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The Feather by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

All his life Sam hears things he shouldn't and keeps finding feathers.  Some S1 & S2 spoilers, more like references.

Runner up Whatever Man category (round 8) Supernatural Fan Fiction Awards


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2972
[Report This] Published: 08/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hey I really loved that , it had a warm fuzzy feel to it . Nice for the boys to have bonding moments . loved the idea of the feathers .definately a feel good story brill . :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

 
Summary:

1876 "God made all Men, Samuel Colt made them equal." The West was inundated with vampires. It was the perfect place to kill and slaughter, cowboys died every day and no one really seemed to care, most were too concerned with staying alive themselves.

Dean and Sam visit a town that seems eerily familiar; or should I say, they seem strangely familiar to the townfolk.  Some spoilers for Dead Man's Blood.

Valentine, Texas

SBA1


Categories: Romance, AU, Action Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: Once Upon a Time in the West
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 38968
[Report This] Published: 28/01/07 Updated: 17/02/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Resolution 2006

loved every bit of that story it blew me away ! fantastic idea well written , loved the way the characters mirrored the modern ones . brill . think this is the best story i ve read so far , and i ve read dozens .

Author's Response:

Wow!  Thank you very much!  I love the idea of seeing the Winchesters in the old west.  I wish the show could incorporate it in some way.  I think it'd be a great way to explore the Samuel Colt angle and then we could also get JDM back as Jake! 

Thanks for reviewing, much appreciated, B.J.

 
The Apron by PopcornLeader Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Sam has managed to find a job, and he loves it, except for one small thing that could prove to be quite embarrassing...
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 826
[Report This] Published: 29/01/07 Updated: 29/01/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

oh poor Sam , I ve got a great picture in my head  ! love my imagination ! great fun you definately need to write some more please : )

 
Summary:

He turned, expertly masking the mass of unshed tears and unspoken fears that threatened so very much to burst from his usually strong and controlled person. Expressionless in every aspect save for his eyes, his gaze met Anna Walker’s. A silent message was communicated.

He knew she was telling him first. He appreciated it.

He knew she was asking his permission to say it aloud. He gave it.

He knew he would never be grateful to anyone more than he was to her now. He silently told her so.

He knew she understood.

Their mutual gazes broke apart, and Dean continued to clean his prized guns as Anna relayed the series of events that took place that day at the hospital to Sammy.

Dean knew his younger brother would cry.


Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Through The Dimensions
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 48131
[Report This] Published: 13/03/07 Updated: 20/07/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue

WOW! blown away by this story . so many emotions . I was really dreading the ending I didnt want a sad one but knew it would happen . cried lots ( im a softy ) poor Dean a bit of happiness , normality and it didnt last long .I thought you wrote it very well .I especially liked the different view points from the characters which made it much more interesting . again im blown away and need a strong cup of tea now !

 
Summary:

Who You Gonna Call

Who do you call when a simple salt and burn gets out of hand. The brothers get help from an unexpected source when they find they are dealing with multiple spirits in a haunted factory.

Awards 2008 Best Horror/Ghost

Tied with Supernaturaldh's Leaning On A Shovel, Hoping For A Hole


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 62717
[Report This] Published: 05/05/07 Updated: 08/06/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/01/08 Title: Chapter 10: Epilogue

that was brilliant . loved the story line . always love the banter between sam and dean it makes me laugh . enjoyed the character macy she really gave the boys a run for their money ! fantastic job .

Author's Response: Thanks for that. I am actually planning a sequel to this, bringing back Macy and Leroy. But I only have about two hundred words written so far, so it's a long way off yet. Glad you liked it...Jules

 
Summary: Sam is happy when John allows him to join his friends on Summer Camp but will Sam's need for normalcy put himself and his big brother in danger?
Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 91970
[Report This] Published: 21/05/07 Updated: 23/05/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29/12/07 Title: Chapter 32: Wouldnt Have It Any Other Way

hey I thought that was fantastic . read it in 3 parts needed to stop for food ! liked the mix between the 2 parts at the start . there were some real good " on the edge of the seat " moments . forgot to breathe ! thought the plot was really brilliant felt a bit sorry for Sam , no normal camp for him poor love . possessed Dean was fantastic .I ll be putting this story in my fav section well done . x

Author's Response:

Hey

First of all I would like to say thanks so much for reading. I wrote some these stories so long ago that I had almost forgot to check reviews here because unlike ff.net It doesnt alert you to them so I was really happy to see this here :) I'm even happy that you really liked it and I'm impressed that yu read it in 3 parts .... it got quite long lmao Sooo very happy you liked my possessed Dean. I was excited when getting to that part :) Thanks so much for the review. You definately put a smile on my face :)

Tara x0x

 
Summary: What might have happened if Sam had NOT pulled the trigger that first time.    
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2938
[Report This] Published: 22/05/07 Updated: 22/05/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hey much prefer your ending . the real one was so sad I cried heaps !

Author's Response:

I know what you mean, angel.... I sob every single time I watch this one even though I know how it ends.....

to my way of thinking i could see Sam wanting so desperately to make things right that he could have pulled this off.....thanks for your sweet review

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryStory line: Dean and Sam finish a difficult salt and burn and then go looking for a hunt. What they encounter in a small community confuses everyone until Dean engages that wonderful, quirky memory of his
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 27675
[Report This] Published: 09/06/07 Updated: 19/08/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Let's Take a Break

great start . that was a typical Dean moment you got that brilliantly .

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Angel, for your encouraging words....This was my first chapter story so I was fearful of how it would be viewed...........Hope you continue to enjoy it........I really liked it when it came into my head..

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Dinnertime

really great stuff here . cant wait to find out whats going on .

Author's Response:

I decided that for once, Dean was going to be the 'brains' in the episode.......Please let me know if I accomplished what I set out to do........

Again, Angel, Thank you for your sweet reviews   ...  :0) jude

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Headaches

love the banter between the boys . gives a good mixture of fun and drama in your story

Author's Response: Thanks, Angel, never really know til the reviews if you get something right....so glad you liked it

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem

thought the fight scene was bloody enough . great reference to the film devour liked that . you re doing a great job keep it up ok



Author's Response: So happy you liked this chapter.....I was having a stroke trying to get it right.....   :0)   jude

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Save the Cheerleaders !!

great sam moment you rotten thing ! we can never have too much of Bobby either , look forward to more

Author's Response:

Hey, now.... Angel, I only did this to Sam because it was essential to the plot...  ****chuckling & grinning***

And our beloved Bobby...... what's not to love??

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Having a Devil of a Time!

I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter . great mix of fun and drama . great banter between the boys is always a brilliant idea . you should be really proud , its one of my fav stories ive read . hope you write loads more , you have some great ideas and work them into the story line well . all the best .

Author's Response: Angel, thank you for all your great words of encouragement. I can't really find the right words to tell you how much your wonderful, sweet reviews have touched me.   :0) Jude        thanks for my stars, too...

 
Summary: John is faced with his worst nightmare. And now he has to fix everything. One thing's for sure, Dean is NEVER hunting solo again...
Categories: Wee!chester, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 65995
[Report This] Published: 26/06/07 Updated: 26/06/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: New Terrain

on the edge of your seat stuff here .fantastic dont want to stop reading but im so hungry ! look forward to reading more later .

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Glad you're enjoying it. Bon apetit ^__^

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 22: Epilogue

wow ! just finished reading this story from ch8 could not stop til I got to the end this time .was kept on the edge of my seat ! loved the ending great stuff .

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it  ^__^

 
What You Feel by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 279]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Sam picks up on the feelings of everyone around him and Dean has...other issues. 


Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 49812
[Report This] Published: 10/07/07 Updated: 14/10/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Dragons see the invisible, feel the intangible, and achieve the impossible…..

sorry not left a review earlier but was enjoying it so much . this is great cant stop laughing its so funny

Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  I'm thrilled you're enjoying it.

Laura

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Not a hunt…More like a chance encounter…

brilliant !

Author's Response:

Thanks!

 

hehehhee

 
Summary: This was my first Supernatural fanfic!  The boys wanted one day, one day, of relaxation. Something out there has other, more sinister, plans.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 10391
[Report This] Published: 07/08/07 Updated: 11/08/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Those Are Just Scratches

wow now im really wondering whats going on . who are they ? good suspense here great stuff

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Succubus Revealed

crickey . bet thats going to put Dean off women for a while poor love ! this is great cant wait to read more

 
Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 13: Stitches in Time

brilliant , loved every bit some great tension , funny bits and some ugh bits !

Author's Response: Thank you, kansasangel.  I'm so glad to hear you enjoyed this story of mine.

 
Summary: I don't even know how to summarize this one. It's a weird, oddball double drabble about Dean's knife, from the knife's perspective. PLEASE give it a try.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 192
[Report This] Published: 08/08/07 Updated: 08/08/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was different , but I liked it . its not often you actually think about the weapons the boys use . this will sound daft but it gives the knife a character of its own , when i watch the episodes with it in i ll think about your description now . great

Author's Response: Thank you.  This was a concept that just leapt into my head and I knew I just had to do it, even if it was a little on the strange side.

 
Summary:

Given a chance, Dean does his best to make sure Sam has at least one nice Christmas.

Disclaimer: I apparently wasn't high enough on the "Nice" list, or I showed up on the "Naughty" list too often, to earn the Winchesters under my tree last year, so they're still not mine.  Just havin' fun with 'em for now.

 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1663
[Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 14/08/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that had a warm fuzzy feel to it .liked it a lot

Author's Response:

Thank you!  Tried to use the fuzzies I remember receiving as a kid around this time of year, and it seemed to work.  Tho the new eppy sort of contradicts this one lol...still enjoyed writing it last year.

Glad you enjoyed!

 
Summary:

AHBL2  Sam didn’t know the particulars on his brother’s exploits, just that Dean liked sex and women liked Dean.  It was just a little sex, no big deal.  What more could there possibly be to know?

I shouldn’t begrudge him a good time, it’s just, he’s having fun and I’m the only one worrying about this?  In one year his bill comes due, how can he just roll over and die?


Categories: One Shots, Romance, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 11103
[Report This] Published: 15/08/07 Updated: 15/08/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

wow ! so emotional , I need to take a deep breath . fantastic

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed.  It was my first attempt at a romance type story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Take care, B.J.

 
DON'T LOOK! by Vanessa Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary: The Winchester Brothers get the surprise of their lives when they investigate a water demon in Black Earth, Wisconsin.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1908
[Report This] Published: 19/08/07 Updated: 19/08/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 26/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Surprise, Surprise

aw the poor boys ! very funny though liked it lots .

Author's Response: Thank you again, kansasangel.  It puts a smile on my face to know that you've been enjoying all of my stories.

 
Summary: Dean and Sam go to Lawrence, Kansas to look into a vision Sam had of a threat to the well-being of a new family in the old Winchester home.
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1138
[Report This] Published: 20/08/07 Updated: 21/08/07


Reviewer: kansasangel Signed
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was pretty damn good . would have made a great scene in the episode .

Author's Response: Thank you, Angel, I liked it but then I feel like poor John gets the short end of the stick quite often.....I believe he loved both the boys so very much