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Real name: Kirsty Status: Member Member Since: 09/11/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Birdy Summary:
This is the sequel to The Fallen and picks up three days after those events. Dean has his own inner daemons to face as he explores how his time with Mikey and the angels has changed him, as does funky bad-boy angel Uriel!
Amazing banner by BulletBabe - you rock Hun! So it's going to be an interesting journey for them both. I'd recommend you read The Fallen first if you have time as the characters in So Not An Angel have their birth there. References to Angels, God and religious faith and some swearing. Oh and of course, because it's me, descriptions of injuries and pain! but nothing too bad! As always I don't own the boys Kripke does lucky man! And to my HunterGirls Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 103729 [Report This] Published: 03/02/08 Updated: 26/07/09
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Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Discussions at Bobby's Hi Bev, I know I already told you, but I love the way Sam knew exactly what Dean's problem with the whole 'Angels exist (and are frankly a pain in the arse)' thing was. And it rang totally true as well. But I think it's worth repeating. So that's why I just did! This was a lovely, introspective and thoughtful chapter. I even enjoyed Sam and Uri bonding over mac & cheese. He may win me over yet. Good work as always, Hun. Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster. Owhhh! They're not totally pains in the butt...come on you rather liked BGR! And see I can do thoughtful...but maybe my heart lies in torture and pain really! Would never get anywhere without your awesome help hun! Love ya bev xx
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Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Bandages and Bathing. Y'know, every time I start to think maybe Uri isn't such a bad old stick after all, he goes and does something to make me wanna bitch slap him! Glad he got his just desserts though - yay for Bobby's dodgy plumbing (Ha!) Great chappy, you write so well that the whole hunting lark just becomes secondary to Dean being bashed, healing, being bashed a bit more then having a shower to clean off all the muck from having been bashed so much. There's an entire story just in that! Good work, Hunny. Kirst xxx Author's Response: Hey Snow (animated southern slut!) Now, I know ya really adore Uriel, its that thing about refusing to aknowledge a boy that ya like! And behave or I'll bring Michael back. And OK i get the drift and there WILL be a bit more action in the next few chapters, (might have to hurt them a bit too!) Kiss kiss snog snog. bev xx
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Date: 25/07/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Awh crap! I liked that shirt. Oh Bev, well worth the wait! Even Uri didn't manage to piss me off. And, have I ever mentioned how much I love a protective and growling Sam? Almost as much as I love Dean doing, well, anything. But especially when he's having his shirt cut/ripped/pulled off. And, Yay! BGR is coming back! Roll on next chappy! Kirsty xxx Author's Response: Hey Boo. Well hunny hadda bring BGR back as he keeps asking after ya all the time. Think he has a bit of a thing for ya! Angels clearly like Essex slappers! I enjoyed snarly Sam too...he's gonna be a bit the same in next chapter i think so hang in there with me...oh ya have to cause otherwise it'll be illegible! Ah my beloved beta! love ya bev xx
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Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Were-Creatures Oh Bev, but I like the talking. Especially the arguing. Although, with what you promised the were-racoons are going to do to ole gobshite... I'm holding you to that, hun. Another great chapter. Sam had a valid point, so why do I feel the need to slap him silly? Must be hormones (or poor, hurt Dean.) Kirst xxx Author's Response: Hey ya deranged Essex tart! Look I know ya have it in for Michael but are ya really sure that the delicate girls at UnGen are ready for...Umm no neither am I! As to sam, yeah he's a real bossy, little monkey ain't he? And ya just know it's gonna make Dean recklessly angry don't ya? heehee So better go write some action so my lovely wonderful beta-girl has something other than Winchester Objectification to amuse! Love ya babe bev xx
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Date: 18/10/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Boys on a Harley Machine Bev, you're an expert on these kinds of things so, tell me, is it wrong to be jealous of a motorbike? Yeah, it's a sickness, I know. So, like buses, wait for ages and then 2 bright and shiny double decker chapters turn up (almost) at once. Loved the action, loved the aftermath. Even almost, sorta love Uri a teeny tiny bit. But you are well aware of where my heart really lies... can't wait for next chappie and the return of BGR! Fab work! Big snogs, Hunny. Kirst xxx Author's Response: Kirst. No Hunny, nothing wrong at all with being jealous of a motorbike and see! I knew you'd get to like Uriel. He's a bit of a brat but lovable and yeah, just for you BGR is on his way back. See you...yeah actually see! god I'm nervous! see you soon booboo! Bev xxx Summary:
After a bit of a bop on the head, Dean's not quite sure who he is! I wanted to do something that is about Dean's sweet and vulnerable side, that would hopefuly be funny too! Here's my attempt, hope you like it!
Thanks Kripke for the loan of your lovely boys, you genius of a man you! HunterGirls - sweet dreams for you all I hope! Geekster - Dean/Dan/shagmonkeys for you!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 25816 [Report This] Published: 09/02/08 Updated: 18/04/08
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Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A bang on the head! Well you know I love it as it features my 3 fave shagmonkeys (even if one is by name only.) Silly (in the best poss way) sweet and funny, Bev. There may have been no smash 'n' bash but you still got in a bare foot mention. You're dedicated girl! Geekster Kirst xxx Author's Response: Hey Geeky Well seeing as you laid claim to all three bits of our top shagmonkey totty for last weeks celebrations I had to fill my time writing and lusting after bare tootsies! Thanks as always for your inspirational comments! Still think we should always post with them attached they would add a frisson! Princess! x
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders! You know I love it, Bev! It is just so sweet. And really, I could listen to Dean describe classic bikes and cars forever in that sexy drawl of his (whilst gazing into his entrancing emerald eyes, of course!) Can't think of anything I haven't already told you so I'll just repeat - love it, love it, love it! Oh, and had big fun with S, D & a whole packet of Lemsip (had to watch where we rubbed the Vic tho!) Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster! Lemsip and lemur porn! What more could you wish for you S**GMonkey! Love ya Bird to Bird! xxxxx
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Date: 12/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Paris Hilton and A Motel Pool! Alrighty Bev? Tryin' to catch up with my reviewing and up waaaay past my bedtime to do it! Well, you know how much I love this although you missed the opportunity to send the boys skinny dipping in the non-existent pool. Could they not have staggered around a bit in there undercrackers looking for it? Love the whole 'shit head' expression thing - been on the receiving end of that more than once! Although, sadly not from Dean (hey, he can look at me anyway he wants too with those big green/jade/emerald/sleepy/sexy eyes - enough descriptive for you?) And didn't I suggest a 'brown gloop' warning at the beginning of the chapter? Making people spew their tea; you are evil woman. Pure evil! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Ah there's my wonderful little shagmonkey! Can I just point out that it was really cold, snow on the ground, Dean has been poorly, Sam is all worried and parental and you are still determined to get your evil jollies by nicking his pants? Wicked Geekster! And you call me a perv! Oh so now I'm intruigued! Who does the shithead look at ya? Dan? No wouldn't dare! I know Crazy Eddie - nah too busy running round naked and licking the jam off his feet. So who then? Ah...Elvis! Oops, forgot the brown gloop alert! Silly me! hahahahahahahah Snogs Hun Bevxxxxxxx
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Date: 15/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Alternative music and sweet potato fries! Hey Bev (or should I say Rita?) No, Dean singing along to The Dixie Chicks is NOT freakin' funny, dude! You're lucky you're my friend (and you live quite far away) or I'd lamp you one for that! Otherwise, another fine and dandy chapter. Love Sam's wistful prompting of Dean for a bit of 'bitch/jerk' banter and Dean's concern over Sam's digestive system. Good work Chuffy! Geekster xxx Author's Response: Geeky! Now come on admit it you love's ya a bit of steel guitar and I've heard ya yodelling when you think no-ones about! good job I didn't have them swap the impala for a Prius hybrid then huh? Love you hunny especially for helping me with my homework Bev xx
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Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Discussions at the Diner. Hey, quit blaming the angst pixie, you know you love a bit of suffering to balance out the fluff! Still lovin' this. I know I said it before, but I don't see how else you could have realistically had Dean remembering his past life and you wrote the whole conversation so beautifully: Sam all guilty and angry at the unfairness and 'proper' Dean slowly re-emerging from his amnesia coccoon, rebuliding his walls. And then, at the end, back to the bitch/jerk banter - fabulous! I'll even forgive you for the previous chappys Dixie Chick content. Kirst xxx Author's Response: Hey my Lemur loving Shagmonkey! What can i say other than thanks for reminding me not to be a big stupid GIRL! And honest it was a pixie, i asked the easter bunny who was with her and she confirmed her identity. Oh and I've booked us tickets for The Dixie Chicks next UK tour, get your boots on Hunny...go on admit it you loooove 'em. bev xxxx
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Date: 28/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Bobby. Still love that flashback, Bev! As much as I liked sappy Dean, I'm with Sam in the 'happy he is almost back to normal' corner. I missed the snark and ass kicking. Although, I'm sure we are about to see some in the next chappy... Cos there's no way Dean'll just wait in the car like a good boy whilst Sam & Bobby get to have all the fun! Good as ever. I particularly enjoyed your use of punctuation... mwah, mwah (air kisses dahhhling!) Kirst xxx Author's Response: Lemur-Lover and Dan-Groupy extraordinaire. All I can say is that the punctuation makes the story and I have this fab Bird who knows all the secret sigils that control the wicked and preverse Lore of the comma! Oh and yup, he's not done as he was told and is already out of the car and playing at big boy rough stuff with the vamps! Bad Dean! Hey, and I had a whole pabe of next chapter with no mistakes! Do I get a gold star? Love ya Hun Princess xxxxxx
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Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7. Vampires. Hey Bev, Missed me? Well, I don't know how much I can of helped as I'm a lover not a fighter but I still think the fight scene was great. I especially love the fact that, despite his amnesia and sudden panic attack, Dean still kicked vamp arse and saved Sam! That's our boy! Good work, Hunny. Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster. Where have ya been Hunny? And yeah l missed ya like a bitch! Well for non fighters we seem to have done OK hun! Yeah, our boy is just wonderful. Thanks Kirsty, you're words mean sucha lot. bev xx
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Date: 18/04/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Did ya get a bop on the head or something? Hey Bev, Imagine being able to get practically an entire paragraph to fit around Dean putting on footwear. You are dedicated to your perversion, aren't ya? Well, like I said before, I thought this was a fitting (if slightly melancholic) end. This was a very sweet and funny story and you wrote both bruvs and the Bobbster perfectly. I'm betting Sam's guilt won't last for long and there will be plenty of ammo to fire at Dean for months to come. Of course, if he keeps up with the country music, he'll deserve all the stick he gets! Really nicely done! Big snogs, hun! Kirst xxx Author's Response: geekster. a man has to put his socks on for goodness sake and its my duty to add in the necessary detail so you can 'see' the action...plus yup i love the idea of his bare feet! Sorry the end was a bit melancholy, just kinda seemed the Winchester way. Oh and as to the singing going to ask Kripke to write in some classic Johnny Cash! Just for you. xxxx Love ya Kirsty. bev xxx Summary: Dean gets whammied. Sam gets freaked.
Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1368 [Report This] Published: 10/02/08 Updated: 10/02/08
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Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hilarious and strangely erotic (but that's probably just me!) If only Dean were bendier, you could have gotten another chapter out of it! More tomfoolery please! Kirsty x Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting ... I can see where it seems strangely erotic. But it's hard for me to think of the boys in a non-erotic context, lol! Summary:
Thank you to whoever nominated, you made my day!
http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php Dean watches the storm, Sam watches Dean.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2023 [Report This] Published: 10/02/08 Updated: 10/02/08
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Date: 11/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 When the lightning strikes Beautiful. Tone was perfect. Melancholic but hopeful, what more could anyone ask? Thanks for sharing. Kirsty xxx Author's Response: Thanks Kirsty, I'm glad it worked well for you, and thanks for the great review. X Louy Summary:
The one that gets away turns out to be harder to lose than they thought. Sam works hard at this one, and Dean realises that getting the girl is not always a good thing. (Contains one miniscule reference to very end of season 1. Set mid season 2. No spoilers.) Categories: Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 14901 [Report This] Published: 19/02/08 Updated: 19/02/08
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 Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Hello. Just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoyed this. Really great brotherly interaction - loved Sam being angry at drunken Dean and Dean being oblivious because, well, he's drunk. And the 'big words' competition was funny - Go Dean, Go! Ha ha. And of course the wolfy babe wanted a bit of Dean, what woman wouldn't? Love your writing style and enjoy your sense of humour. It's a shame this got pushed off the 'just added' page so quickly as people are missing out on a darn good read. Thanks for sharing. Kirsty x Author's Response: Thanks! Thought this one had just slipped through the cracks, LOL I love me some big words, thought it was time Dean got his own back too. :) Ta!
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Demons, demons, demons. What are you gonna do? A bit of humour, hopefully ending up on Sam’s required reading list – what can I say, I’m very shallow! After episode 3.3 (that’s all I’ve seen!) so spoilers for end of season 2 and 3.1 – 3.3. Rated T for some situations and mild language. Categories: Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4322 [Report This] Published: 21/02/08 Updated: 21/02/08
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 You know, Curly Wurlys are a much underused confectionary in literature... and they are definitely smaller than they used to be, right? I love your turn of phrase, I particularly enjoyed 'impenetrable bubble of refusal to care' as I had been searching for a way to describe my feelings towards The Brit Awards. Another amusing and entertaining yarn, so cheers very much! Kirsty x Author's Response: Ta for the review! (I managed to avoid the Brits - but only cos I'm not in Blighty right now, LOL. Just made-up the Arctic Monkeys took home again ~ how fab was that?) Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a review. Much appreciated! :) Summary:
Older and younger brothers are the same the world over, corporeal or ethereal. Come and peak into the private postbag of the aged and wise Bellepheron, and his hip baby brother Tuffy as he adventures 'Uptop' on his gap year from Hell! Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 18711 [Report This] Published: 01/03/08 Updated: 04/04/08
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Date: 01/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hooves and Hellhounds Hello Girls, Loved it! Original, well written and very, very funny! Like the reference to 'the deadlies', the veggie Hell Hound and the hoof/foot thing. So, Bev, do you have to same fetish for hooves as you do for feet? Great banner, great idea, greatly looking forward to the next installment of Tuffy's adventures! Kirsty xxx Author's Response: "Geekster, hey don't think lemur-porn girl needs to be referencing my slight penchant for tootsies! Love ya! Bird to Bird xxx" OK, so Bev is now speaking in tongues...lol Thanks for the review Birdy. X Lout
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Date: 13/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Tofu and Turning to the Pink side Hey, you got in a wildebeest migration - top notch! This is superb, so, so funny and far too many best bits to mention - oh go on then, I'll give it a go: Penguins clogging up the river styx, a hell hound with alopecia & IBS, anger intensification classes, magilights to replace candles, YED singing 'Dancing Queen' and of course the ongoing problems of the 'great, flopping pink bone flaps'. Fabulous work, ladies! Kirsty x Author's Response: Wildebeest were specially for you Geekster! Well they are one of your many secret perversions aren't they? Bev xx Hehehe, glad you're having a giggle with this one Birdy and thanks for the great review...XX Louy
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Date: 13/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Watercolours and Wasabi Hi again girls, I have to say, I am now feeling a mite guilty as I fear I may be a bit demonist, myself. To make amends, I was thinking of organising a march thru Cambridge. All the students will join in - we could wave pitchforks and sprinkle sulphur in our wake. I guess you 2 will be up for it? I'll be in touch with the details. In the meantime, keep up the good work. This really is extremely entertaining stuff and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Ooh look, there's another chapter so I don't have to ... Kirsty x Author's Response: I've made my placard for the rally, it say's "Legalise Lemur Porn!". Does that strike the right tone? bev xx Count us in Birdy, didn't know how demonist I was myself till Tuffy whispered in my ear...XX Louy
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Date: 13/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Caduceus and Cowboy boots Hello, me again! Running out of ways to say 'funny & original' so I'll give a brief top 3 fave bits: Mid death crisis, cultural exchange and a demon on a space hopper! And, it's funny & original - me like very much! Kirsty xxx Author's Response: Borrowed the spce hopper idea for Dan hun. he said you guys used it to create dear little Crazy Eddie so what more recommendation would a deamon need to adopt one? bev xx Me like that you like very much...lol XXX Louy Summary: Divided we fall – especially if you’re a Winchester who suffers a momentary lapse of brotherly love.
Comes after season 3, episode 3. Rated T for language, situations and adult humour. Categories: Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 23449 [Report This] Published: 22/03/08 Updated: 24/03/08
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Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Oh wow! Nine chapters in one go and it still wasn't enough! This is great, loads of action and humour and the Impala finally being given equal billing as a character in her own right! And I have always found armadilloes a wee bit freaky but now I feel justified in that, so cheers! Can't wait for the next installment. Kirsty x
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Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Oh, don't back away from your weirdo humour - I like it! And I really loved this; so happy I didn't have to wait too long for the conclusion. Rosie was a fantastic character, more than a match for Dean and maybe even worthy of her own little spin off story. This was great, really entertaining and very well written. Thanks! Kirsty x Author's Response: Thanks! You've no idea what a great review like that does for me, LOL (Well, maybe you do!). I'm so glad Rosie didn't fall flat, as they say, and that someone else appreciates my "pompous turn of phrase", as a Beta-reader put it. Thanks so much for taking the time to review - you've made my day! :)
Summary: The day of the deal is upon Sam and Dean. This is my take on what happens. I don't do deathfics so there is no need to worry there.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 13990 [Report This] Published: 23/03/08 Updated: 01/04/08
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Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Just did one of my usual longwinded reviews and then my PC ate it - Bum! Oh well, get to start again now ... I have no medical knowledge either, outside of a first aid certificate so wasn't offended. And I do love the whole premise for this. I really want Dean to get himself out of Hell, kinda like John but without the disappearing in a bright light never to be seen again part. And I would much prefer mopey drunkard Sam to emotionless killing machine Sam in the event of Dean's death. I love the way Bobby marched in and took control. Having insurance for them as his 'sons' was very fitting. And the fact he got straight away what was bothering Dean whilst Sam was too caught up in his own guilt was very true to character too. This is a fantastic start and I am looking forward to the next installment (so long as it doesn't hold up 'Choices'!) Kirsty xx ps - in response to your response to my last review of 'Choices' (if you catch my drift!) I can't take the credit there as it is birdie Bevs work that you enjoy. I have the privilige to be her beta, and agree with your sentiments entirely. Author's Response: Now, be nice, I said stories when I meant story and I HAVE read your story and I loved it. The wildebeast were hilarious! Just peeked and I didn't review...sorry, shameful of me. I agree with you, hence my story, Dean needs to come out hell not a demon and not a ghost and Sam needs to NOT go darkside. Unfortunately, we probably won't get our wish. I like Bobby taking care of them too. And he would get it because he seems to know Dean very well - that's a back story I wish the show would cover. Thanks for reading and for the detailed and kind reviews (especially twice when the computer crashes - I usually just cry then!) My Beta is Betazoiding 'Choices' as we speak. As soon as she is done the final chapter will be up. Thanks again!
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Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Blimey, now I'm intrigued ... what have you heard from the convention? But, back to the review. You always pack a lot into your chapters, and whether it is action or more character development your writing style is equally engaging. I felt for poor Dean struggling to separate the tortures of hell from the continuing tortures of his medical predicament: helpless in his blindness and restraints and unable to fully trust the one person he had always relied on before. Thank goodness for St Bobby! Do you think 25 and 29 is too old to be officially adopted? I’m sure Dean would like that, despite his sarcastic "Will you please call me Dean, my dad’s Mr. Singer." Which I loved! But let us not forget poor Sam: Isn’t there some saying about it being worse to watch someone you love suffer than to suffer yourself? Of course, when your loved one has literally gone through hell, I’m not sure that would be accurate. Anyway, you wrote Sam’s hurt, anger, frustration and eventual epiphany very well. I agree it was a good place to end, a nice nod to the pilot and AHBL2, but it is a shame you cut this short and I hope you come back to it in the future and write the hunt for Malphas and Ruby and their subsequent ass kicking. Ruby definitely has a good slap coming for being such a manipulative bitch! And for always posing like Daphne from Scooby Doo (hip out, arms crossed.) But I digress again ... This was a thoroughly enjoyable read, as I have come to expect from you, and I look forward to following whatever you come up with next. Kirsty x Author's Response: Kirsty I figured redeeming poor Bobby was necessary after my last story - made a lot of enemies after that one. I really do love Bobby and think that he will always be a source of comfort for Dean. Funny enough, my aunt was adopted in her 60's - a very long story involving family secrets. So I guess Bobby could adopt the boys whenever we wanted! Sam is a difficult one. Its hard to tell whether the tears or the anger will manifest. You can thank the Sam we got on Katric....she demanded to know if he REALLY had to cry again. So, angry Sam it was. He did figure it out in the end as I hope he will do in the show before too long. I had not even noticed the Daphne pose....I will never be able to look at her the same way again and I HATED looking at her before. Thank you very much for that. If I can get my head around my frustrations with the show I will continue this story and do what I'd always intended to do with Ruby and Malphas....we'll leave it alone there. Thank you so much. Your long, thoughtout reviews mean so much to me. I am so appreciative of the thought, time and effort that goes into it. Kim |
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