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Real name: bev Status: Member Member Since: 19/10/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by birdie Summary:
Sam's still consumed with emotion about Dean's Deal so Bobby sends the boys on a hunt to take their minds off it. Which is when it all starts to go wrong...
Banner by Bulletbabe, thanx Louy!! Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 16454 [Report This] Published: 22/12/07 Updated: 26/02/08
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Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Blame Game Awh, that was sweet and Bobby being their 'Dad' lovely! Now how the heck is Bob gonna get them outta this one? Write some more Hun need to know! Bev xx
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - A Distraction haha Phoenix , Dean the sex monkey that is just hysterical. I love Bonobo's saw some in africa and they have such sweet faces, like Dean! Love the get a room bante at the end freaking funny! Cool banner too! (that Lou - what a girl!) Bev x Author's Response: They are very cute and nymphomaniacal (if that's a word...lol) just like Dean! Lou is awesome, the banner's brill :)
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Grrr Is For...Gross Phoenix Oh I like this as my reality is so attuned to freaky weird and you are like ...pushing the edgy, random button here! haha Travolta in a tutu, that is so hot! What? Does that make me a bad person? bev xx Author's Response: HOT??? Okay, if you like that sort of thing...lmao! Thanks for the review, strange person hehe
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Worst Nightmares? Oh hell Phoenix what's the link hunny? I need to know! And I have some ant killing powder here if ya'd like me to go help Dean with his unconfrotable clothing! No Hun, it's no trouble at all! bev xx Author's Response: Haha, I'm so mean...lol! That is definately one itch I wouldn't mind scratching ;), mwa-hahaha!
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Two Plastic Butts And One Nasty Surprise Phoenix The banter betwen the boys is funny and Sam's bust nose and Dean saying he's still better looking! heehee bev x Author's Response: Lol, thanks! It's fun (in a strange but not unpleasant way) to think like a Winchester :)
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Some Kind Of Truth Phoenix Hoowee! Vermin kebabs and big baddabooms! Funky action hun and poor Sammy with his BooBoo nose! What fun Reading on Bev xx Author's Response: I so wouldn't wanna be one of those rats, hehe! I didn't wanna hurt loverly Sam but I couldn't resist ;)
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - A Demonic Revelation Phoenix. this is one scary demon, I love him. And glad you have brought bobby to help. I like the stacatto nature of the chapters it sorta enhances the urgency of the action. Edgy, pacy, like it. bev xx Author's Response: Thank you again bev! I couldn't leave Bobby out, he's ace. Glad you're enjoying it!
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - The Vision Phoenix. i like this the whole disorientation that the crashing storm brings it makes the nightmare so much more frightening. And I am a sucker for Dean in pain and having spectacularly broken my wrist not long back I can feel that 'gonna puke on my shoes' sensation! Very evocative liking it! bev xx Author's Response: Thanks! Sorry about your wrist, hope it's all good now? 'Evocative' - thanks, my writing's never been called that before!! :)
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Crucifixion Is A Flesh Wound Phoenix i would like to invite you to join the Guild of Exquisite tortureres! Gosh that was very very sweet pain! I love your demon I'd like to invite it to tea with mine, Mikey (The Fallen) he's a fun guy too! Likes knives and orthopaedic injuries too! Brother demons!! Bev xx Author's Response: I humbly accept your invitation. I had to stop myself cos torturing is quite addictive, lol! I'm gonna have to go read your story now, and I'll make sure my demon is available for tea, although I think he'd prefer a hot cup of steaming blood and gore :)
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Possession Is 9/10ths Of The Lore Phoenix Gee, I love the short chapters as they tease and tantalise but now I'm getting a bit worried! Do you need someone to come and help suture? I'm very experianced? No no i't be no trouble - I'll be straight over! bev xx Author's Response: I myself prefer to read short chapters so I write short chapters, which can be annoying I guess but hey, it seems to work! Suture all you want, hahaha! I know I would...lmao!!
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Holidays In Hades Are Not Recommended Phoenix. Oh i loved the brothers looking after each other. Oww! I remember that throbbing busted arm pain yuck!! Stylish demon loving him! Bev xx Author's Response: I loved writing my demon, he was so nasty, hehe. Luckily I haven't broken any bones, (touch wood) but at least I got the throbbing pain bit right!
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Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - False Teeth And An Angst Fest Phoenix. great last chapter, I could feel the camerarderie, humour and warmth coming off the pair of them. Loved the argument about going to hospital and the final quessence from dean. and then the nurses falling over to get to sign his cast! Of course it was much the same when I busted mine...hahahhahahha Triffic, thanks for sharing loved it bev xx Author's Response: Thanks!! I just kinda made that bit up as I went along but it worked out real well so I kept it in, thanks for the review :) Summary: Dean is held captive in a storage closet and attempts to make his esacpe. A bit of humour written for a drabble request. Words of prompt: Storage closet, duct tape and envelope.
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1476 [Report This] Published: 23/12/07 Updated: 23/12/07
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Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That's a hoot! loved the Dean with legs like a newborn calf image. Don't think I'd object too much if he wanted to come and rifle through my underwear drawer! heehee bev x Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Summary:
...suspected murderer Dean Winchester was shot dead at the home of his latest victim... says the newsreader, and suddenly you can't remember how to breathe. Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1371 [Report This] Published: 28/12/07 Updated: 28/12/07
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Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Lara. That's great. We all know that John loves his boys he's just too broken himself to be able to tell them that very efficiently. But this pov is so tense with his pain thinking he's lost Dean. Loved it Thank you. Bev xx Author's Response: Thanks ever so much, Bev, I'm glad you liked it! John as a person is just so hard to capture...
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Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Lara Had to come back - i got to be first reviewer!! Yeeha never managed it before!! Bev xx Author's Response: *hehe* Summary:
Sam goes missing, again, and Dean has to find him. Too bad for Dean something's after him too, and it's not necessarily supernatural either. Huge thanks to bulletbabe for another awesome banner, she is totally awesome!!
Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 103980 [Report This] Published: 28/12/07 Updated: 14/09/08
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Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Oh helen no! youre gonna stab Poor Dean all over again and make him do it himself this time! poor baby! Loved the big nasty doggy gonna eat him till he coughed all over it and boy has he got a hell of a fever. funny isn't it how guys always get much worse flu than girls?! I like your girls they are a feisty and unholy bunch and I can't wait to see if old Belial gets to come visit again! More helen please! bev xx Author's Response: Guys don't get it worse, they just can't handle it like we do. As for poor Dean, well...yeah, I think that may be exactly what I have planned for him, at least I think. More on the way, soon, I promise. I know I'm a little slow, but it took me forever to figure out where to go with this.
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Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Helen. God, i am so enjoying this story! So what the hell does she want with Dean? And wow isn't poorly, pissed off Dean just so hot! You have a wonderful way with respiratory symptoms, Helen. Reading on. Bev xx Author's Response: I am so glad that you are enjoying this story. You are so totally right, but really, isn't Dean in any condition totally hot? (I say yes, but that's just me)
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh I just love this story and this is a top line - “Sam, if that hand of yours so much as brushes against my forehead I swear to god I’ll rip it off at the elbow and beat you with it,” he grumbled and Sam just raised both hands in mock surrender". I can so see Dean's irritated face and even tho he feels like hell you know he'd do it! And who the hell are these girls?? I so need to know more!!! Reading on - fantastic! Bev xx Author's Response: I'd pay money to see that!! Sell tickets even!! It would be an awesome show. And poor Dean, he'd so crabby when he doesn't feel well, poor baby. Thanks for reading, hope you continue to like it.
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Well of course Dean is Cuter!!! anyone knows that!! Even coughing up putrid lung material he's so so so cute. Who are these Girls and what the heck do they want???? Bev xx Author's Response: I totally agree, there's nothing cuter then Dean Winchester!! Don't you think the hacking makes him even more lovable, just makes you want to take care of him. Oh, and the girls, well, it's coming.
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 God I love your Bobby he's spot on! This line is so funny - “You want me to wait while you pick that lung up off the ground an put it back where it belongs?” The concern was obvious in the older man’s voice. “What the hell was that Dean? How long you been doing that?” When Bobby calls Dean boy it makes me go all goosebumpy 'cause he is such a good surrogate Dad to Dean. Loving it, please more soon!! bev xx Author's Response: I'm with you there, I love Bobby almost as much as I love Dean! He's like the uncle we all wish we had. glad you're loving it, hopefully I can keep it up!
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Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 helen "Bullshit. train wreck is your middle name." that's a cool line, I'm so pleased Bobby is coming to help and I so like your Bobby. He is so good for the boys especially Dean as he recognises that whilst Sam has Dean loking out for him, who the hell is looking out for Dean? well he is! Cool! Oh and I was thinking - why do the boys neve have a nice warm coat? they are always out in foul weather and not one of us ever writes thema warm coat! Maybe because we love seeing them shiver...heehee Loving it Hun, reading on bev xx Author's Response: Glad that line went over well, it's exactly what I think when I think of poor Dean. I do so love Bobby too, and I'm glad you like the way I portray him. (It's how I see him) You are dead on again with the lack of proper winterwear, We do so love the boys cold and uncomfortable, don't we? Makes you want to warm them up all over.
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Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 helen. This chapter is suffed full of gems, love these lines. "...he woke up in the easy bake oven he found himself in." "...he was trapped with Barbie and Skipper." So funny! And then this which is just so wonderfully Bobby! “You want me to wait while you pick that lung up off the ground an put it back where it belongs?” The concern was obvious in the older man’s voice. “What the hell was that Dean? How long you been doing that?” Terrific and I am so drawn into the story bev xx
Author's Response: Thanks again Bev! You are totally making my night...keep going, please!!
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Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 helen. This is a superbe story, I love a struggling poorly Dean who just doesn't know when to lay down. He is a stupidly, wonderfully macho Idjit! And Bobby - such a hero. The delightfully meaty descriptions of rainbow hued sputum are gorgeous too. Bev xx Author's Response: I love that word, Idjit! I think I'm gonna start using it. Sounds like you are a fellow Dean fetisher? (So not a word, but I like the way it sounds)
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Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Helen. Me again hun! This is a wonderful story, so full of tension and I am so drawn into the plot. So who's answered Dean's phone? Is it one of the freaky weird sisters? jeeze they've got him haven't they? And God, two weks in hospital wow he was really sick wasn't he? And he's at least as sick now - scary hunny! Adicted reading on! bev xx Author's Response: Happy to hear from you again Bev. Glad to hear you're addicted and moving on!
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Date: 20/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Helen Oh goodness me she's stripping his clothes off of him! And he's so poorly that he can't even respond! that's one poorly Dean! oh hell and I thought she was a goody but she's in cahoots with the freakster twins. Damn Dean's in trouble now. Or is it Bobby they're after? Wow this is a hell of a ride! Pulmonary descriptions spot on! bev xx Author's Response: Can you just see it, piece by piece...*sighs* Nope, no good guys on Dean's side. We can't have any of that. As for Bobby, well... I always like hearing the med stuff is right, I always worry about that detail. |
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