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Penname: TozaBoma [Contact]
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Real name: Souxie (not a bansee, mind) Status: Member Member Since: 13/11/07 Website: http://soup-dragon.blogspot.com/ Beta-reader: No
Reviews by TozaBoma Summary: MAJOR SPOILERS FOR SEASON FOUR. Tag to 4.22: Lucifer Rising.Lucifer has finally broken free, and so have the numerous skeletons from the dark and deep Winchester closet. Guilt, regret, love... they're staggering under the weight. Up'd with Sam's PoV. This ain't gonna end well.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 7182 [Report This] Published: 28/05/09 Updated: 29/07/09
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 Date: 01/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dean Loved it! And I don't do angst. Although.... your tag kinda makes me want to write a tag...... Hmm... *strokes chin* Never done a tag before.... Summary: Castiel loses his footing. Dean is there to see it.
Categories: Humor, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 174 [Report This] Published: 09/06/09 Updated: 09/06/09
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Date: 10/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bwa-ha-ha-ha! Loved it. I am honored that so many people found this as amusing as I did. Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the R&R and stars! ^^ Summary:
Father's Day Drabble Challenge. Dean and John's relationship grew in very different soil, but pride is pride!! Categories: General, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 101 [Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 18/06/09
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Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like it. I like it a lot. It's very Winchester. :) Thank You! I am glad you liked it. I figured if you lead the Winchester lifestyle holiday sentiments are communicated slightly differently. Cheers Abi. Summary:
Not everything was destroyed in the fire. Written for the Father’s Day drabble challenge.
Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 95 [Report This] Published: 18/06/09 Updated: 18/06/09
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 Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Saving grace I can feel the waxy crayon under my fingers. Brilliant. So Dean's gone from a lump of coal to a diamond geezer? Nice. :) Hey there! Thanks for coming over to check out my Father's Day drabble, I really appreciate the great review and rating you left. I'm so glad you liked this one, and that the tactile crayon detail came through. That's just what I was going for. I just recently started drabbling. If you're interested in my other efforts, check out my fic "Not So Drunk as You Think I Am." I'd love to hear what you think! :) Thanks again for taking the time to read and review! Summary:
Father's Day Drabble Challenge 2009
Another perfect banner by dreamalittledreamofsam - thank you so much! Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 104 [Report This] Published: 19/06/09 Updated: 19/06/09
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Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Reflections YES! Fathers aren't always the biological kind...
Author's Response: Oh, absolutely! And Dean certainly grabs hold of all the family he can. Thanks for reading and reviewing, B.J. Summary:
Father's Day Drabble Challenge entry. The memories may fade, but they never truly go away. Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 98 [Report This] Published: 19/06/09 Updated: 19/06/09
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Date: 19/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Winchester Rarity Awww, I like it! Especially Sam's last line. :) Summary:
It's been six days since Dean went missing and two hours since Sam found him, huddled in a damp corner, shaking in fear. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 29044 [Report This] Published: 28/06/09 Updated: 23/09/09
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Date: 05/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Day Six (i) Ooooooh - like it! Like it! Intrigued and a little worried... About Bobby's response, about Sam's eyebrows that are about to have to work overtimes, about purr wee Dean all banged up. Excellent opening! Author's Response: Glad you liked the first chapter. It's a little teaser to get you hooked :)
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Date: 05/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Day One I love the way this sets up in chapter 1, then chapter 2 takes us here. There were so many good lines in this, it was ace to read. Love it! Author's Response: Hopefully you'll find many more good lines to come. Thanks so much for this.
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Date: 13/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Day Two I'm really getting into this - the easy style drags you in and you just have to know what happens next. Loved the rats and I could see Sam's face in all its expressions throughout. Fantastic. Author's Response: So pleased you like the style. It just seems to write itself (when the muse is with me) so it's good to hear it's easy to read.
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Date: 19/07/09 Title: Chapter 4: Day Three I really want to swear to show how much I loved this chapter, but I shouldn't. So instead I'll say 'Damn me, how spine-chillingly well written was THAT?' It's making me think, making me second-guess myself, making me wonder, making me want to drum my hands on my desk till I get a new chapter, LOL. Excellent. Loving in. Author's Response: Wow - thank you so much. I'm glad it's making you think. I could have gone into so much more detail but I think leaving some things to a reader's imagination can be so much more effective at times. - Jenny Summary: Drabble dare. Word: Naked
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 102 [Report This] Published: 19/07/09 Updated: 19/07/09
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Date: 19/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Naked Bwa-ha-ha-ha-haaaa! Loved it! Nice one-liner. Kind of! Summary: Sam has the hiccups and Dean, well, helps.
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 983 [Report This] Published: 22/07/09 Updated: 22/07/09
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Date: 23/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Hiccups ROFLMFAO! "Your pillow or mine?" -- can just see Dean's ee-vil grin accompanying *that* little gem!
Author's Response: LMAO!!! God, I do love making people smile!!! I was realy worried that no one would catch up what THAT LINE means, because it's hidden, but you did!!! SO COOL!!! ahahha, awww Dean...gotta love the man! oh Dean definitely had eeeeee-voooll grin when he said that! LOL thank you so much for reading! hugs, S. Summary: Zachariah passes the note to the filing clerk, "it goes under W for Winchester."
Drabble Challenge word: School No spoilers unless you don't know who Zachariah is, pre-season. Categories: Drabbles, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 05/08/09 Updated: 05/08/09
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Date: 05/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ace! I love the ending. :) Thank you and for the stars, Zachariah seems the type to make notes! lol Jacq Summary:
Dean takes out a cookie and hands it to Sam, and after a moment’s hesitation, takes one for himself. After all, today is a special day. Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3832 [Report This] Published: 08/08/09 Updated: 08/08/09
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Date: 09/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Today But I didn't want it to be the end! And I haven't typed those words in... a long time. This was such a fascinating read, so intense it sucked me in. Loved it. Author's Response: Heya Souxie That is one of the greatest compliments that an author can get! I'm not sure about a continuation, cuz it was never intended to have a happy ending! *evil laugh* Was in an angsty mood when i wrote this, so yeah... Thanks for reading and reviewing! :) Summary: He’s four years old and he wants his mommy. Daddy says she’s gone but he knows that’s not true.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1078 [Report This] Published: 19/08/09 Updated: 19/08/09
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Date: 19/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was just marvellous. I'm touched but in awe but also a little creeped out because it felt so real - and cos it's so good. Summary: Dean manifests wings for the first time, which complicates the case the brothers are investigating. Starter fic for the Playing the Angel series.
Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 17107 [Report This] Published: 31/10/09 Updated: 23/01/10
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Date: 01/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wooooo - freaky! I like it! It's intriguing, it's new, it's curious, it's ace. Thanks for sharing!
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Date: 22/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Love it! Nice that Sam tries to see it from every angle and didn't immediately take to his 'brother' on the floor. Poor Dean. But I get the feeling it's necessary. :) Thanks for writing and sharing - ace-o-rama so far! Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like it :) Summary: A letter from Castiel to Santa Claus.
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 437 [Report This] Published: 10/12/09 Updated: 10/12/09
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Date: 13/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is ace - I can just picture him sat there with a pen, trying to work out how to word what he wants to communicate to someone he believes works in New York, LOL. I like the words he uses and I like the feeling that he believes he can ask for help to find his Father. Nicely done! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. You made my day! Summary:
Dean writes a letter to Santa asking for something that everyone needs at some time in their lives. But does he get it? For the Letters to Santa challenge. Categories: General, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 393 [Report This] Published: 12/12/09 Updated: 12/12/09
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Date: 13/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Sign Of Something To Believe In Ngaw! I liked it! And it does Dean good to have something to replace his amulet, I think. And also, a little mystery that Dean will ignore just because he has them back. :) Hey TozaBoma Thanks. I really miss Dean's amulet and I wish they'd give him it back! I left it as a little mystery for Dean, was it the angels? Bobby?(with help!) or was it really Santa?? Still he got the sign he asked for, whoever it was. Mary xx Summary: After 5:10. Sam, in searching for the med kit, dumps out Dean's pack and finds something he's never seen before and something that Dean hid away years ago.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2639 [Report This] Published: 15/12/09 Updated: 16/12/09
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Date: 18/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Something Found I got lost in the moment when Dean feels the grass under his feet again. To be able to read that part, right when I know how cruel it is to see it over again and yet know it's separated by years and deaths... Well, there we go. No words. Everyone who's lost someone, especially their own mam, has probably done this at least once a year since. I know I have. Beautifully written. Sad but noble. :) Author's Response: Wow. Thank you for such a beautiful response. I don't know what else to say. Thank you. For reading, and for letting yourself go and live momentarily in the story. Summary:
Dean gets a rude early morning wake up from his little brother. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2231 [Report This] Published: 18/12/09 Updated: 18/12/09
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Date: 19/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Too Early Outsider!Castiel For The Win! I can't believe he took that arm of snow like that. I would have belted a certain someone, boxers or no. :)
Summary: Matthew, Mark, Luke, John and… Dean?
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1401 [Report This] Published: 20/12/09 Updated: 20/12/09
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Date: 24/03/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Bwah-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-haaaaa! I loved so many lines in this - I think my neighbour's about ready to call the police on the psycho sitting at my computer laughing her arse off! Excellently done. Brilliant. Love it. Run out of things to say now. But this is aceness itself. Summary: Dean knew it would happen, sooner or later. He even knew the name for it. He'd just hoped that it wouldn't happen in public. But it did. Set in early Season 4.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1977 [Report This] Published: 25/12/09 Updated: 25/12/09
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Date: 25/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A couple of spelling problems distracted me at the start but this was so well written and excellently imagined I soon forgot them - the pictures you painted were real to me and amazing to have in my head. This should have been used on the show! I loved it - very well thought out and images a-go-go! Thank you! The story was not beta as the rest of my stories usually are, because it's Christmas dude ;O) Can't have my poor beta strapped to her chair, working for me in this time of the year *g* Summary:
A cold night, a dark wood and my homage to Walter de la Mare.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1884 [Report This] Published: 25/12/09 Updated: 25/12/09
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Date: 25/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I liked it! I've always liked that poem and it was great to have the boys' differing reactions to the same house in frame. I love how you slotted the poem in there at the right intervals. Nice! Thank you - I was worried that no-one else would get where I was coming from. I love this poem and just wanted to play with it for a while. Jx Summary:
A few words about Sam and his relationships.... A drabble done for the wonderful E/O Challenge on Fanfic.net, hope they don't mind me posting it here too... Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 103 [Report This] Published: 17/01/10 Updated: 17/01/10
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Date: 19/01/10 Title: Chapter 1: Sam Folds I like it! The patented bitch-face made me giggle cos I got that image in my head - and then the last two lines were ace. :) |
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