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Penname: Cuddles13 [Contact]
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Real name: Shakira Status: Member Member Since: 07/11/07 Website: Beta-reader: Hi, I'm Shakira, but you can call me Sharky. I am Schelz (Fantasycatcher's) Lil sister, I am called cuddles13 because I love hugs and I'll be 13 this month. I love supernatural, I can't choose between Sam and Dean, they're both my favorite coz they come as a package. Lol, I have big puffy hair, nice brown eyes and a smile full of braces. Lol, I love writing, though I don't do it very often, seeing Schelz on it all the time encouraged me to take my own stories seriously...I hope when it's finally up that everyone enjoys it. Byeeee! Oh, by the way, I'm a twin...Heehee! Reviews by Cuddles13
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Reviews by Cuddles13 Summary:
As a favor to old flame Cassie, Dean and Sam agree to help out her oldest friend Amba Williams. The boys set off to Alpine, Arizona to burn the bones of an alleged spirit, only to find it's much more than either of them imagined. As the hunt drags they discover the secrets of the town are buried deeper than six feet under.
As Sam gets attached to heroine Amba, they have to prepare themselves for the possibility of her being the villain. Can secrets stay DEAD? Banner by me, Amba not included :P Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 75131 [Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 10/01/09
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Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Meet Clare i like this chapter, and Clare is very creepy. Clare is...unique. Lol Glad you liked this chapter, be prepared for more creepy Clare. Love Schelz
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Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- It's Not Over! i like this chapter is scary and makes you want to read more. Scary's good! Lol Glad you want to read more, stay tuned for update. Amba has a confession to make. Thanks for reviewing, hope to see an update of 'My Shadow At Night' very soon. Love Schelz
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Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- The Night that Haunts Me! This chapter is good and i like the way you've twisted the story by making Naheeda and Amba have different stories of the night. Thanks Sharx, glad you're still reading. Love Schelz
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Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul This is brilliant cant wait to read the rest, I love the way you've twisted the story like that.
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Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes This is great, it makes me want to read more.
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Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Not Alone This chapter is twisted indeed but I like twisted and this story is good. Thanks, you know me;) I love twisted, maybe coz I am just a tad twisted myself. lol Thanks for thinking this is good.
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Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- In My Dreams This is getting creepier by the chapter. And i cant wait till the next chapter is poster.
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Date: 17/02/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Something About Amba I wonder what the secret is, and Sam is right Amba is hard to undrestand. Secret?...it's secrets...the town is drowning in em' Amba is quite complex but it's only because of all she's been through, she makes it a point to keep a huge part of herself safely locked away. It's not her fault ;(
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Date: 17/02/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Execution Wow this is getting really suspicious. Author's Response:
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Date: 21/02/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- All the things you said. I love the way Dean always sticks up for Sam, athough that expected since they're brothers, it's so sweet. you've captured the brotherly love so well. Author's Response: Thank you very much parky! :D I appreciate your comments always...
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Date: 21/02/09 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- It's her they wanted! I wonder whats happened to Naheeda. I feel so sorry for Amba at the end when she's screaming for Charlene. I like the part when Joe has that daydream that he's being burnt alive. I was a bit suspicious when you wrote the part where Eleanor was talking to herself and then when she snapped when Amba asked who she was talking to. On a whole I love this chapter.
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Date: 21/02/09 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Nineteen Eighty Six I feel so sorry for Sam. H really loved her. Author's Response: Awww I know, he really does care about her, I love Sammy. Thanks for the comments Parky xx
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Date: 21/02/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Black Magik Woman I wonder who the voice in the dark corner is. I felt so sorry for Amba when she was screaming when the house blew up. It's so sweet when Sam was scared for Amba, because they couldn't find her, it just shows you how much he really loves her. Author's Response: I know, I've done so much to poor Amba, I feel so bad. lol, hmm you got me wondering who the voice is now. *evil smirk* I really like how Amba and Sam's relationship works so I'm glad you find it sweet. Thanks for the more detailed review Parky. Kisses xx
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Date: 21/02/09 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24- Nineteen Eighty Six I felt kind of sorry for Charlene when they grabbed her but it was funny when she was all cocky and started saying how she was going to come back and punish them for doing that to her but I guess that they have it coming to them after what the do to her even though she had a child. Some of them deserve what they get. What goes around comes around.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, it's so sad what some people do out of fear and Charlene and ultimately Amba, suffered the most from the town's mistake. Yes you're right, what goes around comes around, lol
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Date: 21/02/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25- Wide Awake I love the way it ends. This story is good. It had me laughing and crying on certain parts. There was a lot of detail, and I love that because thats what a good story is made of. Love ya Author's Response: Relieved. I'm glad you liked the ending, I wrote the very last scene with the very first scene believe it or not. lol, That's why I named the 1st chapter 'Just a dream.' and the last one 'Wide Awake.' I'm chuffed you could find laughter and tears while reading this as it was my intention to evoke more than one emotion. I'm not usually so hot when it comes to detail so it makes me happy to know that you found a lot in this chapter. *beaming* cause you think I put in what it takes to make a good story. Love you too x Summary: Dean is diagnosed with an illness that requires long term care. This leads to the Winchesters becoming a family and getting a taste of normal or as normal as things can get for the Winchesters.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 217402 [Report This] Published: 18/08/07 Updated: 25/06/08
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Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I liked how you tried to make them act normal, it worked very well, but I feel sorry for Dean. Actually I feel sorry for all of them.
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Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I love the way Sam is determined to see Dean, it's so heart-warming.
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Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I'm happy Dean ghot the hang of his illness.
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Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I feel sorry for Dean having to adjust to this new thing in his life. He is strong enough though.
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Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I' m supised to see the other side of Sam.
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Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I like this chapter, but I feel sorry for Sam, Dean and John.
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Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I'm happy that Dean is alright after that little ordeal, even I was gripping the edges of my seat.
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Date: 10/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I'm glad that Dean has learnt to cope with his illness more.
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Date: 10/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I'm happy that Sam is happy but I hope Dean can prove eveyone wrong.
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Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 I really like the way you've split up their day into parts so you can really tell what they're feeling. |
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