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Real name: bev Status: Member Member Since: 19/10/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by birdie Summary: No big plot, just a little ode to this great show...
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 1504 [Report This] Published: 09/12/07 Updated: 11/12/07
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Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 oh Fredo, this is just fab full of laughs and tears. You're so clever! Thanks! Bev xx Summary: The day the Impala's radiator cracked, Dean sang 'You Shook Me All Night Long' and Sam nearly ended up with a hernia.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1630 [Report This] Published: 09/12/07 Updated: 10/12/07
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Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love it when Dean sings and we all know that really he'd do anything that was calleed for for his Baby! Really nice! Thanks and Merry Christmas Bird x Summary: Dean's not just any brother.
Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2945 [Report This] Published: 09/12/07 Updated: 09/12/07
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Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very well written and so what a real evil b*****d of a daemon would demand but so so sad to have Dean have to do that to Sam. Broke my heart! Bird x Agreed. Maybe the Crossroads demon did have a bit of a heart not to make Dean go through this, eh? Thanks for the review! Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Can't talk! Crying too much!! Loved it!! Merry Christmas Boys! Bird x Summary: When Sammy decides to make Stanford college his next move, Dean fought it, in his own way, longer and harder than his father. But he is about to learn that, in some wars, surrender is the only honorable way out. Besides, who else would Dean Winchester fall on his own sword for?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 21646 [Report This] Published: 11/12/07 Updated: 05/03/08
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Date: 29/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Man Down! Abi, Me again! Going for your longer story now after devouring your one shots! " silver spoon and cashmere diapers" very cool description! You like to feast on words don't ya? I love a story that offers up a veritable buffet of place, mood and emotion. And this too - "In it, he saw his own pale reflection, offset by his dark baggage – and not just those tucked under his eyes" I like this, I could see Sam's angst reflected and enhanced by the silvered lens of the mirror, giving us an observers glance into the sadness in his heart. "Sam often marveled at his brother’s strength and nerve, despite the years of attrition his soul had endured" Wow, that's a killer line Abi! Got me to the point of tears here, with the loving and selfless description of a child become adult way too early. God is it a surprise that Dean has the odd issue when it comes to expressing his own emotions when he has been an emotional buffer for Sam for all those terrifying years? “SS…ammy” the bear whisper was frightening." OK, forget at the point of tears, now we're there! there is such resonant hurt, pain, grief and lonliness in these few words that I've screwed my fine British reserve and blubbed!
Oh Gosh Abi those last few paragraphs! Sam's palpable and uncontained terror as Dean seeks the only solace (Sam himself) that he realy has even as his life ebbs away. And the last line? A soul stealer, Abi.
Gee gotta read on! Loving it Bev xx Author's Response: Bev, Really pleased you decided to take a look at this - multichapters are much more challenging for me, and your reviews always help with showing me what worked... and boosting my ego no end!!!:-) I LOVED reading your responses to the different sections in this chapter, I do try to experiment a little with pieces - I find words fun (Big Geek that I am!!!) and get a thrill when readers have picked up on something that I was trying to be clever with!!! LOL. The fact that this piece moved you and had an effect that way, that kind of makes it worth all the grinding of teeth when computers crash, or typing is taking way too long. And you are so kind with your praise, that I did a little non-Brit like, upper lip quivering myself!!!! Thank you so very much for this - it has made my day!! Abi.
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Date: 29/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Medivac Abi. I'm doing the chapter by chapter thing as I so love it when readers do it for me! (yup, I'm a delinquent review slut!) "To Sam’s ears, it was a God damned symphony!" There is a sense of relief in these few words that leaps of the page at me. Urgent and raw! I really like this chapter, the irritated, (fear driven) rage that Sam has for Dean is spot on and the quirky funny references as Sam drags the uncooperative Dean to his room are wonderful highlights to the surreality of the situation. I'm realed in Hun! Onto chapter three for me! Bev xx Author's Response: The Chapter by chapter thing, is something I adore!!!! So Review slut huh? Wow there is a NAME for my condition???!!!! LOL!! Again glad the humor pieces worked for you, I thought that I needed to throw in a little light as I wasn't sure at this point how dark this was going to get. I thought this situation for Sam, would be completely off the map ... Alice in Wonderland stuff, not just because he has taken on Dean's role but because he is trying so hard to fit in as normal and because Dean seems to be acting in a totally irresponsible way... which goes against his genetic make up!!!! Glad you are liking - racing on to catch you up!!! Abi.
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Date: 29/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Debriefing Me again Hunny! No don't worry I'm not a stalker, just loving this so doing the every chapter thing! "This argument had deeply effected Dean (that was his name), who was a sensitive soul" Oh that's priceless, Abi, because, though Dean'd kill me for saying it but he so IS sensitive! "he knew he needed to patch up Dean’s body… cause God knew the older man’s mind was the work of a life time." So true! but i'd be really up for the job! i love the whole cry, laugh, vomit together scenario you've got going on here Hunny, it's making me snort and hiccup in an embarassingly unladylike fashion! "“Let’s not forget that I am also fast and scary good.” Dean tried for cocky." Might I add gorgeous, wonderful and Hot just for the record? Abi, the passages describing the black dog attack in the cave are graphicaly vivid (appropriately and frighteningly so). And then's there's this line "Sam was sure he had slipped into some alternative world, where his unbreakable brother, had actually, just shattered in his hands." That takes me fight back to tears. This is really good, it's pacy, and complex and funny too. (oh and OK I'll fess up - I adore hurt and panicky Dean and strong supportive Sammy! hot!) Bev x Bev x Bev xx Author's Response: Stalk away lady... your reviews are such a joy to read!!!! I totally agree, Dean's hard-case persona and all that dry humor only serves to hide that little boy who gave up everything that was his to give, for his family. Yeah Dean may not like us for thinking it, but it is one of the big reasons that we like him so much... beautiful, broken man that he is!!! How fantastic - "snort and hiccup" responses are so honest!!! They might be as big a compliment as the stars!!!! Again thanks for sharing what is going right with this chapter - I was worried I'd tried to cram too much in here, but it is a pretty tense situation. Very glad the Dog attack was frightening, as it had to be at least believably traumatic to push Dean over like this. When I was re-reading this the whole Sam comforting Dean was a nice twist for me - and the more fragile Dean became and the more Sam stepped up to the job... the more entertaining I fond it ... you really learn about yourself doing this don't you? Twisted - who knew?!!! LOL. Abi.
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Date: 29/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 War Games
"How would we explain what looks like Yogi’s attempt to tickle you?!” Ha freaking ha! The encounter with Jess and her panties is sweet and vulnerable and cute! "as if the tiger had broken free of the jungle, and was chilling in the penguin enclosure. Watching Dean now, Sam realised something; his big brother was only twenty three years old, and since the age of four, had never been a day younger than thirty. Dean had watched out for Sam his whole life, never complaining once about it. The question was – who was watching out for Dean?" Lovely! penguin enclosure! you're seriously wierdly random Hun and I feel a strange if freaky affection for the edge your humour live on! love Dean tormenting Owen, boy that man is so hot when he's being a total git! Oh and God the Dirty Dancing scene is just a classic No one puts baby in the corner! ha frigging Ha! Loving it! bev x Author's Response: I could not resist the Jessica moment - thumbs up from Big brother. It always seemed in the pilot that there is a moment when Dean sees Jessica, it's more than the usual Dean female appreciation response... he teases his brother, but seems happy for him too. (Well in my head anyway) Not quite sure what beamed the penguin- tiger thing to me, but it is a (sometimes) regular occurrence, I am just glad someone else gets it!!:-) Evil, bully boy Dean is interesting isn't he - I think he was trying to separate Owen from Sam, dreading that kind of influence. But then again Dean doing just about anything is worthy of deep deep contemplation, and lusty ogling (uh...hmmm!!!) *goes off to have a cold shower before reading on* Abi.
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Date: 29/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Friendly Fire Abi Now hun far be it from me to suggest violence is ever the answer but regarding the fight with 'the petting zoo' all I can say is Kick their f*****g asses boys! fight fight! Sorry, I'll have one of my blue pills and rebook the anger management classes again! This is a triffic chapte the boys bonding (re-bonding) over some sibling needlepoint (ooow I love it when Dean needs sutures to his beautiful tawny skin! (heehee am I a bad person?) "His eyes were a thrashing storm of battling jade waves" yeah baby! Groovy! next serving please! Bev x Author's Response: The violence, was the first scene that came to me in this story ... maybe I should be borrowing some of those blue's? Ha Ha "sibling needlepoint" LOVE that!!! No you are not a bad person... your just in touch with your inner minx - and "beautiful tawny skin" ... water hoses at the ready!!!!! LMAO. Your reviews really have me in stitches ... of my own Bev... on to see what you make of the next one! Abi.
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Date: 29/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Avoiding a Court-martial Abi Awh hun that was great. I loved the Dean and her scaring the shit outta our Dean and she knew he was packing! Ha what a girl! And he bailed Sammy out, he is sucha great big Brother! i've got a big bro and he's wonderful, hope you have one too Hunny. You are one groovy writer Hunny! Your Sam and Dean and John are very recognisable to me, and they live for me in your words, so you gonna write somemore aren't Ya? Cause now I've read ya whole catalogue, marked ya as a fav author and I have expectataions!! Thanks loved it! More! Bravo!
bev xx Author's Response: Bev, Happy the Dean character went down OK. I needed her to be someones who could see Dean clearly, so that when they consented to saving Sam for him, it was because of his merits - and all round good guy aura, so the Dean of Stanford had to be streetwise and slightly scary with it. To quote the awesome Ridley James, Dean really is Captain One-helluva Brother!!!LOL! Thank you for these amazing reviews, which are like... deep fried crack!!!!! (quoting is big with me) they are a HUGE incentive to keep on writing, in the hope that you may like what I write enough to drop me a few lines... Bev-style!!!! *Grins* Wow; to being added to your favorite authors list... glad I was siting down at the computer!!!! Thank you so much I really am deeply touched that you did that. It has been an absolute pleasure reading your reviews and I am flattered by both the time it must have taken for you to read and review chapter by chapter AND making your list!!!! There is a final chapter to this story and then I have one or two things on the drawing board, but I am nervous about posting stories I haven't all but finished. Hope to see you on the next one! Abi x
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Date: 05/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Re-enlistment. me again! Sam shrugged solemnly “I would have produced my recorder and given ‘Mary Had A Little Lamb’ all the soul I could muster!” haha! musical prodigy!
Jeeze, that's last paragraph is lovely, a real soul stealer! It oozes the grief and hurt and love that is the brothers life but in a realistic and softly amusing way. Brave a lovely rounding off of a well crafted story.
Bravo!
Bev xx
Author's Response: Hey there you!!! ;-) Appreciate this review as I know that you and your (Pit Postcard) partner in crime are busy ladies. As always you let me know what works in this chapter, I find this so useful for the next one I inflict on people!!!LOL! Can't you just see little Peter Pan Sam and his racy recorder?!!! Thank you for the compliments and the feedback, I am thrilled you found this realistic and that you seem to pick up on the things I tried out in this story - happy to know that I didn't miss the mark entirely!!! But your reviews kept me entertained so I hope I returned the favor at least!!! Abi. Summary: This is one Christmas the boys will never forget...
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1865 [Report This] Published: 11/12/07 Updated: 11/12/07
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Date: 13/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey Hun. that was great I liked the mouldy santa and Dean getting the bootprint on his (beautiful) face! And he got Sammy a tree! He's such a sweet bro! Thanks it was fun Bev xx Summary:
Collection of Wee!chester drabbles in Dean's POV.
http://sensue.net/snfa/ Categories: Drabbles, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 3435 [Report This] Published: 12/12/07 Updated: 31/12/07
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Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Hell to pay Merrie Tops!! Love Dean's pov, loved Bobbster giving the Birds bees and roaches talk to lothario Dean. funny funny funny Clever girl! Bev xx Author's Response: Thanks Bev, glad you liked it. Chapter two should be up by tomorrow. Merrie xxx
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Date: 13/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Not quite fast enough really really like this one Merrie 'cause I love Dean trying to get one over on John and John so easily wrongfooting him - Haha Sucker punched!! And i love the sulky teenager last line - I can see those lovely full lips in a monster of a pout and the beautiful jade eyes flashing with annoyance! Very cool! Bev xx Author's Response: Thanks Bev. Oh what a picture that is..... Merrie xx
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Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: To call or not to call Merrie. That's hillarious so spot on for two brothers talking to each other! Another top chappy! bev x Author's Response: Thank you Bev, glad you enjoyed it. Merrie xx
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Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Promises, promises
Bev xx Author's Response: Oooh lots of presents, thanks Bev. I'm glad you're still enjoying it. Merrie xxx
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Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: Time for a toast Awh Merrie Dean bought a toaster that's like ahuge commitment for him. I'm so proud of our boy! This was great, you could just see them bickering away in Sainsburys (ok I know there's no Sainsbo's in USA it's aPiggly-Wiggly or something - wouldn't ya just love to shop in a piggly wiggly? Better still with Sam and Dean in the Piggly-Wiggly!! Fab Hunny 10 / 10 bev xx Author's Response: Thanks Bev, glad you liked it. Sainsburys, Marks and Spencers, Tescos, I'd shop with them anywhere ;) Thanks for reviewing. Merrie xxxx Summary:
Theres a computer Demon on the loose, kidnapping writer's, be careful ladies! *Evil Grin*
Thanks for another great Banner Lou:) Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2669 [Report This] Published: 12/12/07 Updated: 12/12/07
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Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Warning!!!Computer Demon Schelz. (bebg!) Adorable! But could Dean do the journey the other way round and do the longest distances first?? The boy needs to face his fears and get on the plane!! And I be willing to comfort him personally if it all got too much for him! Loved being mentioned - thanks bebg!! Bev xxxxx Author's Response:
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The boys are back and ready to kick demon ass, but when Bobby is violently attacked the boys focus their attention on finding his attacker Banner rocks Lou!!! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 10709 [Report This] Published: 13/12/07 Updated: 20/02/08
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Date: 13/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Boys Are Back! Bebg! Oh no not my Bobbster! you couldn't kill my Bobby!?!? Write next chappy NOW!!! and check the Bebg eyes - are they a suspicoius shade of black? Christo, Christo! Write it now peaz! Bebg! Bird xxxxx Author's Response:
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Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Brain Damage!?! Bebg. Look just make him better alright! I want my Bobbster mended Bebg! He looks out for Dean and if he's not there who's gonna do that? Peaz, make him better and let's go whup the ass of whoever's done it!! Your Aba xxxxx Author's Response:
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Date: 19/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- He moved! Bebg. Yeah Ellen here! And Dean's trying to look after her too he's such a wonderful Daddy to everyone and that's after he's just puked everywhere after cleaning his baby up! "Is that a threat Dean?" Sam smiled. "Only, if you don't go bed willingly." Dean winked at his baby brother" Heehee Cheeky Girl! Yeah Bobbster's coming round! More!!! Aba xx Author's Response: Ahh my wonderful Aba! So glad your still enjoying it. I know, don't you just love Dean??? *slaps head* Dumb question. hehehe
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Date: 19/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Like a game of cluedo Holy Moley Bebg! Didn't see that coming! Ash is alive?? I love Ash but is it really him? And Ellen's gone dark side? Really? - Daemon? just plain wicked? Loved the Bobby coming too scene - so snarky and sweet! And now Ellen's gone and clobbered Dean! what's she gonna do to him? You gonna hurt him? Oh go on Bebg Hurt him a bit!! Your Aba xx Author's Response: HA! Glad you didn't see it coming Aba. Yup Ash is alive, I would answer all your questions but the next chapter will do that. So, I guess you'll have to wait for the next post. Glad you liked the Bobby scene, I don't know about hurting Dean, not as good at it as you. Lol I'll see what I can do you for you Aba. Your Bebg.
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Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - You're not getting any of this Bebg! Oh you smutty Bebg you! Demons smooching and snogging Dean! I thought Ellen licking Deans cheek was especially cool! Worried for Ash tho! Off to chapter 6 now Author's Response: Aba! I thought you might like that cheek licking bit, put it in there especially for your enjoyment. hehehe! Forgot to do the barefoot thing. Soz ooo worried for Ash, I'm too busy worrying about myself and what your going to do to me once you've read chap 6
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Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Tear drops whoa Bebg - my litttle baby girls a killer! Poor Jo and Poor Ellen! I really thought the demon was gonna go after Ash! Caught me there! Good one Hun Aba x Author's Response: Though a killer, I'm still your baby girl and that means you gotta love me unconditionally
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Banner by the wonderful Chasidern Dean is seriously injured on a hunt and Sam has to cope, the only problem is Sam is only 13 Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3439 [Report This] Published: 13/12/07 Updated: 13/12/07
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Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey Muffy. Sweet! I do love a bit of brotherly needlepoint! Bev xxxx Author's Response: Thank you so much, and brotherly needlepoint is the best kind, isn't it? |
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These are all for you to say thank you for another gem that you have shared with your loyal readers! Loved it Hunny.
And I still stand by what I said, Mickey paid me a visit and after what he did to Dean I thought it would be smart to do as he said. I know right now your 
but it's not my fault it's that horrid Mickey!!! Poor Ellen and Jo indeed:( Thanks for reading hun. Bebg xx