapters right??,,, :)
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Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 13: Ties That Bind Loving this story...a very apt ending...and hopefully you'll be writing more as it goes by... Summary: An upper crust witch wants revenge on a certain hunter, or perhaps his boys....
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 28623 [Report This] Published: 04/11/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Playing With Matches John to the rescue!!! Hooray!! Dean is smart. Waiting for the best chance to create the worst chaos....although it's kinda sad that he chose to die when Sammy's dead, but that's a given isn't it.... Can't believe it's ending! Author's Response: Thanks for the read and review! John finally made it, although an hour earlier might have been nice. Don't think this rescue will be a cakewalk.....
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Date: 18/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Leave Me Behind Argh.......oh man.......you had me literally on edge....please post the next chapter ASAP....
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Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 A Boredom Timeout Wow...that's all i can say right now..... Can't wait for Dean's side.... Author's Response: Dean will definitely be back for chap 10 both literally and more like himself too. Thanks
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Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 To The Rescue? Hey, it's not undignified to beg for a review....it's a prerogative... ;) So glad that Derrick Weaver's dead.... serves him right...and i's always knew that Abby would only think of herself, that selfish witch...is this setting up to be a sequel for another story, hopefully when Dean and Sam are older?? i hope Dean and John would be ok! Author's Response: You're right, the boys do need to be older to completely deal with her - that story will get told sooner or later. Glad killing Derrick worked for you - definitely deserved it, but since he's the only bad guy here that's actually human, I debated about doing it. Thank you for the read and review!
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Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Straight Through Are you sure you want to write an epilogue after this?? What about the CPS? The fact that Dean thought Sam was dead?? His recovery in the aftermath?? Can you fit it all in one chapter???????? I would love to read about all of that!!! And i'll be watching out for the sequel if you are planning one.. :) Author's Response: Not sure if it will all fit in one or not - I'm gonna give it a go! And yeah, there's a sequel for this. Glad you're enjoying this
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Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap You mean to say that when they are older, would it be really older like they are in the show now, or older but still younger than their ages in the show?? Cuz you were saying that : Some were recorded as accidents, some murders, but somewhere between nine and fourteen, they all died. Yup am waiting for the sequel...i think its gonna be great!! Author's Response: Not sure yet whether I'll put this up as one sequel or two, so the ages will depend on that. THe final portion will be when they are adults. Glad you liked this. Thanks, Angela Summary:
Sequel to 'Bearer of all light'
The book is buried, and the brothers are on the road again. But nothing is ever simple for the Winchesters. With Dean's ever increasingly strange behaviour and Bobby's news of a new and very human threat, Sam must strive to save his brother from more than just the supernatural. Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 39189 [Report This] Published: 05/11/07 Updated: 29/01/08
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Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Knowledge may be power but... I've followed your recommendations and have read Bearer of Light and Meeting of Minds before reading this. I'm glad you have a sequel and it's as riveting as the first one! I hope Dean can fight the thing that's in him....Maybe Sam is his anchor??? Cantwaitcantwaitcantwait......... :) Author's Response: Thanks Lyn, and I'm so glad you read the others too. Thanks for the R&R and I hope you continue to enjoy this story.
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Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Gonna blow like dynamite Fight, Dean fight!! Fight the demon! ...Feeling sorry for Sam now, for getting hit....damn... Happy New Year!! Author's Response: Oh he will, don't worry about that...and Sam's a big boy, he's had worse...lol Thanks for the R&R, I hope you continue to enjoy and Happy New Year to you too!
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Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I got something to say Thigh, chest and neck??? Wow, you are sure not pulling your punches....Where's Bobby? Dean? They've got to save him! On their way, I promise. Thanks for the review and the rating, it's very good of you...smiling.
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Date: 10/01/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Going sideways and then some Gosh...another cliffhanger.....Sigh....don't make us readers wait too long for the next one??? I like the way you pace your story....just revealing something from the last chapter and have another carrot dangling for us to eagerly wait for the next chapter...and your storyline's awesome... And Bobby had a pic of Dean and Sam?? Aww...Sweet...LOL Author's Response: Thanks Lyn, I apreciate the comments about pacing and storyline, this is the one story I'm trying to really pour everything into, so I'm very glad it's working for you...and writing the next chapter as we speak...lol Thanks for the review and especially the stars!
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Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Friends in low places I really hate Dean thinking that he's not worth it....i mean, for all the things he did, doing and going to do, he can't seriously still think that he's not worth a s*** if he can't expel whatever is inside him.....i doubt a lesser man would be even consciuos of what he did...... Sam and Dean so need to have a talk about this after Sam and Bobby rescued him.....they will rescue him, right??? Author's Response: You are SO right and rest assured Sam, and Bobby will both be sorting him out before the end of all this... Thanks for the review and the great stars, they are always so much appreciated.
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Date: 21/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths He's going to kill himself!!!!! No no no..stop him please.... Hehehe...Breath, in through the nose, out through the mouth...OK? Don't worry there is only another couple of chapters to this story and I don't write death fic so do not fret...lol Thanks so much for the review and the stars mymuse, hope you enjoy the end of this tale...won't be long now.
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Date: 24/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 This was so not the plan This has me on my toes.....like literally....and i think my nails are already damaged from being bitten for too long!!!! LOL Can't wait for the ending...and i'm holding on to the promise that this is not a death fic... Author's Response: Thank you for the great review and the shiny stars, mymuse. And I promise you have nothing to worry about, in fact the chances are the next two chapters are going to be longer than before...as I'm determined to finish in the next two! Thanks again and I hope you enjoy the big finish...X Louy
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Date: 27/01/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Crying out for attention I assume the last part of the story is referring to Cobb?? I must say this story is a bit exhausting for me...all the emotional cliffies, the nail biting tension, the heartbreaking scenes......although i wouldn't give up any of it cuz i think all of that is worth it... :) I won't say i can't wait for the next chapter, cuz i'm actually pretty sad that this is ending, but hey, all good things muz come to an end... *sniffs* Author's Response: Can't decide if I'm glad you're exhausted or not...don't want to wear out my readers...lol Although I have to say, It's been a pretty intense one to write. Hopefully the last chapter will be the grounding the story needs, getting the boys and Bobby back on track and not to forget Kyle! Cobb's in there too but he's kind of a done deal, don't think I'll be bringing him back in the sequel...but never say never...lol Thans so much for the review and the stars, they're always appreciated! X Louy
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Date: 30/01/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Truth and its consequences Hey, it sounded like you are bringing back Cobb....that's great! He's a real good baddie to hate...LOL Love this whole story, from start til end...and i love the ending when both Kyle and Bobby had their own respective talks with Dean....and to read that they are laughing again....so touching... Looking forward to more of your stories.... :) Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the stars and I hope you'll enjoy the next one. Should be posting quite soon, but need to catch up with some reading and reviewing of my own too...lol Thank again X Louy Summary:
 The clock is ticking.... Dean is trying to use his time wisely, in the aftermath of AHBL, he tries to cope with events. After all, how can he make Sammy see the Deal made sence if, behind the mask, Dean himself was still breaking. In true Winchester style, he is making use of the only spare time he has.... the moments before a hunt. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1737 [Report This] Published: 08/11/07 Updated: 08/11/07
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Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very nicefirst fic...it's funny and sad at the same time...amazing how you can make the readers wanna do both...LOL Happy that you found this and seem to have enjoyed it. This was my first Fanfic and I kind of have a soft spot for it. I wrote it from Dean's POV and I see him the way you saw this story - funny and sad at the same time. So thank you for the kind compliment - I will put it down to inspirational Dean!!! (Wow am I ever Dean-centric! LOL!) Abi. Summary: Caught in the throws of an unholy war; Dean is forced to grow up before his time.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7761 [Report This] Published: 08/11/07 Updated: 08/11/07
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Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 It's actually sad that John would break Dean in that way. Summary: Sometimes adults forget about those important little things. Dean Winchester knows all about being forgotten. But his little brother Sam, in all his six-year-old wisdom sees the brighter side of things.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5814 [Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 13/11/07
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Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 It's really too bad Caleb is not featured regularly in the series. I think he would make a great side character. Great story! |
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