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Summary: Ficlet.  Missing scene from "Croatoan."  When Sam was 6 years old, Dean taught him how to ride a bike.  And then he made him a promise.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 759
[Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: I'll Always Be There

Really liked your take on that moment - that maybe Dean wouldn't be able to stop Sam from falling, but he would ALWAYS be there to pick him up. *sniff*  Awesome work. I hope there is more where that came from! 

Author's Response: I did actually manage to reuse this scene in another context in another ficlet I just wrote called "I'm Sorry," which should be up here soon. ;)  I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the compliments. :)

 
Reflection by JessicaRae Rated: K+ starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: S2 Ep2 tag. Little by little, he was fixing it. Tossing the damaged parts aside and starting new. With every fix he made, he rebuilt another wall.
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1857
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 09/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1 of 1

That's an awesome twist to the usual take on that scene.

Now it looked right. Fantastic stuff.

I loved it, but once again, poooor Dean. Somebody needs to give that boy a hug. I would volunteer, but I think I would be crushed in the stampede. Great job, Jessica Rae!

 
Crashing by Mady Bay Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Downtime has its dangers, too. Losing control leads to crashing, and visa versa.

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 14356
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Crashing

Wow, this was extremely confronting, and my heart was pounding for Dean. But you handled it all very sensitively and respectfully, pinpointing exactly the true nature of an assault like that  -it's about power, not about anyhting else. Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing my story.  I'm glad you enjoyed it and found it to be well written.  As a police officer and self defense instructor, this topic is near and dear to me.

 
Summary: A hunt goes bad. Sam needs to take care of injured Dean while they wait out the night...

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7563
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Long Night

I read this ages ago and really enjoyed it -have no idea why I didn't review it at the time, sorry! I loved it that Dean actually named a supernatural creature, and any times Sam cares for Dean are good times as far as I'm concerned! Great work, thank you.

Author's Response: Thanks for coming back and reviewing.  Glad you enjoyed the story enough to do so.

 
Visible by tracer Rated: K [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Something is pulled, shut off and his fragile world careens into a dull edged black as his chest constricts, closing off air. A different perspective...
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 625
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Click this....

Wow! Fantastic description. I really felt that!

 
Just Like Mommy by tracer Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: I think Daddy blames the fire for taking Mommy away. A 4 year old's POV.
Categories: Wee!chester, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1002
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg. That was beautiful, but soooo sad. The way Dean thinks they are driving away and leaving his mum all wet at the house......and Dean calling his mum when they come back to get their things....wonderfully moving images. Thanks.

 
Summary: A night at the local bar. 1st installment in QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2128
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You write John Winchester very well -I almost felt sorry for him in this story! I enjoyed that, thanks!

 
Driver's Pick by tracer Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A long long car ride and musical taste. QT series
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2437
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this! It was light, but the reality of the separation from Sam and the continuing hunt was always there. 

" ...Dean had hummed during most of the more intense hunts and almost every day since Sam had left. John could have slapped himself for not grasping his eldest's form of therapy" Very insightful. Thank you!

 
Summary:

Dad doesn't know everything and Dean isn't too keen on revealing anything. QT series.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3318
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It would be just like Dean to hide something like that -always putting himself last! This was a very enjoyable read. I loved the whole bargaining session at the end!

 
School Ties by tracer Rated: T [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Dean visits Sam at Stanford. QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3694
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Dean! When the meeting he had dreamed about started to go pear-shaped I felt so bad for him! Great writing. Thank you!

 
Hunting Nights by tracer Rated: T [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Dean's first solo hunt goes nothing like planned. QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3224
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great! You managed to make it both funny and suspenseful - "Damn capitalists!"

And since the mystery of Dean's necklace is driving me crazy, I was interested to read your ideas about it. Thanks!

 
Hot Wheels by tracer Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: How Dean got his Impala. QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Quality Time
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2179
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 11/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It is taking me so long to work my way around all the great fiction on this site, but I'm really glad I made it to this one! That was great - the dialogue was spot on, and the situation was hilarious! Loved this line:

"C'mon dad, I did the eyes just there...."

Sam's not the only one who can do the super-special puppy-dog-eyes!

Loved this, going off to read more.  Many thanks!

 
Summary: Are our memories really the way things used to be?  As their past resurfaces Dean finds himself falling back into the memories, and Sam wonders what exactly made him forget. 
Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 50713
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This story was great fun - you have the "Dean snark" down pat. Thanks!

 
Summary:

At times, life can be a war-a struggle to surmount the obstacles in our way, to avoid the wounds that leave us dying on the battlefield. Sometimes we must fight, but there comes a time when we must surrender. Fighting is all Dean Winchester knows, but for his brother, he must learn to let go.

 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2418
[Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 03/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Dean! He always gives up what he really wants. I really enjoyed this. Even though the story line isn't canon, the characters are true to the ones we know -and it would be nice to think that when Sam left John he didn't completely leave Dean too.

 
Summary: A missing scene to In My Time of Dying.  What did Sam go through to get that Mystical Talking Board?
Categories: Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1306
[Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 03/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 22/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was great fun, both hilarious and emotional! "Guns are in the constitution!" LOL!

 
Nightmares by Gwyrdd Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Post-Asylum. Sam isn't the only one who dreams.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1711
[Report This] Published: 04/01/07 Updated: 04/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 21/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Nightmares

A great idea to explore Dean's feelings after Asylum. I was longing for a bit of closure for the poor guy, and you have delved into his emotions beautifully. Well done!

 
Summary: Sam's first Christmas at college away from his brother.

Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1864
[Report This] Published: 04/01/07 Updated: 04/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Happily Ever After

AWWWWW. Now I'm all weepy. That was gorgeous, Dean is gorgeous, thanks so much for imagining and writing such a lovely piece.

 
Summary: This is a short missing scene to Everybody Loves a Clown. Sam sees his brother's pain and wants to fix it.
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 989
[Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Beast of Burden

Beautiful! I would have loved it if Sam had been a witness to Dean's Impala-abuse in the show. Now, thanks to you, I can see it in my mind. Thank you!

 
Circles by Will Scott Rated: T [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Dean finds it rather disconcerting that life keeps repeating, over and over and over, much like a circle.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1552
[Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 06/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Circles

SSDD! That was hilarious! And I bet their life does seem like that to Dean most days. Thanks for writing.

 
Summary:

We all have fears lurking in the dark. After a hunt goes wrong, Sam comes face to face with his biggest one...losing Dean.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 10694
[Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was wonderful - both funny and emotional. The dialogue was perfectly in character and I loved the conversation about the model, which was really abiout so much more. Thanks!

 
Summary: There's no paper and no bags, no boxes and no bows.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 962
[Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was lovely. It's nice to think that the Winchesters might have had some nice Christmas memories - so I'm glad that you imagined one and wrote about it. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

 
Monsters by tigriswolf Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: On Dean’s third day of second grade in Biloxi, Mississippi, he came home scowling.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 854
[Report This] Published: 08/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is beautiful - Dean's heroism obviously started young. I have no trouble at all in believing that! Wonderful, thank you.

 
The Feather by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

All his life Sam hears things he shouldn't and keeps finding feathers.  Some S1 & S2 spoilers, more like references.

Runner up Whatever Man category (round 8) Supernatural Fan Fiction Awards


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2972
[Report This] Published: 08/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 15/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is remarkably beautiful -and very true to the spirit of these brothers.

This is a great line:

Dean accepted Sam's visions, and evrything else about Sam.

It sums up all of Dean's loyalty and love in one sentence. Maybe Dean is an angel after all? And not just in the physical sense! It wouldn't take much to convince me. Many thanks.



Author's Response:

You're welcome.  So glad you liked it.  It's my favorite.

Laura 

 

 
Summary: Once upon a time, Sam would have sworn he'd never kill a child.
Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1190
[Report This] Published: 09/01/07 Updated: 09/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What can I possibly say? This is incredibly powerful and too, too sad. Loved this line

"And he's never wished for a ghost to haunt him until Dean leaves him alone"

The Benders was one of my favourite episodes, but I'm glad it didn't end like this! Thanks

 



Author's Response:

I'm really really glad it didn't end like this.

Thank you for reading!

 
Summary: A hunt goes wrong.  My attempt at humor.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 508
[Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 10/01/07


Reviewer: ciel4 Signed
Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Truly, LOL! This was great fun. You have the beats and the speech rhythms for the boys just perfect. I wanted to review it straight away, before I got side-tracked, but I'm going back to read it again!



Author's Response: Thank you!  This was an experiment to see if I could do humor, but a little bit of angst snuck in as well.