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Penname: elprimouno [Contact]
Real name: Melvin Pelegrin
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Member Since: 25/10/07
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I am not a writer, but I do enjoy a great suspence mistery story.

 


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Reviews by elprimouno
 
Summary: Past Featured StoryStory line: Dean and Sam finish a difficult salt and burn and then go looking for a hunt. What they encounter in a small community confuses everyone until Dean engages that wonderful, quirky memory of his
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 27675
[Report This] Published: 09/06/07 Updated: 19/08/07


Reviewer: elprimouno Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Having a Devil of a Time!

With this episode I was mesmerized by the idea of a flying bicycle, need starting "on my seat edge catcher" I was wrap/inmobile all the way to the end.



Author's Response: El Promo....again I thank you for your kind words....That movie JACKASS must have been pretty insane...they were stunts...the leeches...the'flying' bike were both from there....Glad you are enjoying these stories of mine.......   :0)  jude

 
Summary: Dean and Sam go to Lawrence, Kansas to look into a vision Sam had of a threat to the well-being of a new family in the old Winchester home.
Categories: Missing Scenes, General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1138
[Report This] Published: 20/08/07 Updated: 21/08/07


Reviewer: elprimouno Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great explanation to a back stage or deleted scene story!.... Can I have your Authograf now? dated!

Author's Response: El Primo....the more you review...the more I enjoy your wonderful sense of humor ....   You are the BEST so you picked a great pen name!!!!!

 
Summary:

What caused the pain in Dean's beautiful green eyes? Where was that awesome smile? Dean's thoughts after seeing John in AHBL2.


Categories: Drabbles Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 581
[Report This] Published: 29/09/07 Updated: 29/09/07


Reviewer: elprimouno Signed
Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beutiful! Allmost like poetry from a non-believer. To give one's life to save other and having the hope to still meet another.  I do like your writing.

Author's Response: thank you, my dear friend..... You know you will always be El Primo with me...... Kind words like yours make my day!!!        :0)   jude

 
Summary:

I've Got a Crush on You

 Dean and the Impala become separated in a small city on Halloween. Just how much will Dean endure to regain 'Daddy's little girl'?


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 29514
[Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 10/11/07


Reviewer: elprimouno Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 An Absolute Perfect End

SNJJ/ I must say. this story kept me at my very edge of the paper waiting for the next chapter to be enter/finish, You are in comparison to J.K. Roling's Harry Potter books, where I could'nt wait for the next book, and I hope you meet up with her same fate "famous" and stinky rich.

Author's Response: Well, El Primo, I second that hope....thank you very much and Iknow that I still have a lot to learn about writing, but with the encouragement I get from wonderful people like YOU....I will certainly keep trying      :0)    hugs,   Jude

 
Summary: Can Dean face his own demons as long as he remembers what YED said in AHBL2? Will the brothers be honest with each other? With themselves?

Categories: One Shots Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1521
[Report This] Published: 19/11/07 Updated: 19/11/07


Reviewer: elprimouno Signed
Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Come Hell or High Water!!

I've not seen Season II but, I did see the episode where Sam separates the head from Gordon, almost with his bare hands! Thanks for clearing up Sam's behavior from that of Season I. Boy he sure is getting to be as cool as Dean! Looks like the brothers a becoming "one".



Author's Response:

You're right El Primo.....it does feel like Sam is finally accepting that HE is a hunter first and foremost...just like his beloved Big Brother...

Thank you so very much for your thoughtful and kind review......   :0)    jude