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Real name: Kirsty Status: Member Member Since: 09/11/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Birdy Summary:
 Sam Dean and Jo (Harvelle) are relaxing after a successful but tough poltergeist hunt, when Dean is abducted by a brutal daemon intent on bringing destruction down on mankind.
Sam and Jo must find a way to save Dean, and the whole of mankind. Will Dean be strong enough to withstand the daemon whilst they search and who are the strangers who might offer a solution? Thanks so much to Lout for my lovely banner and to Kirsty my GeekGirl shotgun and all you other daemon hunter girls for your encouragement. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 29542 [Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Angels and Daemons. Oh Bev you sick, sick puppy - God I'm loving this! Even dragged myself away from my lovely Lemurs long enough to read it again and review. Back to my stripey friends, now, though. Keep up the good work, hun! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster Strepsirrhini Haplorrhini prosimians, of which a principal is the Lemur Catta (ring tail to you and I!), derive their name from Lemures meaning 'Spirit of the Night' or 'ghost'. How cool is that? Your perversion is totally supernatural dude!! Freaking Cosmic Karma! Sick puppy indeed! well maybe! Bev xxx
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Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry! Best chappy yet (and it's had some stiff competition, hun!) Lovin' your descriptions and the attention to detail when describing Dean's injuries - can't decide if it's genius or Munchausens by proxy ;) Can't wait for the angst-fest that will be chappy 9! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster. Phew - was a toughy as you know, but the special 'love' that only a lemur can afford carried me through. Oh and the name's France not Allitt so less of the MH by Proxy slurs - you and I both know it's just a rich and totally pervy imagination!) And yeah - (sweat, tremble!) let's try us some of that purdy angst!! Bev xx
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Date: 09/01/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Redemption or Destruction? Blackmailing us into reviewing? How could you?? Works though ... You know I love it, hun. The writing is so soft and sweet and poetic and then you suddenly realise you're reading about Dean being whumped - fab! Kirst xxxx Author's Response: Geekster Haha, trust you to rumble my master plan! Awh you really think that? I love that and that it comes from you. Couldn't have done this chapter without you Hun - big thanks Bev xxxxxxx
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy! Well you know how much I loved it, even with my stiff upper lip and avoidance of chick-flick (ha!) Still say the Angels were selfish b'stards for not giving them a cosmic lift back, though. 'Specially that Uriel - what a git! Ahh, just joshing ya, hun. Fab, all the way through. A well thought out plot, beautifully executed. Now, how many different ways can we describe Dean's (admittedly wonderful) eyes?? Well done - you and th'whippet should treat yourselves to a new flat cap each to celebrate. Love ya! Geeky xxx Author's Response: Geekster!!! Elvis sends his best doggie regards to you, tribe and Eric (fancy calling a bunny Eric! Southerners!) and he looks real fine in his new checked flattie! Says he'll be sure and hump your leg next time you're in the neighborhood! And I still say you can't call divine beings 'Gits' 'cause they'll smash ya one with their gret big wings!! OK,OK, so if I cool it re: jade, green loviliness can I mention his feet more?? Haha, wonder how many words there are for toes?? Ooow reasearch here I come! Love ya Geek!! Bev xxxxxx
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The Boys find themselves out of luck on a cold and snowy Christmas Eve. So with Dean hurt and both boys patience running thin it's up to an oddly transformed Impala and a fortuitious stranger to save the day! Merry Christmas All! As always don't own the boys or anything to do with them (Damn that Kripke!) but boy I wish I did! Love to all my four hoofed hunter babe friends! Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3469 [Report This] Published: 10/12/07 Updated: 10/12/07
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Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 You know I loved it, even if I did only get to nuzzle Bobby and not (obviously injured!) Dean. I think you missed an opportunity to strip him though, hun - he shouldn't have been sat in those cold, wet clothes! Looking forward to your next story ... and this time, can I be the nurse in charge of suturing? Ask Santa, I've been a very good girl! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Hey, I only wrote it so you could fulfil your unvoiced fantasy to get some o' that sweet Bobbster action!! And I've ordered you that new Junior Nurse Kit for Christmas so I'll have to write you some juicy suturing action so you can go play!! Poor Dean more pain for our sweet boy! Big snogs Bev xx Summary: Dean is taken by an old enemy and will never be the same again. Spoilers for Season 3 and mature content.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 35457 [Report This] Published: 21/12/07 Updated: 14/01/08
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Date: 31/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I love a good vampire story - and this is a great one! I really liked the Kate character in the show and thought there was scope for more from her. Plus, hurt Dean and protective Sam is always a good combination. Very well written and easy to read. Thanks for sharing. Thank you so very much. I love a good vampire story myself Bram Stokers being the best. I thought they stayed pretty close to classic vampires with the Kate/Luther story pretty well and really hope that they bring her back sometime. Thanks again for reading and the review - makes my New Year's Eve! Summary:
It started with a nightmare, and quickly became the surest way to annoy Dean Sam could think of. Categories: Drabbles, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: Snapshots Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 275 [Report This] Published: 06/01/08 Updated: 06/01/08
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Date: 06/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dean getting to thirty will give us all reason to be cheerful! You pack so much into so few words - I love the regret and the hope and the little insights into their past. Thanks again for a really good read. - Kirsty Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I simply cannot even for a moment entertain the idea that Sam won't save Dean. It just can't happen. Summary: A ridiculous little Drabble on the ongoing theme of Clowns! Hope it makes you smile! (Boy it's hard to stick to 100 words only!)
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 103 [Report This] Published: 06/01/08 Updated: 06/01/08
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Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey Bev, can I be at the front of the queue to help rub that fine ass better?? Love it, hun! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster! One cheek each I thought! Love ya Hun hope you better! Bird to Bird xxx Summary:
Amazing Banner by the Amazing Rae666 Sent on a hunt by an old friend, Dean is poisoned and then horribly injured after their prey attacks him. Even if Sam can figure it out can he save Dean? Or will he make a mistake that will cost his brother his life? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 28030 [Report This] Published: 08/01/08 Updated: 23/01/08
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Date: 23/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Oh my god, that was fantastic! I read the whole thing straight through - just couldn't stop it was so well written and such a great idea. I love the demonic seal humor and Dean keeping a brave face on but Sam seeing through it. You portrayed both brothers brilliantly and did the chick flick stuff with the exact right tone for it to ring true to me. I am so glad Sam got revenge on Dean's behalf and the 'fierce hug' when Dean recovers was really sweet. Thank you so much for an extremely enjoyable read. I know I'm gonna come back to it again and again! Thanks again, Kirsty Author's Response: Thanks you so much for your kind words and review:) I am truly gald that you enjoyed the story so much--Thank You!! Summary:
Thinking back to better days isn't all it's cracked up to be.
http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php Thank you so much to whoever nominated, you made my day! Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2109 [Report This] Published: 11/01/08 Updated: 11/01/08
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Date: 12/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The games we play This was fab. Made me laugh, then made me sad then made me go all warm. I could hear their voices saying the lines and I wish they'd do more stuff like this on the show. Thanks for sharing. - Kirsty x Author's Response: Thank you so much Kirsty, this is a lovely review, and I couldn't be happier that you enjoyed it. Summary: You said you wanted to be written in Dru so here's a little drabble for you! Mind those hands now!
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 100 [Report This] Published: 21/01/08 Updated: 22/01/08
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Date: 23/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh Bev, only 100 words and you still managed to get in an eye and ass reference? That there is talent - or obsession! - hun! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geeky! Now you know I have no obsessions, or perversions! Well apart from Dean's eyes, ass, bod in general, bare feet, and pain threshold! Ah well a girl's gotta have interests!! Love ya Hun! Bird to Birdy! xx Summary:
Dean sold his soul to save his little brother. And his little brother wants to know why. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1886 [Report This] Published: 24/01/08 Updated: 25/01/08
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Date: 25/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Low Down Wow! Loved it! It starts off quite light with Sam annoyed at Dean's 'okay-ness' and then BAM you hit us with the kind of conversation we all want in the show but will likely never get. This was great, thank you for sharing. Kirsty x Summary:
This story takes place immediately after my story "To The Rescue" and incorporates "Sword and Shield." Dean and Sam discover why Mary apologized to Sam during the Episode "Home." Katric, my Beta! You are the best and when everyone notices the definite improvement to my writing, it's all due to you. Banner by bulletbabe - more thanks than I can express!
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 107827 [Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 24/03/08
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 Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 This is fantastic. I usually wait until a story is finished before reading (cliffhangars drive me mad!) but I loved all of your other stories so much that I just couldn't wait any longer. I have read your other reviews (I live vicariously) and can understand the discomfort some people feel, especially about Bobby, but I don't think a bit of controversy is a bad thing. This is a well thought out, thoroughly researched and intelligent story. I feel you have given a lot of information in a way that was easy to digest but does take some thinking about afterwards for the full impact. You have classified this as AU but (as you said) everything in the Supernatural universe could be seen as AU and I think if you have demons you have to have angels too. Only fair, right? As well as enjoying the storyline, I just love how you write the Winchester trio I can see and hear them so clearly in my head. It was obvious Dean would be a great dad as he had raised Sam and the way he deals with Ben is very believable. But I am particularly enjoying the growing relationship between Sam and Ben. Their interactions are so sweet and well observed (as much like a step parent as an uncle, trying not to overstep the boundaries) and I like the way Ben seems to bring out Sam's lighter side. I had a much better thought out and succint review going around in my head after reading this last night but, as is always the way, a good nights sleep turned it into more of a ramble but I hope I got across that I am loving this - it is so different to anything else I have read and I hope that you update again soon! (Did I mention I hate cliffhangars?) Thanks for sharing and making me think. Kirsty x Author's Response: Kirsty, Thank you so much. I've managed with a little help from family and friends to convince myself that controversy is a good thing. I am to the point that while I take a deep breath before I read a new review, I no longer dread them when that little message pops up in my email. Luckily there were a couple otherwise my ego would've taken a little to reboost. I went into the angels specifically because I read an interview where Kripke said he'd never go there. Means it was fair game for me to play with without being out-cannoned later (I just made that term up) since that often happens in fanfaction especially Supernatural where characters die regularly. I also like to look into the polarity of things and this works well with this story. Thank you so much for you kind words about my writing, my characters and the work I put into researching my stories. It is nice to have that stuff recognized. I love three together also. They write so easily. I'm glad that you like the growing relationship between Sam and Ben, I've been having fun helping that grow. I also like Sam being a counter balance to Dean's protectiveness because only Sam would understand what it means to be over-protected. I hate cliffhangers too. That's why my chapters are so long in this story. I could really have broken them up a lot more and dragged this on a lot longer. I had intended to not post until I had the entire thing written but I couldn't control myself. I was writing very fast until my most recent reviews and then a friend pulled out of my self pity and now I'm working again. I'm usually pretty fast at this so hopefully the next chatper will be up soon. Thanks again! And thanks for reading when you normally wouldn't that makes me feel great! And the long reviews....I must be doing something right. Just so you know - and anyone else reading this - the reviews were welcomed and only left me wondering if I'd gone way off track. I would never not finish a story and I appreciate what the reviewers had to say. But, I will always defend my ideas where as suggestions on writing improvements are taken to heart and worked on diligently. Kim
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Date: 23/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Arghh no! What did I say about cliffhangars? Where's Ben? How am I supposed to sleep now? Dammit! Still loving Sam & Ben bonding and enjoyed Ben getting to be a kid - the play between the boys and girls was really well observed. And the judge spotting that Ben was a heart throb in the making... well duh! With those genes, could he be anything else? Like the idea of a 'self help group' for all the Changeling families - can just imagine a talk show about it - "Have you or someone you know been affected by Changelings? Maybe your child was swapped for a lower level demon look a likey who killed your husband and sucked your life force before spontaneously combusting. If so, call this number and you could appear on our next show." Or not ... Fab update, looking forward to the next (better be soon, bloody cliffys!) Kirsty x Author's Response: OMG that was hilarious. I would watch that epsiode of Jerry Springer. It just seemed so middle class america to get together and discuss but do nothing about it. I am so, so, so sorry about the cliffhanger....not really but things do have to stop at some point I can't just keep writing and writing.....I have to sleep, I have to eat and I have to think. I'm working on the next just gotta work out one major kink and then it will all go together. Thanks again and THANK YOU for the laugh that was great! Thanks for the review.
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Date: 21/03/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Oh wow! I've not had much free time recently and have missed being able to keep up with this story. But then, I get to read 5 chapters one after the other (bang goes my early night!) and it was bliss! I love your characters so much. I really enjoy the way you build them up into proper 3 dimensional beings that I can imagine acting it all out in my head (possibly that is me needing to up my meds, but I think you should take it as a compliment!) Ben is starting to notice girls - uh oh! But I guess it was inevitable with his fathers genes. And the poor boy has the Winchester luck too! I guess writing a story where he just gets to have a picnic and throw a ball around at the park wouldn't be so exciting for us to read, but the poor lad - being kidnapped twice! I hope he gets to go to Disneyland or something after this. And so finally Sam is beginning to see Johns POV and maybe understand how hard it must have been for Dean to play piggy in the middle for all those years. I know you said you wanted the 'Ben stories' to be a way of giving insights into Dean & Sam's childhoods without flashbacks and you have succeeded brilliantly. And, oh look, now I'm rambling again! But this is 5 chapters worth of reviewing... In case I haven't been clear before - I LOVE this! I have sat and read 30 pages, blocking out everything else going on around me, so now my hubby isn't speaking to me and my bum has gone numb but I couldn't be happier. This is really well written and I look forward to the next update and hope I can keep up this time. Thanks for so much entertainment. Kirsty x Author's Response: Kristy, Please tell your husband that I am so sorry and you can tell your bum too. My husband has learned that his wife is a happier person if he just leaves her alone to write and read. I hate to tell you this but most of those chapters were about 20 pages each double spaced so you were closer to reading about 50 - 60 pages. It was my goal to really flesh this story out and I think I accomplished that. I love writing Ben so much and it's so easy because I draw from my son. They are similar but not the same (of course) but I know exactly how a kid his age acts. Thank you for letting me know that I have shown some insight into the Brother's Winchester. I think Dean is learning that being John (the father) with a wee bit of Sam isn't an easy task as well. He was in the middle before always wanting to mediate well now he's the decision maker....and Ben doesn't always like those decisions. Thank you so much for the compliments. They are always great but coming from someone who's stories I enjoy and follow is a real compliment and means the world to me. The next chapter should be up some next week. Kim
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Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 What a perfect ending! As much as I don't want Sam to go darkside I do really enjoy it when he get's angry on Dean's behalf and starts kicking arse! I love that you had Ben talking Sam down. Hell I love Ben, period! When he threw himself over Dean and protected him with his wings just like Dean did for him when he was being whipped (but without the wings) it felt exactly right! And then his comments about nothing sounding stupid to him cos he's just 11 (going on 50!) and his explanation of why he made the choice but his belief that why doesn't matter so long as the decision is the right one. Kind of a simplified version of what Dean has been trying to say all along. You have written him so well that he is smart and funny and wise but still just an 11 year old boy with all the sarcasm and insecurities that come with that. And wings. Retractable wings. So Sam has to carry on making the right decision every day but now, at least, he has 2 angels on his side helping him keep things in perspective. I think he'll do ok. Now, your treatment of poor Dean - was your keyboard possessed when you wrote the crucifixion or were you trying to give the story an Easter feel? It was very well researched and described - the inability to breathe properly and the dislocation of his elbows and shoulders wouldn't have occurred to me (despite my first aid certificate!) And of course Raphael couldn't heal him, that would be far too easy. We all know that being on the 'right' side means constant pain and suffering. Think I might have chosen the darkside (baddies get the best lines, too!) Finally (cos I'm running the risk of the review being as long as the chapter) I love the way you ended on Mary's diary entry. Dean has always been, and will always remain, a big brother first and an angel second. He is also a bit of a love god (in my humble opinion!) This was a fantastic story from beginning to end: complex, witty and enthralling. I am so glad I read it as you posted rather than waiting for it to be complete first or my eye's would have been bleeding by the end (I can't stop once I'm hooked!) Hope I have gotten across just how much I kinda sorta liked it ... Kirsty x Author's Response: Gads, this is a little intimidating to respond to. I was tempting to just say 'thanks' but that's just wrong. So, here goes. I love Sam angry and protective too but, like you, I want him to resist temptation. Sam has a long road ahead of him but I think he's got it in him to not give in - I hope. I did the juxtaposition with Dean and Ben on purpose as I'm sure you are aware. And it was important that Sam realize why Ben chose the way he did. Thank you so much for saying good things about Ben. That character has grabbed hold of me and just won't let go. I try very hard to not make him too much of anything. He's got to make mistakes that he and Sam can learn from or they aren't learning the necessary lessons. He's a tough little cookie but he's still just a little boy that lost his mother way too young - who does that remind us of? And I love his wings.....retractable - LOL! As far as the cruxificion. I learned the details of cruxificion a long time ago. Then I read a doctor's report of what would happen to the body it that was done to it. One of my pet peeves in fanfiction is writers who throw out torture without any research. Torture is torture for a reason and there is no way the body or mind can come out of it the same as they went in. Cruxficion is one of the most gruesome forms of torture and one that the Romans used expertly. The effects can be different depending on how things are done - the shoulders only dislocate vilolently if the body is dropped (as in the cross lifted with the body on it and the post dropped in a hole) otherwise the dislocation of the shoulders takes time as the weight of the body pulls them out of socket. The breathing is a fact, can breath in but not out.....that would be terrifying. And no instant healing - you're right good does require suffering and faith. Ending it was a challenge. I hate the spaghetti scene and the forgiveness of Ellen all along but there had to be something that just bound it up. So I went back to the beginning and remembered that it all started with Mary so it had to end there. Okay, now my reply is probably longer than your review. Thank you so much. It makes me beyond happy that you enjoyed this story so much. I also am glad that you didn't wait - I made this one so long on purpose and I wouldn't want your eyes bleeding, that's bad (don't need a first aid certificate to know that!). Hope you like what I've started next. Gads, poor Dean - I just can't leave that boy alone! Author's Response: Just saw a major mistake. I wrote 'I hate the spaghetto scene" I meant 'I had the spaghetti scene' Sorry Summary:
This is the sequel to The Fallen and picks up three days after those events. Dean has his own inner daemons to face as he explores how his time with Mikey and the angels has changed him, as does funky bad-boy angel Uriel!
Amazing banner by BulletBabe - you rock Hun! So it's going to be an interesting journey for them both. I'd recommend you read The Fallen first if you have time as the characters in So Not An Angel have their birth there. References to Angels, God and religious faith and some swearing. Oh and of course, because it's me, descriptions of injuries and pain! but nothing too bad! As always I don't own the boys Kripke does lucky man! And to my HunterGirls Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 103729 [Report This] Published: 03/02/08 Updated: 26/07/09
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Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reunions Trying to think of something new to say but I think I've already told you how much I love this (even that bossy boots Michael - think I preferred Mikey. Evil but less of a control freak!) Uri is a definite grower! Keep up the good work, hunny! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster. Hey shouldn't you be e-mailing me that "thing you were writing last night"? Come on please, share it Hunny! Don't make me come over there! Dan, Dan! make her send it to me! Oh forgot he's way too tired to hear me afte last week! Love Princess Samantha! xxxx
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Date: 24/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Rutting Stags Go Sammy, go Sammy! First he should punch Uri for dissing our boy then he should smack that gobshite Michael in the face for being so full of himself. Then he should come around to mine and I'll take care of the grazes on his lovely big hands. After that, I'll go help Raphe by laying my own 'healing' hands all over Deans poor battered bod. Sound good, hun? Geekster xxx Author's Response: Geekster. Anyone ever tell ya that you're a big perv, thinking maybe the lemurs might have mentioned it from time to time? and I love ya for it! And as we have discussed refering to the Prince of Angels as a "gobshite" is gonna do nothing to get ya through those pearly gates so get your fire retardent trolleys on it's Hades for us! Fire up the Impala, Dean's round mine and I need some help with a difficult relocation of his hip!!
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Date: 03/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Healing? Hey Bev, *cough* *sneeze* *gasp* This cold is proving a real bugger to shift, d'you think, whilst Dean is 'braced' on the bed healing people willy nilly, he might want to lay some of that mojo on me? Oh go on! It's integral to the plot! Alright, he doesn't even have to heal me, just sort of rub it better, a bit ... No? Spoil sport! Geekster xxx Author's Response: Geekster. Smutty pervert! And Ok yeah , takes one to know one! I am as always in your debt! I'll send Elvis over with a £5 and a plate of tripe. See crazy Eddie don't get his filthy mawlers on it! Snog DannyBaby for me! bev xx
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Date: 12/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Dean's Gift and Uriel's Curse. Hey Bev, my pervy friend. Now, with Dean all set to go to Hell at the end of S3, why would I wanna go to heaven anyway? So I can spend more time with that Gobsite Michael blathering on in his pious, whiney voice? Nah, bring on the Hellfire, baby! Just have to say again, loved this chappy. My fave line is still: Huge, splodgy droplets of déjà vu Oh, and of course any mention of Sam's giant hands! Love ya, hun! Geekster xxxxx Author's Response: Geekster! well all I can say hunny is that Michael speaks very highly of you and is saying a Hail Mary for your salvation! meanwhile Uriel is preparing the warm marmite in his big, huge, gigantic hands to give ya one of his special massages! And me and Dean are...no its before the watershed and Crazy Eddie might be on line. so I'll be seeing ya downstairs sweety! Oh and the hands are always for you! Snog ya face off! bev xxx
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Date: 26/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Getting Reaquainted? Well you know I liked it hun. Still think you could have improved it tenfold by having Sam kick the living daylights out of Michael for freaking Dean out and for being such a pious gobshite. Still, I'll forgive that slight oversight because you give us fab lines like: '...road construction gang of orthopedically reckless psychopaths...' And as Michael is going to be bogging off for awhile, I'll lay off him. Just for now, though. Sterling work, my dear idjit! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster. If i wasn't afraid that my only path to salvation was to keep in with any bleeding angel who'll speak to me then I would be pleased to educate Michael as per your delicate instructions, however I have much to atone for (I know you find it hard to believe) so can't whammy the Prince of Angels just yet! And the above line was wrought from personal experience having had a junior doc remove my wires following an orthopeadic reconstruction of my wrist! Thanks as always my beloved beta! Your Idjit xxxxxxx
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Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7. An Offer From Michael Hi Bev, You know I loved this chappie! Dean with his protective posse - cos all he needs is more people hovering over him! Well, ok, maybe he needs it (esp given how much you love whumping him!) but he aint gonna like it, is he? But Uriel; just when I had warmed to his Michael bashing ways (who can blame him? that angel is such a gobshite!) he goes and upsets poor Dean! Tsk, tsk. But I do love BGR. Maybe he could have laid his healing hands on you? This just keeps getting better, hun. Looking forward to M bogging off and the return of Bobbster and his sexy caps. Kirst xxx Author's Response: Ah my wonderful Geekster baby! Owwh! Gone of the lovely Uriel and fancying BGR now huh? Fickle girly! And as to whether he had laid his big old healing hands on me? can't say as then I'd have to kill ya and then what would happen with the daemonic commas? Eeeckkk! And yeah! OK already! I'm exiling the beautiful and pious Prince of Angels just because he ticks ya off! But hey you keep ya hands of the Bobbster! His beardy loving is all mine and you knows it! Loves ya loeads hunny and ever in your debt for expert and wonderful beta! Bev xx
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Date: 30/04/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Departures. Hello Bev, Well, I've dragged myself away from BGR long enough to review. His hands are good for more than just healing ... he can do a mean cross stitch too! Liked this chappy very much and not just cos we said 'ta ta' to ol' Gobshite, the Prince of Arseholes himself. You are gonna have to really work to make me like Uri, you know. I feel very much like kicking him in his bad leg every time he upsets Dean. And not even a millennia's shagging experience is going to win me around! Big snogs, anyway! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Kirst! Hey, don't go scaring BGR will ya hun? Remember he's a divine being and has led a quiet, religious life! Oh and if ya ask him he'll teach ya to macrame too! I am sooooooo glad you support the final departure of Michael, (huum? think she rather fancies him actually, it's the manly, confidence she's attracted to!), and watch it re: damaging Uri as Loulou might have something to say about that! Snogs (tongues and all) right back at ya, and here's that spud Bird to Bird xxxxxx
Reviewer: Birdy Signed
Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 And So to Bobby's... Hey Bev, Great chappy, though don't know what's happened to your formatting, Hun. I love Louy's improved line - very fitting! Ok, so Uri is winning me over now and I'm sure I'll like him as much as you do by the end of the story. Not as much as BGR but definitely more than ol' Gobshite. It is no surprise to me that the second you give Dean some pain relief, you snatch the benefits right back again with demon (sorry, daemon) infested dreams. Sadist! The comma witch sends her regards. She'll be flying by your place later. Big snogs Kirst xxx Author's Response: Kirsty. Formatting gremlins snarked me but sorted now! And yeah isn't that an ace last line. That Lou's a freaking genius! As are you babe! I'm very glad that Uriel's growing on ya I so want you guys to be friends as I know Michael's not ya Fav and now BGR's not there to light ya fires... And me a sadist? No you're confusing me with this Birdy and her Swampy thing! Comma witches visit eagarly anticipated as is Swampy three...
Reviewer: Birdy Signed
Date: 15/05/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Freaking Arch Angels! Hey Hun, You know how much I wanted to be Dean in this chapter, right? Even with all the excruciating pain you put him through. Being manhandled so lovingly from the car by Sam's great big hands would make the pain worth it. Ahhh. Of course you got to touch Bobbster's arse in RL so I'm guessing that experience will be making it's way into the next chappy somehow..? Wonderful as always! Kirst xxx Author's Response: Geekster! Hunny, i have to say that Jim has a very very fine ass and I just could not resist but I don't think he minded too much! Hum! Get it in a story? Now there's a thought... Love ya babe Bev xx |
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