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Last Gift by Swellison Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Past Featured StoryWritten for the "Get Well, Angela" challenge. Sam holes up at Bobby's after Dean's deal. Tag for No Rest for the Wicked.
Categories: UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1764
[Report This] Published: 12/07/08 Updated: 12/07/08


Reviewer: writer2b Signed
Date: 12/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you. I can honestly say that I DID need Kleenex! I appreciate your perspective and I love that Sammy received a little something from his big brother to make his heart not hurt, quite so much.

The line from Bobby to Sam "I'm sorry I forgot your birthday. Someone else didn't." was perfection.

So, from a beautiful, (and rare!) SUNNY day on the coast of Oregon...thanks again and keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Hi writer2b,

Thank you for the lovely review. Dean is always thinking of Sam, so I figured he would've covered this year's birthday to, as you so nicely phrased it,  make his heart not hurt, quite so much.   Sue

 

 
Hope by penmin Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:  

Sam stood and watched the water in the raging river.  He could throw himself in, end it all now. Would he be with Dean then? Would the pain end? Then he heard a child's voice screaming.

 

Set very early season 4.  I don't read or do spoilers.


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 996
[Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 06/08/08


Reviewer: writer2b Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay...you made me tear up. Fabulous job! Keep writing, you've 'got it!!'

Author's Response:

Thank you, It took me a couple of goes but I hope I can do as well next time.

Jacq

 
Reviewer: writer2b Signed
Date: 19/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh! You brought tears to my eyes and warmth to my heart...I love this story. I'm a definate "It's a wonderful life" fan and I LOVE that you've done for Sam just as your title says, given him "Hope." Keep writing. You've 'got it!'W2b

Author's Response: Wow...that is so nice of you, i didnt expect any further reviews and its great to know that I'm not the only 40 something writer on this site. Many many thanks...Jacq 

 
Summary:

John comes home late from a hunt and finds that Dean has been looking after Sam just like he promised. Only trouble is, whose there to look after Dean?

No spoilers, set pre series. A little moment between John and his eldest son.

 As usual I own nothing! (Sob)


Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, AU, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1561
[Report This] Published: 01/09/08 Updated: 01/09/08


Reviewer: writer2b Signed
Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: To Protect And Serve

Smudge 93 - You created an amazing glimpse into a positively heart-wrenching moment. Tears came to my eyes when I read: "I didnt' know when you were coming back, I was worried that there wasn't gonna be enough to last until then. I didn't want Sammy to be left hungry." and John's internal response: "Yeah son, 'cos you know what that's like, don't you?" As a big fan of weechester moments, I sincerely thank you for sharing yours. Keep writing!!Writer2b

Author's Response:

Hi there,

Glad that you liked this, this line brought a wee tear to my eye as well because I really believe that dean would do this.

Thank you for the review, it's great.

Cheers, mary x

 
Blurred by Ridley James Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 31]
Summary: Pre Series. The new year brings the chance for letting go of the past, but sometimes old aquaintances refuse to be forgotten, casting doubt on the promise of a better tomorrow.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15816
[Report This] Published: 20/01/09 Updated: 09/02/09


Reviewer: writer2b Signed
Date: 02/02/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Okay...so I'm an ABSOLUTE avid fan of the Brotherhood and ALL the stories that it entails...and, yes, I'm finally submitting a review. THANK YOU for the amazing 'world' you have created (and a 'nod' goes out to Tidia and all others who have embelished that world with their imagination...thank you! :) Every time I see your name appear after a story my heart skips a beat and I can barely stand the nano-second of time that it takes to open the first chapter. As usual, this is FABULOUS! I am so looking forward to every sentence that you post and just want you to know that you have entertained and inspired me. I hope one day to add to your 'world' of fiction, but until then....my sincere gratitude. Keep the muse flowing!!Sincerely, Writer2b

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryDean Winchester walks into a bar... Mild spoilers for season 4

Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1469
[Report This] Published: 11/06/09 Updated: 11/06/09


Reviewer: writer2b Signed
Date: 11/06/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wonderful 'journey' all the way from season one to this very moment in time! You had me there, sitting in that bar, watching Dean's memories and the emotions they rip from him. The pain reflected within his eyes hit my heart. 

Well done! Thank you so much for sharing!



Author's Response: I love it when a review is so eloquently written that it's like a tiny story in itself. Thank you so much.

 
Summary: Brotherhood AU. An old enemy of The Brotherhood and an unexpected threat from within their own ranks collide to bring a threat for the Winchester family.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 36983
[Report This] Published: 14/01/11 Updated: 18/03/11


Reviewer: writer2b Signed
Date: 03/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

It absolutely makes my day when I see a new 'Ridley' chapter posted! I LOVE 'The Brotherhood' au and am so excited to see where 'The Legacy' stories lead. Anything centered around the 'verse' that you've created are truly my all-time favorite reads! Awesome dynamic between James and Ben in this one. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next! Well Done! (and thank you so much!)

 

 
Safe House by JennyF Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Pre-series.  There's always one place they go to be safe.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 336
[Report This] Published: 29/01/11 Updated: 29/01/11


Reviewer: writer2b Signed
Date: 29/01/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Solid piece and beautifully written! You captured Bobby's inner-emotions so well. I simply LOVE the idea of this moment happening! Truly enjoyed the read - KEEP WRITING! 

Author's Response: Thank you - I couldn't really picture Sam going anywhere else, even though I don't think it strictly fits with canon.  Oh, well, that's artistic license for you!