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Real name: bev Status: Member Member Since: 19/10/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by birdie Summary:
Something Wicked. John grabbed his young sons, threw their stuff in the trunk of the Impala and booked. He had felt anger toward Dean for not listening, for not following orders, but he mainly had felt terror. He looked at his son differently now. Spoilers for 1.18 Something Wicked
Banner by nig.honey - Thanks! Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., John W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1059 [Report This] Published: 23/01/07 Updated: 23/01/07
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Date: 16/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey BJ. I'm having a bit of a BJ fest and reading your 'back catalogue' and oowee I'm finding gems all over the place! john is wonderfully complicated, essentially good but damaged man and has always tried to do the best for his boys but life has been tough for him. You description of him here is indisguised and honest and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing, BJ. Bev xxx Author's Response: Thanks, Bev! Yes, this was my very first one-shot and tag! I honestly didn't even know what that all entailed at the time. I just knew that Dean misunderstood Dad's look. I love all the Winchesters, but I also love examining their warts along with their good points. Their very complexity and trying to do right, while being completely human makes them so very fascinating. Thanks for letting me know my old stories still have relevance. Take care, B.J. Summary:
Dean's been restless all week and he's thinking about his mom. "The thing is, when I was twelve I had a dream of Mom. One fleeting moment in time when I saw her and felt her presence so strongly I knew it wasn't really a dream, I knew I was with her." Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: Dean W., John W., Mary W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2196 [Report This] Published: 24/01/07 Updated: 24/01/07
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Date: 16/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 BJ. Gee, Dean had a tough upbringing, that whole broken arm but dumping his pain meds because he needed to be on top form to take care of Sammy. his life sucks sometimes! I was pleased to see yhat you had given him a connection to his Mum and some hope, maybe peace somewhere in his turbulent life. Nice Bj! bev xx Author's Response: Hey, Bev, Yeah, Dean had it tough, but he at least felt some peace from seeing Mom was alright in heaven. I still believe the ones who protest the most (not believing in angels and heaven) do so because they are just too hurt to admit they want to believe and are just to scared to. Thanks again, B.J. Summary:
Dean Angst. That damn Demon, read his mind and made it happen just like he always feared it would. Even now he couldn't sort it all out. Is it the truth or just his childish fears rearing their ugly head? He was too tired to think about this. Spoilers through Devil's Trap. Set after Season One finale. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., John W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2465 [Report This] Published: 24/01/07 Updated: 24/01/07
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Date: 16/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 BJ. This is a tough one to read, there is a sadness, a soft despair that permeates through the story. The bit where Dean is sitting on the floor crying is heartwrenching. Well written and thought provoking. thank you Bev xx Author's Response: Kripke just always surprises us with the direction the show takes. I think we all expected some emotional moments with Dean dealing with what demonJohn said, but no, the show threw us the curve of John dying and them having to deal with that. Dean is so strong to keep going even with all the emotional issues he has, and Jensen is just so good when he does the emotional breakdown. Really wish we could see something like this on the show. That would be heartbreaking. Later, B.J. Summary:
Banner by Noelle Sometimes choosing to live is the biggest sacrifice we can make for our loved ones. Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2064 [Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 19/02/07
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Date: 31/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Sacrifices Dear Novembers Guest This made me remember loosing my Dad when I was 21, and then my Mum when I was thirty. If it hadn't been for my big brother I don't know how I would have gone on. Big brothers like Dean, are a great thing to have in your life. Thanks for reminding me.
Birdie xx Author's Response: Well, ya know, that doesn't really surprise me. I've had some people tell me that this Dean was a little emo for them, but I wrote this right after a year from hell in which I had lost both my grandma's (one of them I was especially close to), a co-worker, a co-worker's son who was like family and just two months before I wrote it my nephew was killed in a motorcycle accident (my siblings are quite a bit older than I, as in at least a decade or more--so they have grown children already). I was pretty depressed when I wrote it, things were bleak. But, thankfully, things have been better since then. I'm glad you found some good out of it anyway and thanks so much for leaving your thoughts. Nicole Summary: What happens when the boys are stranded and one of them becomes violently ill?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 53258 [Report This] Published: 02/03/07 Updated: 08/03/07
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Date: 03/05/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Dear EFW. Well this is one hell of a rollercoaster ride of a story and I have to say I am loving your depiction of all the characters in this medical melodrama. Your connectivity between Sam and Dean is poignant, believable and at times heartbreaking. I like your Ellen she is strong without sacrificing her humanity and The doctor and his wife are nicely written and credible as old retired medics. And Ash, well I always loved Ash so he's always a welcome addition. The pain is exquisite, toe curling stuff and I can imagine maybe one or two readers had to pop outside like Sam at the end of the op to barff up their lunch. Well done for someone without a long medical background its very well done. Off to finish the last chapters now. Thanks for a great read. Bev xx
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Date: 04/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Gee Hunny that was on teriffic read and poor Dean you so put him through it. I could feel his horror and embarassment at the enema and I'm not surprised but i would have helped rub his back so just call me if you ever need help. And then the Dr Bates whisky councelling services was sweet and sad and soulfull. A great read EFW, different and compelling. Thanks very much for sharing bev xx Summary:
He turned, expertly masking the mass of unshed tears and unspoken fears that threatened so very much to burst from his usually strong and controlled person. Expressionless in every aspect save for his eyes, his gaze met Anna Walker’s. A silent message was communicated. He knew she was telling him first. He appreciated it. He knew she was asking his permission to say it aloud. He gave it. He knew he would never be grateful to anyone more than he was to her now. He silently told her so. He knew she understood. Their mutual gazes broke apart, and Dean continued to clean his prized guns as Anna relayed the series of events that took place that day at the hospital to Sammy. Dean knew his younger brother would cry. Categories: General, Romance, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Through The Dimensions Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 48131 [Report This] Published: 13/03/07 Updated: 20/07/07
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Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hoowee! Am up to chapter 7 and am just loving your writing. Anna is so sweet and sassy and love, love,love the tension between her and Dean. So funny mentioning Dean and Sam being TV characters - haha! So cute you let them hold hands. Gotta go read the rest - you rock!!! Birdie x
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Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh my God, that was just freaking awesome. i need to re-read it 'cause the last chapters are all smdged from my tears but I don't know if I could bear it just yet. That's what it's like to be in love and to loose it. You're a fantastic writer, I'm in awe. Thanks so much Bridie x Summary:
Thinking back later, Dean wasn’t sure what response he had expected. Whatever response he might have imagined, nothing could have prepared him for what happened next. Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1288 [Report This] Published: 14/03/07 Updated: 15/03/07
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Aw gee that's heartbreaking and filled with portents of horrors to come. Clever you, check your eyes there's some devil in you somewhere! Birdie x Summary:
Winner of BEST STORY in the Round 7 Supernatural Fanfiction Awards! Dean is fighting off hypothermia, his worried brother, and chick-flick moments in the cold Wisconsin woods. Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5009 [Report This] Published: 21/03/07 Updated: 22/03/07
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Date: 01/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey Xina next time you chuck Dean into a frozen lake I'd personally like to volunteer to tear my clothes off and cuddle up to him to revive him! No really it's no trouble just let me know where and when! Heehee Bird x Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 21/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OOwee Bambers this is one seriously scary story. That Charlie is just a nasty, evil, devious, cruel and clever piece of work. Gosh you roughed our boys up in such inventive, educational and painful ways.Broke my own wrist recently, can agree hurts like a sonofabitch-reading Dean's pain made me sweat in sympathy! Got any more Charlie in your repertiore? Birdie x Summary:
One tear, one flinch - they were only the tip of the iceberg. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2443 [Report This] Published: 22/04/07 Updated: 22/04/07
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Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Tree.Very cool homage to the handgun! Loved it. Bev xxx Summary:
NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.
Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Frustrated Unnoticed Dear Rae666 Just read the whole of 'Abomination' in one go and it's terrific. Please write some more (and focus on Dean 'cause he is just so sweeeet!). Thanks you're a fab writer Birdie x Author's Response: Wow - thank you! :) I have a really short attention span so I think it's really great that you read it in one go. And yeah, gonna so totally have to focus on Dean, lol - the guy's just so damn nice. :) Thank you loads!!!
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Date: 21/02/08 Title: Chapter 25: Fire in the Hole Rae Oh gee don't go away and leave me there Rae! Get Bobby here we need to mend Dean! Do ya need me to bring some more holy water 'cause I will if it'll help the situation! More please! Bev xx Author's Response: Thanks loads for reading! More holy water could help actually... Sammy'll call you about it :D Thanks again! Summary: It was a rock. (Spoilers up to and including 2.21)
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1672 [Report This] Published: 18/05/07 Updated: 18/05/07
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Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Rock hey gumnut liked it. weird, quirky, off aminstream and random. So in my world that spells cool! Hey if i get me a rock then I too could claim to have a friend! Bev xx Summary: A collection of ficlets not long enough to warrant their own story space. Some may contain spoilers for any season. Includes answers to challenges.
Categories: General, One Shots, Drabbles, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 668 [Report This] Published: 19/05/07 Updated: 09/03/08
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Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: He should have known Hey Gumnut! That last line is such a punch to the gut, a real soul stealer! Well done! Bev xx Author's Response: I love a good last line and I'm glad to know that this one worked for you :D Thanks heaps for reading and posting feedback. You feed my pen. Nutty
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Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Hell Gee Gumnut, that's bleak and brittle and heartbreaking and yeah - of course that's Dean hell isn't it, seeing Sam die is Dean's hell. Bravo very clever use of few words. Thanks for sharing Bev x Author's Response: It just suddenly occurred to me that it would be rather ironic and hellish for that to happen to Dean. Poor guy. We are so evil to the boys in this fandom :D Thanks for reading and posting feedback...with my writing gone all rusty, I need all the help I can get :D Nutty (getting there) Summary:
One-shot tag/missing scene from WIAWSNB set in “The Wake-Up Call” verse. Sam knew exactly what it cost Dean to resist the Djinn. Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2337 [Report This] Published: 26/05/07 Updated: 26/05/07
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Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That's lovely. It made me cry it's one of my favorite epi's 'cause of the emotion Jensen puts into each scene and you captured that here. Lovely! Bird x Yes, it's one of my favorites, too! I just love it. You should go to YouTube and look up JessicaRae's vid called "Innocence." It's about WIAWSNB and it's awesome. Made me all teary. Thank you, I'm honored that you think I captured even the tiniest bit of what Jensen gave us. :) Nicole Summary:
The boys are in for more than they bargained for when the hunt for a spirit brings them face to face with the elusive FTRA, and something else they weren't expecting.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 33093 [Report This] Published: 03/06/07 Updated: 05/11/07
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Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 This was a great read, complex and convoluted but logical and humerous with well observed characters. I really liked how you knocked cocky, (wonderfully!)irritating Dean down to size by having him break his arm flubbing his leap onto the train. The interplay between hurting(both wrist and dented pride) Dean and Sam as Sam bandages his arm is spot on. I could feel menace from the 'Train' people and Raven was spooky. The keep calling him child was manacing too! Nice ending too - very Dean Winchester! Bird x Summary: Set after Season 2 finale
When Dean goes missing and Sam can't find him, his world comes to a sudden halt. Then suddenly, Sam is beside Dean. The Winchester's must now add something else to their 'to do' list. But will it be the last thing they ever do? Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 6491 [Report This] Published: 27/06/07 Updated: 14/11/07
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Date: 14/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Simply Put No, no, no! Don't stop now!
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Date: 31/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: The Game Hey Hunny. Any more to come yet? Gotta renew me my " Let's kick the crap outta beautiful Dean" club subscription for 2008 but it'll be worth it to get the next chapter. Go on ya know ya want to! Write that sucker! Bird x Author's Response: Yes sir! Workin' on the chapter right now, we've been busy around the house and my hand has been..well I don't know but it's been hurting so I haven't attempted too much with the keyboard lately. But the chapter is on its way! Summary:
just another poem Sam whispered in my ear.Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 90 [Report This] Published: 11/07/07 Updated: 11/07/07
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Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Lovely, just lovely! that's what big brothers are for. made me pick up the phone and tell my bro that I love him and sometimes that's a hard thing to actually just say So thank you Bev x Author's Response: as i told you this is the most amazing review i´ll ever have!!! you made me cry...it´s just to crazy for me to think that my little poem cause such a big impact in somebody.....thank you sooooooooooo much. Summary: Pre-Series. Young Wichester. In war, there are bound to be casualties, wounds to be had, but Dean Wincehster finds the battle lines blurred when he's caught in unexpected crossfire.
Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5186 [Report This] Published: 13/07/07 Updated: 13/07/07
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Date: 06/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Cass this is a great story and I do really like your Caleb. Even here hurt and battered he's thinking about his 'brothers' Dean and Sam. Your portrayal of John is very realistic too, and the anger, resentment and love shown by Dean and John to each other is complex, convincing and a little heartbreaking. I am very pleased that Dean has Caleb in your AU, as I think he wants, needs and loves his big brother. Thanks for sharing Bev x Summary:
It was just a little scar on Dean's shoulder. But it was about to turn Sam's whole world upside down.Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 15565 [Report This] Published: 16/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07
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Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Empath Loved this, it's a clever unusual story line and it had me gripped. I really like the fact that you've given Bobby a big part. He's such an importnat part of the boys lives, especially now since John passed. I think he's so wise and sweet! Well done loved it! Bird x Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to review Bird.
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Date: 22/12/10 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Empath Dear Ciel. I was having a rummage round the site looking for a good read and I came across your story. What a well written piece. I loved the fact that you took a difficult subject and handled it in a forthright and sensitive way but without fudging the issues. And in all that you kept the boys and Bobby's voices clear. Nicely done. Bird xx |
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