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Penname: nochickflickmoments [Contact]
Real name: nicole schiller
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Sacred Vessel by Evergreen Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 32]
Summary: A supernatural save of a young woman has severe consequences for Dean and his sanity.  The brothers start to understand each others' burdens. Chapter 9 now here!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 25236
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 03/04/08


Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 05/02/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

hey i loved the first chapter of your story and i waited impatiently for the second one

and i like it very much - dean is an emotional mess (love these stories) and i didn't see the end coming

so, keep writing!



Author's Response:

Nochickflickmoments:

Thanks so much for your support.  I love getting into the boys' heads.  More twists to come, I promise.  Thanks again and keep reading!  Supernatural rocks!

 Evergreen

 
Twilight by devonshire Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

He was only eleven, but the events of that long gone summer would change Dean Winchester's life forever.

 

twilight banner 


Categories: General, Wee!chester, AU Characters: None
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Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 37085
[Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/05/07


Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/02/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

well done - i've been waiting for this chapter! also a good cliffhanger please hurry up writing the next one

oh and young dean fighting some demon bitch would be nice

 
Summary:

November 2, 1987 John was a broken man. He should have known better. He should have known not to hope, not to dream, not to believe. The liquor had control over him as he lashed out at the one obstacle to his chance at oblivion.

Spoilers for Nightmare


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., John W.
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3919
[Report This] Published: 25/01/07 Updated: 25/01/07


Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 02/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Part One - Despair

well i love your story - it's funny cause when i watched nightmares again and sam said this i was really expecting a flashback from dean.

good job



Author's Response:

The look Dean had when Sam said they could have had Max's childhood, just seemed to indicate Dean was remembering something.

There is no doubt there were rough times in the beginning with John trying to cope and they had referenced the drinking before and things happen when you drink.

I hope the show has more flashbacks for us cause that truly does bring insight into these characters.  Thanks, B.J.

 
Summary:

This is a side story I'm writing. It has nothing to do with my main story Beyond the Supernatural. This was just a fun little ideal I was playing around with.

Amber knew the Winchesters for twenty-one years, but hasn't seen Dean for ninteen. Sam, on the other hand, she just met back up with a year back in Stanford and started dating him. What will hapen when Dean shows back up wanting her to help him and she suddenly becomes torn between the two brothers? Even if she figures this out, there's always another problem, right?


Categories: Romance Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 10260
[Report This] Published: 29/01/07 Updated: 17/09/07


Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Let it Begin

i really like your story, but don't you think the thing with amber and dean worked out too fast - the kiss - i mean, they got close right from the start

Author's Response: Well, it may seemed that way, but they've actually known each other for years. Besides, Dean just kissed her to try to convince her to come with him and she took it further. It also made it interesting because Ambe'sr up there making-out with Dean and she goes out with Sam! :D

 
Orders by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Dean Winchester at fifteen. Dean's emotions were raging out of control: guilt, panic, shame, sheer terror. How could he tell Dad how badly he had screwed up? How he had been weak and let what he wanted dictate his actions? A soldier follows orders!Inspired by the "Look" in Scarecrow and the emotional phone call in Home. 

Orders -Favorite Flashback 2006

2006 Supernatural.tv Award (3-way tie) - Orders


Categories: Romance, Wee!chester, Action Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: The Winchester Teen Chronicles
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 12655
[Report This] Published: 31/01/07 Updated: 07/02/07


Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 02/02/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Diner

really good story - it's good to see dean having something normal in his youth like going on a "touchy-feely-date"; although it ended up winchester style

hope you finish this soon 



Author's Response: Yeah, it is so sad that the one time he tries to be a normal teenager all hell breaks loose.  No wonder he then decides to always follow Dad's orders like the good soldier.  Thanks for the kind review, B.J.

 
Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 04/02/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Meltdown

wow, that was an awsome chapter; i mean i had a bad feeling about what would happen in the diner but the blood message really shocked me

and poor dean so overwhelmed by his shame and guilt - i hope he'll be okay! 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! Strangely enough this was the first chapter I wrote of my first story ever. Once I knew how I wanted to send Dean to rock bottom I had to figure out getting him there and then what would happen after. Writing these stories has certainly opened up a whole new creative process.

 
Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 07/02/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Rescue

hey, the story is getting better and better - young dean kickin' vampire asses :-)

hope for a little more love-dean in the next chapter

love your stories!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Everyone loved the last chapter, hope it doesn't disappoint.  Two more chapters to go.

 
Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Confessions & Recovery

what a nice way to end the story!

first i was worried about the birthday thing, glad you explain it;

seems like kripke doesn't have your phone number



Author's Response:

Thanks, I always worry about having a good ending. I work on the ending the entire time I work on a story, just trying to make it right.

Yeah, that Kripke, never returns my calls! What's up with that? Take care, B.J.

 
Alone by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Dean at 16. Dean was alone. A black hole of loneliness beckoned him. An abyss so deep and dark that he could see no light, no hope. His deepest, darkest fear had been realized. The emptiness encompassed him until a lone voice called out...

Sequel to Orders, although it is not necessary to have read that story first.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: Dean W., John W., Pastor Jim, Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: The Winchester Teen Chronicles
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 26320
[Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 25/02/07


Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 16/02/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Secrets

nice twist with Stacy, didn't see that coming

It woul have been very interesting, i think, to write the dialog with John, Stacy and Dean and how they say goodbye and so

going to read the next chapter .....



Author's Response: There are a few more twists coming in the story. Glad you are enjoying. Thanks, B.J.

 
Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 14/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Ghostbusters

don't know when you wrote this but it fits perfectly after houses of holy - saying mary was the believer and dean has the same opinion as his dad about theses things

nice work 



Author's Response:

I finished this in May 2006. I love when I get the characters right, of course, do ya think Kripke is stealing my ideas? LOL

It just always made perfect sense to me that Dean would be angry about Mom's death and therefore would claim to not believe, cause how could God let such terrible things happen to good people?

I loved Houses of the Holy, especially when Dean told how Mom believed in Angels. That boy breaks my heart. Thanks for reviewing, B.J.

 
Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/02/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Basketball

ohh poor dean - the end really broke my heart

i hope he can't resist her and we'll see more of love!dean



Author's Response: You know, I always felt Dean would have learned at an early age to not get emotionally involved cause his job was most important.  Anything that got in the way of doing the job would be sacrificed, including his own personal happiness. Thanks again, B.J.

 
Summary: When Dean is injured on a hunt and loses all of his personal memories, it is up to Sam to help him through it.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34792
[Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 13/04/08


Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 20/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

what a good idea making dean lost his memory!

don't worry about his unusually behavior - for the first chapters it's interesting to see how sam deals with this (loved the questions about their father)

waiting for the next chapter 

 
Summary:

Dean has been on his own since John bailed on him nearly three months ago and Bobby is worried so he decided to enlist Dean's help with what should be a fairly routine job.

Only trouble is that the word routine? - It isn't in the Winchester vocabulary and Bobby's intervention to save his friend, might just be the death of him!

Set pre-series.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 65460
[Report This] Published: 20/08/09 Updated: 20/06/11


Reviewer: nochickflickmoments Signed
Date: 23/11/09 Title: Chapter 9: Day Five/Six

You got me really hooked, love me some Dean angst;-) So please keep writing, don't forget about this great story.

Take care



Author's Response:

hey there

Glad you like, I haven't forgotten this, I'm just struggling at the moment for time to write....I will update this and finish it....promise!

Mary x