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Penname: PoseidonsChickadee [Contact]
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Real name: Tai Status: Member Member Since: 13/11/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by PoseidonsChickadee Summary:
The vision of a dark-haired woman being bled sends Sam and Dean on a hunt for something evil enough to steal the life blood from infants and their mothers. Will they be in time to save the key to their future? Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Second Chance Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 30636 [Report This] Published: 29/09/07 Updated: 29/10/07
Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Blood Ritual Whoa. Whoa. Whoa. Me likey lol I'm ALL kinds of confused but I can truly say. I liked it. It was very well written. I have questions, but I won't ask them yet. Want to see if they get answered next so I don't have to ask and sound like an over eager puppy lol
Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee Signed
  Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A Fated Reunion Oh gosh. I love this. It was so serious, with the vision (which by the way, Yay! Sammy) and then you put in that profile bit. And while I should have been all worried about the monster you had me laughing. Then you had be all wistful and sighing as Dean regretted Sam's lack of life while forgetting that he'd barely been a kid too. Just like they do in the show. Very nice. And like I thought. You answered over HALF of my questions.That's very good. I like drama and angst (Sometimes). But I do love drama and being kept guessing as much as the next person, sometimes more, but I can't stand it when a good story leave me hanging. This is a good story. Ya didn't leave me hanging. Yay you! lolMy only problem? Shortness. But that's just cause I like it. I'm so glad I'm getting your questions answered. Can't do them all in one chapter---that wouldn't be any fun. Hopefully, more answers to come. I think even when things get bad a little humor is life's defense, especially with our boys. So happy you think I did them justice!
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Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Family Secret Great characterization. The mannerisms of the brother were really good, down pat. As were the words.
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Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 A View of Normal Grrrr. Dean. Love that boy to pieces. Great character to watch (aside from Jensen Ackles salty goodness-ness) and a wonderful one to right. But that boy deserves a swift kick in the arse sometimes.
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Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Confession *sniffles* Awww! Gah! Thank you for giving me the right to kick this Dean's ass. Hell I wanna kick his butt in general, nice as it is, for being such a poophead. Bet she's tougher than he gives her credit. That's the thing with Dean, he puts people on pedastals. On the other side, when he gives them a chance he lets them go it on their own like a good mama hen lol So hopefully he gives her a chance. Again GREAT characterization. Dean was good, but Sam was terrific. I always seem to find Dean as usually the better written. It's rare to find, at least for me, to find Sam as good or better. Sam was damn good. I could just see his 'angry-huffy face'. It's two steps up from his annoyed-huffy and one a half from his, 'I'm sogoing to kick your ass'. You had every bit of tension of that in your story, I could just SEE it. Great job! Author's Response: Wow! Thanks so much for your kind words. I think it's easy to write Dean because he's so in your face. Sam is a little more difficult for me. I'm tickled that you think I did him justice! I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Summary:
Two years on, and it's a difficult day for the Moore family......
Categories: General, One Shots, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6936 [Report This] Published: 02/01/08 Updated: 02/01/08
Reviewer: PoseidonsChickadee Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 *dabs eyes and blows nose loudly* That was soooooo OH! I can't describe how painful this was. It was so poignant. I have yet to read a Moore family fic. To read Sam dealing with the pain. It was fantastic in how deep and developed it was. The Moores were like every other family who lost their child, and sometimes being like everyother etc etc makes a story bland but it made this SOOOO real. Not to mention how in characters the brothers were. I can see Angela's soft eyes. And Tom's fatherly questions. Carrie's understanding. The hurt of them all. All of that with the brothers perfect characterization made it so life like. Like I was watching. It was truly, truly a lovely piece of work and I am VERY, very glad that I took the time to read this :-) |
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