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Reviews by ciel4 Summary: Dean and Sam discuss an apparent freak of nature.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 953 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 10/01/07
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Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Snail's Pace I really enjoyed this. It was just a snapshot of a moment in time - moments like we all experience. Thanks! Summary:
banner by Neolani618 Discovering the purpose of Sam's visions, the science of demons and hunting on horseback isn't so easy....
Winner of the Supernatural FanFiction Awards Whatever Man Category. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Elements Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 56937 [Report This] Published: 11/01/07 Updated: 08/02/07
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Blood Horse Enjoyed Gale Warnings so much I decided to check that I had read all of your other work, and of course realised there must be a previous story with Concha and Dante, and ..... dammit! How did I miss this? Anyway, I'm onto it now, and I already love it. Shining first aid? LOL. And this line is great: But Dean didn’t forget. Not one of Sam’s visions did he ever forget. Gorgeous! Reading straight on.... Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 2: Journey Begins I really like it that Bobby's involved. It's interesting that Dean trusts the rendezvous Bobby's set up because he would kill him if the other hunters couldn't be trusted around Sam - and Bobby knows it. Throws some new light on their relationship.
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: Orion, The Hunter Dean + Sam + horses = hilarity. Well done!
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 4: Oh Yeah, and Tartums Can Fly! “Welcome to my world.” hee! It's nice to know that Dean's consistent!
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: I Hate Demons and Beer! Loved the conversation between Sam and Dean about the merits of whining and sulking! And although I don't usually like extra characters, I like both Concha and Dante. Quite a feat on your part! Thanks. Even though I used them I tried to keep the focus on Dean and Sam, it's their story really. Laura
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Sibling Glue Another great chapter, I'm having so much fun reading this. Loved this part: “No, sometime, somewhere I want to see someone bend a spoon.” He waved at Sam, “he can’t, I keep asking.” LOL. Truly! Author's Response: Hehehehehe...one of my favorite parts too. Thanks so much for reading and commenting.
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 7: The Elements Lovely, and I agree completely - Dean is more Sam's parent than his brother a lot of the time. And he is awesome at both jobs! He is...and that's something I just love about them both. Thanks again!
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 8: Crystals and Car Trunks Hi Bayre, since it seems like I'm reading, then reviewing, then you're reading my reviews! Another terrific chapter, you've ramped the suspense up nicely - Sam getting locked in a trunk, after all Dean's teasing about it, was a master stroke. Am I reading straight on? You bet! Hehehehehe...you're too kind! Thanks again!
Laura
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 9: One Brother, Safe and Whole. Nasty tartums! Eeeew!
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 10: A Hunting We Will Go! Love Deans' thoughts about Sam, and Sam's thoughts about Dean for that matter. This is great: Sam, the annoying little twit, would just stand there looking at him with his damn infernal ‘you’re my big brother and nothing will hurt me with you around’ look he was just so good at. It's a lovely way to demonstrate the brothers' relationship without explicitly stating it - you can do it from inside Dean's head! Only one more chapter? This story has gone so fast! Author's Response: Thank you so very much...again! LOL
Laura
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Date: 13/06/07 Title: Chapter 11: Into the Storm.... Dean Winchester is the best big brother anyone ever had, and I love it that your story demonstrated that so beautifully. And even though the characters of Dante and Concha were well-developed characters in their own right, this was really about the Winchesters and you never lost sight of that. So glad I made it back to this story, you should be proud of your work. And I almost feel like we were chatting because of the fast reaction to reading and reviewing -and that was fun too! Thank you so much, Ciel Author's Response: Thank you Ciel! I'm glad you decided to read, and darn you read fast! LOL I'm glad you liked it, and I think Dean is the best big brother ever too! Laura Summary: Interfering with an exorcism almost proves fatal for the Winchester brothers.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2506 [Report This] Published: 13/01/07 Updated: 13/01/07
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Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This story movesa long at a great pace and the dialogue between the boys is spot on. "Apparently... Satan doesn't take to sarcasm" LOL! Summary: Post "Faith." Sam reflects.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1372 [Report This] Published: 13/01/07 Updated: 14/01/07
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Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Beautifully done again! I'm new to reviewing, but I'm not new to reading, and you have expressed Sam's mixed up guilt-relief perfectly. In the episode he said "I didn't know" - and you have filled in the emotions behind that lucky fact expertly. Great! Summary: Sam and Dean finally "talk."
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2825 [Report This] Published: 13/01/07 Updated: 14/01/07
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Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I really enjoy your writing, but I think this one is my favourite so far. I would have loved to see this conversation acted out on screen, but this is a fabulous substitute. That's why I'm so grateful to writers like you, who supply the missing scenes I've imagined, and describe them so beautifully and dramatically! Summary: Sammy brought home an art project once.
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 399 [Report This] Published: 14/01/07 Updated: 14/01/07
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Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Good Lord, I'm weeping buckets. I have always thought it was a good idea for Sam to leave John, but a terrible idea for him to leave Dean - I guess one day we'll find out if they had any contact after Sam left. (although it doesn't seem so in the show) In the meantime, this was beautifully written, and truly stirred my emotions.Thanks! Summary: Sam and Dean are stranded with a hostile killer on the loose.
Categories: AU, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 20266 [Report This] Published: 14/01/07 Updated: 09/07/07
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Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I have often thought someone should write an alternative to the "Benders" episode. Keep going! Summary: John informs Dean of something and makes a promise to himself.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 960 [Report This] Published: 15/01/07 Updated: 15/01/07
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Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is heartbreaking - as you meant it to be, of course. I am usually not very sympathetic towards the character of John (in the boys' adult life) but you made me feel for him here! Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so happy you liked it! :) Summary: Post Asylum. Dean's understanding of what happened.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1029 [Report This] Published: 15/01/07 Updated: 15/01/07
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Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I loved this. I completely agree with gaelicspirit about the second last line, but you also got me with "Dean was the only tie Sam couldn't cut." Beautifully done. Summary:
He's silently and methodically cleaned those guns a million times over the years; but tonight, they speak to him. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5116 [Report This] Published: 21/01/07 Updated: 21/01/07
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Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I get it - and I really hope it doesn't come to that! You have drawn the parallels beautifully, I really enjoyed it. Thanks Ciel4 - its kinda dark- so wasnt sure folks would like it, much less get the very end- thanks for letting me know! OH- and I too- hope it never comes to that end as well. Summary:
Companion story to Shattered, Dean’s breakdown. John’s POV. What is he asking me? Dean never asks for anything, he’s the easy one. Never demanded any time, effort or worry. Always my strong, self reliant son. When did he become breakable? Spoilers for Devil's Trap. Set after the end of Season One. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., John W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3060 [Report This] Published: 24/01/07 Updated: 24/01/07
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Date: 29/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was great, exploring some of the dialogue from the show and putting in some of your own. I love your thoughts on the true meaning behind some of those words, and the flashbacks were lovely. Well done! One of the things I love about the Winchesters is that even though we know how much they all love each other, what they say is not always what they mean. They have such a complexity and especially in the beginning seemed to not always know what was the truth, if their perceptions were real. Thanks for reviewing, B.J. Summary: AHBL2 tag. Bobby’s POV. Bobby had been waiting seventeen years to finally see Dean sacrifice his life for his brother. Bobby always thought the end would come in battle. He never imagined this, never foresaw this. Fourth and final chapter.
CSPWDT Dean waited his entire life to ask for something and when he did, he initially received nothing for his efforts, nothing except the pain. Later he knew his dad had ultimately answered his pleas, but he never asked for this, never meant for this. Chapters One through Three. Spoilers for several Season One and Two episodes up to Children Shouldn't Play with Dead Things,
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 11808 [Report This] Published: 25/01/07 Updated: 30/05/07
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Date: 31/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Dean Wow. A beautiful job exploring Dean's anguish - and the sheer exhaustion of it. I'm almost too paralysed to read on...... except I want more! So heading straight into chapter 2. Hope I'm strong enough...... Thanks! Yeah, Dean has suffered so much in his lifetime and then this last season just piled the pain on him. I wonder how he finds the strength to continue on, but he always keeps going because of Sammy and his drive to protect him.
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Date: 31/05/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Sam Glad I mustered the strength for this! Another awesome chapter. Lots of very perceptive lines, I love this one: What wounds his heart the most is the knowledge you wouldn't change your plans to ease his pain, no..., you wouldn't stay for your own living brother, but now you'll totally reverse course to please your dead dad. And you have really nailed Dean's abandonment issues (completely justified in my opinion!) and Sam's realisation about the real value of the nickname Sammy. Beautiful parallels at the end of both chapters too. Am I reading straight on? You bet! Author's Response: Thanks again, your reviews are absolutely lovely. I loved how Dean looked at Sam when he asked if he meant what he said to Cooper about not wanting to go to school and live regular. So telling what Jensen can put in one look. Dean certainly does have plenty of cause to feel abandoned. I also loved how pleased Dean looked when Sam told Gordon that Dean was the only one who could call him Sammy. Jensen always puts so much into his acting, it is a total pleasure to observe that and then try to fit a story around it.
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Date: 31/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - John Great work again. Loved the description of John and Mary's courtship, and the fortune cookies were a masterpiece. So glad there's one more chapter! Thanks again! I love seeing John and Mary happy, so rare and a treat to write. I know nothing about Chinese food, but I knew I needed to get the fortune cookies into the story as a kind of prophecy of what was coming.
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Date: 31/05/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Bobby Loved hearing Bobby's thoughts on this, the cruellest of all the fates assigned to the Winchesters, in my opinion. Not Mary's death, or John's, not even the demon's plans for Sam - but the total loss of the soul of Dean Winchester. Not consigned to hell because of a deal with a demon, but lost because he cannot see the immeasurable value of himself. SOMEONE IN HIS FAMILY SHOULD HAVE CONVINCED HIM OF HIS OWN WORTH LONG AGO!! But I like to think the tide is turning with Sam, and this chapter illustrates that so well. And I love the idea of Uncle Bobby, by the way. Thank you so much. Yes, I love Uncle Bobby! He is so close to Dean and you could see how much he loves him, like his own son. Dean not only dying, but surrendering his soul and not feeling his life mattered is the great tragedy of the Winchesters. No doubt about that. Bobby's anguish over the deal was heartbreaking, but he was also devastated by Dean's lack of self-worth. I do think the tide is turning and Sam is realizing just how much help his brother needs and he will be there for him, just like Dean has always been there for Sammy. Thanks so much for all the wonderful, insightful reviews. I love hearing what parts of my stories resonate with the reader. Makes all the long hours of writing so worth it. Take care, B.J. |
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