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Penname: TozaBoma [Contact]
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Real name: Souxie (not a bansee, mind) Status: Member Member Since: 13/11/07 Website: http://soup-dragon.blogspot.com/ Beta-reader: No
Reviews by TozaBoma Summary:
Occasionally, the alarm clock just doesn't cut it. Categories: Drabbles, General, Humor, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 229 [Report This] Published: 05/02/10 Updated: 06/02/10
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  Date: 06/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Alcohol Abuse This is great! The last line was all you could want in a twist/punchline/reson d'etre. And I don't do foreign, LOL. Very nice. Purr wee Dean and cold, calculating Sam (when he needs to be). Did I read too much into it? Whatever - it's ace. I approve of the non-wasting of alcohol! *two thumbs up* Author's Response: Dean protects Sam, Sam knows exactly where all Deans buttons are. Didn't read too much into it at all! Thanks for the review! Summary:
Sam has learned from long experience to never try to talk to Dean in the mornings. It only makes Dean frustrated and grouchy when conversation happens around him, and he can’t hear it.
Special thanks to calUK for the beta work, and the banner. She's definitely helped me wrap my brain about how I needed to approach this and made it much better!
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 6291 [Report This] Published: 08/02/10 Updated: 23/08/10
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Date: 18/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: 1984 Noo, purr wee Dean! Well done with this, I liked it. Can't help going *GULP* over John's thought that it would be Mary doing these teacher meetings...
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad to hear it! *I* go to all the teacher meetings, and I'd bet that my husband would be thinking the same thing. Poor John.
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Date: 18/03/10 Title: Chapter 2: 1994 All too real... Nicely done. I want to see where this is going. :) Author's Response: So do I! Right now, it's snippets and little bits. Maybe it will shape into an arcing story someday, maybe it will just stay a collection of bits and pieces. We'll see!
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Date: 19/03/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Cool! I hope they vanished in solidarity, ready to find wherever the dude went so they could take turns punishing him. :) Good stuff - nice! Author's Response: I'm very certain that he met a satisfyingly horrible end that pays him back for everything he did. The original ghost story doesn't say. I'm glad you liked it! Summary:
An action packed story of orgasmic proportions! "I'm gonna show all these amateurs what REAL hunting is all about. We're gonna get blown up, shot at, beaten, cursed at in a way that'll blow their one-tracked, little minds." Dean starts writing fan fiction. Categories: General, Drabbles, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 7341 [Report This] Published: 16/02/10 Updated: 02/05/10
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Date: 18/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: "Unabomber" I just spit over the line "you got kicked in the crotch by a midget". It's just taken three attempts to WRITE it, seeing as I'm still laughing my arse off!
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Date: 24/02/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: "Chupacabra Madness" Tee hee! Enjoying this no end. :)
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Date: 24/02/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: "Men or Mice" ROFLMFAO! I loved the Kerouac allusion and the fact that he's making Sam read all of them! 'Dean had a look that looked like a cross between threatening and unbelievably shy.' - I know that look! EXCELLENTLY DONE, love. :)
Author's Response: Awesome that you recognized the look! I was worried no one would be able to imagine it. It just kinda came to me in a second of clarity (those happen about once every seven years) and vanished right after that. Sad because I remember it was funny as hell - just because I don't remember the look doesn't stop me from laughing about it. :D
Whoa, think I just found it again!
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Date: 24/02/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: "Reviews" ROFLMFAO - the reviews were just bloody marvellous! I'm with BigKahunaBurger, and of course the last few reviews, LOL! Damn, this was funny! So Dean's going to mail this BlitzenXXXL back and at some stage get off topic, to the point where he looks for male support re: his real life? BUAH-HA-HA-HA-HA-HA-HAAAA! This gets two thumbs up and 10 whiskies. Oh, and a bacon double cheeseburger.
Author's Response: And you got who BlitzenXXXL is right? Rightrightright????? SO awesome to know you're enjoying my mini epic :P It's really great to know everybody is enjoying it. And although I wanted attetion (hence the title) I never thought it'd get this much :D (this is a lot to me) Thanks for taking the time to leave them and the stars!!!! Those rock! YOU rock! Noticed Amen to that! was updated so I'm not even gonna wasting any more time with you. Instead I'm gonna go read your story :P Talk soon, hopefully in my or your review box *waves and gives two thumbs up* A Trip To The Country (or: There's Different Kinds Of Werewolves) by IAmLegion Rated: K
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Because only the Winchesters could find this much trouble in a barn. Take a spoonful of hurt, a pinch of fugly and a pixie or two, shake it up with a bucketload of angst, and what do you get? The countryside, Winchester style! Categories: Drabbles, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 698 [Report This] Published: 18/02/10 Updated: 25/02/10
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Date: 20/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Frenzy, by calUK Oooooh! I missed this when it first came out, obviously. Looking forward to clicking the 'next' button....
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Date: 20/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Artery, by RoweenaC Somehow it lies about the word count.... I'm sure you counted right! :) Loved this... About to catch up on the next one...
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Date: 20/02/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Clamp, by Birdie Ngaw.... Nice! So when's the next one?
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Date: 21/02/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Chain, by Alena Ooooooh! Loving this! Stars reflect story so far, spread over this story (as I notice my stars didn't take for the last 3 parts...). :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying our story. It has been so great to be able to join in and write alongside the others
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Date: 24/02/10 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Gushing, by Bulletbabe ROFL - excellent last line!
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Date: 24/02/10 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Snowbound, by Isis_girl *gigglesnort* I thought he was going to say it was cos he licked himself in places no-one else needs to see, LOL. Summary: Drabble challenge on FF.net - WOW Soft. Castiel gets to go home.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 22/02/10 Updated: 23/02/10
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Date: 24/02/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ngaw, and he finally gets there! Short but sweet, descriptive but not a burden, and definitely a nice wee drabble to give a favourite character what he needs. Nice! Author's Response: Thanks! :) Summary: Written for CalUKs challenge on the Vaults: Mix it up! - Write something that takes you out of your comfort zone! I have never done a script (or been mean to Sam!), so here we go...
Follows on immediately as ‘My Bloody Valentine' finishes....SPOILER ALERT for that episode and all Season 5 so far. Many thanks to Tozaboma for beta-ing this for me. Categories: Scripts, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3190 [Report This] Published: 05/03/10 Updated: 05/03/10
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Date: 09/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Scenes 1 to 9 Again - fantastic, fantastic, fantastic. Love Threatening!Sam at the end, LOL. I prefer to think that Zach really was there, fixing glasses as easily as he wipes and replaces voicemails... :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for popping over to my little corner and leaving a review and pretty, pretty stars lol Well Dean did say he heard the glass break! Your input and Beta-ing really helped so many thanks for that as well. Jacq xx Summary: Three men. One Car. Lifetimes reflected in the Impala’s rear view mirror.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 370 [Report This] Published: 11/04/10 Updated: 11/04/10
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Date: 12/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is art. I bow down. You have a real mastery of phrases - each sentence holds a gallery of paintings. My favourite: "Dean lives in the things he doesn't say." Summary: Sam and Dean head to Florida on the promise of warmer weather and chicks in bikinis!
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1389 [Report This] Published: 06/06/10 Updated: 07/06/10
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Date: 10/06/10 Title: Chapter 1: Clothing Not Optional Buah-ha-ha-ha-haaaaa! I was rolling around at your double entendres - expect a mail from me (or Twitter response or two) really soon! ROFL Summary:
I'm taking a brief detour from my current multi-chapter to write this for the Spn-BigPretzel Community 'Sharp Dressed Man' Fic challenge over on Lj. The prompt was: 'Sam and Dean undercover with the Chippendales ... n'uff said' What can I say, not a lot of Chippendales in this, but plenty of Sam and Dean … and I mean PLENTY! Categories: One Shots Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1074 [Report This] Published: 06/03/13 Updated: 06/03/13
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Date: 13/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 WHY U PEOPLE NO REVIEW? This is amazing. I laughed out loud about six times - before the end of the first paragraph. It's fun, funny, grown-up - and so canon it hurts. It's just effing fab all over. You have a real way with words and such brilliant little scenes (or not so little, wink wink nudge nudge say no more) to tell. I never actually get time to READ stuff on the archive, but I've hit the jackpot with your work. Thanks for writing, and sharing, and putting a smile on my face. Oh the mental images! I'm shunning the brain-bleach. And I'm not even sorry. Thanks! Summary:
The brothers take on a case at a local theatre; but of course, nothing's ever straightforward. Categories: Drabbles Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 107 [Report This] Published: 06/03/13 Updated: 06/03/13
Summary: Sam's got an idea to distract Dean while he convalesces from the 'flu. It turns out to be far more entertaining than he could have ever imagined.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 99 [Report This] Published: 06/03/13 Updated: 06/03/13
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Date: 13/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 'speaking fluent dumbass' - love your phrase, there. You have wonderful little scenes and a very clear way of getting them across - not being funny, but sometimes some writers lack the basics of formatting and punctuation and it's hard to read. But I love your little scenes - lots of insight without lots of exposition. Brilliant.
Summary: Curiosity; it's not just the cat who suffers ...
Categories: Drabbles Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 103 [Report This] Published: 06/03/13 Updated: 06/03/13
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Date: 13/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 BUAH HA HA HA HAAAAA - buxom wench indeed! Summary: Dean learns that even relatively benign supernatural creatures can give you grief if you rub them up the wrong way.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 06/03/13 Updated: 06/03/13
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Date: 13/03/13 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Pet squirrel! ROFLMFAO. These drabbles are great, and I'm offended no-one has left a review or stars. humf.
Summary: There are some things that are just better left unsaid.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 95 [Report This] Published: 06/03/13 Updated: 06/03/13
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Wee!Chesters the boys are having some fun in the snow at Bobby's. Categories: Drabbles Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 06/03/13 Updated: 06/03/13
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